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Nate is in the Pits again, this time trying to learn self-defense, when he meets a pretty interesting guy...

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[Anthonius Fighter's Pit] First Strike (Aoren)

Postby Nathaniel Deveraux on November 9th, 2013, 1:28 am

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Well, that failed spectacularly. Nate groaned inside as both strikes missed, hitting nothing but air as Aoren easily ducked and rolled out the way. He really should've expected a maneuver like that, he'd done a similar thing to get away from cougars and wolves, why shouldn't Aoren do the same? And so the other man was using Nate's own trick against him, rolling to the side to avoid the cougar's pounce and now Nate was stuck trying to recover from a failed attack and see if he couldn't make his style do anything useful.

Aoren was already in motion, rising from his roll and charging at Nate with clear intent. Nate, however, had barely recovered from his previous strike, and his protesting rib and injured shin meant this mobility was all-but-shot. In the wilds of Syliras it was a death-sentence to be immobile so he tried to will his legs to move, but he could really only awkwardly shuffle a few steps back, his legs wobbly and unfocused beneath him as he tried to make it behave the way it was supposed to.

The issue, as Nate was quickly discovering, with his "style" was that it was designed to be very aggressive. It relied on mobility and speed to do most of its damage, much like the animal it was based on. It wasn't well-suited to absorbing or even parrying blows, instead avoiding them when possible and deflecting them when absolutely necessary, but he had neither the training, nor the skill, nor honestly the speed required to pull that off.

On top of which the single most critical aspect of this style, mobility, had been robbed by Aoren's strike to his leg. The limb was still tingling from the strike and it made it difficult at best for Nate to even maneuver, to say nothing of the graceful backwards leap he had intended to pull off.

One thing was for sure though, this style could work if done right, except he was clearly not doing it right. He needed practice with it to get the kinks out and this Aoren was definitely someone with an actual, disciplined style that could be a very effective sparring partner. Not to mention he didn't sugarcoat any of his strikes or try to hold back or any of that nonsense, he went straight for real, honest to the gods strikes that actually hurt and needed to be avoided. It kept Nate on his toes and was almost as good as facing a real, living, hungry cougar. Almost. The cougar had more teeth.

The forward momentum of Aoren's charge was not really blunted by what he did next, just transformed. The circular motion and the tightening of his hip muscles told Nate that the man was going to attempt a kick but his limited mobility meant he was not in any position to dodge it and the style as he currently stood with it did not allow for appropriate defensive techniques. Or perhaps he was just too rigid with his thinking.

But if he made "exceptions" then his style wouldn't stay true to form, and would be nothing but a mess of random strikes and blocks, and wouldn't be a style so much as him flailing about. It was a tough decision, but Nate decided to stick to the style, and try to see if he couldn't find a way to make it work.

Aoren had pivoted around, the kicking leg gaining strength both from the borrowed momentum of the charge combined with the circular motion of Aoren's spin, and Nate knew he had two choices. Well, really only one choice, when he really boiled it down. He had to try to block this attack, because he was in no condition to dodge. As the leg came sweeping in Nate bent lower on his knees, raising one of his arms until it was at a ninety-degree angle and bringing it so that the forearm was perpendicular to the ground, looking to employ some form of elbow block. He would have preferred to slap the leg away but the form of the stance really didn't allow for such movement so he hoped this block would suffice. It did not.

The force of the kick powered right through the block, knocking Nate's elbow into his own chest and sending him sprawling backward, where his bruised shin finally caused his legs to give way and his stumbling became a collapse, falling backward onto the mat and onto his rump, the pain from his ribs finally catching up and he threw up his hand in surrender. Nate took several deep breaths and tried to get his bearings, his face somewhat dazed from the beating he'd just received. None of his attacks hit their mark, and it felt like every single one of Aoren's did. This style was clearly too advanced for him to attempt; he'd need a simpler one if he was to have any chance at success.

"Well, that was clearly a resounding success," Nate sighed, sarcasm obvious in his voice, face morose as he slowly picked himself up from the mat. "I don't think I got in a single solid hit. Well, that's not surprising given the fact that my 'style' probably doesn't even work. Or possibly even exist." Nate couldn't hide the disappointment on his face. He'd really hoped to get in at least one hit, but the simple fact was the style was too aggressive, too reliant on maneuverability that he just didn't have.

