Flashback A Day with Father [solo]

Dominick briefly shows Amelia around the 'better' places of Ravok

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A city floating in the center of a lake, Ravok is a place of dark beauty, romance and culture. Behind it all though is the presence of Rhysol, God of Evil and Betrayal. The city is controlled by The Black Sun, a religious organization devoted to Rhysol. [Lore]

A Day with Father [solo]

Postby Amelia Cross on November 15th, 2013, 8:50 pm

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[5th day of summer 508.a.v.]
[Ravok]
[The Noble District & City Center]
[Early Morning to Late Evening]




Arrival to Ravok was something Amelia could have only dreamed of in the past, she never thought that her mother would allow it, or that she would even be able to do it if given permission. Yet now, she lived her dream, she was at her father’s house and everything was so easy. Here, in the city of canals and the black sun, Amelia had herself a soft bed with fine sheets and her father promised to buy her better clothing, she ate regularly and was not asked to work, she had a window. Each day when she woke up, she would be expecting to be back in the citadel…

This day was no different, as the pale girl woke up and opened her big black eyes, she expected to be welcomed by torchlight, a lamp or some other form of artificial light that she was used to in her home in Syliras…but no, the warm light of the sun, the natural light of the world entered through the window. With a bright smile the girl jumped out of her bed, only to rush towards the trunk at the end of her bed, there she had placed most of her clothing. It was hard to find something truly nice looking, as compared to the fine things her father wore; she still looked like a servant.

It toke her some time, but she managed to find a lovely dress. This was one of those dresses that you would see her wearing on a special event, not because it would be made of silk or had gold in it, but because it was fitted better for her body, it was clean and if nobody touched it to actual feel the fabric, it could be pulled off as something of relevant value.

With that out of the way, Amelia toke her makeup, the only thing she couldn’t see herself leave without. Carefully she prepped her face with white powder, using her cheap powder-puff to blend it out towards her neck. The powder had destroyed any definition her face had, leaving it with only her black eyes to identify it as a face, rather than a white sheet. She toke a darker colored powder, and with gentle, soft strokes began drawing in lines of her face, around the sides of her nose, the bottom of it to make it look smaller. She ran it a bit below the cheekbones and blended out and upwards towards the hairline, some more shading around the forehead, and she once more looked human.

With a black colored pencil, she filled in her brows, not really reshaping them, just following the natural shape. With the same black color, she colored her upper lash line, making the line thick but steady with a small wing towards the end. Trying to make an identical line on her left eye was a change, but with the second attempt she did it. This line was not as steady, but unless someone bothered, she doubted that they would notice any difference. Some black color to the eyelashes. Amelia’s natural pale pink-ish lips were soon covered by a layer of dark, almost wine red tint that she applied with precision, using a small brush. Not seeing a need to cheat, she didn’t see a need to change her natural lip shape. For the last touch, she finished her look with combing through her hair repeatedly and letting it fall lose behind her back. With a smile, she went down to see her father once more.

The pale girl was welcomed by the smell of fresh baked bread that tempted her to run towards it, rather than walk gracefully. Entering the dining area she saw her father. This man was clearly the image of confidence and almost feminine grace, something about the way he moved his arms and carried himself…it just was hard not to look at him, not to be amazed. And when he spoke, you wanted to make the world go mute. ”Amelia?” with that simple word, Amelia was awakened from her dream like state and smiled at her father with a light blush building up on her skin under all of the make-up she had ”yes?” ”for a chime I thought you were dreaming with your eyes open” the man explained as he sat down by the round, dark wood table, with his hand indicating for the girl to sit as well.

When she sat down, she was not sure with what to begin, the soft looking sweet breads, the unusual to her paste that had a dark color, the fruit or sweets, so she just awkwardly sat and looked at the cup of tea she had in front of her. ”you don’t like any of this?” her father asked as he toke a sip of his coffee, the truth was, her father was not fully informed how she and her mother lived back in Syliras…all of this was unusual to her, and she didn’t want to admit that most of the fruit she hadn’t tasted before, that fresh bread was not something she ate in the mornings, if she ate at all…not because she didn’t want to, but because it was expensive to buy bread in the mornings. ”no, I do, I’m just not hungry” the girl explained as she toke one of the few familiar looking fruits and began cutting it. ”that’s not right, we have a long day ahead of us, you should eat” his words were full of concern, but his voice was quite cold, emotionless…but she liked it that way.Following her father’s instruction, Amelia began eating, not sure when would the next time she ate be. Then again, she had a guess it would sooner than her schedule back in Syliras.

”so what big plans do we have for today?” she tried sounding calm and collected, though excitement still managed to show through ”I want to show you around Ravok, properly” and with that, the amount of conversations they had by the table ended.


