[The Bronze Woods]A New Sensation (Razkar)

Everything changes when Edreina decides to join Razkar for a hunt.

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Stretching northward along the coastline of the Suvan Sea, the Cobalt Mountains are the home of the Bronze Wood, numerous ruins, and creatures both strange and fantastical.

[The Bronze Woods]A New Sensation (Razkar)

Postby Edreina on August 11th, 2013, 3:38 am

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Despite how Razkar crouched, Edreina remained upright simply because she knew not how to skulk properly. She feared that if she did it, she would only end up with a horrid back-ache halfway through the day. She carefully began to mimic Razkar's steps, putting her feet in the flat impression left an instant after he took a step. Occasionally, he would stop suddenly, causing Edreina to have to lean and take a half-step back in order to keep from tumbling over him.

Eventually, he began to point out "tracks" in the earth, but Edreina only saw odd gouging marks that were only slightly different from the rest of the earth. In all honesty, she had no idea what she was supposed to be looking for so these little tracks meant nothing to her. Perhaps if she saw what sort of paw/claw/cloven-hoof had created the track... nah. These were no whale-steps, the flat part left in the Suvan by a diving whale, and so Edreina doubted she would be able to notice them.

And yet she continued to try, squinting at whatever Razkar pointed out in hopes that each piece would eventually click into place. When they continued to prove to be an unsolvable enigma, Edreina began to study the hunter himself.

In this environment, Razkar appeared to be every ounce the killer others saw him to be. Normally, Edreina saw him to be a human like anyone else, just a bit darker in the skin and adorned with scars and tattoos instead of fine clothes, he wore gleaming blades instead of glittering jewels; she could appreciate the simplicity of his style of living. But now, with each taut muscle gleaming beneath a thin, shining layer of sweat, he gave off an air of lethality. The hard, strong line of his jaw and his brow as it was furrowed in concentration. Each motion was so sure, so confident...

Edreina smiled and cocked her head at the Myrian with an oddly affectionate look in her eyes. Some might find how different they were to be off putting, but that was one of the things Edreina cherished the most. Unlike any man she had met before, it would be a long while - if ever - before Razkar began to bore her. When Razkar stopped suddenly, Edreina found herself pressed against his back for an instant before she regained her balance and moved back, attempting to find the source of what had made him stop.

She saw nothing... She heard nothing...

But then again, she was no hunter.

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[The Bronze Woods]A New Sensation (Razkar)

Postby Razkar on August 11th, 2013, 10:55 pm

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Patience. Observation. Common sense.

The three core lessons of a hunter that Razkar's parents had hammered into him (sometimes literally, when he petched up) since he could hold a bow. Bells passed and they seemed like eons. Every step was judged and weighed, every patch of ground surveyed.

Tracks were found here and there, gold dust in mountains of dirt, and his red-haired partner tried her best to keep up with him, not just physically but mentally.

But some part of Razkar whispered that, ultimately, she would not understand this. She was a creature of the sea, as he was one of the land. Ask her to track a whale or guess the best place for a tuna shoal, and she would be able to give you an answer. But would he be able to do such things? No.

Then why do you expect she can?

I don't. Not yet, anyway.


Then he stopped, fresh tracks in greatr numbers making his breath stall. His black eyes glistened and a smile pulled at his lips. Yes! Praise to Caiyha! Their perseverence looked like it had paid off, and he turned, voice a rasp-

"EdriOOF!" He staggered a tad as the Svefra ran into his back, delicious and distracting body warmth flush against him for a moment before he scowled back at her. "Gods, woman, really?!"

Her suitably chastened expression mollified him in a tick, which he knew it would. Grimacing reluctantly, his hand reached out to caress her arm, drawing her sparkling gaze to his. Gods, he tried so hard to look serious.

"Must concentrate, Edri!" He paused, and the blasted woman bought that grin to his face again. "Even if you have clumsy sea feet!"

Some retort was in the works, probably, but he turned to what he'd seen, gesturing with her to crouch with him. The Myrian pointed to the ground where plants and shrubs had been knocked aside in a long line, the ground churned up.

"See tracks?" He whispered, pointing to the four indents in the ground. "Two long on front... two small on back? That is boar. Like... big, hairy pig. See, so many tracks?" He moved his arm side to side, letting her see the plethora of tracks... and they looked like they were going in both directions. "We are lucky, Edri. This is trail used by boar. Go from nest or mud hole or water or place where they eat or mate, and back, or other way."

Razkar licked his lips, body vibrating with energy, and Edri certainly noticed. His eyes shone, long bells of boredom rewarded with their first whiff of prey. Keen, narrowed eyes scanned around before his hand lashed out again, pointing to a fallen tree.

