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[Maiden's Cape] Oceanic Manipulation (Ricky Maze)

Postby Volanaro on February 25th, 2014, 1:50 am

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Accents. They were so difficult to understand at times. Luckily, the sailor did not ramble on into lecture. He struggled to understand his words, murmuring them in his mind again, in his own clear voice in order to understand. To Ricky, perhaps it would be interpreted as slowness, which was partially the case. In his half of a millennium as a Nuit, Volanaro had come to realize one severe drawback. Reaction time. His senses picked up just a tad slower than the living, which made accents all the worse, drawing them out and making them even more difficult to understand. But, he got the gist of what... Ricky, as he called himself, had said. Introducing both himself and the child in his arms, the man had also demeaned himself as a person.

Nobody special in particular? Your djed speaks otherwise, my friend. As lacking as your training may or may not be, you still have a much greater store of djed than an ordinary man. If you did not, then you would likely be dead. Or, at the least, much more winded than you are now.

The boy Nuit simply nodded in response to his words, choosing not to correct him or otherwise point out the lie. Instead, he grinned as the man made the child mime a wave and introduce him as a 'creepy stranger.' It was amusing, to say the least. Volanaro decided that the man was not going to be a problem, retracting the Res from around Ricky's neck and shoulders, bringing it to his hands, where it was re-absorbed into the skin. A happy sigh escaped the Nuit's lips as he stepped forward again, "
Well, Ricky, it is a pleasure to meet you. And your son, as well."

The Nuit was rather at a loss, if he was honest with himself. The man was not irritating him, nor was his son, so there was little need to push violence upon them, but from he had experienced in the past, people were afraid of Nuits. Was it some fear of their bodies being stolen away? Or the discomfort of speaking to what they compared to a walking corpse? It didn't matter at this moment, though, as Ricky seemed to either disguise his comfort, or he was, finally, at ease around the Nuit. In order to push for some sort of common ground, or, at the least, an amusing reaction, he decided to ask, "
You are a Reimancer, then, correct? There's no need to hide the fact that you are special, Ricky. After all, you blew that cover the moment you asked your question. I would,"

His lips turned from their amused grin to that of a smirk, vibrant grey eyes of thundercloud boring into the man's face as he continued on, "
Greatly appreciate it, in fact, if you were honest. Perhaps I can even teach you something. A lesson on the craft that you so diligently wish to hide."

Ordinarily, the covering up of one's magical talents was a wise move, but Volanaro was already too well informed, and he was far more curious than threatened by the sailor's power. He greatly enjoyed meeting Wizards. They were, after all, the most intriguing sort of people.
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Postby Ricky Maze on February 26th, 2014, 7:17 pm

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Martin was by far the key in Ricky’s paternal trigger, as a father the safety and concern for his son was what made him easily threatened upon danger. Not that this Volanaro meant to be such a threat to them but by being a mage alone, that was the first indicator in Ricky’s mind to raise the red flag about danger. And the leeching? Well that definitely set the fact to stone that Vol wasn’t to be trusted so easily, as Ricky not only found such magic dark and dangerous but life threatening as well. In short the only way to make sure Martin remained safe was for Ricky to place it cool, and use his head in this event so that he could make sure nothing bad happened to either of them. In layman’s terms; he was giving the mage a second chance for another first impression. Albeit the first one pretty much set the record straight as it did. Volanaro seemed to be a youngster well enough but there was just something about his tone of voice that didn’t make it seem so, which made Ricky wonder just how recent the boy had been a mage. Since so many go through trifling experiences when they become a mage, Ricky could only think on Clyde and wonder how alike he and Vol were in regards to experiencing the hardships magic induced.

Clyde no doubt saw magic as a curse and for Ricky to not be able to see why before, the fisherman could easily tell now that he certainly looked to be the fool in regards to that day. Magic may yet be useful to have depending on what discipline you’ve learned, but all the same it was cursed to bring unwanted folk that could easily blow you away within a heartbeat. He had to remind himself that one day when his magic had developed so much, that he should never allow it to change his attitude so… if he were to somehow remain the same as before. As Ricky watched Martin intently he could see the baby was ever more curious about the look he’d been watching on his father’s face, that constant worry for his own child was something the boy had only first witnessed today and would sure enough become well acquainted with further down the line… that is if Ricky happen to find more trouble along the way when Martin was around. Still the baby kept Ricky in a more calm state of mind as he listened to Volanaro, whereas before he’d hardly given much attention to fact.

