Completed [Kabrin Road, and Mithryn]The Road to Mithryn

Marrick's first meeting with David Whitevine, his Patron

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[Kabrin Road, and Mithryn]The Road to Mithryn

Postby Marrick Corvis on February 9th, 2014, 8:25 am

Afternoon Winter 5th 513 AV

Marrick Corvis slouched low in the saddle, almost as if the horse had been riding him to Mithryn all the way from Syliras. He felt exhausted, which was odd as he had more or less sat on his haunches the whole way. All he wanted was to find a nice perch somewhere and sleep, but he had a duty to perform. He was a squire and his patron had likely been waiting for him to arrive at the outpost long enough.

His ride through the fields had been long and windy. Each mile traversed added some stiffness to his joints and another note he didn’t know his helm could make as the wind passed over the slats. The trip outside the walls smelled strongly of damp earth. Yet the Kelvic couldn’t complain. He wasn’t in a cage and he knew where he was headed. He was excited about it, though the damp dank of the day did put a little bit of a wet cloth over the smoldering fire in his belly. The whole place begged him to explore and learn. If the Kelvic had the power to take it all in at once he very well might have.

The wind blew freely through the now empty furrows of dirt in the fields, as Kiter walked along at her slow and steady pace. When they had first left Syliras that morning she had been so full of energy and hi spirits almost like a child at the fair. She had probably never seen beyond the walls of the Windmount. Marrick had encouraged her to run freely along the road that morning. It was as if the wind that came down from the mountain filled her with energy. Though, as the day wore on, he found that she had become increasingly tired of the journey. The young Tiedan mare had been a good sport about taking him all this way. He would have to give her a treat as a thank you when they arrived at the outpost. The stable master had recommended he reward her for good behavior after all.

‘Stable master.’ The Kelvic thought to himself. It seemed a cruel title for someone so wise. Marrick didn’t like the idea of owning Kiter. In the end he simply justified it as buying the privilege of riding her and taking care of her. The Stable master had approved of his perspective. It was just something he didn’t like about the world. It always put his mind into a tussle when he contemplated owning a thing, or a place. It reminded him too much of the slavers he knew as a child. He didn’t want that kind of relationship with Kiter.

As the mares plodding gate carried the squire south he looked backward down the road. The wind whipped at his cloak making it plume out with a gentle flutter. Behind him the Kabrin road stretched back to Syliras. The gentle tolling of the evening bells could be heard softly on the wind, yet only the spires could still be seen amongst the fertile hills.

As he twisted back around he saw the tall cut stone marker denoting the fork in the road that lead to Mithryn, and the long road south to Kanash. As Kiter drew close, the squire reined her in awkwardly, to her whinnied protests. He could hear her heavy exhales and he leaned down to give her a reassuring pat on the neck. “Sorry Koite,” he said as soothingly as he could. He looked down the road south, and then east toward Mithryn. He felt his nature calling him to go exploring. Find the edge of the world and then cross its threshold. With a deep breath, and a heavy exhale he smiled. “Another toime, another adventure.” He said toward the southern road, and he turned Kiter toward the east toward Mithryn.

He saw the smoke from the fires of Mithryn long before he saw the towers and battlements. As Twilight approached he found himself reigning Kiter short of the tall Iron and Wood gate. She moved nervously from side to side obviously confused as to what they were doing there. It seemed the guards on the battlement had the same idea.

“HO There!” A voice came over the battlement.

“OY THAR!” He shouted back as he rose in the saddle. “Squoire Marrick Corvis, reportin fer duty!” An awkward silence followed as he held himself in the stirrups. “Patronned teh David Whoite Voine.”

Marrick held his breath. Almost as if he was sinking to the bottom of a lake. He felt the coldness of uncertainty creeping into his veins like ice water, as the bottom fell out of his stomach. Would they let him in? Would they deny he was who he said he was?

“Wait there squire.” The voice called out, and there he was, left waiting in the waning light of the evening at a blocked gate.
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[Kabrin Road, and Mithryn]The Road to Mithryn

Postby Marrick Corvis on February 16th, 2014, 1:04 am

The few ticks that past felt like an eternity watching sticks float down the river. Then with the slip of wood against iron Marrick watched as the gate cracked open. The doors swung wide revealing a silhouetted figure who stood with their hands on their hips.

All the squire could see was Oriah as she stood ready to defend him on the roof of the Rearing Stallion. Then as the shadowed figure stepped forward into the light he realized that it was a man dressed for duty. The light of the setting sun lit his dull gray armor as he halted before him, sizing him up.

The large Tieden edged away from the man sideways until Marrick halted her with a gentle pull of her reins. The patient horse nickered softly toward the stranger, and the Kelvic weighed the signs before him. Oriah had known the horse was gentle and wise. Two traits that had won her over from the very beginning and Marrick trusted Oriah.