"There! See tree? We set up there. Is... maybe fifty feet. Not far for bow. We use scent in bottle to hide our smell." He patted his rucksack. "And I have camouflage blanket. It looks like ground. We hide under it... and wait. When pig comes-"

He mimed pulling and firing his bow and chuckled, looking back at her... some realization dawning in his eyes that was so different from his very Myrian and understandable thirst for a successful hunt.

"... glad you came, Edri. Good to... share this."

Birds twittered around them and further away some insomniac owl hooted back at them. Distant sounds like grunts or growls dueled back and forth but for the moment, Razkar ignored them. Here, out far from hated civilization, he did not need to... hide anything.

He leaned forward and kissed her again, brief, harder, almost possessive but lips buzzing with that same animal energy. Edreina made a surprised little noise in her throat as he... did he just nip her bottom lip?!

"Come!" He whispered like an excited boy. "Let's set up place for shoot!"
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[The Bronze Woods]A New Sensation (Razkar)

Postby Edreina on August 12th, 2013, 3:12 am

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"Must concentrate, Edri! Even if you have clumsy sea feet!"

Immediately Edreina's face fell into a glaring scowl, blue eyes icy, but warmed from beneath by the urge to tease him back. If only she could find the right words... Still thinking, Edreina crouched as instructed, resting her elbows on her thighs as she sat on her heels. When Razkar began to draw her attention to the tracks - she actually noticed these due to their sheer number - Edreina began to wonder how many creatures filled this po- herd... Surely one creature was not so repetitive that it would leave tracks like that? How would it survive very long when a hunter could easily follow its tracks home?

Thankfully, it turned out that there was a family of there "boars" using this trail. A family of any sort of prey would be rather secretive, Edreina would have thought, doing all that they could to keep the predators from finding their home. Perhaps, though, these boars were unlike deer or the like, perhaps they could fend for themselves. With one look at Razkar, Edreina's gentle fear was confirmed. No simple beast, no easy prey, could get the Myrian looking like he did now: eyes ablaze with excitement, body quivering as if he longed to lunge forth and claim his prize... Edreina had never seen him so open, so carefree, so excited. He almost looked like Edreina did when she discovered a new cave.

When the Myrian, looking to all the birds and trees around them like an overly excited youngling, mimed taking the shot, Edreina let out a sharp, surprised laugh before slapping a hand over her mouth, shoulders shaking with silent mirth.

"... glad you came, Edri. Good to... share this."

The redhead's smile was soft... intimate, even. It filled her heart with a sort of joy that made her heart beat unevenly, that made her cheeks flush without embarrassment nor chagrin, to hear the Myrian say that he was glad she came. All the while that they had been hunting, Edreina had been worried about being a bother, or a nuisance - which she probably still was - but his words were like a balm that soothed her worries. For an endless tick, blue gaze was locked with black, both lips parted as their breath came shallow and uneven with the realization that they were alone.

Birds sang.

Insects buzzed.

Hunters growled.

Neither two-leg moved, they barely breathed. There was something tangibly different in the air between them in that moment, something electric and primal.

And then, Razkar moved. He closed in on Edreina so quickly and so surely that all she could do was let her eyes drift shut as his lips claimed her. Claimed her. There was no way to describe it other than that. As Razkar's lips pressed down on hers, Edreina was overwhelmed with a sense of possession, as if, for once, he was focusing on her and only her. She felt a sharp sensation that danced on the line between pleasure and pain as Razkar bit her lip softly, causing her to loose a soft sound of pleasure, for a knot of tension to curl up and quiver in her lower abdomen. Gods... It's been so long.

As he pulled away, Edreina realized that she would not be able to take much more of this torment, much more of their dancing along the lines between restraint and... whatever it was that kept happening to them when they were alone. It left her quivering and tense and- Something had to change, and soon.

"Come! Let's set up place for shoot!"

With a groan, Edreina allowed herself to fall back onto her rear end, pressing the heels of her hands against her eyes. With her head tilted back, bright hair falling in a cascade of waves that barely brushed the dirt upon which she sat, the woman focused for a moment upon regulating her breathing, upon maintaining control of herself. When she felt that she could stand properly without any quiver in her knees, Edreina rose to her feet and stood to the side while Razkar started to set up somewhere for them wait for the boar. When he started to cover himself in the animal scent, she stepped forward and, with a rather sheepish smile, held her arms out, nodding for him to apply it for her. "I'm afraid I'll do it wrong... I'd hate for my scent to ruin your hunt..." Her smile became coy as she cocked her head to the side, looking up at him through her lashes.

