Kasyr

[Kasyr]

Kasyr Nexious Appearance Race: Human Gender: Male Age: 19 Birthday: Day 20,Season of Summer, 494 AV Birthplace: Syliras Appearance: Kasyr had not been out of the ordinary, five foot four, One hundred and twenty nine pounds. Platinum blonde hair, with sea blue eyes. He had not been tall, nor had he been large. Face and skin pale, light tan to his arms. Character Concept Kasyr would be one people would call too smart for his own good, with his knowledge in areas such as; Archaeology, Astrology, Astronomy. Herbalism and Cartography. He likes to show his friends or lack of them his knowledge in each area of his studies. Only a resident of Zeltiva for little under a year he watches the people go to University, envying them with much passion. Yet he does plan to go to such a place. Character History The past of Kasyr is not a bad one, living with rich parents or just parents who care to much for their only son. Born in Syliras, parents both map makers for their city. At the age of six, Kasyr had taken a keen like to Archaeology, reading and listening to stories about the people that used to reside in such places. He followed them up by asking the older people around him about the said people, often asking his parents about their parents and their grandparents. At the age of Eight, he decided to take up Astrology, always bugging his parents to allow him and or come with him to watch the stars. Quite quickly he had picked up on what star represents. This is one of his biggest interests to date, wanting to one day be able to predict things that are coming to his kind. At ten Astronomy had taken up in arms with Astrology, reading about the gods and their stars, or the shapes they created with the stars. Often he would point out what star was what, and what it had meant. At thirteen he decided to use his free time in the day, to watch the older people of his generation and learn Herbalism. He does not know much, nor does he plan to. He did however vow to be like these elders, on the use of plants and plant extracts to heal people. At Fifteen he has followed his parents path, reading and creating maps. Shading out the parts that had been dangerous at the night time and or the day time. He has studied his fathers books and his mothers maps to the extend he may know near all they have done. At Eighteen he decided to move away from his parents to go to the big city of Zetiva getting himself a cheap home to live and do his studies in. He at times used to sit outside the University, sometimes inside so he could listen. Waiting for people to pass so he could follow behind and hear what they have studied, maybe finding points where they have it wrong. Language Fluent Language: Common Basic Language: None as of yet Poor Language: N/A Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Archaeology 10 SP 10/100 Novice Astrology 10 SP 10/100 Novice Astronomy 10 SP 10/100 Novice Herbalism 9 SP 9/10 Novice Cartography 15 RB, 11 SP 26/100 Competent Lores - Religion: Leth - Born and grown up around maps Possessions 1 Set of Clothing -Simple Shirt -Simple Pants -Simple Undergarments -Simple Coat -Simple Boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Bone) -Brush (Bone) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel 100 Gold Mizas Heirloom: Divine Symbol Flask - A flask handed down from his family generations, the flask is like new with its regular maintence. Housing Location: Zetiva House: 1 basic 20x20 Cottage with a hearth, bunk, chest, chair, and small table. Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM Thread List N/A

[Wanderlust]

Hello Kasyr!

I'm Wanderlust, one of your local Character Sheet Liaisons. I'm here to help make your experience on Mizahar begin as smoothly as possible! Unfortunately, I've noticed some issues with your character sheet that will need to be resolved before you can continue roleplaying. Once these issues have been taken care of, PM me and I'll remove this intervention!

• Housing: It looks like you forgot to tweak your housing, since you're using Avanthal's CS design. Just change "Arvinta in a Hold" to "cottage"!
  
  
• Lore: You might want to try specifying you lore of "Knowing of maps" a bit.

Other than that, your CS looks fine to me!

Once the issues I mentioned above have been taken care of, I'll approve your CS. Of course, I'm here to help! If anything I mention needs clarified, or if you just have any general questions, feel free to PM me!