Ashkore Serian

[Ashkore Serian]

Ashkore Serian Appearance Race: Kelvic Gender: Male Age: Thirty Years Birthday: 42, Winter, 493 Birthplace: Unknown As a human, Ashkore has black hair, a small goatee, and white eyes. However, as his other form, he is a large eagle with the same brown eyes and black feathers. Due to this form, his lifespan could be anywhere from fifty to, if he's lucky, a century.   Possessions Set of Clothing Simple, Black Shirt Simple, Black Pants Undergarments Simple, Grey Cloak Simple, Grey Boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack Comb (Wood) Brush (Wood) Soap Razor Balanced Rations 1 eating knife Flint & Steel   Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Unarmed Combat 30 SP +10 RB 40 Competent Flux 20 SP 20 Novice   Ledger Starting: +100 House: +500 Total: 600   Lores Martial Arts Basic History Character Concept Ashkore has spent his life traveling, not staying in any one place for too long. However, the Star of Kalea seems to have caught his eye. He is drawn to adventure and opportunities to learn. He is known to be optimistic, but also wise and a realist. He dislikes people who are constantly positive almost as much as those who are the opposite. He doesn't believe in any extremes. Dark, light, black, white, justice, injustice, peace, and war. He doesn't think that any of these really exist. "War is a lie. They are unjustifiable massacres in which hundreds of people die, the losses almost always outweighing the gains. Take the Valterrian and its precursors for example." "Peace is also nonexistent. There is always conflict, death, and horror of the most unimaginable sort. How can any sane creature believe that any time is one of peace?" "Justice and Injustice are like Black and White. They are not real, only shades of the truth. No one seems to acknowledge it, but there is, and always will be, corruption." Character History Twenty years ago, a group of refugees appeared at the gates of Sylrias, claiming that they had been attacked. Each of their stories was different due to extreme trauma. However, they all had one thing in common. The bandits were attempting to kill them and seize their supplies. However, before anyone's blade touched flesh, one of the refugees broke free of his bonds and began fighting. Apparently, he used his bare hands to disarm and break over fifteen armed thugs. After his (likely exaggerated) heroism, he turned into an eagle and disappeared. None of the refugees had known that he was Kelvic. In fact, he hadn't spoken a word since joining their caravan. Five years later, the man was seen again by a family of farmers. He claimed to be on a pilgrimage, and needed a place to stay the night. He paid them and rested under the stars. When the family woke, they went outside to work in the fields. Surprisingly, they found five mercenaries severely injured in the same place the stranger was staying. A not left at the scene explained that he was not on a pilgrimage, but defending the farm from a band of cutthroats. He spent the next ten years traveling, even spending some time as a hermit. He has mastered several martial arts, learning the body's various weaknesses. He even learned how to control the Flux. He doesn't believe in killing or weapons, his only advantage in a fight being knowledge. He was drawn to Lhavit by the cultural and ethnic diversity and a relentless pursuit of knowledge. Language Fluent Language: Basic Fluent Language: Avian Thread List Link your current & past threads here!

[Crosspatch]

Character Sheet Intervention

Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

• Kelvics themselves match the age of their base animal. Being near to 30 years of age is very old for a Kelvic, please take this into consideration.
• Your character description is a little bit confusing, for the human form it mentions having white eyes whilst in the animal form it mentions having "the same brown eyes". Please confirm which it is.
• At creation skills are limited to a max of 30 points including the racial bonus. Please adjust your skills.
• Travelling from place to place in the wilderness without any wilderness survival is an extremely dangerous activity even for a Kelvic, please take this into consideration.
• Your lores are too broad. A lore is some form of general knowledge that the character has gained over their lifetime. Such as knowledge on a particular deity or knowing the lay out of a particular city.
• Taking out an entire group of bandits single handedly with only one competent and novice skill is highly unlikely, along with taking out a group of cut-throats single handedly - more so as the Sylirian Knights patrol the area around Syliras also. Please take this into consideration with your history.
• Although you are a kelvic, you still need to specify where your character is currently staying.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


Crosspatch