Once that was done, she moved under the camouflage blanket he set up, sitting or laying prone however he instructed. Once under there, the woman's idle fingers would start to shred leaves along their veins, a methodical, meticulous action that kept her mind busy while the hunter hunted. If Razkar decided to stop her, for whatever reason, she would quickly busy herself with sliding her fingers into the cool earth, writing random words or characters as they came to mind before erasing them. The words would be things like "tree", "flower", "bird"... whatever happened to catch the woman's eye as she llooked about. Either way, she had to be doing something. Otherwise, she would start to focus on how close she was to Razkar, how she heard each breath he took, felt every shift his body made in their close quarters.

And that would most certainly be a bad idea.
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[The Bronze Woods]A New Sensation (Razkar)

Postby Razkar on August 13th, 2013, 12:32 am

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Stillness. Perfect and hushed in the depths of the woods. So quiet that Razkar was almost afraid to break it, like it was some ornate piece of ancient bone, the kind his grandmother used to make. His head moved slowly, ceaselessly, back and forth, face an emotionless mask... but his eyes more than made up for it.

They blazed. They willed their prey to come trotting through the shrubs and mud, present its broad, succulent flanks and...

Rip... Rip... Rip...

"If must do that," he said, managing to do so without moving his lips nor even raising his voice above a whisper, "Please use fresh leaf. Dry leaf make sound..."

As it turned out, the female abandoned her wordless pruning, and Razkar was pleased to hear nothing more from her.

For half a bell. Then he exhaled just a little louder than usual, hearing the steady scrape of dirt shifting, a tiny, almost imperceptible sound. But would their prey hear it as such? He didn't know, but it was a risk and he turned sharply, black eyes made fierce by frowning black eyebrows crushed onto them meeting the wide blue orbs...

Razkar looked down and saw a bird in the dirt. Well, the word "bird", anyway. His lips quirked and Edreina frowned, wondering if some seizure was gripping her friend, especially when he reached down and obliterated the Common letters with his fingertips. Indignation clouded her features but then... he started to draw...

Not a picture. Though an image for the mind, as it were, if one were so inclined to allegory. The Svefra of course had no idea what the Myrian rune meant, only that it was compact and spiky... gods, even his written language was threatening!

"Means 'boar'."

She looked up from the picture into his lightly smiling face, and he favored the female with a lightning wink, nodding slightly to the rune. Once again he seemed to exhale nearly all the breath from his lung before speaking.

"In my tongue, it means 'boar'. Well, means 'hair pig', but thing is same!"

Razkar grinned as he gestured to it, her eyes following his hand, and sharp black eyes flickered away from her again, sweeping up and down the trail they were staking out with all the thoroughness of a searchlight's beam. Still nothing, and no sounds of approach.

So... enough time to indulge her boredom perhaps. He turned to see her frowning over the image, burning it into her mind-

-until his fingers wiped it from existence, too, making her look up-

-as his smile became a challenging smirk. That strange exhalation again... and she noticed his whisper had no telltale "hiss" that gave away many other such hushed tones.

"Now you do. See if you learn..."
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[The Bronze Woods]A New Sensation (Razkar)

Postby Edreina on August 13th, 2013, 7:39 am

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When Razkar managed to draw the redhead from her mindless writing, she scowled at him as gruffly as she could manage, wondering what on earth she had been doing wrong this time. The leaf thing? That had been understandable. But this did not make any noise... or did it? Edreina frowned for a moment, wondering how dull her senses were when compared to their quarry. Perhaps she had been making too much noise, not that you would ever get her to admit it.

As Razkar began to draw in the dirt, Edreina was confused at first, tilting her head this way and that to see what Common word he had created. But, after a second, it clicked. No language other than Myrian could attempt to intimidate her without being spoken. Even as he explained what the glyph meant, Edreina found herself smiling and nodding, nearly giggling at its literal meaning. Again her eyes fell to examine it, mentally memorizing the placement of each line until suddenly, it was gone.

Cocking her head up at Razkar, Edreina waited for him to say something, or to begin another word.

"Now you do. See if you learn..."

And now it was Edreina who grinned, happy to have been given a challenge and something to do with her hands. The look was very nearly identical to that Razkar wore as he thought of the hunt, of a new way to challenge himself. Shifting her weight slightly, the redhead cleared a large line of dirt of leaves and other debris, smiling up at Razkar apologetically at the rustling sounds before immersing herself in his task.

Though she would never admit it, Edreina was one of those people who managed to be animated even when they were not talking to someone. As she ran her finger through the dirt, her tongue was caught between her lips and her eyebrows rose and fell ever so slowly as she debated each stroke, considered it, erased it, attempted it again. Three times she attempted the rune, each one next to each other so that she could compare them, realize what was missing or what she had foolishly added. After finally deciding the number and direction of the lines, the woman swiped her hand over the set and rewrote the glyph slowly, meticulously. When all was said and done, despite her sureness of the basic composition of the glyph, Edreina felt as if there was something wrong. For a handful of chimes, the woman sat in complete silence, in complete stillness save for her eyes, as she stared at the little enigma.

