Completed [Mithryn]The Burden of Steel

Marrick's first sword lesson from his patron.

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[Mithryn]The Burden of Steel

Postby Marrick Corvis on February 20th, 2014, 9:24 pm

Winter 6th 513AV

Knight and Squire stood facing one another on the grassy training grounds. The field had been culled by the livestock held within the walls. Weapons and practice gear lay at their feet. While the cool morning air was filled with the promise of a temperate day, where hard work kept one warm.

“Today, squire I will teach you the basics of the Long Sword.” Maricks Patron Knight said as he stood before him. Like a pillar of strength, he rested at ease with his hands behind his back. A fire burned in his eyes, almost like an artists as they gazed into their medium. He wore a light brown Gambeson, a common sight to the Mithryn soldiers as they practiced. No parade arms, or fancy armor save only his silver sword badge at his color, just simplicity at its finest.

The Kelvic stood before him at rest, awaiting his instructions. His ears focused, and his eyes keen. Every movement of his Patron burned into his memory like a hot iron on flesh. He was hungry. He had always been hungry since he could remember. He felt the hunger for knowledge, for creativity, for problems and puzzles to solve. If it wasn’t working he wanted to fix it. If it was broken, he wanted to mend it. If the way was too slow, or inefficient he would find new paths. But now he was about to learn something new, and the Squire felt that hunger now more acutely. It was almost as if he were near the kitchens just before the supper bell, and all the wondrous anticipation of what was coming alighted in the imagination.

“Do as I do squire.” David said with a serious look on his face. “Kneel down on both knees, and rest your hands on your thighs.” Marrick watched and did as his master, attempting to mimic his behavior as perfectly as possible. “Now shut your eyes and breathe.”

The squire shut his eyes slowly and purposefully. He was not tired, and felt a massive clot of curiosity forming in his mind over the purpose of such an exercise. From his perspective, breathing had nothing to do with swordplay.

“Breathe deeply through your nose.” The Kelvic heard his Patrons voice as it rumbled softly in his ears. “And slowly out through your mouth.” His patron said instructively.

As Marrick exhaled he felt an overwhelming calm filling him up. Like the weight of life was simply, ebbing away from his mind. Yet, within himself he felt energy, flowing and elusive. He breathed in deeply with his Patron, obediently listening to him as they breathed together. Their breaths synced together almost as one single lung, pulling air through them like a bellows.

“Good, keep breathing just like that and open your eyes.” He said as he stood slowly from his kneeling position. “Do not be alarmed, nor afraid.” He said softly as he drew Marricks long sword from its sheath with a soft hiss of metal on metal, and the smooth whisper of leather.

“Keep breathing and focus your breath.” He said as he slowly kneeled again before him. “Do you feel calmed, little brother?”

Marrick continued to breathe rhythmically, trying to focus his attention on the cadence of his breath. Then when he felt ready for the next step he gave his Patron the slightest of nods and waited patient as a hound at the heel.

“Raise your hands palm up and take your sword from me.” David said, with the sagest of voices. “Do not gulp the air, do not waste the air. Simply hold your weapon. Cradle it as if it were a babe.”

Marrick did as his Patron instructed, silent save only for his cadence of air, in and out. As he took the blade from his patron he felt its weight in his hands, pulling on his arms. It wasn’t extremely heavy, yet he did not want to sit there on his flanks until he at last lost his will to struggle against the weapons weight. After a moment of resting there with the weapon in his hands he brought the weapon to his chest. Careful as a mother he cradled the blade against him to keep it from cutting, but to keep it close.

“Feel the weight of your weapon Marrick. Feel its burden.” David Whitevine said, his gaze never leaving his Squires face. “Remember this moment, and understand what the weight of this weapon means squire. It is the burden of death. A club, it can be used to bludgeon wheat, a scythe can cut down the stalks or a sickle. A stave can be used to carry water or grain, but a sword has one purpose. It was made to kill and maim. That is its purpose. Respect that purpose. Never draw your sword in anger. Never draw your weapon against a friend, unless you feel your life is threatened. Always remember the weight; The burden of your steel.” The Knight said wisely.

Marrick contemplated the Knights words, and considered the conflict that he often felt within himself. He thought of Oriah, and of the dangers in the field. He thought on the weight of his weapon and its meaning, both metaphorical and literal. Then feeling a strange urge to speak, he shut his eyes a moment and whispered. “It’s a comfortin weight.”

