Completed [Quest] First Steps (Radiant)

Anton Deveraux takes Nathaniel hunting for the first time.

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This shining population center is considered the jewel of The Sylira Region. Home of the vast majority of Mizahar's population, Syliras is nestled in a quiet, sprawling valley on the shores of the Suvan Sea. [Lore]

[Quest] First Steps (Radiant)

Postby Nathaniel Deveraux on October 29th, 2013, 7:51 pm

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Anton nodded to Kala's question. "Yes, I have two little girls, Lea and Katerina. They're very young right now, but I hope to see them grow up into fine women." As Kala noted Ama's unusual size for her species, Anton shrugged slightly.

"Yes, Kala, but since I didn't know much about Kelvics in general, I just sort of figured that perhaps that was normal for certain species of Kelvic." He scratched his chin slightly. "I wouldn't know much about Talderan Kelvics. I mean I've never really ventured that far out, although it's possible we have distant cousins there, at least on my wife's side."

Nate, for his part, seemed disappointed that Ama was no longer in the mood for playing. She seemed really affected by the idea of her father finding out that she slipped out. Was her dad really that scary? "Hey come on, I'm sure your dad won't be too mad at you," he tried, smiling at Ama with an attempt to cheer her up. He really wasn't paying all that much attention to what the adults were talking about. Something about... Tada Kelvics?

It was some big word that Nate really didn't get, but apparently it had something to do with making them really big. Nate had never seen a wolf before so he just figured that Ama's size was normal for her age. Apparently it wasn't, and Kala seemed to imply that was unusual, but Nate really didn't see what the problem was. So what if Ama was bigger than the usual wolf? That just meant she was cooler!

But it seemed like Kala wanted them all to go home. Nate couldn't stop the disappointment from showing all over his face. They hadn't even done anything out here, except chase a rabbit that they didn't catch, and him almost getting eaten by a big cat. This was totally not the awesome story Nate was hoping for when he first went out here, but he supposed there was always next time.

He was even more disappointed when Ama ran off back to her mom. He kinda liked the girl, she was nice and friendly and adventurous like him. But he supposed that she'd been bad, coming out her by herself, and he'd been punished for doing the same thing by his father enough times to know that one was not supposed to do that. He sighed and looked up at his father, who actually stopped, and said to Nate, "OK, son, lead us home."

Nate froze. He thought his dad had been mostly joking about that. He was serious?! He glanced worriedly at Ama and Kala, but Anton's sharp barking voice brought his eyes back to his father. "Don't look at them. You're alone out here, Nathan. What do you do?"

Nate couldn't help it. He started to panic, the cold grip of the emotion rolling down his spine like water and he felt helpless and trapped, almost like when the cougar was about to eat him. He couldn't do this, why was his dad making him do this, it wasn't fair...

"Nathaniel!" Anton's voice cut through the fog in Nathan's mind like a knife. "Don't panic, son. Never panic." Anton laid a calming hand on Nate's shoulder, dropping down so he could look his son in the eyes. "Listen to me, son," he soothed. "Just take a deep breath." Nate did, and Anton nodded encouragingly.

"That's right, deep breaths. In and out, there you go. Easy now. Just calm down." Nate nodded as he took several more breaths, feeling the burning sensation of panic begin to die down. After a few ticks he'd calmed down enough that Anton felt he was ready to try again.

"OK, so what do we do, Nathan?" he prompted again. Nate's brow furrowed.

"Uhhhh," he said, his eyes sharp as he tried to concentrate, tried to remember what his father had taught him. "We... we look for, umm, we look for water?"

Anton's face was impassive, displaying no emotion to Nate's question, not giving Nate any indication whether his answer was right or wrong. "Because... because water goes downhill? And, umm, and it... leads to bigger water?"

Still no response from Anton. Nate looked very frustrated, but he decided to go with his plan. It was the best idea he had so far, and it was clear his father wasn't going to help him this time, expecting Nate to try to figure it out on his own. He briefly wondered what would happen if he couldn't find his way back. Surely his father wouldn't force Kala and Ama to stay out here too!

Straining to hear any sign of running water, Nate was tempted to dash forward to see if there wasn't any up ahead when he stopped himself. Dashing off like that was exactly what had gotten him into trouble before, and despite being young, he wasn't so stupid as to make the same mistake twice. But there didn't seem to be any running water for him to find, and after a few chimes of fruitless searching, he turned to his father again.

"Daaaad, it's not working!" he whined, but Anton just raised an eyebrow. The implication was clear. Figure it out. And the sun was setting at an awfully fast rate. Nate glanced over at Ama, to see if she was as worried as him. Was his dad being serious?!
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[Quest] First Steps (Radiant)

Postby Radiant on October 30th, 2013, 4:36 am

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"I'm sure they will, Sir Anton." Kala could bet what Anton meant by "very young" was equal to adulthood for Kelvics, humans grew too slow like that. If she was a human female, she would be a prepubescent girl marrying a thirty-something merchant. Unsurprisingly, there were other races that grew even slower than humans such as those snake people. Hundred of years to reach maturity? It's no wonder there were so few of them.