When it finally hit her, she would have slapped her own forehead in frustration had she not feared being reprimanded for the noise. The reason they looked so different was nothing other than the styles of writing they both adopted. Razkars was straight, swift, and to the point. Under his hand, the rune had been compact and harsh. Under hers, it was a bit more open in appearance, with gentle curves instead of harsh corners. The Svefra smiled with the realization that the Suvan attempted to claim its hold on her even as she wrote in a foreign tongue. Once she was satisfied with the fact that her handwriting was the only flaw, she finally looked up at Razkar, sheepish smile on her face as she nodded for him to examine her work. Her hair, after being pushed away angrily as she focused on writing, fell over her left shoulder in a fiery curtain that obscured anything that may lay beyond her.

In that moment, there could have been no hunt, as far as she was concerned. Razkar had given her a minuscule part of his culture, a single word, but it felt oddly momentous to the Svefra. She doubted that he was the sort to go about wasting time indulging such wanton curiosity, especially in the middle of a hunt. And yet, he lay there beside her, smiles breaking through his stern hunter's-composure occasionally as they passed the time waiting for a signal from the woods around them. Being around him was so... easy, natural, even, for her now that the tension of unknown feelings had disappeared. There was no more worry over whether or not she was being silly, seeing affection where they claimed there was only friendship. There was no more worry over how she should act around him, how she should skirt the blurred line that separated them. With the majority of their feelings now lingering in the air between them instead of stuffed into iron-bound chests in their souls, Edreina finally felt at ease.

In a rare moment of possessiveness, despite the fact that no woman was currently around to argue her claim, Edreina leaned forward and brushed her lips over Razkar's cheek, pulling away an instant later with a smile. "Thank you for teaching me that..." Afraid that her whisper would be unrefined, harsh and innately human, Edreina mouthed the words slowly enough for Razkar to read their sounds. He had taught her a single, little word... but it was so oddly satisfying to see their opposing worlds slowly begin to mingle.

And suddenly, there was a harsh crack from outside of their tent, followed by the solid thump of a heavy animal's tread. Two head snapped around, peering through the foliage for the sounds source. The animal was larger than Edreina had expected, a bit heavier in the shoulders than the domestic pigs she had seen too. This creature was obviously not bred for consumption, but to be able to navigate and thrive in the wilderness. One look at Razkar and any question over whether or not this was the creature they had been waiting for vanished.

The hunt had finally begun.
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[The Bronze Woods]A New Sensation (Razkar)

Postby Razkar on August 14th, 2013, 2:38 am

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He gazed on her hard work with a cold, critical air... until his lips finally curled into an impressed grimace and he nodded slightly. She seemed to have the right idea. Myrian was a language hacked and slashed into stone and parchment, not painted with ink and quill with slow, sinuous movements.

Such things were for Dhani and barbarians. Myrian was... forceful. And that was what was revealed in Edreina's last effort.

"I think you learn fast," he said in that odd delayed hiss, shifting his weight on his crouched form, feeling the beginnings of cramp start to seize his leg, "Will try more la-"

She didn't move fast, but she didn't need to. It was the... inevitability of it, that shocked him. Before they had always guarded themselves, held back as if each had some invisible and terrible chaperone dogging their heels. But this place, with its stillness and peace, distance from civilization and the clamor that drowned them both... here that fear was gone.

Edreina's lips found his cheek and a tremble went from his face to his spine and jarred everything on the way down...

"Thank you for teaching me that..."

A smile. One of those deep, slow ones; deep in that it rose from his lips to his eyes and made them sparkle, a sure sign it was not one of those fake stretchings of the lips that was bereft of true mirth. But for his Edri? No... Razkar had nothing but the real thing.

"You are wel-"

SNAP!

Damnit! See what comes of distractions?!


Their blanket, so close to the dirt of the ground it almost looked like some rogue hillock, hid them as their heads turned sharply. A mass of furred, porcine flesh was already visibly, muscled shoulders bobbing above the shrubbery as it snorted and grunted its way along the trail. Razkar couldn't keep the hungry, vaguely canine smile from his face as he saw it trot by...

Thought of Wolf, his friend, far away in the jungle.

She would love this.

He arose slowly, agonizingly, eyes never leaving the boar, until he was almost upright, sideways to the trail. His shortbow was already rising, arrow he'd held in his hand for bells finally notched, string beginning its pull to his cheek...

Then they heard the higher pitched squeals, urgent and juvenile... both of them saw the trio of tottering little piglets around their lumbering parent. Razkar blinked once and frowned minutely. He would rather not do this with them around, but...