"I... I was trying to copy a cougar's movements, actually, but clearly I didn't succeed all that well," Nate shrugged. "Cougars rely on mobility, a good offense, and blinding speed, all three of which I currently lack."

Rubbing his sore shins and ribs, Nate sat down on the mat for a short period and checked his injuries. They weren't severe, and given a few days they'd heal completely, but he doubted he'd have the mobility he'd need to properly execute any of the maneuvers he wanted with his new unarmed style. The ribs he could grit his teeth and maybe handle, but the shin would be a highly limiting factor. And if that'd been his knee...

Still, Nate hated giving up. If he had to get some broken bones tonight just to get in one good hit, then he'd be willing to sacrifice a femur or two. Whatever it took! He looked back up at Aoren with a determined expression. "I gotta say, you're one Hai of a fighter. I'll be ready in a few chimes to go again, lemme just catch my breath. Say... you interested in doing this again some other time? 'Cause I'm gonna need to build up my speed if I'm ever going to make this style work."
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[Anthonius Fighter's Pit] First Strike (Aoren)

Postby Aoren on November 10th, 2013, 10:50 pm

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His kick landed! Not only did it land it sent Nathaniel sprawling backward plowing through the makeshift defense the other young man had thrown up at the last minute. That honestly surprised Aoren. He had been expecting Nathaniel to simply fall to the ground in either a duck or tuck and roll away from his maneuver. It would have been simple enough now that Aoren thought about it. By simply rolling away from his kick Nathaniel would have had a clear shot to do whatever he wanted to Aoren’s flank. Already Aoren was beginning to see a crucial flaw in the way he was approaching the technique he was developing.

His moves allowed for too much retaliation. He needed to be swift but he needed to move fluidly in a more reactionary manner rather than an offensive manner. He needed to focus more on cautionary defense between his attacks so that he wasn’t so exposed during the recovery period of each blow. As his leg came down his hip stung causing Aoren’s leg to spasm. He stumbled forward falling into a kneel as his foot came back down to the mat. Aoren took in a deep breath pushing himself up into a standing position. That blow to his hip bone had done more damage than he initially thought. It would likely be a day or two before he was back up to full speed. He was just about ready to drop back into his fighting stance when Nathaniel threw a hand up in surrender.

Well, that was clearly a resounding success,” Aoren quirked his head slightly as he dropped his stance standing up straight. He walked up to the fallen young man. “I don't think I got in a single solid hit. Well, that's not surprising given the fact that my 'style' probably doesn't even work. Or possibly even exist.

Aoren didn’t know the answer to that question. He was far from an expert in the various forms of disciplined unarmed combat. He really only knew that the difference between brawling and a true fighting style was discipline over the reliance of random objects picked up from the environment.

“I wouldn’t say you didn’t get a single blow in.” He tapped his hip giving Nathaniel a wanton smile. That jab had most definitely aimed for his kidneys. He was certain of it. If Nathaniel’s blow had been successful the fight very well may have ended there. Aoren had only been struck in the kidney’s one time but it had hurt much more than he cared to remember. He knew that the more he trained himself in disciplined fighting styles he would have to harden his body against such frailty. He would have to increase his endurance and his ability to withstand doubling over in pain from strikes to the body’s naturally weak areas.

There were several pressure points that Aoren knew of off the top of his head. The kidney’s was one. The liver was another. He knew of a specific pressure point just between the base of the neck and toward the shoulder that when pinched caused a great deal of discomfort and pain to the one subjected to it. He also knew of a pressure point between the bones near the wrist that forced the hand to open. He knew that when grabbed forcefully a person could grasp there forcing the assailants hand open and causing a fair amount of pain. A person could probably even cause damage to the hand if they pressed hard enough. Aoren listened as Nathaniel explained his reasoning behind his fighting style. The young man nodded running the back of his hand over his forehead to wipe away the sheen of sweat that was beading there.

“I could tell. Your strikes were very forceful. There were a couple of times where I thought you almost had me. You shouldn’t lost hope about your chosen style though. If you can move fast enough and strike rapidly enough the feral intensity of your technique may just pull off. You just need practice.” He stepped up to Nathaniel offering the young man a hand to help him to his feet. Honor in combat was something Aoren firmly believed in. He could hear the lessons he’d received in fighting from his long-time friend and sister, Ileera, ringing in his head.