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A Day with Father [solo]

Postby Amelia Cross on November 15th, 2013, 9:20 pm

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Amelia had her riding boots, not the most feminine type of footwear, but definitely one of the most comfortable. She followed her father as bout of them left the home he lived in. Her thoughts confirmed, next to the fine clothing of her father, the girl looked more like his slave than his daughter, but that would change once her new clothing is bought, but when would that be?

They walked in silence, purely because Amelia had little time to listen as she looked at the beautiful buildings. You didn’t see houses in Syliras, and these had windows, even balconies. The colors ranged from natural and settle browns, to yellows and even blues. It was amazing to see people walking with bright smiles, healthy sun kissed skin. Back where she was used to live, everything was so much more…sickly and pale, at least that was what the girl saw, the girl who last most of the hope and fate in the city of knights. But one thing that amazed her most, was just how nice the people here were, she was expecting to see a city swallowed by chaos and evil, judging by the way it was a sensitive topic back in Syliras…not to mention their patron, Rhysol, was the god of betrayal and lies…yet this place…it was like a dream.

”you like our building?” Dominick asked with a smile, clearly pleased that his daughter was so found of his favorite city, of his home ”they are amazing! So beautiful and colorful...plants from the balconies…those don’t last long in Syliras” everything would have been so good, if she wouldn’t mention the city. A short frown found its way on her father’s flawless features as his voice dropped to a much more distant and cold. ”never mention that city here, especially to strangers…remember Amelia, to whoever asks, you are born in Zeltiva, lived and studied there at the University…never, I mean never, have you even been to Syliras” and his voice made it clear, the way he emphasized the word ‘never’, just like in Syliras it was a taboo to say that her father is from Ravok and she herself is half-Ravokian… here it is a sin to speak of Syliras. ”that much I can follow””okay” ”its ‘yes’, not ‘okay’” ”yes”

Even though Amelia was silent, she still had the thoughts lingering through her head, the same old thoughts of her not being allowed to be herself in either Syliras or Ravok, bout cities despised a part of her. It’s like she belonged in neither of them…so maybe a different city, eventually…maybe Zeltiva would take her back?

The two walked, still silent, Amelia tried her best to keep up with her father’s steps…strangely enough she seemed to walk a lot more awkwardly than her father, less gracefully. Partially she blamed the canals for it, as the girl didn’t know how to swim they were the only downfall in the city…the only downfall she would admit.

Finally the silence between the two broke, as they arrived to the Temple of The Black Sun. ”here we are…are you ready to enter?” but Amelia didn’t hear his words, she just saw…she looked at the building with amazement. Of course, it could have been noticed from afar, but now, when she finally was so up close to the building. She felt so small, so irrelevant and her legs went almost numb. Amelia was not someone who actually knew much of the god, of the sun or the Voice…but as she saw the temple and how important it was to the local people, she wanted to know, she wanted to be like them, smiling from the inside out.

Holding her father’s arm, they entered the courtyard. Her eyes jumping from one person to the next, it was so unusual to see a place like this, above all, filled with people of such different standings in society. Some were dressed in silk, while some wore plain linen…even the poor, and nobody was being kicked out. No evil in the temple of the god of evil. It was unusual and unexpected, because even back in Syliras she saw much more rudeness between people. Was this true humanity? In the city if chaos?

Guided further by her father, she entered the temple itself, only to see so many people already praying. She felt out of place, for not being a follower of the god who’s home she stepped in, but at the same time, she couldn’t remember the last time she felt this calm at her hearth. With her black dress, she even seemed to fit in here.

”but father, I don’t know Rhysol…” she whispered, careful not to be heard by others, and her father only smiled ”than just thank him”


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A Day with Father [solo]

Postby Amelia Cross on November 15th, 2013, 9:40 pm

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The girl was being humble, respecting the god who she was not sure would she ever find being a follower of…but she decided to do as her father told her, thank him.

”Rhysol, the god who founded peace for the people in this city…I thank you for letting me in, for the beauty you have given to the lands by forming Ravok…the hope, the shining light of the sun to those who are lost in the sun” she wasn’t sure what she was saying, but nothing was thought over twice, as it came from her soul, it came to her prayer ”the father who protects this city, please welcome me here as one of your children, as one of Ravok, despite my life in the citadel…that was not my home…this is my home, I feel it in my hearth” and she felt at ease, as if a pile of rocks had fallen from her soul and she could once more be free and happy, like her soul could sing.

She stayed there for a chime more, calm, and happy, until her father’s hand touched her shoulder, it was time to leave. Amelia once more toke her father’s arm and they walked, father and daughter. ”did you feel it? How the light of the sun shined upon you?” the question seemed odd, but she nodded, thinking that what she felt was the light her father spoke of. ”please, father, tell me more, tell me of Rhysol and the Voice, of the Sun and the Stryfe..I want to know this city, I want to be part of it” and these words were like music to Dominick’s ears, to know that his daughter is accepting this, as her home. For a moment he almost forgot, that she promised to return to Syliras and was just visiting. ”I will”

They walked further, her smile only grew as she saw more new streets open before her, more women in bright and colorful dresses, beautiful hair and they walked with their pets, well groomed dogs most often that weren’t too big. Not often people kept pets in Syliras, they were a pain to take care of and more often than not, gave out a horrible smell. The men were all nicely dressed, a not a knight in sight…but you could see the stryfe soldiers, what Amelia sort of compared to the knights anyhow.

