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This lazy agricultural settlement rests on the swampy shores of the Middle Suvan at the delta of The Kenash River. The River's slow moving bayou waters have bred a different sort of people - rugged, cultured, and somewhat violent. Sprawling plantations of tobacco and cotton grow on the outskirts of the swamp in the rich Cyphrus soils, while the city itself curls around the bayou and spawns decadence and sins of all sorts. Life is slower in Kenash, but the lack of pace is made up for in the excesses of food and flesh in a city where drinking, debauchery, gambling, slavery, and overbearing plantation families dominate the landscape.

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Tailing Shadows

Postby Estrellir Konrath on November 30th, 2013, 7:09 pm

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Fall 55, 513 AV


Estrellir could feel Mell staring at her back from the kitchen door and heard her unspoken questions as if the girl had been shouting. She wanted to sigh, but pushed aside the urge in favor of her disguise. After she’d finished rubbing a mixture of mud and soot from oil lamps on her face, especially the shimmering scales, she turned away from the mirror.

“You’re curious about what kind of mission it is this time, right? You’ll be helping with research, so you need to know in any case. That blond with the colorful face paint was an actress employed at the Illumination Theatre. I want you to ask at the theatre and anywhere else about her personality and history. She wants me to tail a former lover.”

Turning back to the mirror, she brushed her hair so that the last curls straightened. Then she ran her hands through the strands until it looked ruffled. In fact instinct told Estrellir there was more to the pretty girl’s story. Actresses had a flair for the dramatic, but that one had given a surprisingly short and clipped description of her lover.

Eventually the Konti stood and slipped into her dark coat. The hem was as dusty as ever from roadside dirt and mud. Living in a swamp meant precisely that: permanently dirty clothing. The figure exiting Konrath’s Detective Bureau seemed to be a human girl at first sight, brown hair spilling out from under the hood of her coat and face suntanned and quite dirty. She certainly didn’t have a high position in Kenashern hierarchy. That was exactly the disguise Estrellir was aiming for, although given her mediocre skills it wouldn’t withstand close inspection.

According to the client, her ex-lover was living on Blade Island and working for a particular business situated on the West Bank. Syna’s rays had barely climbed over the treetops as she crossed a bridge and made her way over to where his house was supposed to be. She found it with some difficulty, a modest residence blending in with its surroundings. Only darkness could be seen through the windows, so Estrellir shrunk into the shadow of the opposite house and waited. The shadows were her friends, she thought, they enveloped her and her black coat so any cursory glances slipped off her like water.

And she waited, but not long. After a few chimes the front door flew open and a slender young man with handsome features and messy black hair hurried down to the path and up towards the next bridge connecting Blade Island with the West Bank. He was clearly late for work and still chewing on the last bits of his breakfast so that he didn’t notice the hooded figure.

ImageAfter he’d disappeared, Estrellir waited another few chimes before approaching his little shack, imitating the purposeful step of a messenger or slave on an errand. She hoped passers-by wouldn’t ask her questions that way. First she walked around the house twice, then she tried to peer in through the windows. The furniture proved simple and sparse, exactly what one would expect of a simple freeborn worker.

As she walked back and over the bridge to the West Bank, Estrellir recalled his appearance in as much detail as possible. As far as she’d seen, his clothing had been simple, but clean and of good quality. His body language had spoken of a honest and modest personality, certainly not a hot temper. What did he have that had enchanted a theatre actress, roused her sense for tragedy and drama?

The Konti didn’t know, but she’d do her best to find out. Those stories were what kept her going, what kept her interested in her work.
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Tailing Shadows

Postby Estrellir Konrath on May 14th, 2014, 11:33 am

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As she hurried down the path and over the bridge, she did so with the hasty steps and bent head of a slave on an errand. Of course, Estrellir of the Konrath Dynasty had never been in a slave’s skin, but she’d observed how they walked and moved on her plantation and tried to emulate their body language as best as she could.

Stepping on the West Bank, she turned left and down another path. In the distance she could see the grey masculine figure she was looking for. Only a few chimes after he entered a building painted in pastel colors, Estrellir walked past it with a cursory glance through its windows and pretended to turn right at the next corner. In fact she rounded that house and stayed in the shadow on the other side where she had a good view on the house he’d disappeared in. The sign on its façade left no doubt about its services: gondolas and gondoliers to steer them.

The glance through the windows had revealed nothing exciting: a simple office with two people behind desks, no customers. Behind the house a few boats painted in vibrant colors were bobbing up and down in the lazy tide of the canals. Apparently the boatsmen were waiting for customers in a back room where Estrellir couldn’t see them. Sinking to her knees, she joined them in waiting.

