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Unsavory Assault (Inoadar)

Postby Amolina on February 19th, 2014, 1:08 pm

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The odd inner ehco had faded away and Amolina lay looking up at the evening sky over Ravok. It wasn’t dark yet, but dusk was coming. Her head was aching, but the odd and dizzy feeling of being underwater had receded. She was fully aware, but she was worried…she wondered about the damage to her head, and to her arm. Slowly and carefully she sat, using her right arm to push herself up, but it felt like it was too early to get to her feet.

She had seen part of the fight between the two men, but not all of it. Now both of them were on the ground nearby. The tall thug lay there immovable, looking knocked out, blood on his face. Parnell had collapsed in a heap and was breathing hard. Amolina crawled to his side. She didn’t know what else to do, and it seemed natural to do it, as they were kind of the two survivors of the nasty attack.

The agonized screams she had heard had stopped too. It was totally silent bar for Parnells labored breath and the rustling sound of herself crawling over the pavement. Her hairdo was gone and the hair was falling over her face. She pushed it back - she had a feeling the makeup was ruined too, but looks seemed less important at the moment than they used to be.

“Parnell?” Her voice came out so husky that she certainly didn’t want to say anything more.

She looked at him and recalled what he had told her when they were in the research location and how she had confessed to being in league with Barton. He had believed her too. So, he thought she was involved in whatever was going on - and still he intervened and helped her. He had actually said he wasn’t going to mess with her, yes, but it was a difference between just letting her be and actively intervening to help her.

Help? It was an understatement. She had been about to die, but Parnell had saved her. What she had seen of the fight had been explosive and furious. Though she had known the poison maker was a violent man and it wasn’t the first time she had seen him fight, she was still under the impression he had been attacking with sort of a mindless indifference to the blows he took in return…like it didn’t matter to him, like he was all focused on just beating, beating, beating and beating until the other man was down. And well, now he was down, but Parnell seemed to not be in so good shape either.

The other thug, the bulky one…she remembered him suddenly and looked behind her, turning her head a bit, carefully and slowly. She saw him, on the ground, silent and still and it occurred to her that he had been the one that had been screaming right before Parnell had come at the tall one. Had the poisoner taken out two men in the short time that had passed?

She was feeling unnaturally cold and had started to shiver. Silly of her, she ought to be grateful for being saved, not squeamish about the frenzied violence her colleague had delivered. She felt torn between intense gratitude and her usual lack of guts when confronted with how the poisoner was carried way with his…rage, she guessed. Rage that could easily be turned on herself if he found out exactly how much she had been lying to him. Truth to be told, she was also irrational enough to wish to be comforted, no matter she was hardly entitled to it - and no matter she knew her colleague was a wandering weapon arsenal with extra poison.

“Thanks” she said after a few ticks of silence.

One single word. It seemed very little to say to somebody that had actually saved her life. But her otherwise so useful skill at acting seemed to be blocked out. There was only Amolina, herself, without the artistic manners and masks. She had no playacting at ready. She had no artfully formulated lines to say. Just one word. If she hadn’t been so shaken and spent after the encounter with Barton’s men it would perhaps have annoyed her that she was down to being artless as an extra. As it was she was glad she could speak at all.

It occurred to her that Parnell’s victory over the two thugs might have come at a high price. Worried but hesitating (she remembered those spikes of the cloak) she put her hand on his shoulder. Her voice was feeble but she managed to ask him if he was injured. She hadn’t composed herself enough yet to start wondering why Parnell had turned up there in the first place. She just knew he was there and she had escaped death very narrowly just a few chimes ago.

The usual thoughts people get when they find themselves on a deserted calm street in the company of a couple of knocked out enemies and a perhaps knocked out ally popped up in her mind : What now? Oh, what now, what now…what to do with the thugs, Parnell, her involvement in this crap, the falsified medicines, the risk of a continued investigation of this case by the stryfe, the suspected smuggling operation, her own various lies about all sorts of things, that box of medicine she had “picked up”, Parnells ideas about her being in league with the unknown Barton who seemed to be a...criminal carpenter ?

Parnell seemed to know lots about the blackguards. She hoped he had the answers.
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Postby Inoadar on February 20th, 2014, 5:36 am

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"A pebble...that's all it is." Inoadar chuckled dizzily. If he hadn't known what he was saying, he wouldn't have been able to distinguish his own words. His right eye was swollen nearly shut and his left cheek felt broken. A pebble had brought him back to the present.