The Squire tried to perceive the man with his animal instincts, which wasn’t easy in human form. But what little he could glean didn’t seem openly hostile. Perhaps even a little inviting.

Cautiously he removed his helmet, revealing his face to the man. The guardsman did the same, and Marrick began to note little details about him. His cloak was clasped with a pin made simply of a single sword. The mark of knighthood was polished to a prideful mirror shine. He had short cropped blonde hair, and wore a flat lipped deadpan stare on his face. He had lean features and a strong chin. The word handsome, fit him well.

With a slow and purposeful movement, Marrick dismounted Kiter. Though, he did not trust the tired and hungry mare not to wander off in search of food and drink. So wisely, he kept her reins firmly in his grasp.

“Squoire Marrick Corvis, reportin fer duty Ser!” Marrick said with a firm salute. The man continued to stare at him with his flat lipped gaze, his hands on his hips. It seemed almost as if he were imitating the statue of Tieden, or Dyres.

Not sure what to do, the Kelvic assumed a position of attention. The man seemed to look him up and down, until at last his serious face was split with a grin. “Why so serious Squire?” He said with a chuckle.

Marrick’s relieved exhale came loudly, and the puff of air lit like smoke in the waning light of the evening.

“Knight David White Vine.” The man said as he extended a gauntleted hand. Marrick eyed the gesture just a moment, and took David’s arm at the elbow in a firm grasp. Then to his surprise, the Knight pulled him into a hug. “Welcome home little brother.” For the oddest and awkward of moments the Kelvic was held there in shock, until he at last succumbed to the emotion wrapped up in the gesture and hugged back.

The pair let go after only a few ticks, but the Kelvic felt the strangest of kinships almost immediately with the Knight. It was as if he actually was home, and this stranger was an estranged brother who had missed him in his absence. “Ser.” Marrick said as he let go of David’s hand.

With a grand sweeping gesture the Knight motioned him past and the pair walked through the gate with Kiter in tow. “How was your trip Marrick?” He said casually. As he walked beside him, a soft clink in his armor as his feet met the ground. “Not too cold I trust?”

“A long road to be certain Ser, yet full of amazin beauty.” He said with an almost childlike wonder. “Oi could smell tha wind as it came off the sea. And the mountains, shone blue and gold in the evenin loight.” The knight led him to the stables as he listened politely. Almost as if he assessed every word, every step that Marrick took. “Oi heard the afternoon choime of the bells of Syliras jest afore Oi passed the Road Marker.”

“It’s a mighty fine sound eh? Clear and bright.” The Knight said softly, a memory sliding over his vision for the briefest of moments, and the Kelvic wondered what sort of images he saw when he heard the bells. “This stall is for your horse.”

“Koiter, Ser. Her name is Koiter.” He said with a measure of pride in his voice as he led the horse into her stall. The horse seemed happy to be out of the wind. Yet she nudged him patiently in an effort to remind him that she had done well. “Oy Lady, feedin toime.”

“Koiter eh?” David said with a raised eyebrow, as he casually packed a pipe with tobacco. Carefully he lit the bowl with a match, puffing out billows of smoke. When its contents glowed with a soft ember and blew out the match with a puff of smoke.

The Kelvic watched him but for a moment as the man lit his pipe and puffed at the bit. Then remembering his promise to his gentle and patient steed, he pulled the sack of feed from her saddle bags and poured out a small measure of it into a feed trough. “Oi’ll be back in a couple o’ ticks darlin.”

“I love you too squire, but the hug didn’t mean what you think.” the Knight teased with a smirk and a chuckle.

Marrick would have thought that he was being serious, accept for the casual manner in which David blew smoke rings into the air as he watched the squire taking care of his horse. “Hay bails, Ser?” He said inquisitively, and with a simple gesture the Knight pointed to where the day’s bails had been dropped. With an urgency, he grabbed a couple of large flakes of hay and carted them to Kiters stall, and placed them in the trough along with her feed.

The Horse made a pleasant low nickering as she noticed that Marrick had brought her something to eat. Reassuringly, The Kelvic rubbed the Tiedens strong neck and shoulder in gentle long strokes. He had been so focused on getting his horse food that he didn’t notice when David poored out two buckets of water into the horses water trough. Which she immediately turned to drink from.

“Thank ye Ser.” The Kelvic said with a friendly smile. Then wasting no time Marrick began to undo Kiters Saddle and tack. Once the horses gear was set aside on a nearby rack he pulled out a horse brush and went to work on the Mares rich brown coat.

