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So a Hunter and a Drykas walk into a bar...

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A hunter and a Drykas

Postby Roderick on September 1st, 2013, 6:54 pm

"We eat it." after she'd said that he sighed inwardly and looked away from her around the tavern; a man was chugging down a mug of beer while his friends hooted and cheered him on. Beside them an old man sat hunched over his own drink, quietly eating his dinner and shooting sour looks at the younger men every now and then. A waft of air rushed into the tavern as a group of people made their way inside, bringing a wave of heat with them - as if the place wasn't warm enough already. The air stirred hair and ruffled some of the thinner garments people were wearing.

Roderick had just started watching a man who was failing miserably at wooing a young woman when Lirin suddenly turned about and stared at him fiercely,
"Roddy! Tell me a story. Come on, something about what you've been up to. It doesn't even have to be true, since I'm feeling generous."
The hunter took a moment to face the Drykas and blinked in surprise.
"A story?" he repeated, "Really?" he shifted on his seat as the barkeep returned with his food - the man turning to take the money from Lirin before leaving them alone. Lifting his mug and sipping from it, he frowned and thought over the stories that he knew. What to tell her... While he thought, Roderick began eating his dinner, swallowing it down quickly before it grew cold.

"The maid of a lesser nobleman had a beautiful young daughter," he said, giving a slight smirk, "Not really. No, this story is a little weird. See, a while ago I agreed to a little training session. The catch; my partner was a Kelvic, and he ended up chasing me all around the Bronze Wood as a tiger. So, naturally, I did a lot of running that day. First I tried climbing up a tree so I could get a better look around the place, but he'd vanished. I grabbed my bow and loosed an arrow off where I thought he was, then scrambled down that thing like a squirrel and ran like hell." He smiled slightly at the memory, "Made it to a tree, thankfully, though the Kelvic must've heard me, or somethin', 'cause he followed me there and started climbing up the tree.

"Ever been stuck up a tree with a big tiger staring up at you? It ain't nice, to say the least. Anyway we'd decided we'd try get a rattle of one another, and seeing as I wanted t' win, I quickly vacated my chosen spot. 'Course that involved jumping out of the tree... damn that hurt." He rubbed at his back, "Anyway, I managed to run off and hide again, before he found me. It was only a matter of time until he did figure out where he was, because I realized then that he was using his nose to track me. With that in mind I grabbed a few arrows, rubbed them against my clothes, then loosed em off all over the place. That kept him occupied for a bit, though he started following me again soon enough."

Breaking off from the story to quickly eat a little food, he sipped down some of his drink before returning to the tale, "We'd picked a spot near this little grove of flowers, so I decided we'd head for that. MODIFYING>

Eventually I figured out he was using his nose to track me, so I rubbed a few arrows against myself and loosed off all over the place. That kept him occupied for a little while. "One day, her daughter asked her to cook her something to eat, that she might go out and seek her fortune. A day after she had left, the girl came across a fork in the road; unable to decide which way to go, she saw a group of crows flying around the pathway to the left, and knowing them for carrion eaters, she turned away from the path and walked down the other.

"There, she came upon a large black bull - who told her to follow him. Terrified of the beast, but lost, hungry and hearing the howling of wolves nearby, the girl followed the bull. As she went, she was surprised by how kind and gentle it was. It let her ride upon her back most days, and every morning she woke to find a cup filled with soup lying before her; when she consumed it her stomach was filled for the whole day.

"On the first night of their journey, they stopped at a castle; the bull told her it was the home of his eldest brother. There the daughter was treated like a noblewoman. Before leaving, she was gifted a beautiful apple and told to only use it during the first great need of her life.

"Two days after, they arrived at a second castle, property of the Black Bull's second brother. Again the daughter slept beneath the roof and before leaving was given a parting gift, this one a pear; as with the first brother, she was told only to use it during the second great need of her life.
After four days travel, they arrived at the castle of the youngest brother, who hosted the two beneath his roof and gifted the girl with a plum, to be used at the third great need of her life. With the fruits in hand the girl left with the Black Bull, finally arriving at a grim, rocky valley.

"'You must wait here.' the bull told the girl, 'and whatever you do, do not move, even an inch, or I shall be unable to find you.' The Bull went on to explain that he had to fight the spirit that ruled the valley so that they might leave it. He told her that if the sky turned blue, she would know the bull had won, but if it turned red, then he was lost. The Black Bull left the girl sitting in the valley, going away to face the spirit.

"The girl waited there for several hours, becoming ever more frightened for the bull. At last, the sky turned blue; the girl, overjoyed, shifted slightly... and so the bull never returned for her."