"Everything must eat, Edri." He whispered, guessing that her face would be a mask of resolved horror now. But, hells, she'd eaten fish, hadn't she? They had... what, spawn? "We no different. Been here for bells. Not get better shot..."

He lead the boar for a few feet, listened at it fussed over its young and prodded one back to the trail with its tusks... ah, so it was a male. The smell of wet fur and mud wafted over to him, and the Myrian guessed they were returning from a nice bath.

Some part of him bit down hard on the image. Yes, they probably were. Yes, they probably had affection for each other, in that base but fierce way animals did.

And yes, you need meat. Now stop prolonging this!

"Myri guide my hand," he muttered in his own tongue, words a barbaric mystery to the watching, almost-fearful Svefra, lining up his arrow with that sweet spot, just below and behind the boar's broad shoulders, home to heart and lungs. "And Dira my arrow..."

Razkar pursed his lips and made some strange, high-pitched... almost kissing sound, like a squirrel. The boar froze for a moment, ears high on its head, piglets oblivious but their father obviously spooked, uncertain, swinging a shaggy head towards them, tiny black eyes peering-

Too late.

The bowstring snapped forwards faster than a snake could blink and the arrow rocketed across fifty feet or so of shrubs and dirt. The boar's mouth opened in shock, a cry for its precious young ones on its lips-

"Shyke!"

-and died barely birthed, broad-headed arrow arrow lodged in its neck. But death does not come fast to beasts; shock and awe has no effect on them. He thrashed and roared even as blood filled his mouth, wide arrowhead ripping open veins and airway, charging at the two of them.

No hesitation, Razkar remembered after. Just two hundred pounds of paternal imperative sacrificing himself so his young could escape.

"Go well, brother," Razkar whispered as he drew back again, second arrow notched as a matter of course. It was a fluke, he knew, that arrow now sticking through the beast's fur. He'd need to make this one better. "You honor our Green Mother-"

He waited minutely until the beast was twenty feet away, mere ticks given how fast those squat, powerful legs could chew up the distance, squealing, terrified piglets already running for their nest. It was a test, and he felt his heart race-

-and his gnosis with it, sudden rush a paradoxical balm to his nerves, clarifying his vision for that brief, manic second.

It was rushing at him. Head on, closer and closer by the moment to his slightly-quivering arrow held in the taut bow, tusks and enraged black eyes growing larger and larger-

Push fear aside. Look at you target... and ask yourself, what better one could he ask for?

The boar roared its wet and dying defiance once more, then Razkar shot it in the face.
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[The Bronze Woods]A New Sensation (Razkar)

Postby Edreina on August 14th, 2013, 5:41 am

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When Edreina heard the squeals of the young ones, she was not disgusted nor horrified. These were, after all, just dumb land-creatures, to her. No, instead her brow furrowed and her head cocked as she silently wondered what they would do with the young. Were they too small to eat? To fast to catch? Would they be left alone to starve without their mother's nourishing milk? The last part seemed to be a bit cruel, and Edreina would rather kill the cubs - That's what baby animals were called, right? Cubs? Wait, no... Navis was a fox kit and dogs bore puppies... So what would these young be called? - than let them wander about and starve to death.

"Everything must eat, Edri. We no different. Been here for bells. Not get better shot..."

Blue eyes rolled at his words, she needed no assurances that killing the boar was justified. As Razkar began planning his shot, eyes keen and focused, Edreina watched intently, noting the way that he made adjustments. They were minute movements that left Edreina wondering if they would even work-

-until the boar began to scream and roar and thrash about in the underbrush. The shot had not killed the boar, and now it was charging at them, little horn-teeth leveled menacingly. The redhead tensed beside the Myrian, hands curling up into frightened little fists. She wanted to run from the creature, to get up a tree or something simply to escape its rage. But, she trusted Razkar and feared that fleeing would only disrupt his concentration.

And then, it was all over. The sudden silence left by the absence of the boar's charge was all but deafening as even birds had ceased singing, disturbed from their perches by the ruckus. When the creature, fell, Edreina let out of a long, soft sigh, body relaxing once more. Smiling, but keeping her eyes on the dark lump of prone flesh, Edreina ran a hand up and down Razkar's arm affectionaltely. "Nice shot!" Sure, Edreina was no savant of archery, but even she could tell that there was a fair amount of skill behind that kill.

After a moment passed and Edreina was sure that the boar would not rise again, she flung the blanket over her head and bounded through the underbrush, stopping a stride away from it. Now that their quarry had been claimed, she was a mite less restrained. Fingers laced together behind her back, Edreina leaned over to examine the creature from snout to curly tail. It was so different from porcine beasts she had seen before, but there were enough similarities for Edreina to draw a connection. With hesitant fingers, Edreina reached out to discover the texture of the creature's fur.