David watched Marrick as he worked, a little smile on his face. “It’s good to see a squire who cares about his horse.” He said as he flipped one of the buckets, and used it as a seat. His back resting casually against the opposite wall from Kiters stall, he fixed the Kelvic with a kindly gaze. “I can only hope you’re as thorough with my horse.”

The Kelvic smiled at the compliment for a moment. “Aye Ser, Oi’d treat her to only the foinest of services.” For the few ticks that followed Marrick thought over the questions he had for his Patron as the man puffed at his pipe. “Ser?”

“Aye little brother?” David said with curious look on his handsome features.
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[Kabrin Road, and Mithryn]The Road to Mithryn

Postby Marrick Corvis on February 16th, 2014, 2:00 am

“Oi’ve so many questions. Oi scarcely know where teh begin.” The squire spoke as he halted his work on Kiter’s left flank. “Oi joined tha Order teh give somethin back teh the community. Oi’m jest not certain o’ how Oi’m goin teh do that.” Marrick spoke fretfully as the Knight patiently listened with the occasional puff on his pipe. “Oi guess Oi want teh know what happens next.”

David smiled pleasantly at his squire a moment and nodded his head to him. “Well, lad. First we train you up. The letter delivered by hawk four days ago told of your inexperience with arms, and riding. We’ll also train you in the ways of the Knigths, the Rank and File of the Order, Proper etiquette, and your duty to the public.” Furtively he nibbled at the bit of his pipe as he thought. “Though, It seems you have a good idea of what that is already.”

The Kelvic had managed to brush off Kiters flanks by then, though the Knights last comment struck him as funny. “What do yeh mean boy that Ser?” He said taking a short break to stare at his Patron.

“Kevith.” He said with a chuckle. “Kevith and my father knew each other back when their hair had color. The old Bartender sent him a letter. Seems you fought three men a couple of nights back and the old man was impressed with your handy work.” David said with a grin that clenched against the bit of his pipe.

“Oi can’t take all the credit.” Marrick said with a smile, as he went back to brushing down Kiter. Who seemed to have fallen into a pleasant sleep. “Oi had a bit o’ help from a Benshira from Ekytol.”

David guffawed at his squires humility and nodded, his smile only dyeing so he could puff at his pipe. “I might have heard something about this Oriah Azari. Spent the night in her room at the white swan did you?” David said with a good natured eagerness coloring his voice.

“Mother Raven does everyone know how badly Oi got drunk, and beaten on?” Marrick said the embarrassment showing on his face.

“How he blushes.” The Knight said with a chuckle. “Don’t worry about it Marrick, I was more interested to find out if you managed to win yourself a lady.” David said with a mischievous grin.

As Marrick brushed the last of Kiters coat clean of dirt, dust, and sweat he gave the Mare one last pat goodnight. With a casual movement he latched the stall door behind him on his way out and put away the horse brush. “No Ser. Oi honestly don’t know what happened when we got teh the room. Asides, Lady Azari isn’t the sart o’ woman teh take advantage of. If anything happens though, I’ll be sure teh invite ye to tha weddin.” Marrick said with a smirk.

David laughed softly. “Where did Rainstrom find you little brother.”

“Slave Caravan.” Marrick said with a casual air as he picked up his saddlebags and gear. David stood a moment with a strange incredulous smile on his face as he tapped out his pipe of the cool ash.

“Well, let’s get some vittles eh little brother. Cooks got some sort of venison stew brewing tonight.” As the Knight talked of food, he realized just how hungry he was. He hadn’t eaten all day, and he’d ridden all the way from Syliras. The Kelvics stomach growled like an angry bear at the mention of food.

“For tonight Marrick, we eat, and get you situated. On the Morrow we begin your training.” The Knight said with a nod of anticipation.

It was a promise, Marrick realized. Knight David Whitevine, as young as he was, was ready and excited to get Marrick trained and out on his own. It was brilliant to feel like someone cared about where he was going and what he was doing. When he had left Oriah behind in the city Marrick had worried he would feel empty without her. As lonely for her presence as he felt, he knew that David Whitevine was going to be a great teacher.
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[Kabrin Road, and Mithryn]The Road to Mithryn

Postby Radiant on March 1st, 2014, 6:27 pm

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Marrick :
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Skill XP Earned
Observation +2 XP
Socialization +2 XP
Rhetoric +1 XP
Riding: Horse +1 XP
Animal Husbandry +1 XP


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Kiter: My Horse
Location: Mythrin Outpost
David Whitevine: My Patron Knight
The Duties Of A Squire


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Interesting! I'll be sure to see more of Marrick's shenanigans with his patron knight!

A minor note, It's 'Tiaden', not 'Tieden'. :)

Enjoy your grades! :D


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If you have any questions or concerns regarding your grade, beam me a PM and we can work it out. :)
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