Solo Words of Whimsical Places

Ollic seeks to broaden his imagination and in doing so he goes to difference locations in Lhavit in terms to write poetry describing said locations

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The Diamond of Kalea is located on Kalea's extreme west coast and called as such because its completely made of a crystalline substance called Skyglass. Home of the Alvina of the Stars, cultural mecca of knowledge seekers, and rife with Ethaefal, this remote city shimmers with its own unique light.

Words of Whimsical Places

Postby Ollic Rimesage on January 25th, 2014, 5:39 pm

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31st of Winter



Try as he might, Ollic was never good with words. When it came to speaking and talking to someone, he was a mess. In general, he wasn’t a very social boy and having to converse with anyone sent him into a small panic attack, having him stutter over his words and clam up. It just wasn’t in his blood to be a social butterfly. However, when it came to writing, he was wonderful at expressing himself and showing great detail and description in what he wrote. He was a natural and ever since he was a small boy, he loved to write whether it be poetry, short stories or even assignments over scientific analysis.

Today, after getting up from a light slumber and petting his two companions, Spirit and Hokato, he had an idea to relive those days as a child and set his mind to writing again. Whether he was going to write prose, a short story or start a novel, he didn’t know, and what he didn’t know wasn’t going to hurt him- not today.

Dressing into casual clothes, a multi-coloured vest and slacks to match, he had plans for the entire day. He was going to head out into Lhavit and venture into places he wouldn’t normally stop to see. Each and every place he found himself standing in front of, he would spend a few minutes thinking and then a few minutes writing out details and emotions of what he thought and felt about that particular environment and that particular location or building.

Of course in order to write about such things he needed a few pieces of paper and a writing utensils, things he had gone out and gotten a few days ago prior to the ideas and thoughts that conspired inside his head at this current moment.

He was in the mood for creativity and imagination. For too long had he been stressed and overwhelmed what with work, memories, losing Hokato and breaking his arm. He was ready to take a rest, a break from society and everyday life, and arouse his inner childhood mind. He was going to precariously, yet adventurously, seek out what he could do and write about.

So with saying goodbye to his fellow companions, he grabbed what he needed and slipped out the door, mind set on heading for the first place on his list to describe. He had it planned since the moment he had first thought about doing all of this. He was going to head straight for the Amaranthine Gates and work his way through town, sighting everything he had come across the first day he had arrived here in Lhavit.

During the time it took for Ollic to walk to his destination, he had recalled the exact day and the exact events that had took place when he had first arrived. He remembered walking through the gates, going to the Cosmos Centre to find a place to stay and to find a job, and then he had been walking to the Solar Wind Apartments where his new home was going to be when a crowd of people messed with Ollic’s perception. He had run out of there like a frightened mouse being chased by a large cat, but he had lost Hokato in the process.

Returning into the ever-expanding crowd of locals, he found Hokato lying on the ground, her paw sprained. He had picked her up and carried her home, a fist in the face as his award for confronting a burly bully. That entire time he was going through the motions, but the actual event was so real and terrifying that he had missed out on seeing anything. His mind was so dead-set on getting home and locking himself in his new apartment.

It had been a few days after that Ollic had pushed himself to go outside and see what Lhavit was really like, and it had been a few more days after that he had willed himself to show up for work for his first day. Everything was anticipation and anticipation was a bastard to Ollic. They were arch enemies and the two knew it.

Upon revisiting the Amarathine Gates, Ollic couldn’t help being bombarded with memories relating to the times he had spent before he had arrived in Lhavit. It was time well spent in Avanthal and the reason he had left was fleeing his memory. He couldn’t recall, but he knew he knew. Memories were weird like that.

Taking out the pencil and a piece of paper, Ollic found a comfortable place on the inside of the Amaranthine Gates as he observed the details and the materials that made such prominent and protective walls.

’The sun’s rays exhume all majesty of the walls
A local fellow would seek safety and solitude
A new beginning starts once one has entered
Their passion leading them to start fresh
Like a gem founded in dirt one will be polished
Shining in the sun, they will find new life
A particle of their soul forever eastbound
The travelling has merely since begun.’


He had to erase a few mistakes before re-reading it a few times to make sure it made sense. In the end he was only partially certain he liked what he had written. Of course it came from the heart, but he wasn’t sure his heart was the only things taking part in the roll. He was certain his mind was there as well and knew that he wouldn’t be satisfied until something one of a kind manifested on his paper.

So with a different sense of mind, one downplayed and disheartened ever so slightly, he made his way over to the Cosmos Center, playing the video in his head of the first time he had arrived.