The Patron Knight flashed him a triumphant smile. “Then let us begin.” He said, as he stood again and drew one of his Falcions. “Stand up little brother and join me in breathing.”
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[Mithryn]The Burden of Steel

Postby Marrick Corvis on February 26th, 2014, 5:48 am

“In.” The air flowed, “out.” The air left him. “In…Out” Each breath was a slow and purposeful draw of his weapon. The Squire felt he was moving through water or on some sort of euphoric drug as he and his Patron moved silently save for the thrust of their blades. “In” Marrick drew back his blade. “Out” the air would part with a sound softer than silk on silk.

“Breathe, in.” David said under his breath. “If you do not breathe correctly, you will not move correctly.” He said as he led his squire in a simple slow cadence. “The same is for your opponent. Unless your opponent is poorly trained you will hear their movements in their breathing.” The pair thrust their blades together into empty air.

They breathed together, as their blades moved. “Keep breathing, keep thrusting. Maintain your rhythm.” David said as he halted and stood straight. With an appraising eye he watched Marrick as he worked his cadence. “Don’t over reach. Your weight should never pass beyond your knee.” He said as he watched his squire struggling to maintain control of his blade.

“Striking should never feel uncomfortable. Your balance should never suffer from your attack.” The Knight advised him with a somber look. “You know how to fight with your fists, squire?”

“Aye Ser, Oi can hold moy own in a foight.” Marrick said in between his breaths and thrusts.

“Similar principles squire. Your sword is an extension of your arm. Some even believe it to be an extension of their very soul or their Djed.” The Knight spoke with a whimsical passion that the Kelvic found inspiring.

“An extension o’ their soul Ser?” Marrick asked, the wonderment almost hidden by his exertion.

“Aye.” David grinned. “If you ever have a chance to watch Weapon Master Lucius Antinous or his daughter Miriam in action, you’d swear the stories are true. That Knight can wield almost any weapon as easily as you breathe.” David said with reverence. “Tis a true sight to behold. Switch sides little brother, use your left.”

Marrick halted a moment and took a deep breath. He marked the little beads of sweat as they formed on his brow. It felt remarkably good. As different as using a weapon was, he liked the way it felt in his hand. It was almost as if it had its own power, its own energy, and he was but a medium in which this finely crafted piece of steel met with its intended target.

“Ser, I have naught met many other Knoigts, as yet. Can you tell me of them ser?” The squire asked politely as he passed his sword between his hands so that he now used his offhand. Slowly he took up a stance mirroring his previous positioning, and began the exercise anew.

“I will in a moment, for now find your cadence. Breathe in and out. In…Out” He said setting the squires timing as his squire thrust at the air. When Marrick had found his pace again, his Patron continued. “Ser Antinous and his daughter Miriam are the direct decedents of the man that built the training grounds at Stormhold. Lucius is named for his forebear. He is the sixth man in the line to bear the name. He’s not a man for nonsense, then again one that spends his life learning a means to bring death to the enemies of Syliras would make one a very serious person.” David said his voice colored with a somber note. The Knight came up next to the Kelvic a moment and joined him in his cadence to try and quicken his pace.

“The weapon masters are responsible for training our more advanced swordsman. Their skill is unmatched. When you visit the Antinous Training Grounds, be wary and watchful.” David said his look bordering on grave. “Miriam seems a filthy little child, but she’s a master with a dagger or spear.”

At the wave of his Patrons hand, Marrick halted his drills. At Ser Whitevine’s order he knelt and sheathed his long sword, returning it to its resting place. Like a child, being led by his hand, he followed Davids lead yet again and knelt with him to focus on breathing.

“In,” David said with a long inhale through his nose. “-and out. All movement should flow like this. Those who know the flux know how to use their Djed in this way to push themselves harder or farther.” The knight motioned with his hands to imitate a shape in the air trying to create an understanding.

“Can ye teach me tha flux Ser?” Marrick said curiosity overloading his minds ability to focus.

“Unfortunately no, I don’t have the interest. Besides magic is an evil thing. It’s a pitiless and cruel crutch little brother, and you’d do well to avoid it.” Ser Whitevine said with a look of seriousness. “For now focus on your sword skill.” He nodded and flashed Marrick an understanding smile to brighten the disappointed look that now haunted his face.

The Kelvic couldn’t help but smile back just a little. “Aye Ser.” He mumbled softly, the regret still quashing his enthusiasm.