"Boo!"

The Myrian's exclaimation had Edreina whirling with a yelp, hands safely above her head, eyes wide and terrified. Until she realized that it was Razkar, not the dead boar, that had made the sound. Immediately, blue eyes became narrow and threatening, but they were contrasted by her playful smirk. "Think it's funny to mess with me? Oh, Razkar," her lips purred ever so softly over the word, eyes flashing gleefully as she considered all sorts of revenge, "you've just bought yourself a heap of-" Edreina paused, her finger in his chest, nearly nose to nose.

As abruptly as she had started her retaliation, she also ended it, stepping to the side so that she could gesture to the carcass. The tantalizing fire had not left her eyes, only been drawn in deeper as she attempted to cover up her plans. The sooner he saw to the boar, the sooner they would be able to get back to the boat... where all sorts of sea-creatures awaited her command.
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[The Bronze Woods]A New Sensation (Razkar)

Postby Razkar on August 15th, 2013, 3:05 am

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He really couldn't help it. Even in this holy, sacred moment when predator took down pray and due reverence was required, the sight of the guileless Svefra leaning over the twitching boar drew a sly smile over his face. He picked his way closer to her, until his jaw was just over her shoulder-

"Boo!"

-and was rewarded as any true tricskter is. She whirled as he swayed back, smile moronic and gleeful in equal measure, arms crossed over his bare chest.

"Hmm? Little Svefra going to say something?"

As it turned out, she did. She turned on him with the intensity of her gaze narrowed and only increased by the slits they poured from, making predator into prey (the irony was not lost on the hunter) as she slid towards him a step or two.

The air felt... heated. Like the prelude to a storm, when you could taste it on your tongue and some primal force sped your heart. Razkar felt it beat against his ribs as she purred at him like some tiger on two feet.

"Think it's funny to mess with me? Oh, Razkar..."

Goddess... he really was in trouble, if even the sound of his name on her lips could draw his attention so starkly.

"You've just bought yourself a heap of-"

So close, just another foot or more. All thoughts, proper thoughts, necessary thoughts, left the male's head as such things were wont to do when one was confronted by a beautiful woman. Her lips and eyes became his world and-

-she slid past him, to his kill and he felt something below his waist groan in disappointment.

Now that... was cruel.

He scowled at the back of her head but then looked beyond her. The arrow had struck the boar just to the side of the mouth, piercing bone and flesh and burying in its brain... but not utterly ending its life. Something primal and angry tore at Razkar's stomach from the inside, a reminder, a shame.

"Apologies, Green Goddess," he intoned sincerely, unsheathing his dagger and walking to the twitching creature. Dying, paralyzed eyes hovered to and fro and Razkar felt that pain again. "I should not have been distracted..."

He shifted the grip in his hand as he crouched, double-bladed dagger rising slowly as he spoke again... then remembered his company. He spoke without looking to Edreina, words low and solemn.

"This is respect we give, Edri. We thank the Green Goddess for her bounty... and we give respect to the life that ends so ours may go on." He looked down into those fading black beads, patted its snout... and felt a shuddering breath leak through it. "Go on to the next world, brother, and find peace-"

The dagger flashed down, cleaving through the eye in a blink and he twisted it once, savagely but necessarily-

-and a life was snuffed out like a candle.

"Now..." Razkar said, a little more relaxed but with that weariness that bespoke of a workman whose day was far from over. "The messy part."

He unsheathed his gladius and hefted it, then looked to Edreina. The forest around them hushed, as if in respect for the boar's passing, but by the time he spoke again the birds chirped and called and other stalking things resumed their own endless hunts.

Life continues, after all. No matter how small or unnoticed, but always there... no matter what.

"First, we slit the stomach-" he pointed to the hog's underside with the long, straight blade, moving it from balls to throat as he spoke "-from here... to here. Much easier to get the pelt off. Then cut meat off. Take as much as can carry, then pelt..."

It occured to him in a flash. The way the waning light hit the tusks, gleaming and beautiful even on a corpse... he reached out and stroked them. Hard, strong, thick with age but as toughened as when this was a young male as proud as Razkar was. He felt the tip... still sharp, too.

"Tusks we take for you." He said, relishing the confusion on her face that just fed his grin. He tapped his own necklace, laced with lion claws. "Give you souvenir, hmm?"
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[The Bronze Woods]A New Sensation (Razkar)

Postby Edreina on August 15th, 2013, 3:17 pm

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"Tusks we take for you. Give you souvenir, hmm?"