Roderick's throat had become parched from the telling of the story; he took a long drought of his beer and ate more of his dinner, washing it down with more beer, then turned about to continue;

"Unable to escape the valley on her own, the girl wandered, lost and afraid, until she met a travelling merchant; the man offered to give her a pair of boots in exchange for the necklace she was wearing. The girl did so, and left wearing the boots, finding her steps more sure-footed and steady.
Walking further through the valley, the girl met a half-blind woodcutter; taking pity on him she fed him the last few crusts of bread she had, and in return he gave her a pair of gloves. Finding that they made her stronger, the girl used the gifts to make her way up the steep walls of the valley.

"Eventually, the young woman found herself back at the home of the witch, who offered to let her sleep under her roof if she would wash some bloody shirts she and her daughter had been unable to clean. Whoever cleaned the shirts would marry the handsome young knight staying at the witch's home, whom the shirts belonged to. While the witch and her daughter had struggled furiously to cleanse the blood from the shirts, no sooner had the young woman laid the soap to the cloth than the blood was washed away.

"Delighted, the witch took the shirts to the knight and convinced him that her daughter had washed them. So it was the witch's daughter was to marry the knight, while the young woman became angry and upset over being cheated."

Roderick stopped to finish off the rest of his dinner, draining the remains of his beer. Setting the mug down, he held the back of his hand to his lips to clean any froth that had gathered there, then faced Lirin again;

"Desperate, the young woman realized she was in the first great need of her life. She broke open the apple, and found it to be filled with rich jewelry.
She offered the gems to the witch's daughter, in exchange for being allowed to sing outside the knight's room at night. But the witch gave her daughter a potion for the knight to drink, putting him to sleep so that he could not hear and be woken by the young woman, though she sobbed and sang:

"The cliffs I climbed for thee,
Thy bloody clothes I wrang for thee;
Wilt thou not waken and turn to me?"

"Realizing she was in the second great need of her life, she broke open the pear, and found jewelry richer than that of the apple, yet the second night went as before. Finally, the young woman had come to the third great need of her life, and split open the plum to find jewels that outshone all those that had come before. This time, though, when the sleeping potion was brought to the knight, he knocked it over, and so when the young woman bought her third and final chance, he woke to hear her song, and learned the truth.

"The knight had the witch and her daughter burned, and led the woman, mounted on his horse, away to his own castle. When they finally arrived there, the brothers she had met before welcomed her. The young woman married the knight, who had been her black bull all along."

Roderick turned and looked about the room; the drinking contest between the young men had devolved into drunken shouting and singing, while the old man had quietly left. In his place was a hunter, dressed in a green tunic and brown breeches, a handaxe hanging from his belt. The man ate his dinner ravenously, swallowing his beer down quickly and ordering another. The matted brown hair that hung down to his shoulders occasionally fell forward into his face, or onto his plate, which set him muttering at it, swiping it aside with a hand before returning to his meal.

Turning his attention over to the table to the right of the hunter, a young woman ate her dinner more politely; she held herself properly in her chair, a robe as green as grass wrapping itself around her delicate form. Her auburn locks were tied into a stylish but simple braid, while slender fingers set about dissecting the food before her.

Realizing that he'd forgotten all about the Drykas sitting beside him, the hunter turned about to face Lirin again, all fears gone from him; as bad as she could be at times, there were moments where he enjoyed the company they shared. Making it through those moments where he wanted to rip his hair out were worthwhile - most of the time.
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Postby Lirin on September 2nd, 2013, 2:52 pm

Lirin turned to her meal as Rod began to talk. The food was good, and she quickly devoured her portion following it with gulp of beer.

Rod was still speaking. -wow, really going for it there huh?- The story was one she remembered vaguely, so she wasn't too concerned about listening closely. She turned her attention to their surroundings but nothing really caught her attention, though she was pleased to note that Rod seemed to have relaxed completely, with his mind focused on the story.

As he finished he turned to look at her with an almost happy expression. -look! happy Rod, quick alert... anyone!- She smiled back before breaking into an admittedly large yawn.
"Gah! Good food, beer and a story. All you need for a good nights rest i suppose." She exclaimed with a laugh. In all seriousness though, the day's exhaustion had crept up on her and left her feeling subdued.

"So, i suppose you want a story yourself? Or are you going to take pity on me?" To be honest she wasn't too bothered about either option, although she doubted the quality of any stories she might tell now, tired as she was.
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Postby Roderick on September 2nd, 2013, 4:07 pm

Lirin smiled at Roderick - then her jaws split open in a massive yawn.
"Gah! Good food, beer and a story. All you need for a good nights rest I suppose." Roderick smiled slightly as Lirin laughed, scanning the room about him.