He'd been lost in some delirium, imagining a ride in a wagon. A ride long ago. A ride where he'd needed to act dead. dead to stay alive. Knights...Syliran petching knights, taking back bandits for imprisonment. They'd beaten him, beaten him good. Someone had remarked that they were killing him. They'd laughed, saying he'd have company then. He knew it was true. He'd gotten out of Syliras ahead of the wrath of the guards. Of all the crimes they'd tied to him, only pickpocket had been a fair cop. But they'd added rape, murder and a variety of frauds and mischief.

At the time, he'd been glad to think that these false accusations had enabled a girl or two to escape the stigma of whoring, and the wrath of self-righteous puritans by draping the cry of rape on him. He'd have felt differently if it had been the only charge, but he was going to hang for murder anyway, so what matter a couple rape charges? And it was not as though he had not ever committed a murder, just not in Syliras. In fact, he'd have been happy to murder every one of those guards.

Ultimately he'd been left for dead. His Second Edict training had served him well right then. They'd pushed a dagger through his cheek, as they had the other bodies, to check for reactions. He'd been lucky to see what they were doing before they got to him. So he'd compartmentalized the pain and avoided flinching, thinking of what he would do to make the pain worse, and finding relief in the lack of it.

More fortunate was his choice to keep his eyes closed. The guards had drained their bladders on the dead criminals before departing for Syliran irons and ropes with the live ones. Irons for the arms and legs, and ropes for the necks. If only he'd left his mouth closed...


For a moment he'd thought someone was checking for a reaction again. But it had only been a pebble, digging into his cheek. He sat up slowly, his head lolling back and forth as he laughed. First at the situation, then at the incredulous look on Amolina's face. She must have thought he was insane. But she was alive, and their enemies were dead. So he was injured. Big deal! If he had a gold miza...

His thoughts broke on a sound groaning from the man he'd fought. Amolina continued to stare as he rolled over and crawled back to sit himself behind the man. He pushed the man the rest of the way over onto his face and pulled his jacket down from his shoulders to catch his arms behind his back. "Amo, get my stiletto. We're going to convince this guy to deliver a message to his boss for us."

He balled the jacket up and rolled it over several times to tighten the arms. The man was awake now and started making all kinds of noise. Inoadar lifted the man by his arms until the reversed position of his shoulders nearly pulled them from their sockets. "Quiet now, sir, or I'll hang you from the roof by your dislocated arms." Inoadar coaxed calmly, his words still slurred by his swollen lips and cheek.

The man nodded his head and Inoadar let go of the coat. The thug was unable to get his arms under him, but he did turn his head so only one side of his face smacked the paving stones. Inoadar cooed softly, "Or maybe I'll just do a little dance on your head...OR...maybe you can deliver a message for us to Mr. Barton."

"I don't know anyone named Barton." the guy quickly denied.

Inoadar made a mocking puzzled sound."Hmmm...If I didn't know better, I'd swear you think I just asked you if you knew someone named Barton. I, on the other hand, could swear I didn't ASK you a petching thing. Amolina, come here, please." He leaned down close, waiting for Amolina to step over to them. "Now, you just tried to rape and murder this woman, who happens to be a friend of mine. But more importantly, a business partner!" he grinned at Amolina as he said it, acknowledging that he didn't really expect her to ever think of themselves as friends. He also figured such a relationship would probably mean more to Barton as well.

"So here's what we're going to do." He lifted the guy by the rolled up coat holding his arms behind his back. "I'm going to hand this burden to my delicate friend here. Now as you may have noticed, she's not too terribly strong, OR too terribly happy with you. I don't imagine she's gonna want to struggle to hold this weight up, just to keep you from hitting your face on the stones again." he took the stiletto from Amolina, letting the man see it. he had to admit, the guy stayed admirable calm.

"Well, frankly I'd like to see her get a bit of exercise, so I'm going to give her what I hope will be motivation. I'm going to slip this blade under your chin. Point up, of course." he chuckled at his grim humor. "I'm curious to see if this motivation helps her support your weight. I imagine YOU hope she'll be motivated as well. But I have my doubts, considering you were going to bash her brains out on the street."

He gestured for her to take hold of the rolled up jacket, wondering if she would.