Meaning Ricky not only listened closely to the words the mage said, but how they were said as well, and used his own intellect to try and interpret what motives Vol may have for the two. There was a moment of surprise as the fact he was a Reimancer as well happened to be brought up, but a few given thoughts to when his Djed was sapped away by the dark magic from earlier indicated that was the possible way of learning. Mages did have more Djed than the average regular folk due to the discipline, so if Ricky’s Djed had come to grow exponentially compared to the first few times he’d practiced… could that mean he was already meeting his goal of becoming stronger? The surprise he had in his eyes vanished soon after he thought it through, and with the glances to Vol he spared on occasion he could only assume this had to be leading somewhere. Truly he wasn’t lying when he said he wasn’t anyone special, even if being a mage in his own terms made him a little different from the norm.

That’s what Ricky viewed it as anyway. Different from the normal he strived for, but never did he believe himself special. He was just a man, a fisherman that worked for the city. And although his work was focused on defending his home, he truly meant to protect his family and those he considered close to it. So what if he’d a keen interest in improving his abilities further. What if he thought to make himself a stronger individual to be worthy of such a charge. Ricky only wanted ensure the possibilities that should the time come where odds were he had no choice but to fight, then he would be well equipped to do so when it came down to it. Clearly de boy’s tryin’ t’ get a different reaction outta me, or at least somet’in he doesn’t expect. He couldn’t really think for sure what Vol hinted at other than a chance to learn something new, which in this case came across as a negotiation to Ricky. Everybody always wanted something after all and when they did, they would first hint at the sign of a bargain. Just like now. Vol had given the promise that something could be learned, but at what price would he ask in order to provide?

"Call me paranoid but Oi always do me best to hide the fact Oi’m a Reimancer, nowadays all de ot’ers go blowin’ dem selves up cause t’ey go t’ far." He finally remarked after about a chimes worth of consideration. "But seein’ as ‘ow ya somehow called dat out, Oi guess it ain’t gonna matter whet’er Oi ‘ide it or not. So what exactly are ya suggestin’ when ya say ye can teach me, an’ at what cost would dat be if Oi accepted de chance?" He didn’t waste time in getting to the point of the matter, seeing as how Vol likely had some reason to provide this window of opportunity. Though there was still something Vol had yet to learn after all, something Ricky hoped he didn’t pick up on when his Djed was leeched away. It was the fact Ricky was also a Shielder too. Although not a good one just yet, he had practiced off and on trying to weave and mold shields on occasion. If he could learn proper the ways to make his shields absorb any kind of magic, then sure enough he could well protect his family from the sudden dangers that would likely spark when magic was involved.
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[Maiden's Cape] Oceanic Manipulation (Ricky Maze)

Postby Volanaro on February 28th, 2014, 10:45 pm

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Ah, the fisherman knows the game! And he's absolutely right. there is no such thing as a free meal in this world. Not that I have the need to eat...

The softest of chuckles escaped the boy Nuit's lips, vibrant gray eyes casting their gaze towards the man once before looking around. He mimed breathing once again, allowing the scent of sea salt to fill his nostrils and the air to fill his non-functioning lungs. The air lingered in there, a faint gust blowing some of the air from his lungs before he allowed a response to escape his lips, a frown marring his features as he decided to stick to his persona, "Huh. Dad always says that Wizards should not disguise themselves. That," He allowed his voice to turn to a lower register, though his vocal cords could not form any sort of reasonable impersonation of a man. It was meant to portray the fake father he had invented, but it would not succeed, "We are both the past and future of Mizahar. This world was shaped by mages, destroyed by magic, and will be repaired by Magic!"

A confused expression manifested next before he tilted his head at the man, his gray eyes forming their own plan, though his words spoke of another, "
Well... What do you have to offer, Ricky? Dad says that learning another magic is ideal, but if Reimancy is all you have, then... I dunno. But, you must be more skilled at Reimancy than you lead me to believe if it's your only magic! Your djed is rather dense for a fledgling. I think... you have more to offer than you think!" In truth, the boy Nuit was bluffing with this. Yes, he had felt a rather thick concentration of djed but that was absolutely no reason to ascertain that Ricky was a wizard practicing more than one discipline. It was just... the way he seemed so guarded. It set Volanaro off edge.

There was something the Nuit couldn't quite put a finger on about the fisherman. A strange sort of presence he exuded. It was clearly magical, because the boy Nuit had made that clear earlier, but of what sort?
Is my bluff destined to be fruitless? Is this man merely an unskilled Reimancer? Or...

