[Note by Crosspatch] Naomi Starseer

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Naomi Starseer

Postby Naomi Starseer on July 13th, 2013, 11:26 am

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Name: Naomi StarseerImage
Physical Information


Race: Inarta Drykas


Birthday & Age: 20th day of Summer 490, 23 years of age


Gender: Female


Birthplace: Diamond Clan, Starseer Pavilion


Job: Slave former Hunter


Heirloom: A long bow from her mother


Physical Description Image
Naomi has curly red hair that when under direct light turns a dark shade of red that can be mistaken for black. Her eyes a bright green that as she continues her slavery turn a smoky green. Naomi has a slim but muscular figure that stands at roughly five foot seven maybe shorter. Naomi has a wind mark that represents the elements Fire, Water, Earth and Wind in the form of a tree, It covers her left side of her back and her shoulder, a few flames curl up to the edge of her cheek bone.
Character Concept :
Personality –
Naomi has a fiery personality and has always been the one to analyse the situation she was in and change her actions accordingly making her, in her opinion, a exceptional leader. Before the Age of sixteen Naomi was a fairly relaxed fairly focused person however when she was taken by the slavers her anger began slowly began to build until she became a short fuse. Before slavery she used to be inseparable from her Twin Fox.
Likes – Naomi loves riding her strider and archery or anything that reminds her of home.
Dislikes – Naomi hates all slave trades with burning passion
Character History
-Pre-Creation –
ImageNaomi takes more after her Inatar mother then her Drykas father in appearance and in archery, however she still has enough Drykas traits to bond with a strider. Naomi had been practicing her archery out of town in the forest, age fourteen, when the strider slowly approached her, amazed by its features she approached, to be bonded with FireRunner. Naomi, leading a group of hunters at age sixteen, was taken by surprise by an ambush of Slavers, They began to attack her small group, not wanting her team to be hurt she rushed first, however she was the last captured. As she as pulled away in a cage she reached out to the most important person in her life, her twin.

Post Creation –
Naomi was branded and sold in Sunberth to a rich man, this man was cruel in her eyes however was still one of the best masters in Sunberth. He forced her into silence after the man had been informed by the slavers that’s she wasn’t ‘pure’ or ‘untouched’ and she had in fact laid with another and not a woman As the betrayer had been lead to believe, Naomi had spent her teens claiming she was pure and would much rather lay with women than men. When she had been questioned about this fact she just glared and spat at her supposed master as punishment she was forced never to speak again and was also forced to lay with another.
Skills:
Skills xp Starting package Racial Bonus
Archery (Longbow) 15 5 10
Riding 20 10 10
Horsemanship 10 10
Seduction 25 25

Lores:
Lore of the Slavery Process
Lore of Steady Hands
Equipment/Possessions
Simple slave clothes
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
1 Set of Toiletries (comb, brush, razor, soap)
Food for a week or 1 bottle of embalming fluid (for Nuits)
1 eating knife
Flint & Steel
Ledger
Item Price Total
Starting +100 100
Housing +500 600


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Naomi Starseer

Postby Crosspatch on November 29th, 2013, 7:13 pm

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Character Sheet Intervention

Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

  • Due to belonging to two human subcultures your race would be "Human, Mixed," not "Mixed blood" (as stated on your profile). Please fix this via the user control panel.
  • Please change "Archery (Longbow)" to "Weapon (Longbow)".
  • You are either entitled to the Human, Mixed ratial bonus of +15 RB to any one skill or if you are playing a Full Drykas it is +10RB to riding. You cannot have both, so please pick one and make the necessary adjustments.
  • Please list all of the simple clothes; this consists of a shirt, pants, boots, undergardments and a cloak or coat.
  • As you are not playing a Nuit, please remove the 1 bottle of embalming fluid.
  • Can you please explain to me on what you mean by "Lore of Steady hands"?

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


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