”this is your future, little bird” her father said as they neared yet another building that caused the pale girl to awe. The Institute of higher learning. She had to admit, the building sent shivers up and down her spine, her hearth seemed to start beating twice as fast and she was just looking at it, but it truly was a beautiful sight to see…horrifying, but beautiful. ”what do you mean, my future?””this, is the institute of higher learning, here, you will study, all the knowledge needed to once become a member of the Sun, to be accepted in the city as a true Ravokian” and the thought seemed to be pleasant, at least while she didn’t pay more attention to it. ”have you studied there?””yes, poison specifically” the knowledge was not something Amelia expected to find out, but she was fascinated and interested in the art that her father had studied and the art that made her father worthy in the eyes of Rhysol.

They walked further from the institute, enjoying the fresh breeze and occasional chatter, until her father brought her to the place that was of primary interest to the girl that wanted to fit in the beautiful city. The Azure’s Fine tailoring. The shop looked simple enough, and as she entered her eyes shined like the stars at night. The girl didn’t know where to look first, everything was so bright and so eye-catching. Her father entered soon after her and couldn’t help but chuckle as he saw his daughter almost running from one stand to the other, so unlike the natives who shop here.

”Go crazy, I want you to reflect the beauty of this city in your every step, so chose as many dresses, skirts or whatever..” he said as he came up to her and once more placed his palm on her shoulder. The offer was so tempting, Amelia really wanted to get herself so many beautiful dresses like the women here wore, capes and corsets, jewelry and so much more…but the humble part of her just kept on repeating, that that money she’d be spending would be her father’s, not her. ”don’t worry about the gold” he smiled at the girl reassuringly as he seemed to spot some doubt in her eyes.

With doubts swiped away, she walked pass the dress stands. She could hear chuckling of the local women who spotted just how cheap Amelia’s current dress was, she could bet that they didn’t think she could even afford them or even know what looked good on her. What was a lie and a truth at the same time. And even though she knew that her father could buy the dresses for her, she just didn’t feel at her place there…until her father brought her a hand-full of dresses ”start with these, they should look good on you” the women who mocked Amelia behind her back, seemed to back off as they saw just how many dresses the man had brought over ”yes”

Together they walked to the dressing rooms and there Amelia was left to herself, with large mirror s and her dresses. She switched from one dress to the next, each overpowering the previous with more ruffles, lace and bows. Around tree bells latter, Amelia couldn’t even remember the first one’s she tried on, but her father loved to see her in those dresses, bringing over for her more and more dresses to try on.


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A Day with Father [solo]

Postby Amelia Cross on November 15th, 2013, 9:52 pm

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By the end of their shopping trip, Amelia had almost a dozen of dresses, though not the most expensive kind as it turned out that Amelia didn’t really like ruffles or extensive amounts of lace or bows, she liked it simple with good fabric. Somewhere along the way they had gotten her some new shoes and undergarments, and other things that Amelia would have rather not seen her father spend gold on, but he insisted on her having. At least she managed to talk him out of expensive jewelry purchases, by convincing him that she preferred lace chokers, what was only half-true.

The sun was setting as they began their way back to the home Dominick owned. The man refused to walk this time though, as he didn’t see a reason behind it and had little to no interest in carrying his daughter’s purchases, so for overall convenience, they decided to take a ravosal that brought them straight to the entrance of his home. The young ravosala man helped with the bags and their day outside was done.

At home they didn’t speak much as her father had work to catch up with, so Amelia spent her time in the room she called her own. Trying on the new dresses, she got what she had wanted for so long…but as she looked in the mirror, she didn’t feel like herself. It felt like she was wearing the skin of someone else. Like she was trying to become someone else.

Without thinking about it, Amelia had taken on the disguise of a local. It will take a hard fall for her to realize that nothing will make her a true Ravokian, not expensive dresses, not the Institute and not the temple. She was different, and she would not fit in.

notethe shopping done here is only for flashback purposes, none of the ‘purchases’ are carried off to real-time threads :)

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A Day with Father [solo]

Postby Vanari on December 9th, 2013, 6:27 am

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Lores :
  • Grandeur of Ravok Over Syliras
  • Syliras: Never Mention It!
  • Father's Orders: You Were Born in Zeltiva
  • First Prayer of Thanks to Rhysol
  • A Day Shopping with Father
  • Dressed as a Fraud Who'll Never Belong


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