The hunter in the green tunic was pushing his way past a group of patrons as he made his way out into the city - the robed woman had nearly finished her meal. The drunkards had started full on brawling and were in the middle of being driven outside. A single man sat down where the drunkards had been.
He wore a dark blue doublet, and leather gloves and boots of the same color. His shirt and trousers were of a lighter shade, while his lute was well-made and ornate. A bard, then, he decided, and a one who made a fair bit of money at that.

"So, i suppose you want a story yourself? Or are you going to take pity on me?" Taking time to reflect on the question, Roderick decided it was best if Lirin didn't spin a tale; she'd probably fall asleep half way through the telling of it.
Instead he allowed their things to be cleared away and nodded to Lirin, pleasantly.
"You look ready to fall asleep any moment - I'll let you get away without a story. I did have something else in mind," he shifted on his stool, made to scratch the back of his neck, then stopped himself in time. It was a bad habit.
"I want you to train me again, like we did when we were travelling together," odd to the say the words, but there was truth to them; anything he could learn was a benefit to him. He watched for any reaction Lirin might have; annoyance, joy, excitement. They all seemed possible for the Drykas woman.
Being clobbered by her during training would be painful, but the bruises would heal eventually, and the skills he'd get in return would be worth the effort.
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Postby Lirin on September 2nd, 2013, 6:40 pm

Lirin blinked at the request.
"Are you sure? I'm not exactly the best for teaching." Which was true. Decent enough at the basics she may be, but hardly anything to write home about. "Training would be great though, it was really fun the last time."

And it had been. Lirin hadn't been particularly skilled -still not, to be honest- so it had been training for as much for him. He had been a pipsqueak, so things that seemed normal enough for her had been tough for him. -anyway- she supposed, -i can help him with the basics at least, and it will give me someone to practice with-

She yawned again. -dammit!- "I'm all for it and you can show me whatever tricks you've picked up andwhateverelse.." She shook her head violently to rid herself of the fog that had settled over her.

"But yes, training brilliant idea. Just tell me when 'kay?" Lirin briefly entertained the idea that she may have had a litle too much beer, but honestly, it usually didn't affect her like this. Not that she could remember much about how it 'usually' affected her.

-oh gods, it's happy Rod again. must be some sort of record- And, she really needed some sleep. She was starting to get silly now.
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Postby Roderick on September 2nd, 2013, 9:43 pm

"Are you sure? I'm not exactly the best for teaching."
Oh so very true.
"Training would be great though, it was really fun the last time."

Yeah, not being able to feel your arm for three days? Just great! Really.

Lirin yawned again before she spoke, "I'm all for it and you can show me whatever tricks you've picked up and whatever else.." she whipped her head about like dogs do when they're wet.

"But yes, training's a brilliant idea. Just tell me when 'kay?"

"I'll let you know," he told her, watching the robed woman rising carefully from her chair; her hair became half-hidden under her hood as she pulled it up about her ears and made for the door. The bard in the blue started plucking at the strings on his lute, singing a tavern song. Some of the other patrons took to listening to him; a few clapped their hands or tapped the feet as his song rose in volume. Otherwise most carried on with what they were doing and ignored the man.

"Might as well show you where Traveler's Row is, eh?" Roderick stood up and started walking towards the tavern door. As he went he gave a glance to the bard and saw that his clothes weren't so fine up close; the threads of his doublet were fraying and coming loose and his shirt was crinkled, while his breeches were worn somewhat near the knees. The gloves he wore were dirty and stained and the wood of his lute was cracked, the paint chipping away in small flakes. The bard and Roderick exchanged a look; the hunter flipped a silver onto the table; the bard nodded his thanks and continued his song.

Pushing his way through the doors he let the slight breeze wash over him for a moment and then continued on his way towards Traveler's Row. Stepping around and between the people about him, he had to shove his way by on occasion, earning a complaint for it, but otherwise managing to make his way towards Traveler's Row without any troubles.

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Postby Radiant on October 8th, 2013, 4:17 pm

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Roderick, I was enjoying your storytelling, but... I got the feeling that I have heard it before. A google search turns out you were copying the story of Black Bull of Norroway. Word per word, no change, no variation.

This is a blatant display of Plagiarism. It violates the Mizahar Terms of Use. As such, this thread cannot be graded. Please do try to not repeat this in the future, continued violation, especially heavy ones such as Plagiarism could result in an uninvite.
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