Being unsure bothered the Nuit. Anything less than absolute certainty or at the least, being independent in one's ability to discern what was needed, was failure. It made the Nuit angry, it set him off. It... infuriated him. Part of him wanted to simply tear at the man with shards of ice, Leech what was left of his djed before he ultimately perished from the wounds, and find out for sure. If he even could. The dead were easier to understand than the living were... But, he held his desires within him. He decided to... wait. Perhaps Ricky was to enlighten him.

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Postby Ricky Maze on March 3rd, 2014, 8:34 pm

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As Ricky heard the words the boy tried to quote from his alleged father with a bit of a poor attempt to sound like the man, he couldn’t help but find himself baffled with such a wild and insane thing to say yet alone supposedly teach to a child. If what this boy said was true then sure enough his father had to be rather insane to follow, because from what Ricky knew magic wasn’t a grand tool that granted everyone the power to shape the world. Well… maybe it did but that was far beyond his border of knowledge. As far as he was concerned though magic wasn’t something he thought to be praised as such, thus he raised an eyebrow with a bit of a static look to the mage. To Ricky the boy sounded like some mad zealot or… or heretic to some forgotten belief that should’ve forever remained in the taboo.

Yet he couldn’t let his being unnerved hold him to critically judge this boy, he was after all a character that somehow seemed to be misguided or misunderstood by the teachings he held. Just what is dis lad’s problem? ‘as magic addled ‘is mind ‘r somet’in? The possibility existed considering both Reimancy and Leeching were the primary abilities he somehow stuck with, yet what was even more concerning for Ricky was the hint at something. A detail that could’ve very well led to the discovery that he was in fact a shielder, and only by a mere hint no less did it seem to reveal itself! Denser Djed? Shyke! Is dat even possible t’ pick up on? Can ‘e really tell dat me Djed is… wait. Could it be because Oi’ve been off an’ on practicin’ shields? If such were the case then surely his times in practicing, though small and simple, paid off well enough to strengthen his Djed. Did that mean he stood a chance against this mage? Could he mold a shield to absorb the magic casted at them?

He had to give it a shot somehow, and what better timing considering the amount of pressure he was under. Paternal instinct led on by emotional flares could easily surge his Djed into action if he thought about it, might kick off enough to start the process easier with enough dedicated concentration. As there remained a silence between them Ricky accessed the reserves of his Djed now, his mind solely focused on Martin and the concern he felt for the child’s safety. That feeling alone was bound to be a catalyst in the effort to weave a shield, yet the only problem… no there wasn’t just one but several issues to consider in this mess. The fact that his shields, though likely a bit stronger, might not be able to handle these spells casted by the mage, and that there was no real flat surface to focus on that could serve as a wall between him and this mage. No getaways would happen today, then again there hadn’t yet to be a reason had there?

The mage kept his would be claws at bay now that Ricky thought about it, because believe it or not he’d likely have been finished sooner. Yet there could also be the possibility that he was leading the fisherman on, testing him before likely putting him like a dog in front of his own pup. Such thoughts and concern led onto the enactment he struggled to decide upon, and without notice his hands started to very faintly glimmer a royal blue under the palms. He noticed the glimmer well enough and anticipated that such a small thing had been seen by Vol as well. He cursed as he knew well enough that he’d practically given away his secret he hid away, the only means of a likely edge now gone since his emotion took over the ability.

Upon looking down at his son Ricky could see that a shield had only woven over the area his palm covered of the child, while the other free hand that was once fisted showed that his very palm was covered in a deep royal blue sheen that presently glowed as he struggled to stop it. Yet his emotions had brought a lack of control, thus he’d already started to weave two small shields from his hands. One on Martin’s back area, the other over the palm of his free hand. "’kay," He finally gave in, "Oi may ‘ave anot’er trick up me sleeve…" Martin just watched his fathers hands with interest, a smile on the boy’s face as he loved to see the faint glimmer of the Djed fabrics weave into thin flexible shields.

oocNot much dialogue from Ricky I know, but I thought the whole fact that he lost control for a moment would serve purpose enough for Vol to see his other ability. ;)
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Postby Volanaro on March 20th, 2014, 5:52 am

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This is going nowhere, and is doing so slowly. This man is being far too guarded because of the worthless child in his hands. There's no point in advising him in making haste, for nothing will come of it...

