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Daniel and Tichi head into the woods for a run

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Stretching northward along the coastline of the Suvan Sea, the Cobalt Mountains are the home of the Bronze Wood, numerous ruins, and creatures both strange and fantastical.

[Bronze Woods] Expect the Unexpected

Postby Taylani on November 27th, 2013, 5:32 pm

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Tichi:

XP Award:
  • +2 socialization
  • +1 running
  • +1 climbing
  • +1 rhetoric
  • +1 Interrogation

Lore:
  • Daniel Connor: Desire for her to learn lock Picking
  • Kelvic: Be wary of hunters in squirrel form.
  • Roderick: Is a hunter, he kills animals
  • The need to work on observation

Notes:The bond will allow a kelvic to mirror their bondmates traits but if she didn’t speak Vani before the Bond she wouldn’t be able to speak it after the bond. Considering Tichi is less than a season old in Mizahar she has not been learning Vani for longer than that, and it is not in your history about learning it. She would be at a very poor level for a little bit even if she spent every day learning it. It takes time to learn languages.
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Roderick:

XP Award:
  • +1 hunting
  • +3 observation
  • +2 Weapon: Long bow
  • +2 rhetoric
  • +4 socialization

Lore:
  • Hunting: Hunger is a good motivator
  • Tichi: Squirrel Kelvic
  • Daniel Connor: From Avanthal
Notes:” Hello, little squirrel. I'm going to eat you. “ I was laughing at this for 5 minutes. It just tickled me great job! These are comments.
Daniel Connor:
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Comments :
Roderick you did a good job. I enjoyed your posts, and you did well in describing your actions and managed to get maximum number of points for the number of posts you did with your weapon. Tichi, your emotions writing did ok, but remember there is always something you can describe as far as actions. More describing of actions = more skill points. A fun thread, and I am still giggling over the squirrel remark. As always feel free to PM me any concerns over your grade, and don’t forget to edit/delete your grade request..

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