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Vetari has an unexpected visitor on a day of hope and mourning

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A Time to Wait (Poison)

Postby Vetari Violet on October 15th, 2013, 5:25 am

Vetari cringed inwardly at Daratur’s words. Blasphemy? Surely it wouldn’t come to that… but if it did, would I be strong enough? He gulped in fear, but within himself he felt a stirring. This was the right thing to do. It did not matter what the others thought of him, of his new take on their traditions. What mattered was that he was doing what was right. What mattered is that he pleased Viratas.

In that moment Vetari became the most stubborn man to live beneath a mountain. “If you two will stand by me, there is no way we can fail. If I have the backing of the church…well, things may get ugly, but at the very least the open minded amongst the pious will turn an ear to listen. I hope our people see the wisdom in this as you both have.” He smiled, fangs prodding his lower lip as he rose, slipping an arm around the shoulders of his companions.

“We’d best get started,” he said with a chuckle. “Revolution is in the air.”
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A Time to Wait (Poison)

Postby Poison on October 26th, 2013, 6:46 am

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Lores: Constructing a Prayer, Taking on Greater Responsibilities, Blood might strengthen the Symenestra, The Start of a Revolution

Notes: I really enjoyed moderating you, and I look forward to the mass and finding out whether Daratur and Vetari will be able to change Kalinor. The point in medicine is for bandaging your hand, what I gave you the other points for should be clear (at least I hope so). If you have any issues with the way I graded this thread, let me know.

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