[Note by Crosspatch] Aviram

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Aviram

Postby Aviram on December 3rd, 2013, 1:36 am

Aviram

Appearance

Race: Drykas
Gender: Male
Age: 23
Birthday: 17, Winter, 489
Birthplace: Endrykas

Appearance: His hair is black and wavey with no real decorations adorning it. Keeps it loose so the wind can breeze through it.

Face is in an almost perpetual frown, and his skin is lightly tanned. Would be considered quite handsome if he wasn't always so serious looking. His eyes are just as dark as his facial features, being almost black with how dark brown they are. Some might mistake them as cold, unfeeling eyes if they didn't know him. Scars adorn his body in multiple places. His arms, legs, and torso being the most prominent.

He's rather tall, (6'3) and is of an athletic build. His style of fighting demands great speed and agility, and as such he trains nearly every day to maintaine the body he requires. His windmark starts at his right shoulder when he aquired it at 17 and has gradually been added to to spread down his arm and across his chest and back.


Character Concept

Aviram isn't the most wittiest guy out there. His swords are sharp, not his tongue, but that doesn't stop him from trying. Typically this will come in the form of really bad weapon puns, the only humor he's typically prone to making. He's most often completely serious and tells no lies. He has no qualms with killing except for children, pregnant women, and those incapable of fighting back.

Pride and honor drives him ever forward, guiding his every move. He takes his training (and most things) very seriously, almost to the point of obsession. Generally considered no fun and unable to kick back by others.

Character History

Part of the Diamond clan, Aviram grew up in complete awe of his father and always tried emulating him, right down to his fighting style, Thousand Cuts, which consisted of dual wielding curved swords and striking with deadly precision and speed. Unfortunately, his father died when Aviram was but a boy, and was unable to teach his son the art. This is part of the reason why Aviram trains so much, so that he might recreate his father's style. Resides with his mother and extended family in their Pavilion.

During a training regiment when he was 17 deep in the Sea of Grass, a freak storm suddenly came upon him, and a black stallion appeared before him, leading him to shelter. They quickly bonded and the stallion, named Kokuoh by Aviram, became his strider.


Language

Fluent Language: Pavi
Basic Language: Common
Poor Language: -

Skills

SkillEXPTotalProficiency
Shamshir30 SP30Competent
Dual Wield5 SP5Novice
Wilderness Survival5 SP5Novice
Dance5 SP5Novice
Horsemanship5 SP5Novice
Riding10 RP10Novice


Lore

Lore of Sea of Grass Geography
Lore of the Importance of the Strider

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing (Faded white)
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Bone)
-Brush (Bone)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
-100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: A set of twin shamshirs that belonged to his father

Housing

1 large tent (4 person)
1 large tarp
100 ft of rope
1 lantern
2 torches
1 bedroll
1 blanket
1 set of fishing tackle & hooks
1 bonded Strider
1 Yvas
1 large set of yvas bags
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Aviram

Postby Crosspatch on December 5th, 2013, 10:27 pm

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Character Sheet Intervention

Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

  • Please link your CS to your profile. This can be done through the user control panel.
  • Due to the recent season change, your character would now be 24 years old.
  • An heirloom can only be one, singular item. Not twin items, not paired items. Thus, if you wish to have the second shamshir it would required to be purchased from the pricelist.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


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