The greatest mistake any fighter can make is to insult their opponent. Never insult your opponent. You never know how deeply you can wound their pride and a man with wounded pride is dangerous. Never underestimate your opponent either. To do so is to insult them and yourself. A man who realizes he’s being toyed with will lose all respect for you and respect on the battlefield can be the difference between an honorable fight and a senseless brawl.

Her words had held true for most of the conflict that Aoren had faced in his life thus far. Since the first day he’d heard them Aoren had always given respect where respect was due. Even when he was the one insulted he never returned those insults to his adversaries, the few he had. It wasn’t always an easy thing to do. There were times when he was enraged at the brazen insults that had been tossed his way. There were times when he’d wanted to give other people a taste of their own medicine but he had always been one to show restraint and he wasn’t about to start deviating from that mentality any time soon.

“Don’t discredit yourself, Nathaniel. You’re hardly what I would call unskilled. You fought well I think that I really just have a few more lessons on you. That is all. It allows me to react just a little bit faster and with a little more creativity. The key behind my fighting style is to react swiftly and decisively. It is more reactive fighting style than a proactive one. The whole idea is to balance out against the style of my opponent. Your style was highly aggressive so I opted for a firmer defense.” He shrugged his shoulders.

Once Nathaniel was on his feet Aoren looked him over with a small amount of concern in his face. He hoped he hadn’t injured the young man too seriously. Temperance was the road that Aoren walked. He would have been mighty displeased with himself if he’d caused serious harm to someone he’d just been training with.

“At any rate I think that is enough actual sparring for a little bit. I may be able to help you with your speed and agility if you like? I’m a bit of an acrobat myself and a lot of the stretches and exercises that I routinely do help with my fighting style. Would you be interested in learning a few before our next bout? I wouldn't mind making our sparring matches a regularly occurring thing.”He gave the other man a genuine smile. Aoren had been searching for a regular sparring partner. It seemed he found one. He wasn't opposed to refining his technique with Nathaniel at all.
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[Anthonius Fighter's Pit] First Strike (Aoren)

Postby Nathaniel Deveraux on November 13th, 2013, 2:46 pm

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As Nate had suspected, he just wasn't fast enough. At least Aoren was gracious enough not to rub that into his face, as much as Nate deserved it. The fighting style he was trying to create relied on a speed he didn't have, what was he thinking, of course he would lose. It was a minor miracle that he made it as far as he did, and that was only because Aoren's own style was by his own admission incomplete. If the larger man had been more skilled or practiced the fight would have been over about halfway through.

So his block had been an utter waste of time. Well... perhaps not. An elbow block like that, now that he thought about it, was not an appropriate response to a roundhouse kick. Large, telegraphed moves like that were best handled by avoiding them or deflecting them. And in truth Nate knew this; when the move was coming at him he knew he had to block, deflect or dodge, but the strike to his shin limited his mobility too much and he didn't trust his legs to get him out of the way quickly enough.

Nate checked his own body again to see how well it was recovering from Aoren's blows. Thankfully, none of the strikes hit any vital areas; if that rib strike had hit his liver he'd have to take a break entirely for a few days to recover, he was sure. And if that strike to the shin had hit his kneecap, he might be unable to walk for an equal amount of time; definitely a dangerous blow he would need to watch out for in the future.

Nate nodded gratefully when Aoren reminded him of the one strike he managed to land. He didn't know if it even did any damage though because the other fighter seemed to move perfectly fine as though it barely slowed him down, whereas all of Aoren's strikes seemed to slow him down considerably. Maybe he just needed to build up endurance in his limbs so that blows to the body wouldn't be nearly so limiting.

"Well, I definitely need practice, that's for sure," Nate laughed, good-naturedly, taking Aoren's hand and pulling himself up from the mat. "Especially on speed and accuracy. If there's one thing I learned hunting in the wilds, it's that more often than not, speed is life."

Nate shrugged a bit when Aoren mentioned that he shouldn't discredit himself. "Thanks, Aoren. I might've been a little arrogant, honestly, thinking I could create a whole entire fighting style just by imitating a beast I'd fought before in the wilds. Styles take years of dedication and discipline to develop; but I guess that just means I have to work harder, I guess."