The Nuit was in a conundrum that he so hated to encounter. It was the distinction between what he wanted to do and what was useful to him. He wanted to destroy the irritant in his presence, and it was manifested by the materialization of Res for the second time, the vapour was not disguised, for Volanaro lacked the patience and the quantity of djed to expend to make it distinct. No, the crimson miasma moved forward towards the sailor, though... he noted that it halted before making contact with the man's hands, which were cradling the child that Volanaro so wished to destroy. It was the hindrance, the barrier, the blockage in the progress of the events.

If it were absent, Volanaro could torture the information he wanted out of the sailor. He could rip the very life, the water from inside of his stomach itself from his body and burst it to incinerate the man's stomach. He could threaten him with that information. But the presence of a hostage, a hostage of the man's own blood in his own arms held Volanaro at bay.

The child ruined everything! I need to win! But no! Now I have to wait.

The childish reprimand was strong in his mind, though he did not pay attention to it, the Nuit allowing his mind to touch at the Res that was pressing into some sort of obstruction. A barrier of some sort. The Res even seemed to be shrinking, albeit just slightly, the Nuit quickly retracting the Res and bringing it back as he noted the weak, royal blue glimmer of the man's djed. In it, he could even see the barest shards of crimson miasma, the barrier, or whatever it was that was on the man's hand, had...

Did this thing absorb my Res? My Djed? A sort of barrier device that targets djed and repels it? Even absorbs it?

The migraines returned as the Nuit felt the rays of the sun beat down upon him, the light blaring in his eyes, the use of repeated Reimancy and the imminent effects of withdrawal from Leeching were approaching. He had to go. The child managed a laugh, grinning to hide the pain that was building in his head as he said, "Ah, friend, the tricks you hide! I knew it! Hahahaha! You have some sort of power that I do not yet understand! How wonderful. I wish to learn it, but not today."

The childish tone was stolen away by the intrigue, though the spirit of it was left in his words. He had essentially seen the shiny new toy to play with and wished to exploit it beyond all imagination.

"We will meet again, and soon. This, I guarantee, friend. Volanaro does not lie about these things. Next time we meet, Volanaro advises you leave the infant under someone else's watchful eye. If you wish to learn Reimancy, you will need both hands. And a steady wit. That child clouds your judgement. Release that judgement, for even a moment, and the world will open up to you."

He smiled one last time at the man before he turned on his heel, passing the sailor by and moving towards Zeltiva proper. This location did not hold a further interest to him. As the Nuit walked away, he called out, "Meet Volanaro again here in the second week of Spring and he shall teach you. And you will teach him. Equivalent exchange is a wonderful - "

And with that, he was out of earshot. The Nuit returned to Zeltiva, a bright laugh escaping his lips.
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Postby Ricky Maze on March 20th, 2014, 8:01 pm

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The nature of his shields were by all means to protect his son from the threat that posed danger to him, which in this case was Volanaro, and while the glimmer of his Djed traced it’s way over the belly and chest of his son Ricky found that the very fabrics weaved together didn’t do nothing against the child. Martin was by all means halfway covered with a shield that would merely serve as a protective ward, as Ricky failed to notice the crimson color of Res that eerily floated it’s way over in their direction. Dat petchin’ bastard! He aims t’ ‘urt me son! But of course with his flow of Djed cloaked around the child in his grasp, the shield played it’s part in protecting his son from the very nature of “threat” and somehow absorbed the Res into it’s very fabric.

At first the Res seemed to be repelled by the shield, the very air in front of the child warded like an invisible bubble. Martin of course couldn’t see the shield on his skin and clothes but the reaction of the Res brought a childish smile on the baby’s face, he was protected by his father and he knew for a fact such was the case. Yet were this a situation where the Res overpowered his shield, then sure enough Ricky would have found a different turn of events to unfold. Soon after the repellent of his Res the very essence of it seemed to churn and somehow transition into a sort of crimson gas that started to soak into the very shield over his son. Djed absorption. That was the very nature of a Shield after all, Ricky knew that from experiences with his Reimancy practices. Each time he’d casted a simple and small sphere of water his shield absorbed it like it was nothing, which led Ricky to believe that his Shields absorbed magic in general. Djed being the source of magic, that was likely the very essence taken into a shield.