“What’s that little brother? I can’t quite make that out.” David said loudly.

“Aye Ser!” Marrick said louder trying to please his patron.

“Louder Squire , Oriah would be disappointed with how shy your being!” The Knight shouted a broad grin on his face.

“AYE SER!” Marrick shouted as loud as he could. The surprise at how deafening he had actually managed to speak made him reflexively cover his mouth.

“No no, squire. Be loud, be proud of where you are, and who you’re a part of.” David said with a hardy laugh. “You are a part of this family now.” The man said, giving the Kelvic a gentle chuck to his shoulder. With little effort the man stood and motioned for Marrick to pick up his practice sword.

The Kelvic nodded in understanding and picked up his practice blade as David did the same.
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[Mithryn]The Burden of Steel

Postby Marrick Corvis on March 22nd, 2014, 3:29 pm

“Breathe in-“ David Whitevine said as he lead Marrick in practice. “and strike!”

The pair stabbed their straw practice dummies in time with one another, piercing the straw deeply. Marrick’s arm was beginning to feel like a lead weight. The ache was already making him want to quit and give up, pack it in and go home. The sweat was dripping into his eyes, even though it was remarkably cool out.

“Again!” Came the voice of his master.

Marrick didn’t wait to watch his Patron, he simply struck as he had been for the last three hours. His arms both felt like they had been paddled with boards, and the Kelvic longed for a hot bath, a warm bed, or food!

“Breathe and strike!” David said with a fierceness to his voice.

The Kelvic struck the straw man and withdrew his blade delivering again and again a thrusting attack to his straw foe as his Patron commanded. The repetition was strangely exhausting, his arm felt as if they could take no more torture until at last, with as many whispered blessings the Kelvic knew, Ser Whitevine told him to stop.

Marrick stood their gasping for breath. His legs felt sore, his arms exhausted, and his chest felt almost as if it were on fire with the amount of breathing he had been doing. Yet the Kelvic still found the last measure of strength in his arms to sheath his sword at Davids command. Then almost compulsively he tried to breath as he had been instructed. In through his nose and out through his mouth. So it was when he drew himself up and stood at attention, exhausted, but ready to do as his Patron instructed.

The Kelvic stood as tall as he could his chest heaving with each inhale and exhale. His Patron weighing him for a moment.

“When do you draw your blade squire?” David said with a stern look on his face.

“When Oi respect its purpose, Ser.” Marrick replied the ache in his arms getting worse from holding still.

The knight nodded and continued. “If you do not breathe correctly squire?”

“OI do naught move correctly, Ser!” Marrick said without hesitation, completing his Patrons sentence.

“When you strike squire! Where is your weight?” Ser Whitevine whispered.

“Never past moy knee.” Marrick spouted with glint of pride in his eyes.

“Your sword, is!?” The knight said as he withdrew and began to pace.

“An extension o’ moy arm Ser!” Marrick shouted as the ache seemed to get worse.

With a smile and a nod David Whitevine gave his squire a gentle chuck on the shoulder with the bottom of his fist. “At ease little brother. Good work so far.” The Knight nodded to his squire with a smile so bright it might have lit up the night. “Dismissed, Squire. Gather your gear, and meet me in the guards hall.”

At his Patrons order Marrick bowed his head and set about gathering up his gear. As the pair headed for a hot meal and a cold drink the squire found himself hungering again. Thirsting for more knowledge.

“What sart o’ adventure will we be embarkin on af’er a boite?” The squire said with a look of subdued eagerness and whole hearted focus.

“Patience squire, food first! Then we’ll work on some alternative techniques.”
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[Mithryn]The Burden of Steel

Postby Radiant on April 11th, 2014, 6:14 pm

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Marrick :
Experience
Skill XP Earned
Observation +1 XP
Rhetoric +1 XP
Weapon: Longsword +3 XP
Meditation +3 XP
Endurance +1 XP


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Lore Earned
Longsword: Proper Stances And Grips
Longsword: Basic Techniques
Lucius and Miriam Antinous: Weaponmasters
Combat: Breathing Technique
Swordsmanship: The Burden Of Steel
Magic: Dangerous


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Notes :
Nice training thread, Marrick! Enjoy your grades!

And oh, one minor note, hours are called 'bells', minutes are 'chimes', and seconds are 'ticks' in Mizahar. :)


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