He nodded though at Aoren's evaluation of the basics of the style. "Yeah, I noticed it immediately when we fought. The style is almost all offense, it relies on its speed and mobility to avoid getting pummeled. It's really not designed to absorb impacts... that 'block' I did at the end wasn't a smart move, now that I think about it."

Nate was honestly a little relieved that Aoren had agreed to pause their sparring for a bit. Even though his pride was a bit hurt that he pretty much full-on lost the last bout, it taught him a lot of things about his style that he knew he'd have to continuously work on if he had any intention of improving it. Speed, accuracy, precision, control. Perhaps Aoren's suggestion of learning a bit of acrobatics would certainly be a useful thing. Nate suspected having his body be more limber would aid in his ability to leap away from danger, cougar-like, which his style desperately needed him to be capable of doing.

"Sure, that sounds great!" Nate nodded enthusiastically. "Gotta say, though, I've never done any acrobatics before either so... I'll probably be as good at it as my unarmed combat," he warned Aoren with a grin. "But anyway, I'll do my best. So what do we start with? Stretches or something?"
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Postby Aoren on November 27th, 2013, 2:55 pm

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Aoren chuckled in good humor. Nathaniel seemed to be of the optimistic variety never letting his spirits get dampened simply because he didn’t succeed. It was something that Aoren could admire. Aoren rolled his shoulders doing small windmills with his arms in an attempt to get the soreness from the bout out of his muscles. He rotated his neck from side to side before shrugging his shoulders in a pointed effort to loosen them up.

“Stretches are part of being an acrobat. A very important part actually. You can injure yourself very easily if you don’t to some proper stretching. You could pull a muscle or cramp up mid-maneuver and sprain your wrist, ankle or even break a bone. We’ll start with a few basic ones that aren’t terribly difficult.” He stepped back from Nathaniel a few inches bouncing on the balls of his feet before settling into a stance with his feet shoulder-width apart.

“The first stretch is pretty easy. We’ll start with the right arm. Bring it up and across from your chest at an angle then bring up your left arm pressing the crook of your elbow against your right elbow.” Aoren demonstrated the stretch. He brought up his right arm at a leisurely angle across his chest resting it in the crook of his left elbow. “Then squeeze with your left arm until you feel a slightly tugging in your right shoulder. This shouldn’t be painful it should just feel like the muscles are getting stretched. Hold that stretch for ten seconds then move on to the opposite arm.”

Aoren squeezed his left arm until he felt a familiar pulling sensation in the muscles of his right shoulder. He held that stretch for the allotted amount of time enjoying the feel of it. When the ten seconds had elapsed he switched to his left arm repeating the movement watching carefully to make sure that Nathaniel was doing it properly. He had no doubt that the young man would. It wasn’t a horribly complicated stretch albeit it could be a little uncomfortable for someone who wasn’t used to stretching. When his left arm had been stretched Aoren dropped both arms shaking them gently to work out any further kinks in his shoulders.

“Next is another shoulder stretch. Bring your right arm up over your head so that the crook of your elbow is resting on top of your scalp. Grab your right elbow with your other hand and pull to the left until you feel a dull tugging sensation.” Aoren followed through with stretch until he felt the tugging sensation. He held it for ten seconds then switched to the opposite arm nodding for Nathaniel to follow suit. Once that was over and done with he dropped his arms again.

“How good is your balance?” The young man surveyed Nathaniel for a moment as if measuring how much balance the other fighter possessed. After a moment he shrugged his shoulders shaking his head. “It doesn’t matter. This next stretch will help with that. If you stumble catch yourself and just take up the stretch again until you can hold it for a good fifteen seconds.” Bending at the waist ever so slightly Aoren brought his right leg up so that all of his weight rested on his left. He grasped his ankle with his right hand and pulled his leg backward so that his knee was pointing straight at the ground.

“This is a stretch to help with both your balance and get your quadriceps muscles nice and loose.” He patted his thigh with his free hand giving Nathaniel an encouraging smile. “The goal is to keep your knee pointed straight at the ground the entire time you’re doing the stretch otherwise it will lose its full worth.”