ImageTrying to make herself comfortable in a tuft of high grass, the Konti recalled what the actress had said about her ex. “His name’s Tol. He’s freeborn like me and working as a gondolier. His manners are good and he’s courteous, so he has many customers. Even Dynasty people like him. But after we’d been together for some time, he grew distant. Detached. He didn’t return my feelings, instead he acted colder and colder. I couldn’t bear it anymore.”

“What do you wish to do regarding your relationship?” Estrellir had asked, not quite understanding.

The woman had stared at her, wide eyes lined with blue and violet paint. “I want to know why, of course! Why is he torturing me so? And when I know, I want him to pay for the pain he’s caused.” Her voice was clear as crystal and nearly as sharp.

Ah, actresses, Estrellir sighed. Drama was what they thrived on and drowned in, thinking themselves heroines in some long-winded epic or worse. For once, she didn’t expect the boy’s behavior was his fault. Something must’ve happened to him. No matter what the outcome was, she’d tail this Tol for a few days according to the wishes of her client.

While she was waiting, the city was awakening. Voices broke the morning quiet, footsteps pattered by and away, shouts carried over the water. Noises of the trees and unseen animals sounded from the swamp all around Kenash. Most importantly, people were entering the gondola service.

After what felt like eternity and a chime, people were stepping out and about behind the house, discussing something. Squinting, Estrellir watched as a boat was chosen and two women in matching extravagant dresses seated on its benches. Lastly, a gondolier stepped into it lightly, taking the oar and pushing the boat out on the water. Estrellir wasn’t sure, so she hurried over the street and shaded her eyes to get a better view. She took care to stop in the shadow of the house again and remained a few moments. The way he oared the boat and pointed out shops at the canal sides seemed unfamiliar, but she recognized the clothing.

Leaping from shadow to shadow, Estrellir followed the gondola. In the process she had to cross the bridge to Oath Island, pass by Reed Park and hurry to the southernmost tip of Dry Island before following it up the wide canal between that and the East Bank. Swimming would’ve been easier as the gondola was moving extremely slowly, but it would also reveal what she was doing. Stealth and speed were crucial.

The ladies got off near the bridge, heading into the direction of Black Swan Pond, while Tol returned his boat to the landing at the West Bank. The next customer was already waiting for him.

The next bells Estrellir spent running back and forth, staying in the shadows whenever she could, otherwise following the boat around canals. As a child, sneaking around the city proper, playing hide and seek with imaginary foes had been one of her favorite pastimes. Now she remembered several shortcuts through gardens and back alleys she hadn’t used in ages. A few times she lost sight of the elegant boat, but always found it thanks to those shortcuts.

There was no obvious pattern to his customers, although most were Dynasty members or visitors from abroad. During Tol’s shift, nothing out of the ordinary happened. Still, Estrellir memorized customers she knew and any other details that seemed useful. During midday, Tol ate at a nearby tavern with a few colleagues. In the evening, he returned to his house.

Estrellir lingered around, keeping herself awake by repeating all she’d observed during the day, until the flickering lights in his windows went out.
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Postby Estrellir Konrath on June 5th, 2014, 2:48 pm

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Fall 56, 513 AV


Sprawled on the couch in her kitchen, Estrellir opened one eye at the noise of someone clearing their throat. Mell stood over her, a cup of steaming coffee in her hands. “Thank you,” the Konti murmured and nearly dropped it, had the slave girl not held onto the handle. She really meant it too, the liquid being her miracle potion after a long day of work.

While she took a first sip, promptly burning her tongue, Mell disappeared towards the front office for a while. At her return, she carried a notebook, quill and ink vial with her. Sitting down at the floor opposite the couch, she opened the notebook in her lap and dipped the quill into the vial before looking expectantly at the mistress.

Estrellir gave a nod of approval. Her being too tired to jot down the observations herself meant Mell got more practice at writing and doing reports. Taking another sip, she collected her thoughts and started with a description of Tol, his house, its location and his workplace.

“He was popular. I bet he got twice as many customers as the other gondoliers, but it was obvious why. He’s courteous and handsome, that’s why many ladies and Dynasty girls requested him. I recognized some Morealis cousins and a Paille girl.”

As she took a moment to recall the other customers, the kitchen was silent except for the quiet scratching of Mell’s quill.

“He was making conversation with the Morealis and got them to laugh a few times. They liked him, played with him as if he was their pet, but he stayed polite and never dropped his smile. At least as far as I could see.” Her brow furrowed as she considered what she had missed during that frantic game of hide and seek. “The Paille was quiet. They exchanged some words, but they didn’t look at each other and seemed distant.”

Skipping forward in her memories, she came upon another peculiar detail. “There were two Askara guys later in the day. They were quite noisy, probably not entirely sober. I believe they were even trying to flirt with him, but he rejected them politely.”

With narrowed eyes, she turned her head and regarded the writing slave absentmindedly. “He really managed to reject them. How could a freeborn have such impeccable manners?”

