The tension in the air is palpable and people begin drawing lines in the sand. White is not as white as it seems - black is not as solid either, and one can only remember that there are shades of grey, too.
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The westernmost tip of Kalea, Wind Reach is home to an amazing group of people and their giant eagle mounts. [Lore]
-given Edric has no XP in unarmed combat and is a novice wrestler, it seems unlikely he would know how to snap a man's limbs with his bare hands. There were also other moments where written combat exceeded actual skill in both of your CS's, but I let it slide, just remember in the future to keep one's skill levels in mind.
-I know I mentioned this in the last grade, but try to stick to Mizaharian lore. In any other context Excalibur would make sense, but it does not exist in this realm.
You both wrote very well, and this budding relationship is certainly an interesting one. I look forward to seeing where it goes. Please don't hesitate to PM me with questions, comments, or concerns! Also, remember to edit your grade request as "graded."