At first, Edreina cocked her head to the side, wondering over what she could use the tusks for other than something to send back to her pod and brag about. But, as Razkar touched his necklace, Edreina felt her own slender fingers ghost across the hollow at the base of her throat. Perhaps... "Will you... Maledict it for me too?" she asked, having become fascinated with the "bone magic" ever since she first chanced upon Razkar creating that necklace. And though she had no idea how such a necklace would benefit her, she was sure that it would be valued even as a memento of her first hunt.

With fingers still upon her skin, Edreina realized how odd it must be to some who knew the customs of her race that she did not deck herself out in strings upon strings of beaded necklaces, using them to cover her breasts and show her rank in society. She has tried to dress in such a way, for a short while... But when you were constantly in and out of the water, the necklaces became nothing but a detriment.

Shaking her head, Edreina returned to the present and began watching how Razkar cared for the carcass... And was disappointed. He had the body on the ground... Surely he was only doing that because he had forgotten rope... Or maybe he was trying to waste time... Or maybe boars were different on the inside from sharks. "Wouldn't it be easier-" Edreina halted, face flushing a bright pink at the realization that she was about to criticize a hunter, a Myrian hunter no less. Her and her big mouth... "I- I mean on the Anchorage... When a shark is killed we hang it up by the tail so that the guts pretty much fall out... A-and then you can just... peel the skin down... It seems like that would be a lot easier..." she trailed off in a near whisper, knotted fingers suddenly becoming the focus of her blue gaze. The burning in her face could have surely set the forest around her ablaze. Hells, the redhead could not even bring herself to meet Razkar's - surely - mocking gaze. Who was this wisp of a woman to contradict a great hunter?

Abruptly, Edreina shook her head and grinned up at the hunter, shrugging as if to say, Sorry. Sometimes my mouth outruns me. Intent upon helping any way she could, the Svefra ran back to where they had been sitting and retrieved her leather rucksack, setting it on the ground beside the Myrian. It would probably stink for a bit after this, but that was nothing a good salt-water soak couldn't fix.

Edreina was very careful to watch how Razkar butchered the boar, and what he did with each piece he disregarded. A few chimes into the chore, Edreina remembered a scrap she had read about the magical properties of boar's blood, but it was likely just superstition. And besides, she doubted they could collect what now coated the ground.
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[The Bronze Woods]A New Sensation (Razkar)

Postby Razkar on August 16th, 2013, 2:51 am

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"Will you... Maledict it for me too?"

A season ago, Razkar would have stared blankly at her words. But now, after nearly a year among the barbarians, he nodded slowly instead.

Malediction, they call it. A strange, almost medical term for the Power of Bones...

"It is... possible," he said eventually, but his pause hinted otherwise.He scratched under his chin, eyeing the still carcass critically, raking his gaze across it until they rested on the wetly-shining tusks. "But there is risk. When work Power of Bones, bring back spirit... and anger. Remember what happen to it."

He inhaled sharply, straightening up with a new confidence in his eyes. Gone was the almost-fearful introspection, the savage afraid of some ken beyond his own. He had been working djed onto bone since he'd walked into Mayla's hut with his mother, many years ago. One boar would not defeat him.

But what if it could harm her? She will be the wearer, not you.

"If was bone like human or Zith, it would be too much risk .Too much djed." He said, free hand starting to bunch up fur so the skin along the stomach would be nice and tight for his blade, "But for animal? Not too hard." He flicked a glance it, gladius wavering just above the skin already gaining the blue tinge of Dira. "And... is gift. Way to say I... appreciate. Worth risk."

A smile curled up his lips and he turned to their meal for many, many nights to come. Arm taut, he aimed the razor-sharp tip at the nape of the boar's neck, felt his muscles tighten and ready to-

"Wouldn't it be easier-"

-pause, as a matter of fact. He turned at her words, blinking back his surprise, and found Edreina rapidly turning the color of the blood soaking around them. Finally she found her voice, Myrian paused ridiculously with his gladius a riamm's hair from the boar's flesh.

"I- I mean on the Anchorage... When a shark is killed we hang it up by the tail so that the guts pretty much fall out... A-and then you can just... peel the skin down... It seems like that would be a lot easier..."

"I... saw that. Once."

He did, too. He remembered, far from dirt and trees and hairy hooved beasts, a place that was an island but not an island. Ships but the hundred tethered together, from canoes to galleys, and countless thousands of wild-haired Svefra scuttling over each one. Anchorage. The beating (or, rather, floating) heart of the Sea People.

No, he thought wryly, that would be the Suvan itself. Vast and eternal as their God.

"Saw men bring big shark from boat," he said, lowering his gladius minutely, lips moving but eyes almost glaze, remembering and planning at the same time, "They tied tope to tail... five men, pull him over mast... then..."