Standing in front of the building, to the right of the pathway that lead in from the outside of the Amarathine Gates, now foreign to him, he found the building elaborate and stunning, something he had only briefly glanced at on the first day. He had mistaken its beauty, something he would never do again.

Like a lonely star in the sky, he remembered seeing the light coming from this building at night more than he did the others. It was so bright and warming to him, like he wasn’t the only one awake at night when everyone else was bound to be asleep in a comfortable slumber. He was a night owl, but you could blame his thoughts for that.

Taking out the same piece of paper he had written his prose about the Amaranthine Gates, he urged his writing utensil to create words illuminating the glory of the Cosmos Centre.

’Life has many ravaging twists and exciting turns
When one needs prominent reassurance they come here
Information finds individuals in many ways
Like the moon finding the placement of the sun before him
Like the water finding refuge in meeting the horizon
The same follows for the sky finding said location
When questions arise in such racing minds
One comes here to find hope in gaining answers
Like I, come here and you will start fresh
With a house and a job and a grand new adventure’


He realised he was getting sloppy and knew he would have to either try harder or preform a different way of writing poems. Perhaps he could have the poems rhyme instead of merely describing emotional memorable things from his mind.

He recalled his father telling him once that whenever things rhymed, you often used your head to seek out what rhymed with what, but in the end you always used your heart for determining whether or not it makes sense and useful in what you are trying to accomplish.

So for the next location, he was going to create a poem that rhymed and perhaps this whole composing idea would come much easier to him.
Last edited by Ollic Rimesage on January 28th, 2014, 2:20 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Words of Whimsical Places

Postby Ollic Rimesage on January 25th, 2014, 6:53 pm

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The Catholicon was the next location he had in mind. It held so much personality and so much feeling relevant to not only himself, but to others- everyone who entered and exited the building. The building itself held so much emotion from the many stairs leading to the front doors to the many levels and many rooms people went into and out of.

It was a brilliant place to start and with his equipment, Ollic began to create a rhyming stanza with his heart, and not his mind.

’Stairs leading to unquestionable scenes
What is going around you isn’t all that it seems
People hard at work to save many lives
No one here is one who deprives.

Like any unlucky soul, there is death
But…’


…but, Ollic didn’t know what rhymed with death off the top of his head. So far in this most recent prose, he had gone with the first thing he thought of, or what his heart presumably thought. Now, he was stuck between a rock and a hard place in trying to find what rhymed with death.

He decided to go down the alphabet and said what came to his mind out loud. “Beth, ceth, feth, geth, heth…”

Suddenly something came to him, averting his ordered lettering back to the top of the alphabet. The letter B came to him and in adding a simple R after it, he got the word, breath, a simple word that could mean millions of things, but to Ollic meant the opposite of death, something he was needing.

Continuing on with his poem, he was on a roll,

’Like any unlucky soul there is death
But with many there is more than a final breath
A new start or a final realisation
It’s the horrors of the anticipation.

To some such a place is unfortunate or terrifying
But to others it is no more than clarifying
A place of healing and sensible care
Empathy is all there is in need to bear.’


Setting down his completed work, Ollic couldn’t help but smile and mentally pat himself on the back. That wasn’t that bad, he thought to himself. Actually, it was pretty good!

However, having been grown up as an pessimistic individual, he quickly dulled his elation. He was only average. Nothing of his work was professional or exceptional. He was nothing but a normal being who did normal things, for if he strayed from the order of life, he was to either get into trouble or get attention he didn’t necessarily need.

Although, another part of him couldn’t help but keep smiling at how he had progressed. It was a very good piece of work that he had maintained, yet built upon from the last. He hoped he could continue his educational streak with another location, only this one being one he had no emotional attachment to. A place such as the Skyglass Resturant. After proving to himself his progressive creativity on such a place, he would resume with emotional locations such as the Scholar’s Demise or the Mhakula Tea House.

Among standing outside of the Skyglass Resteraunt, it wasn’t all that intricate in detail. To become more intimate with the location, Ollic thought it was best to entre, taking out a different piece of paper so that his mind could start with freshness.

Almost immediately, he found his left hand writing down what he saw and how felt about it,

’The floor like theatre it shows images of life
Mountains and events without any strife
The glamour and prosperity of such given task
One has made artwork of little to no ask.

The walls contrast with the beauty of the ground
The white and elegance all but enticingly profound
Doors lead in and out to mysterious rooms
The aroma of foods gives off tasteful fumes.

Expense is independent, yet precariously given
The atmosphere playing a large role in such heaven
Majesty binding itself to everyone within
An area of comfort without such as a simple sin.’