O’ course! Me shields not only ward but take in Djed, whether it be me own or foreign. So that would mean this petcher’s Djed can be absorbed! It just dawned on Ricky that he used Djed as well, since that was what weaved these protective barriers together. He’d never truly dwelled on the idea until now, only because he was in an intense spot that required him to think rather carefully. As the foreign Djed seeped within the fabrics of the shield he could feel a change within them, they were somehow just a little stronger. It was as though the Shields were charged now, fueled by the essence that sought to harm the very thing it was meant to protect. The sheen somehow seemed to glimmer from its absorption, enough for the mage to take notice and therefore laugh at the secret given away before him. It wasn’t the sort of amusement laugh one would expect, it was eerie and childish as though the boy found something new… something he could consider a toy to play with. It unnerved the fisherman so, enough to make his skin practically crawl.

He wished to learn this power. How? Ricky hadn’t the slightest clue in teaching such a skill, he was rather lucky what little he did know seemed useful to Anna back then. With but only a mouth that continued to babble on with instruction the mage seemed to leave the two of them behind, a given order for Ricky to avoid bringing Martin with him to the next place they were to meet. A trade off it seemed. Vol had the thought to teach Ricky more about Reimancy, in return that he learned just how he could be a Shielder as well. Bloody vagik dunno what he’s gittin’ int’! He swore in silence as he still clutched Martin defensively, it wasn’t until that they were finally and officially alone that he found himself able to relax again. Only so slightly of course.

"Laviku’s beard dat was a close one." He sighed as he turned his attention solely on Martin, the child remained unscathed and all the more Shielded in Ricky’s eyes. Though the boy’s head remained untouched it was the entire chest, stomach, shoulders, and upper legs that were now protected. Ricky felt mentally drained from multiple factors of course, but mainly glad to see that both he and his son were well out of harm’s way. "So, Oi t’ink we’ve an agreement not t’ tell yer mum." He spoke to Martin as he held the child to be eye to eye with Martin. "Oi won’t tell ‘er if yew won’t." He picked up the same playful talk he held just before the encounter, rather happy to see his son smile as he remained brave during that whole event. Of course while Ricky gathered the belongings brought with him he had to wonder, just what exactly could this Volanaro have to teach him in regards to Reimancy. Sure Ricky learned about ice today but would it really be worth seeing such a dangerous character again? Should he risk his neck just to try and see if he could benefit from this deal? He hadn’t an answer to go by.

Just an impression and a gut. The impression not all too good to follow, yet his gut told him to take this chance. Take it carefully though… He would have to be prepared, prepared well enough to make sure Vol wouldn’t plot to do anything against him that day. And so Ricky returned home with a focus, a focus to improve his Shielding skill. The better the skill then sure enough the better it could protect him, should anything be pulled. For now though, Ricky would enjoy the rest of winter with his lovely wife and adorable son while it lasted.
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Postby Neologism on May 25th, 2014, 3:08 am

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Volanaro :
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Riemancy +2 xp
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Leeching +1 xp
Teaching +1 xp
Observation +3 xp
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➢ Riemancy: Looking For An Ideal Place To Practice
➢ Riemancy: Trying To Stay Within Your Limit
➢ Riemancy: Making Ice Using Water & Air
➢ Smiling: Concealing Visible Decay
➢ Ricky: Curious About Magic
➢ Ricky: Don't Underestimate Him
➢ Accents: They Are Difficult To Understand
➢ New Magic: Shielding

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Weak Limbs: The products of Leeching, and could last for a few days. Obviously this thread is old, so you can't put this effect into play.

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That was great Vol! Your writing is very detailed and interesting to read. You can balance character development and skill development pretty well, keep it up! I'd like to mention that you didn't really push yourself with Riemancy, so you might not have gone as close to overgiving nearly as much as you did. Also, the dark red was hard to read, please stick with the brighter red in the future. :)

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➢ Martin: Dressing Him Warmly
➢ Riemancy: Don't Get Too Close!
➢ Recognizing Overgiving
➢ Para-Element: Ice
➢ Riemancy Ice: Made From Water & Air
➢ Volanaro: A Riemancer & A Leecher
➢ Magic: Its Not As Good As It Seems
➢ Leeching: It Drains You
➢ Volanaro: He Is Creepy
➢ Volanaro: Is a Nuit
➢ Sheilds Do Absorb Djed

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Light-headedness/Nausea: The product of being leeched, it shouldn't last longer than a day.

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Ricky! I love your writing, especially the detail that you went into with the shielding. Your Observation skill is maxed out, otherwise you would have gotten three or four points in that. Also, blue on blue is hard to read, maybe you could lighten Ricky's words a bit more? :)

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