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Postby Amolina on February 20th, 2014, 4:19 pm

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She didn’t hear what Parnell said. It sounded like “pebble” and made no sense. When he sat up and started laughing she didn’t know what to think. How could he laugh? Did he find this awful situation fun? Parnell didn’t even seem to notice his swollen eye and the other marks on his face that spoke about blows he had received in the fight. But Amolina for one was very aware about the pain in her head, the pain in her wounded and bleeding left arm and the general pain in her body after the attack. To her it was a big deal.

Besides she felt worthless. And she wanted to go home. Wash. Change clohtes. It felt like the tall thugs smell of sweat and dirt was smeared all over her, rank, nauseating, respulsive.

Despite all sad stories the hearsay in Ravok told about other people’s misfortunes, despite the troubles she herself had encountered this year, Amolina had always trusted herself to be able to cope with everything, by using words and playacting as her foremost means. She knew of course that she was often “coping” with things by giving in to pressure and avoiding immediate conflict. And she knew other people weren’t impressed with it exactly - but she didn’t need them to be impressed. She just needed them to not find it worth the while to mess with her. When she succeeded to avoid being messed with, or at least avoided immediate disaster, she felt like she coped with things.

It was however different now. It was different after she had been attacked and easily overpowered by people who didn’t listen to her words and ignored her playacting. They had been focused on hurting her and killing her, period and no debate. This time she hadn’t been able to cope. She had failed and just been helpless. The knowledge opened an abyss of self-despise inside her, a black hole of utter worthlessness.

“My delicate friend is not too terribly strong.” Alright…it wasn’t like she had imagined Parnell counted her to ”the strong ones” of this world. But now he didn’t even count her as weak. He called her delicate. The word sent her thoughts to something tiny, fragile and very easily breakable - a porcelain statue or so.

She didn’t want Parnell to understand how close this came to how she was feeling at the moment, so she tried to conceal it by acting like she felt self assured. “I’m not sure I’ll be able to hold on” she said casually when she grabbed the thugs jacket as Parnell seemed to expect her to do.

As soon as she had obliged, she realized the man was heavier than it had looked when the poisoner had held him up. It felt like she was going to drop him at once ! “No,no, he’s too heavy, I can’t…” she started to say. She wanted to drop the man and step back, but Parnell had already taken the stiletto and put it under the thug’s throat just like he had said. She mustn’t let go of him. But she found she wouldn’t be able to keep her grip on him either, not for long. She felt like she would drop the man any tick.

“Hurry up” she said urgently, assuming Parnell really meant to keep the man alive and make him take a message to the mysterious Barton. “I can’t hold him much longer, I will drop him soon.”

After what the man had tried to do to her, she didn’t really care, to be honest. Partly she was tempted to not put in any effort and just let him fall on the stiletto. Perhaps the only thing that made her strive to not drop him was that that she thought Parnell had other plans for the blighter ? Otherwise …otherwise she felt furious and tempted.
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Postby Inoadar on February 22nd, 2014, 3:04 am

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Inoadar leaned back against the wall as if there was all the time in the world. As the thug got more insistent that he didn't know anyone named Barton, Inoadar would quickly interrupt him to ask Amolina some mundane question. And as Amolina would stress the difficulty she was having managing the man's weight, he would interrupt her to ask the man what he had said.

It was all to make the man desperate. It was all to the good if Amolina got angry, that would help her maintain the effort. "Hook the jacket in your elbow, sweetheart, then it won't slip...unless you do, of course." Inoadar held the weight for a moment as she readjusted her hold, then squatted to redirect his comments to the man.

"Very well then, who IS the man who sent you to kill my friend here? And don't try to tell me that you're independent thugs and she was just a random victim." His voice became honey-sweet with mock sympathy. "Because, regrettably, I won't believe you. The timing and coincidence is just too much, and that means you'll die. And it would be so easy for you to save your life, if only you knew who Barton was. I mean I'm not even asking you for information. Just to deliver a message...Such a shame." he 'tsked' a few times as he shook his head.

He looked up to see Amolina grimacing with the effort, her body shaking slightly. He gave a low whistle. "Whoo boy, it won't be long now. Look at the strain on her face...Oh, I'm sorry, you can't see it, can you? Well, trust me, either her knees, or her back, is gonna give out soon. Frankly, I'm surprised she's lasted this long. I mean, since you don't have any useful connection that might give us cause to see you live. That means that the only thing giving her any reason to keep struggling like this is the fact that you're such a nice man. Nice enough to rape her and beat her head in on this nice comfy alleyway."