Finishing the last line, he was aquainted with a waitress at the front who instinctively handed him a menu with dishes far too expensive for him to dine on during such an average day.

He declined appropriately and left the building, thinking to himself that he could possibly come back someday on a special occasion. He could even possibly take Eshe, his only childhood friend and now co-worker from the Catholicon.

Stepping outside, Ollic thought it was best to take a little break and review all he had written so far. Among doing so, he caught sight of a few errors in his work and changed them, crossing out the wrong or misspelled word and inserting the correct one.

Sure, he still had a few other locations of which he wanted to revisit, but other than writing poems all day, Ollic didn’t have an entire clue as to what else he could do to waste the day away.

Perhaps he could… no… perhaps he could also… no… or maybe… -these were the type of things that were currently running through his head.

“How about I stick to writing poems and then figure out what to do when I’m done,” he said to himself aloud as he made his way to his next destination.

The Mhakula Tea House.
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Words of Whimsical Places

Postby Ollic Rimesage on January 25th, 2014, 8:33 pm

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The trek it took for Ollic to emerge from the bottom of the hills to the top, the Mhakula Tea House residing ontop of one gave him a few chimes to think about the rest of his plans for the day.

He hadn’t been doing much over the last few days which set an understating mood over his head everywhere he didn’t go. The Catholicon and his apartment at the Solar Winds were the two main locations he went and it was all so redundant that he felt a strong desire for the need of change.

Now most would cringe at the sound of change, and he is among those that do. Ollic isn’t one holding the ability to adapt to new things and finds himself out of place when things change or become different. As if his organizational tactics scream at him to put it back where it was, change isn’t one to easily agree with him.

However, for something such as doing nothing but work and return home every day, change might compromise with him just this once. Although, from the top of his mind, Ollic didn’t have any needs nor any current wants to do anything or buy anything or even see anything for that matter, which continued to lower the damper that had already been laid upon his current downcast mood.

Ever since that night at the Red Lantern and at the pet shoppe where he had bought Spirit, things had settled down, up until that day he had lost Hokato in the forests. Life was repetitive and pessimism was too. Ollic had this antagonizing mind-set that all that happened in one’s life took ahold of the listed order of

1. Birth
2. Childhood (4 years)
3. Education (from age 5-20)
4. Work (up until retirement or death
5. Retirement (until death)
6. Death

He had this dark approach upon life that gave him the idea that it wasn’t worth living. Some days he was enjoyable to be around and others he was like spoiled milk- you just want to pitch him in the trash bin because he gave off a bad ‘smell’.

But now he had pushed all of those paranoid assumptions aside and had met the building that had taught him a few things on how to defend himself against the predatory hostility of others. This building (or what lays below it) had taught him a different outlook on fighting and opposition and he was grateful to have met the concealed identity of the man who taught him those things.

And now he knew just what to write!

’Like underneath the flooring of a house unknown
Inside a person is something unlike one’s own
The outside portrays secrets unlike what’s inside
Sometimes individuals feel the need to hide.

Once ripped away of all hatred and devious sin
Is the true person one has always been
Fear has driven many to distorted illusions
Severing the purity behind calloused conclusions.

Uncovering the truth from a superior being
Leads to the discovery of perpetual seeing
The visual was nothing compared to the whole view
It leads one in doing something one wouldn’t normally do.

To seek the future, a masked man said
It was where one had gone and pled
Opening your mind and maintaining your soul
Visualizing the truth of why one wishes for such a goal.

Anger, lust, envy and insanity lead to pain
Unstained they were from a path of immoral reign
No mistakes with defense as they would without
Offense leads to unworthy choices of the wronged route.

A man spoke of dignity and power unlike one’s original thought
The evil inside all other’s was sure to decompose to rot
With the power of defense there was responsibility and need
The warning, the man spoke of, was of greatness in heed.

To learn from a master, one will find change
Change in one’s mindset will so re-arrange
To protect the ones that are loved and cared for
Need not be settled with the cry of war.’


With opened eyes, bewildered by what he was able to accomplish, Ollic re-read all he had just written. Did he just write that? Was that his messy handwriting that said those words? Did his heart just spit out all of those feelings and turn them into words that made sense?

It was a wonderful feeling to see how creative and imaginative and yet so emotional and true he could be, but what scared him was looking up from his work and noticing that he was sitting in front of a waterfall.


When had he gotten here? Had he walked and written his latest poem? Was this infact the Amaranthine Falls many of the residents always talked about?

Was this a sign of peace for all of the work that Ollic had just done? Was it time for some meditation and then perhaps a nap?

