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A child is orphaned and gets a second chance

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Not Over Yet

Postby Tsaba on August 19th, 2013, 10:57 am

NoteThis thread takes place quite some time before Tsaba gains his current name, when he was operating under his birth name, Dominic

16th Winter, 426AV

Dominic wailed. He screamed. He reached out for the off-white linen wrapped tightly around the still form of his father. But he was just a skinny, six-year-old kid, and the miner (he didn't know the man, one of his father's friends) had no trouble holding him clear. "Come on, kiddo. There's nothing to be done now."

"Father!" he screamed. "Father! No!"

And then the whitish bundle was gone.

Dominic stood, numbly, in the cramped anteroom of the healer's hut for at least an hour afterwards. The hut was no larger than a standard home, but the necessities of the healer's life had all been cramped into a single tiny room in the back, leaving the rest a combined apothecary and sick bay. Dominic didn't care that he was blocking the flow of people trying to get in an out. It didn't matter.

His father was gone.

He was alone.

What was there to do, now? He couldn't hold onto the house by himself. It would be taken from him, looted. His life was over. If he was lucky, he might be able to survive in the orphanage. But his father was gone.

A weak hand tugged on Dominic's sleeve. He looked down to see an old man lying on a pallet. It had seemed to take all of his strength to get Dominics attention.

"Water," he wheezed. "Please."

Numbly, Dominic nodded. He fetched a cup and filled it from the well. Then he supported the man's head with one knee and fed him sips until the cup was empty. The man winced in pain with every movement, but drank. He fell asleep before he could thank the boy.

Dominic went home. With luck, nobody would come for the house for a couple of days. Still, he didn't dare sleep openly in his room; he climbed up into the roof and kept a hand around the handle of a knife while he drifted off.
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Postby Tsaba on August 20th, 2013, 8:20 am

Dominic slept restlessly, and woke with the sun. He packed the few belongings he could carry without looking like a target for thieves. There was no food in the house. He glanced out the window, to the old willow tree whose bark his father used to brew into tea to fight the pain in his hands.

He took a knife, and headed for the tree.

Half a bell later, he was back at the healer's hut with two cups. The first, a cup of cool, fresh water from the well, he held to the lips of the feeble old man and dribbled it into his mouth, sip by sip. Only when the man had finished the water did he bring forward the cup of willowbark tea. "Drink this," he said. "It will help with the pain."

The man drank the whole cup, and then drifted into a calm sleep.

"Child."

Dominic jumped, spun, and faced the healer; a tall, commanding man stooped with age and covered entirely in heavy clothing. The man who held the lives of the local sick in his hands. The man who had fought for Dominic's father's life, and lost, and tossed the linen loosely over him as a dismissal, and walked away. While his face was concealed under a large hood, he was clearly looking right at Dominic, who took a step back.

"Child. Go to the back room and bring me the red clay jar with a single black stripe along the rim."

Dominic just stared.

"Are you deaf, Child? This man is in pain."

Dominic fetched the jar.

Then he fled.
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Postby Tsaba on August 20th, 2013, 10:48 am

Dominic went back to the house and slept in the roof once more, wrapped in several blankets to fight the cold. The next day, he only meant to pass the healer's hut, to pay his respects to his father in the place he'd died. They were carrying a middle-aged woman into the hut; she was unconscious, her lips and fingers blue.

He followed.

He didn't know the woman. And the friends who had carried her in didn't know him; they glared, and held tightly to their purses.

The healer tipped her head up and looked into her eyes for a moment. He wrapped a heavily gloved hand around her bare, pale one. "Everyone out," he commanded after a moment. "I need space." Dominic was following the woman's loved ones out when he spoke up again. "You. Child. Go to the squat plant with small blue flowers behind the hut. Cut me a root from it a little longer than your finger. And hurry."

Dominic didn't even think not to obey. He went around the back, to the tangle of plants that to him looked like disorganised weeds, and waded between thornbushes and through piles of trash until he found such a plant. He dug until her found roots, and used his knife to cut one. Then he dashed back inside.