Mell shot her a quick glance. “I do not know, mistress.”

“Me neither,” Estrellir admitted. Taking another sip of the bitter liquid, she felt the exhaustion shrinking into the background and the excitement of finding a hint surging through her veins. It was only a possibility though. In the end, the Morealis and the Paille could’ve been just as important or even more so.

It all boiled down to one thing, Estrellir thought as she sat up: She still lacked knowledge. The puzzle wasn’t yet complete.
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Tailing Shadows

Postby Estrellir Konrath on June 5th, 2014, 3:35 pm

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Fall 57-60, 513 AV


Estrellir was tailing Tol for several days. The man turned out a creature of habit. Every morning he got up early, walked over to the gondola service to work the oars, at midday he went for lunch with colleagues at the next tavern and every evening he went back home when the stream of customers went dry. More often than not he was the last to return his boat and leave the building.

His customers came from a wide variety of social standings and families. Most often were the Morealis, but Estrellir couldn’t tell if it was because he was recommended by their ladies most often or because they were talking about business or even political matters on the water. He also got a spattering of freeborn and visitors asking for sightseeing tours.

Estrellir’s skill of tailing his boat increased as the state of her clothing grew worse. Hopping from shadow to shadow, she remembered all the shortcuts, trails and back alleys she’d ever known. Sometimes she waded even through particularly shallow side streams of the swamp to remain close to the main stream.

One time Tol seemed to look into her direction and shrunk back into the high grass, heart missing a beat, but then he pointed and she realized he was only describing part of the city to a tourist.

Another time he turned around on the way back to his house after a long day. Estrellir jumped into the shadow of the next house, but wasn’t sure whether he’d seen her movement. To her surprise, he turned, went back to West Bank and disappeared inside Towery’s Casino.

Lingering outside, Estrellir replayed the scene again and again in her mind. Had he seen her or not? Was he destroying his patterns in an attempt to confuse her or had he just remembered an appointment? Even if the latter was true, who on Mizahar would a freeborn meet at the casino?

That evening an idea came to her during smoking a load of tobacco. Mell, playing with the kittens in a corner, was beginning to cough, but Estrellir didn’t care. Instead she stared at the patterns and fleeting shapes in the smoke until it dissolved. “Mell.”

The girl froze and looked up, ignoring Poppy pouncing on her finger. “Yes, mistress?”

“Tomorrow you’ll go to the library and look through the books on Dynasty lineage. I want you to check the Morealis and Paille for any members, second cousins or more distant, named Tol or anything that could be shortened to Tol.”

“Yes, mistress.” Surprise was apparent in the girl’s tone, although she didn’t inquire further.

Gnawing at her pipe, Estrellir hoped her idea was worth anything. So far she didn’t have any leads except his frequent business with Morealis ladies, refined manners and unexpected visit to the casino.
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Postby Estrellir Konrath on June 5th, 2014, 4:11 pm

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Fall 62, 513 AV


Mell had returned and admitted failure. There was no Morealis or Paille named Tol or any longer variant of that name whatsoever. So Estrellir had asked herself what she’d do if she was a freeborn. What would she want from those Dynasty brats most of all?

So she ended up in front of the mirror once again. Although she’d disguised herself every day for what seemed like eternity, she adjusted her mask a little for a special purpose. The dirt rubbed into her face grew less and lighter as she wished to leave a remotely acceptable impression this time. Freeborns shouldn’t mistake her for a field slave or even a Rujaro sneaking into the city, after all! For the sake of practicality, she collected her dyed and straightened hair in a messy ponytail, leaving several long strands out to partially cover her face. Her old cloak, quite tattered and speckled with mud, topped off the disguise.

The gondolier’s habits had become so familiar to her that she’d have found her way around his usual paths even when sleepwalking. That day, however, she didn’t wait until he left the house, but went straight to his workplace and positioned herself near the door.

As other employees trickled in, some greeted her with a stare, but she merely bowed to each and every one, doing her best to look demure. Then his black curls appeared and blue eyes took in her appearance.

Estrellir stepped forward so she stood between him and the door. “Apologies for troubling you, sir, but are you Tol?” She toned her voice down, keeping it barely above a whisper, slipping into the mindset of a timid slave girl. Her eyes were fixed on his worn shoes.

“Yes. Do you have a message for me?”

Quick boy, Estrellir thought. That reaffirmed her assumptions in a way. “I do, sir. I’m to let you know that Dimitri Morealis invites you to meet with him this evening. You’re to appear at the plantation one bell after sunset. I was told you’d know what it was about.” She let just a hint of curiosity slip into her voice, enough to make clear she herself didn’t know a thing.

A quick glance confirmed that he was staring at her. Estrellir hastily took a step back. He opened and closed his mouth without uttering a word, then swallowed audibly. “I’ve no clue what you’re talking about. Why would… the Morealis…?”