Amolina's strained voice cut into Inoadar's diatribe "Hurry up. I can't hold him much longer. I will drop him soon." She looked like she truly meant it. her cheeks were quivering now and she was repositioning her feet endlessly.

Inoadar sighed and nodded, "You may as well, Hon'. He's obviously not going to tell." Again the mock sadness taunted the man. "I'll try to make sure the stiletto punches through somewhere in his brain that will kill him quick. I mean, it's gotta be just petching agony, laying there for bells with a spike through your tongue, pinning it to the roof of your mouth, unable to move your jaw for fear of further damage to your brain. The first piercing may very well not kill you. It depends on what part of the brain gets stabbed."

He egged the situation on, "And of course if you jerk or twist, it might not hit your brain at all. Maybe just go through your Adam's Apple. Then that will trigger your gag reflex and you'll vomit." Inoadar shuddered exaggeratedly. "Eeeeww...laying there, choking on vomit, while continuing to puke up more. All the while the acid is burning the wound...Damn...You've got to wonder whether you'll choke first, or drown, or bleed out. Well, I'm sure Mr. Barton would do the same for you."

Amolina and the man both looked pale and about to be sick. Inoadar had actually removed the knife several moments earlier and was simply pressing one of the spikes from his Nettle Cloak cuff into the thug's neck. He let Amolina see the knife and gave her a subtle nod.

She gasped with relief and let go. The man dropped with a sincere shriek of horror. Inoadar gave the thug an approving nod as he lay there, whimpering. "I'm impressed. You didn't even piss your pants." he held up his arm, with the spiked cuff, before the man's eyes, then jerked a thumb in Amolina's direction. "So let's give her a few moments to regain her strength, and we'll try it again...WITH the knife, this time."

"NO, NO! I'll tell him! Please, you're right, It was Barton. I'll deliver your message...I'll do anything you want." His voice collapsed into tears as Inoadar patted him on the back.

"There, there...it's okay."

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Postby Amolina on February 22nd, 2014, 9:47 am

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Amolina felt totally spent.

When she heard Parnell tell the thug they were going to start over she felt like she would start to cry. But the thug beat her to it. She sat on the pavement and watched how Parnell patted the man on the back and said “There, there…it’s okay”.

While Parnell was focused on the thug she wiped away her own tears. Tears could be blamed on the assault. Yes, she was going to blame all of her generally upset and shaken condition, disheveled looks and ruined makeup on the thugs and the assault. It was perhaps true too. But part of her objected. The way Parnell had alternated between asking her importless mundane questions and interrupting and ignoring her had made her desperate, frustrated, angry.

Now when she wasn't tasked with holding the thug anymore she started to think. A message to Barton? Why would the poisoner go to these extremes to insist on the thug carrying a message ? Parnell believed Amolina was in league with Barton. The logical conclusion would have been that he could use her as messenger. She had no idea why he would want to use this unreliable thug for it instead.

Why was he so sure it was Barton that had sent thugs on her to kill her? Amolina hadn't known, and the thugs had never mentioned Barton's name - the bulky one had only said "he". How had the poisoner come to his conclusion ? Sure, Amolina had promised Parnell to side with him instead, but even if she had been involved with Barton, there was no way the man could have known she had changed sides. Only Parnell and Amolina knew what had been said in the research location.

And so what if the thug said he’d convey a message. Turning up to “deliver a message” to the leader of a criminal operation, after having failed with a job, seemed like a no way. Just promise to do it, but then “disappear”, was what Amolina would have done if she had been in the thug’s position. She would have given in to the threaths and promised to oblige, in order to save herself, then gone on to saving herself more.

Out of this insight another insight arose. Just like Parnell had said, the thug hadn’t even wetted his pants! This told Amolina something : the man was playacting. The moment Parnell had said he wanted the thug to give Barton a message, the thug had known he was worth more alive than dead. He just needed to convince Parnell, really, really convince him that he was going to carry out the task…which Amolina felt convinced he wasn’t planning to do. How could they even know if he really worked for Barton - there was no way to know it. He had confessed under pressure, well nearly torture, and could very well have lied.

But wait. What if he did work for Barton and did go to Barton and tell him not only the message from Parnell, but also everything else he knew? The thug knew Parnell was prone to defend a “delicate” business partner he addressed by names like sweetheart, hon’ and friend. And from Amolina’s initial attempt to fool the thugs, he also knew that Amolina had tried to pass herself off as being in league with Barton, which would tell this Barton she knew about him and his supposed operations.

