OOCNever assume So I'm going to have to backtrack a bit on this... I probably should have mentioned earlier the reason for this 'intervention' of sorts, but I thought it would be more interesting to write it up. The Stryfe basically listed all my problems
Also, a backflip with 5 points in acro? I don't think so... you may want to reword it, though I am taking it for granted that he got into the water.
..You get a Stryfe mad, you get everyone mad... The Ebonstryfe soldier's face turned into a scowl at Rheon's indigence. However, he didn't raise a finger, until the bottle turned up. He frowned at that, then back at the Svefra, eyes dark. When the drink came spurting out... he was prepared. A fist came smashing out, but Rheon was already moving by then, so it hit his ribs instead... and not as hard as it could have. Still, the Svefra made it into the canal... which was saying something.
The Stryfe yelled a curse at Rheon, but a free Ravosalaman came to the rescue. He'd been watching the entire exchange, and when Rheon tried to swim around his boat, he knelt, carefully watching the moving head. When it came close enough, a small club came out and rapped smartly across the Svefra's skull. Before he could sink, however, the Ravosalaman grabbed Rheon's shirt collar and hauled him up. Another weapon was procured, this one a small dagger that was laid carefully across Rheon's throat. The blow had been hard enough to stun, but not knock him unconscious.
"Oi! Stryfe! Got your fish for you! Do I get paid for the catch? I could just let 'im go and swim away. A throat slit'll cost you a pretty miza though... but I could just dump 'im on the shore for you to pick up, and do what you like!" There was a little cackle, and the Stryfe snorted. Though everyone helped the soldiers... the Ravosalamen liked their gold, and rarely did anything without some sort of compensation. During the time the catch had taken, two more Stryfe had jogged in, looking a little more sensible (and merciful) that the first... who'd managed to wipe the spit and alcohol off his face.
A tall, dark haired woman stepped forward, hand on the hilt of her longsword.
"Just drop him here. I'll give you half a gold miza for your efforts." She waved a few fingers at the man, who simply cackled again.
"Half? Why, this is worth a whole!"
"Eight silver mizas"
"Deal" This last was more serious than anything the Ravosalaman had said before. Still holding onto Rheon, he used a foot to push himself away from the far side of the small canal, and float closer to the Stryfe. The other two soldiers grabbed the Svefra under the arm pits, and dragged him onto shore, where they kept a close eye on him. A few coins exchanged hands, and the Ravosalaman floated away with a wave, purse a little heavier than before.
"You ran, so I assume you don't have papers. Yes?" the woman demanded, giving Rheon a sharp nudge with her foot. By then, he should have regained most of his senses.
"Not a citizen? Means we can do what you like, and earn back that miza I spent." She snorted indignantly.
"We'll take him to the slave markets, and see what he'll be worth. Strong, that'll be useful."