His voice was trembling. That was enough. Briefly closing her eyes and touching her brow, she cried out as if suddenly remembering. “Of course! It was Tal, not Tol! I really have to apologize, sir, the message wasn’t for you after all! I’m very sorry for taking up your time.” Even while talking, she launched into a series of bows.

Tol muttered something incomprehensible, passed her and reached for the door as if it was his personal salvation. It shut with a loud thump.

Estrellir sighed as she trudged back over the bridge. The tremor in his voice hadn’t been excitement, more like fear and barely contained panic. Someone who was associated with a Dynasty or sought to become a member of one, like she’d suspected him to, certainly wouldn’t act like that.

So her little staged occurrence hadn’t played out as expected and she was back to square one. Looking over her shoulder to make sure nobody followed or watched her, she turned left towards Fire Island.
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Postby Estrellir Konrath on June 5th, 2014, 4:41 pm

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“That leaves only two options. Either he’s an innocent and honest citizen, gondolier with a bit of charm and tendency to gamble, or he’s better at deceiving than I am at investigating.”

Mell tilted her head as she was running her head over Whimsy’s fur again and again. “If that’s the case, he must be extremely good at deceiving.”

Estrellir nodded and spread her arms in a gesture of defeat. “To be honest, I don’t particularly mind not knowing. If he’s that good, his secret’s likely too big for me. I’d like to get better at finding out secrets and then return to him though.” Her chuckle was filled with sarcasm. “Mind you, all that is based on ‘what if’s.”

A knock at the door interrupted their little conversation. As the Konti called out, the blond and painted actress marched in and seated herself in the next chair. Estrellir flinched at such manners, but arranged her features into a mask of politeness as Citria gave her an expectant look. “So? What have you learned?”

“Good day to you too. First I’d like to be paid for my work. This is everything I could gather during the last few days.” Her finger tapped a notebook filled with Mell’s careful handwriting and a few crude sketches.

Coins changed hands. Only when the pouch was stored away in her desk did Estrellir answer the actress’ question. “I have learned nothing. Your Tol is a creature of habit, honest, a popular employee and a flirt with the Dynasty ladies. Maybe he had one of them for a lover once and learned his charming manners from her.”

Citria’s eyes narrowed, pale green slits lined by thick dark circles of paint. “Don’t joke. Why did he leave me?”

Estrellir shrugged. “Maybe he got bored. Maybe he found a prettier girl to court, although he currently doesn’t seem to be in a relationship. I don’t know.”

Citria’s fists were clutching the puffy skirt of her azure and silver dress. “That makes absolutely no sense though! I paid you all those mizas and you give me nothing?”

Despite the antics and airs, Estrellir could see where the woman was coming from. The outcome frustrated her most of all! “Sometimes there’s nothing under the surface. Some things really are as they seem. Not everyone’s secrets are exciting enough to dig out.”

Citria seemed to want to say more, but then she closed her mouth and slumped in the chair. “Fine. I’ll do the work myself then.”

Estrellir shrugged. What the woman did was none of her business, so she bit back her opinion. Citria would find nothing, even less than she had. Nevertheless, she revealed everything she’d learned about Tol’s habits. After that, the actress left the bureau with a flourish and not a word of thanks.

“Forgive me, mistress, but that was quite boring,” Mell said from her corner.

Estrellir yawned, leaned back in her chair and put her booted feet on the table, startling Whimsy out of the slave girl’s lap. “It was a boring case. But on the upside, that means we can catch up on sleep now.”

Mell sank back into respectful silence, choosing not to point out that she had gotten all the sleep she could wish for.
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Tailing Shadows

Postby Vice on June 8th, 2014, 5:51 am

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Estrellir Konrath :
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  • +1 Disguise
  • +2 Rhetoric
  • +1 Grooming
  • +1 Impersonation
  • +3 Observation
  • +2 Investigation
  • +1 Intelligence

Lores
  • A Captivating Stranger
  • Lore: Tol
  • Tol: A Popular Request
  • Tol: A Creature of Habit

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Consequence: Ruined Clothing
Consequence: Increased sensitivity due to the clogging of pores. Estrellir will find that her facial skin breaks out in acne on occasion and will have to manage it with cosmetics or skin treatments.

Estrellir: Please make sure, when involving Dynasty NPC's, to log them into the NPC tracking page. Thank you!

I didn't give you more disguise points because you used the same disguise twice without really describing it in good enough detail to merit more points for it. I figured it worth a +1.

If you have questions, comments, or concerns, please send me a PM, and we'll discuss my reasoning behind why the grade given was received. Please make sure to edit any posts in the grading queue to 'graded' and update your CS as soon as possible. Enjoy! ^.^
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