Holding the stretch Aoren switched to the opposite leg repeating the movements as if he’d done them a hundred if not a thousand times. He actually couldn’t clearly recall the first time he’d started learning how to stretch properly. He knew that he had his sister, Ileera to thank for teaching him but ever since he was little it was just something he’d always done. When he’d finished that stretch he motioned for Nathaniel to take a seat on the mat. Aoren seated himself just across from the other fighter. He rest his right leg out in front of him while bringing his left leg inward to resemble a triangle.

“This is called the hurdler’s stretch. Keep your outward leg as straight as possible. With the corresponding hand reach down toward your toes and try not to lift your leg or bend your knee. You should feel a tight almost burning sensation in your hamstrings and your lower back if you’re doing it right.” Aoren reached forward, the fingers of his right hand brushing the tips of his toes on his right foot. He grunted slightly from the effort. He held it for a good ten seconds before switching to the opposite leg.

“Don’t worry if you can’t reach all the way. Keep at the stretch and you’ll get there. It takes time and practice but the important thing it to maintain proper form.” Aoren reached down his left leg and grasped just above his ankle. “If it helps, you can grasp your calf or just above your ankle so you don’t slip and lose the resistance you need to stretch.” He released his ankle then positioned his hand above his toes. Once that was finished Aoren sat up straight bringing both of his legs inward pressing the soles of his feet together pulling them into his groin.

“This is the butterfly stretch. Go ahead, you can laugh at the name.” He chuckled a little himself. It certainly wasn’t the most masculine of names and the awkward position would boost anyone’s ego any time soon. “This one is really important though. It may be a little silly looking but it could be the difference between tearing your hamstring muscles and being properly limber.” Aoren sat up straighter and took a deep breath.

“The objective of this one is to feel that tugging and pulling sensation right here…” The young man ran a hand along the inside of his hamstrings and along the sides of his thighs. “Try not to point your knees in the air. The closer they are to the ground the more you should feel the stretch. Make sure your heels are as closely in toward your groin as you can tolerate. Hold it for about twenty seconds.” Ticking off the time in his head Aoren released his ankles then rose to his feet once it was all said and done. He stretched out with a huff of breath shaking his head giving Nathaniel a satisfied grin.

“Feeling limber yet?” Laughing softly he rubbed at the back of his head. “Those were just a few basic stretches but they’re important. If we keep on sparring I can teach you some more complicated ones but I wouldn’t want you to pull something by trying a stretch you weren’t ready for.” The young man stood there for a moment regarding Nathaniel.

“So, is there any particular maneuver you’ve always wanted to try? I know most of the basic acrobatic techniques. I know just a few more advanced ones too but those are hard for me to pull off without warming up first.”


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[Anthonius Fighter's Pit] First Strike (Aoren)

Postby Serendipity on April 22nd, 2014, 10:27 pm

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Aoren :
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Skill XP Earned
Unarmed Combat +5 XP
Meditation +1 XP
Acrobatics +3 XP
Socialization +3 XP
Observation + 5 XP
Rhetoric +1 XP
Endurance +4 XP
Body building +3 XP


Lores

  • Boxing: Basic Form
  • Nathaniel: Horribly Out of Place
  • Nathaniel: Gives a Good Kidney Shot
  • Nathaniel: New Sparring Partner
  • Unarmed Combat: Purpose in Movement
  • Unarmed Combat: Refining Techniques
  • Unarmed Combat: Dodging Dodgy Arrows
  • Unarmed Combat: An Art Form
  • Unarmed Combat: Using the Flat of the Palm
  • Unarmed Combat: Aiming for the Joints
  • Things Not to Do: Insult One's Opponent
  • Acrobatics: The Importance of Stretching
  • Stretches: Shoulder, Arm, Thigh, Calf, Hamstring
  • Philosophy: Temperance is the Road I Walk


Injuries
  • The blow in the kidney area will have left Aoren with a nasty bruise (More so due to the lack of immediate treatment and nursing than the hit itself), though nothing too serious. He will experience some pain/discomfort in walking in the coming few days, however the mark will clear and dull pain subside within the week
  • Mediocre bruising to his shin, pain will fade and marks disappear within the next several days
  • Overall muscle aches, primarily hamstrings, a couple of days of rest and easy takings required to heal

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Notes :
I greatly enjoyed the thread! It's a shame that it couldn't be continued, but none the less - great work and enjoy your grades! :D You more than deserved it, Aoren! Brilliant work!
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