Wasn’t this just the kind of knowledge the thug could exploit - blame the failure on his silent companion, and take credit for having been smart enough to return with useful information. If he was working for Barton at all, that was. Otherwise he could just seek Barton out and sell information to him. Or he could sell the information to somebody else.


Barton or other enemies of the poisoner might imagine they could get at him by attacking her. No matter it seemed unlikely to her, others might think it possible and try to make use of it. Seriously, what was Parnell thinking !

“Wait” she said hastily, trying to interrupt what Parnell had going on. “Nolan…Nolan, listen… ” Normally she kept to his surname, but this was an emergency. “We can’t send him to Barton. He knows far too much."
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Postby Inoadar on February 23rd, 2014, 4:24 am

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Inoadar played along with what he assumed was an act from Amolina. Naturally, she would believe they should add more threat of death to the man, to ensure his cooperation. But it was unnecessary. The man would do what he was told. When he heard the message, Barton would be glad they hadn't killed either him or Amolina. This thug would probably even say HE beat the information OUT of Inoadar. And that was fine with him.

As for Amolina, Barton would never be sure if it was safe to harm her, so he'd think the thug had done right to refrain from carrying out instructions. There was no reason, really, for anything to be withheld. Not from her, not from this thug, and not from Barton. The only thing he wondered about was whether it was detrimental to his plan that this thug perhaps realize that Amolina herself did not know of it.

Well, it was beside the point now. When he spoke his intent and his terms, Amolina would realize what was going on. Then she need only act as if she knew all along. Inoadar trusted that she was quick enough to do that. The beauty of it was that every word of it would be true, too. Any amount of investigation or torture for information would only confirm it.

He directed his voice to Amolina, though he kept his eyes on the thug. "Now, now, my vicious little sweetie, I'm surprised at you. Surely you can see that there's no one else to send. You know me better than to think I don't have the stomach for killing this guy. But who else can we send, you? Barton just showed his hand as far as you are concerned. Just like with me, you do the man a favor and he repays you with betrayal."

His voice was calm as he went on, "Now it's not that I'm outraged or anything over that. I've betrayed a man or two in my time as well. There's no hard feelings in that regard. Fact is, I ought to thank him for keeping me sharp..." Now he leaned down to the thug, "...and you can tell him I said so if you like." He stood back up and paced a bit, "No, it's the waste of potential as partners in...profit that irks me. I thought I showed quite clearly what a useful associate I could be, and instead of working together, he tries to take me completely out. Such a waste."

He spun on his heel now, facing them both. "Here's the deal...I have the ledger from the cafe, and Barton knows it. And now that he knows I've been to the Healing Hand, and judging by his hasty reaction, he assumes...rightly, I might add...that I have broken the code in it and can tie him in to this smuggling operation that is cheating the Ebonstryfe and the Black Sun out of those medical supplies."

The thug gave no sign whether HE even knew these details, but he listened intently now. "I have no doubt there are other...products... involved in this. But I don't care about any of that, not even the meds, though an employee of mine suffered cruelly as a result." He focused narrowed eyes on the thug, who flinched, "...FAR more cruelly than you, I might add...Now where was I?...Oh yes, what's done is done. But what is yet to BE done is the inclusion of the 'Nitrozian-Moletta Sanitary Station' into the network of businesses benefiting from this operation."

He flashed a look to Amolina to make sure she didn't gasp or anything. 'Good girl, not a twitch.' he smiled to himself. He continued, pacing a bit again, "So, as long as no further attempts are made on either my lovely friend here, OR my less lovely self...And as long as we can benefit from the availability of these bargains, and others like them, there will be no need for this incriminating evidence, worthy of Mr. Barton's slow, torturous execution, falling into the hands of the Ebonstryfe. In fact, I would take it a personal redress to past transgressions on his part if he was to come and deliver his agreement to these terms face-to-face."

Something in the smug, confidence slipped and Inoadar spun down and grabbed the thug by his hair and pulled and twisted him to look him in the eye. "AND YOU CAN PETCHING WELL TELL HIM I SAID THAT TOO! BECAUSE IF I SEE YOU AGAIN, ASSHOLE, YOU ARE A DEAD MAN!"

He collected his calm facade again and started to walk away, but turned back. "Oh yeah, as a gesture of good faith, you can tell him I will deal with the stock girl at the Healing Hand." Now he walked toward Amolina, his arm extending from his side to put around her protectively. "Now, you can see what I told you about Barton. We're done here. Let's get back."

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