Her gaze went from the hunter to the clinging little girl at her side. The contrast between the mother's black and the daughter's white hair was intriguing to say the least, evident that Kelvics didn't follow the usual norm of inheriting a parent's physical trait. "It's a term, Sir Anton. Talderian means Ama is a lot bigger than normal wolves." She rubbed Ama's snowy hair, but the little girl just kept clinging and slightly pouting.

"...." Ama shook her head at Nate's attempt to comfort her. Her father would be furious, she was an only daughter after all and still a very young child, she may be larger than her wolfish peers but with the way she was now, a predator like the previous cougar could put her in serious danger.

Both of them watched as the boy fumbled with his role as a guide. As much as Kala wanted to watch them, anymore delays and she would have to go home with Ama on her own. The panther Kelvic stayed out of their business for she knew it was for the good of the boy. As far as she knew, Most humans in Syliras didn't have any natural wilderness survival instinct, the boy would have to learn.

After a bell, Kala decided it was time for them to go. She approached the hunter and whispered to him "We are going home, my husband would be worried. I think it's also time you both go home as well, you can continue his lesson tomorrow." With that, she hunched down and transformed to her panther form, gesturing Ama to climb and ride her. The little girl climbed her mother and stayed in a prone position, hugging the black fur.

"Bye bye..." She waved at Nathan before her mother dashed away from the location, heading into the Fortress City.


OOCI think this would be my last post, Nate! Feel free to make your last post then I will grade it. :D
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[Quest] First Steps (Radiant)

Postby Nathaniel Deveraux on October 30th, 2013, 5:28 am

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Anton did not show it on his face, but he was quickly becoming somewhat frustrated. Nathaniel had, during his training sessions with his son, displayed decent skill with the bow and fairly good instincts for a boy his age. But one thing was becoming abundantly clear: he had no head for navigation. Nathaniel was clearly turned around, and didn't even know what direction to face, to say nothing of searching for water. And although it was clear the boy was straining to listen, he also made so much blasted noise tromping through the forest he could wake the dead.

Anton sighed when Nate looked over at Ama again, as though expecting the girl to help him. He seriously wondered what the boy would do, out here in the forest, if there wasn't anyone to help him. Briefly, he considered giving up teaching Nate to hunt. It was simply too dangerous to be out here, if one couldn't find their way back. But no, hunting was all Anton knew how to do. If he didn't teach it to Nate, what else could he teach his boy?

After a long bell, Kala apparently decided that it was time to go for herself and her daughter. Anton could not blame them, though he rather envied her ability to simply become a large panther, and thus giving Ama a swift ride back to the city.

"Bye bye..." Ama waved at Nate, and he waved back. He looked rather sad to watch her leave, still waving goodbye to her even after Kala had already bounded off with Ama on her back. Anton knew the boy would probably be seeing a lot of the wolf Kelvic, since he planned to bring him on future hunting trips. Still, best not to get the boy's hopes up.

"OK, son, you still have to find the way home," he admonished. But then he sighed. At this rate, it would be dark before they even cleared the forest. Bending down, Anton motioned Nate over. "You have to remember, Nathaniel, that I may not always be here. That Ama may not always be here. In the future, if you get lost out here, you must learn how to navigate. Remember to follow the sound of water, if you can hear it. And if you can't, try to find an animal trail backwards. They usually lead to water as well."

Sighing, Anton grasped Nate's hand, and quietly led him back to Syliras. Nate sniffled and followed dutifully, walking silently beside his father as they made their way home. Anton briefly wondered if any of the lessons of the day even sank into his son's head. He'd find out soon enough, he surmised. Tomorrow was, after all, another day.

~Fin~
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[Quest] First Steps (Radiant)

Postby Radiant on October 30th, 2013, 8:51 am

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Nathaniel :
Experience
Skill XP Earned
Observation +3 XP
Socialization +2 XP
Rhetoric +1 XP
Weapon: Shortbow +1 XP
Hunting +1 XP
Running +1 XP
Wilderness Survival +2 XP


Lores
Lore Earned
Kelvic: Shapeshifting People
Ama: Dire White Wolf Kelvic
Ama: Friend
Kala: Black Panther Kelvic
Kala: Ama's Mother
Kelvics Have No Sense In Modesty
Predator: Cougar
The Wilderness Is Dangerous


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Notes :
Wonderful thread, Nathan! I enjoyed it a lot! I hope you do as well! :D


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