Completed A Snowball's Chance in Riverfall

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Built into the cliffs overlooking the Suvan Sea, Riverfall resides on the edge of grasslands of Cyphrus where the Bluevein River plunges off the plain and cascades down to the inland sea below. Home of the Akalak, Riverfall is a self-supporting city populated by devoted warriors. [Riverfall Codex]

A Snowball's Chance in Riverfall

Postby Jorin Ertihan on October 13th, 2013, 10:37 pm

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Season of Summer, Day 70, 513 AV


Jorin felt... wet. Yes, that was the best description. Not just physically, but emotionally wet. Like the water had soaked through his skin and bones and into his soul and now it was this heavy, soaked thing that just wanted to lie down and dry out. Rinya had seemed... hesitant, for a moment, and Jorin wondered what the hesitation he was sensing from her was all about. It didn't matter, because a moment later, she shifted back into being an osprey, and with a few whistles that weren't nearly as ear-piercing as the ones she had flown in with, Rinya soared off into the distance.

Jorin watched her for a few ticks before turning his attention back to Kirsi. She seemed to be wringing out her shirt, and she looked back at him with concern. "Want me to walk with you back to town?" she asked, and Jorin just nodded.

"You know, for a guy who grew up in a city full of sailors, you'd think I'd have learned how to swim before now," he mused, as he smiled and started walking, the irritatingly squishy sound of wet clothes assaulting his ears with every step. Jorin looked up at Syna's face and sighed. Well, at least he'd learned a few things today. In any event, it was time to go home.

And Jorin couldn't get there soon enough.

~Fin~
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A Snowball's Chance in Riverfall

Postby Magpie on October 28th, 2013, 7:37 pm

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Kirsi :
XP:
Observation +5
Socialization +5
Swimming +5

Lores:
A New Home Doesn't Come Easy
Jorin: Can't Swim
Swimming: Floating is Easier in Theory
Swimming: Floating with Help
Rinya: Bird Kelvic
Rinya: Mysteriously Unfriendly
Rinya and Jorin: More Than Friends
Swimming: Be Loose Like the Water
Swimming: Bodies Have a Natural Float
Swimming: Relax First
Swimming: Use Gentle Movements
Swimming: Treading Water
Don't Overthink Simple Lessons
Talking While Swimming is Difficult
Swimming: Never Panic
Jorin and Rinya: Bonded?
Swimming: Like Dance
Getting Water out of Ears
Swimming: Always Mind the Currents
Jorin: Grew up in a City of Sailors


Jorin :
XP:
Observation +5
Socialization +5
Swimming +5
Leadership +3
Persuasion +1

Lores:
Kirsi: Can't Swim
Starting Steps to Swimming
Swimming: Helping a Partner Float
Rinya: Mysteriously Unfriendly to Kirsi
Swimming: Be Loose Like the Water
Swimming: Bodies Have a Natural Float
Swimming: Use Gentle Movements
Swimming: Treading Water
Swimming: Never Panic
Letting Rinya Have her Privacy
Swimming: Always Mind the Currents


Rinya :
XP:
Observation +5
Hunting +2
Socialization +2
Teaching +5
Swimming +5

Lores:
Kirsi: Learning to Float with Jorin
The Feeling of Jealousy
Kirsi: Vantha
Jorin: His Eyes are Your Weakness
Finding a Middle Between Rude and Friendly
Teaching: Relating Lessons to Known Skills
Teaching: Start with the Basics
Swimming While Pulling Another
Swimming: Always Mind the Currents
Easier to Abandon Uncomfortable Situations

Additional: Hawk-Rinya is still my favorite part of your threads!


Notes :
Phew! I was a bit apprehensive about this grade, mostly because of the length, but as I've probably mentioned in all of your grades at one time or another, you all have wonderful writing styles that are very easy to read. A lovely thread, and everyone came out with some solid swimming points :)


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