The healer was busy rubbing some kind of red clay into the woman's hands. He didn't acknowledge Dominic except by is next instruction. "Chew the end of it into a brush, then hand it to me."

Dominic brushed the dirt of the end, stuck it into his mouth, and began to chew. Almost immediately, shocking, icy cold juice spurted onto his tongue.

"Argh!" He grimaced. "How is it cold?!"

"It isn't," the healer said, holding his hand out. Dominic handed him the root. "It just makes your body think it is." He levered down the woman's jaw and pressed chewed end of the root against the very back of the roof of her mouth.

"What... what are you doing?" Dominic asked shakily.

"This woman is suffering from hypothermia," the healer replied, his attention still on his patient. "Her body has given up fighting the cold. There is a temperature-sensitive point in the back of the mouth, and if we can make the body think that it has rapidly cooled, it may help her regulate her temperature once more."

Dominic blinked. He'd only understood about half of the healer's words. But he thought he understood. "Why not just heat up the room?"

"If this does not work, we may have to do exactly that," the healer conceded. "But it is dangerous. To both this patient, and any others we get in the night. Winter is always busy." His head turned so that his hidden eyes were on Dominic. "Well, don't just stand there, Child. Bring in some firewood in case we need it."

Dominic's day was a series of sharp commands from the healer, with the occasional short explanation. "Child, fetch a pail of water." "Child, grind a few cloves from the green jar into powder." "Child, stoke the fire." Around noon, the healer pushed a small loaf of bread and hunk of cheese into his hands. "Rest, Child, and eat this."

Dominic stared at the bread. He and his father had never had much to eat. But they weren't beggars; his father had always made that abundantly clear. They didn't need charity. Dominic tried to hand the food back. "Thank you, sir, but -- "

"But what? You want to get sick? Underfed people pick up ill spirits and carry them from person to person, Child. This is a place of healing. You want to make all the patients sick with whatever the last patient had? You want to be laid up on a pallet for a week?" He shook his head. "And my name is Craun."

"I'm Dominic."

"Of course you are, Child." Craun hobbled off. Dominic ate his lunch.
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Postby Tsaba on August 20th, 2013, 1:35 pm

"Bank the fire and sleep out here, Child. The patient may need something and I am far too old to be getting up at all hours of the night. Use your common sense, and wake me only if you are unsure what to do." Craun handed Dominic a blanket and nodded toward the fire.

Dominic didn't question his good fortune. A night of safety was a night of safety.

The next day, Craun needed somebody to stay in and stoke the fire very early in the morning, so that he could brew medicines from the herbs he had Dominic out picking all day. The day after that, somebody needed to be in the front room in case thieves stole the medicines, which would be highly sought after when the spring fevers hit.

The next day, the woman with hypothermia died.

A girl cried at her side. A girl about Dominic's age. He took her hands in his own.

"Hey. Was that your mum?

She nodded.

"What's your name?"

"Anna," she said through her tears.

"I'm Dominic. You got a place to stay?"

Anna shook her head.

"Child." Craun poked his head into the room. "Dandelions, from the garden. Try not to lose the milk."

"Craun. That woman was this girl's mum."

"Parents do die, yes. And more will die without this medicine."

"She's got nowhere to stay."

"This isn't an orphanage, Dominic."

Dominic put his arms possessively around the girl, and froze. "Craun. She has a fever."

Craun was silent for a few moments. Then he said briskly, "Well, what are you waiting for? Get her on a pallet. And get her some water." A moment later, he was gone.

Dominic led the numb Anna to a pallet and let her lay down. Then he ducked out into the garden long enough to cut a piece of root from a blue-flowered bush.

"What are you doing?" Anna asked as he chewed the end, wincing at the sudden chill.

"Making you seem sick so you can stay. I won't hurt you," he said, hoping he wasn't lying. "Open your mouth."

Anna gasped at the sudden chill as he pressed the root as far back in her mouth as he could without gagging her. But she didn't fight. When he took it away, all she said was, "My mum. That was my mum."

"My dad, too. But we can't help them any more." He took her hand. "Now just let me help you."
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