Nodding his head to himself which he seldom did, he began to get comfortable on the grassy plain he found himself sitting on as he picked up the rhythm of the waterfall in his breathing.

“In and out, one, in and out, two,” Ollic hummed to himself as the water crashed into the lake below it and mesmerizingly started to take control of Ollic’s peace of mind.

He felt the need to try something knew, so instead of just focusing his breathing in a repetitive and controlled environment, he began to incoorperate some moevements, positioning his legs in back of him and by laying on his stomach, he began to gently raise his chest so that it was no longer touching the ground.

He let out a deep breath before making a connection with the grass again, only instead of repeating the procedure, he instead curled his legs up underneath his rear and brought his head to his knees, his arms outstretched as he breathed in and held it for a few seconds.

And then he released his position and returned back to the position he had prior, where his chest came up off the ground and he breathed out slowly, the hum of the waterfall giving Ollic a warm feeling erupt inside of him.

Trying another position, Ollic rolled on his back and lifted his legs into the air, pressure igniting in his abdomen, but it felt wonderful. He then rested his legs on the ground for a few seconds before raising them again. He did this for a few chimes before he soon grew tired and kept them on the ground, all the while his breathing keeping tempo with his heart and the waterfall.

Soon, before he knew it, he had fallen asleep.
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Words of Whimsical Places

Postby Ollic Rimesage on January 25th, 2014, 10:45 pm

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Waking up, Ollic wasn’t welcomed with any cramps and wasn’t fatigued as he had been so often before after sleeping. Instead he was confused. Where was he? When had he gotten where he was now, lying by a waterfall out in the middle of nowhere?

Then, suddenly all of what had happened before he had fallen asleep came crashing back into his memory like a boulder falling off a cliff. It was a miracle how he didn’t get a headache from so much sudden information.

The sky was far darker than it was when Ollic drifted off into sleep. Checking his surroundings, everything seemed as it was before, as if no one was playing with him. However, instead of patting his pockets and shifting gears in terms of getting set to head back home, Ollic found the situation perfect for another last poem.

Finding his writing utensil and his last sheet of clean paper, he began to conjure up letters that created words that formed into sentences, something that would create another wonderful piece of work.

’The sky has darkened and filled my mind with worry
Although my heart is content and in no particular hurry
The grass is dampened with dreams of one’s best
The wind is flowing through the sky from the west.

All of thou dreams have faded into the mist
The waterfall glistens as if one’s ominous tryst
The shadow continues to cover the mountains
The lake admiring the water’s natural fountains.

Leaving behind nature’s pristine beauty
The day carries on with its average duty
The forests start their orderly snore
As the daylight soon becomes no more.’


Pocketing the last poem he planned to write today, Ollic got up, brushed his pants of all debris that would have gotten on them whilst he was resting and began to head from home. He made sure he walked quickly, for being out in the forest and even out on the town at night was dangerous.

Once he was home he was going to take out all of the things he’d written and read them over again only keeping the latest one for special purposes. Who knows? He might give it to Eshe like he did back when they were children.

The trees seemed to be following him, enclosing themselves around him as if wanting to suffocate him, but Ollic knew that that was irrational and that the dark sky was merely playing tricks with his eyes.

Eventually emerging from the Mystic Peaks, he found himself walking down streets and alleyways lit with lights. He began hearing cheering from a nearby tavern and saw the Catholicon up on its hill, the many taunting stairs glaring at him as he walked by and ended up in front of the Solar Wind Apartments.

Upon entering, he walked up the stairs and opened his apartment door, all the while noticing the heavy weights being slowly added to his ankles.

That nap hadn’t done all it was supposed to do. Ollic felt tired than ever, but that was just fine with him, because before he had time to change out of his dirty and wet clothes, he was fast asleep, Hokato and Spirit under both of his arms as the sound of their snoring replaced the waterfall’s gentle hum.




The End

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I am back from my time in recovery and I will be happy to pick up on the roleplaying I left for a while. It feels so good to be back and I am looking forward to expanding Ollic's experience!
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Words of Whimsical Places

Postby Estrellir Konrath on April 16th, 2014, 6:26 pm

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Ollic Rimesage

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Poetry +5
Observation +2
Acrobatics +1

Lores
Lhavit: Amaranthine Gate
Lhavit: Cosmos Center
Writing from the heart
Lhavit: Skyglass Restaurant
Lhavit: Amaranthine Waterfalls

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It was interesting to read about Ollic’s free day! His poetry is so fragile, yet so ripe with emotion, it really fits his personality. If you’ve any questions or concerns, feel free to PM me!

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