He mimed slitting his own stomach open, throat to groin, and the tumbling of guts and half-digested fish and stinking effluence. He'd smelled that for days afterwards, no matter how much he scrubbed. But, Razkar had to admit, it was a good method...

And he had rope.

Razkar bounded away back to their impromptu little tent, tanned legs gliding over the swaying shrubbery around them. He was a flurry of movement now, Edreina's head twisting as she followed his progress, first there, then jumping, now rummaging through his rucksack, striding back... with a length of rope ten feet long in his hands.

"OK..." He said, half to himself, seeming to enjoy using that strange barbarian expression (Does it qualify as one? It's only two letters...). "Now for funt part..."

Razkar tied a noose in one end and looped it tight around the boar's back legs at the ankles. Then he threw the end over a nearby low-hanging branch, pulling it taut and straight... then dug his damn heels in.

"One... two... three-!"

The Myrian heaved and his arms rippled, biceps and triceps suddenly stark and pumped like balloons as he jerked back. The boars legs swung into the air, along with half its body... and then it slowed... progress stopped...

Razkar let out a shuddering breath a between teeth biting into his gums, sheer bloody-minded determination on his face alongside a mask of sweat. He stepped back... and back... and back... one... after... another...

Until the whole boar was swinging, a chime or two later, front paws just barely scraping the ground, blood dripping down the fur on them to pool on the ground. Razkar let himself go down to his knees, eyes scrambling through the dirt for a root, finding one, trying to strain with one arm-

-until cool, confident pale hands took the other end of the rope, letting him use two hands to keep the boar suspended. His breaths came out harsh and ragged, arms already on fire as acid started to seep into his veins, almost as much sweat on him as blood on the boar...

But he didn't look away as he watched able, nimble fingers tie a classic seaman's knot to a half-buried root as thick as his arm, then patting his forearm as a silent signal-

-for him to let go-

-rope going tight, branch creaking, boar jiggling-

-but staying up. Vertical at last.

The Svefra and the Myrian exchanged a surprised look and then the shock became breathless giggles until they fell against each other, her forehead on his shoulder as he breathed the fire from his own body. So tired... Goddess, but he was still enough of himself to notice her warmth, the smoothness of her...

Damn. Fucking pig still needs gutting.

"OK..." He said again, rising with a minor roar and a smile and a trembling in his aching legs, gladius singing a querulous song as he unsheathed it. "Now we try messy part again."

He stood before the boar, steadied it with one hand, and plunged the gladius into it just below its shriveled penis. Silently begging a fellow male's apology, Razkar gripped it with both hands now, feet ready to move and move fast-

-as he jerked down hard with all his strength, tearing a thick gash straight down until he hit the boar's jaw-

-sliding to the side fast-

-as a familiar stinking tide exploded from the disemboweled carcass.

The stench hammered his senses like a palpable fist, wave of nausea threatening to bring forth stinging bile to his throat. The Myrian coughed it back and stood his ground, glaring at the lumps of organs and ropes of intestines that were soon piled on the ground, coated and accompanied by gallons of blood. He heard retching from behind him and cast a sympathetic glance to Edreina... but let her be.

"I know, I know," he said with familiar weariness, sighing and stepping closer, "Messy. But worth it."

From then on, it was silent, bloody and tedious work that we will not over-burden the record with. Imagine, if you will, the Myrian's dagger - a thinner, more delicate blade - slicing under the thick fur, sliding it in the layer of fat that fixed it to muscle. It was long, careful work, as he did not wish to mar the fur. Within half a bell, most of the pelt was laid out, flesh-and-fat smeared underside glistening in the sun.

Then came the meat, the real crux and objective of their bells and bells of tracking, hiding, stalking...

Petch it. Razkar was already licking his lips. Grilled and seasoned properly, boar was...

"You are in for a treat, Edri," he mumbled, slicing off hunks of meat from the ribs and stomach of the swinging boar, then hacking off the legs, now shorn of fur. "This is fine meat. Much better than fish..."

A bells after making that first long gash, a sweating, smelling Razkar crouched before something that could be liberally described as a dead pig. Without fur and legs, though, it was just a massive, scavenged hulk. Only the relatively pristine head showed it for what it was... and that was about to change.

"One more thing..."

His dagger ground and worked in the snout, and part of Razkar was glad the beast was dead, spared this agony. His dagger dug deeper around each tusk until the firm spikes of bone came looser in his hands... he gripped each one in turn and twisted... twisted-

CRACK!

-until they came off, bottom of each glistening and mounted with a tuft of fur and dead muscle. He tucked them into his rucksack, then stood, breathless satisfaction jarring on that face that was so dirtied with the interior of the carcass.

"OK..." He said, wiping a filthy brow with an even filthier forearm, and nodding to his partner. "Wrap meat, wrap fur... and find petching place to wash, I think..."
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