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This northernmost city is the home of Morwen, The Goddess of Winter, and her followers who dwell year round in a land of frozen wonder. [Lore]
Mino smiled and let out a small laugh before carefully wrapping her arms around Wind. "Thank you, Wind." She looked to Spirit, "He understands humans to the point of almost a second language. He's a smart guy."
"He must of been more of a roamer, not used to human customs. It's not that uncommon, I'd be the same way if I hadn't come here so young. It's confusing to us all these cultures, we try and fit in. It also could be what his animal form was... A house cat won't fight cuddles or dogs. But a predictor type animal might not take to hugs too easily. If he left, he left for a reason and not just some piddly little reason. He didn't want to hurt you with whatever was bothering you."
Mino gave Spirit a gleeful smile, "See, it that sort of thinking that keeps people like you and me going! We realize that standing around doing nothing will get us nowhere. Just like pulling a sled, life takes endurance. Except instead of running down an elk, we endure and in the end fine the greatest things in life."
She nodded enthusiastically, "We do have a plan! I see what I can find out about anything. See you then, yeah!" Mino got up and offered her good hand for a handshake. With a smile the Kelvic was gone out into the cold...naked. Mino would make her way to her room and fell asleep thinking of her new friend.
If there is rain tomorrow I wonder where you will take me. Surely if I'm with you That alone will make me happy.
Kelvics: Can communicate with same species Mino: Known for Indecency Mino: Value as a Dog Trainer Mino: Humans are Greedy Business: Start Small Business: Need Clients Business: Need Space Pneumonia: Rare for a Vantha Minosayaa: Second name given by first bondmate Emivl: Minos original name Mino: First bondmate perished from pneumonia
Mino :
Experience:
Running +1 Socialization +5 Hunting +1 Tactics +2
Lores:
Avanthalian Snare Appearance Spirits Business Dream Spirit: Dedicated to dogs Business: Start Small Business: Need Clients Business: Need Spacec Pneumonia: Rare for Vantha
Notes :
Mino, you used information you have no lores for several times in this thread including a city that breeds Kelvics and then kills them (though you gave a reason you knew it, which would normally trivial information fine, there is no way someone in Avanthal would know information from the other end of the world). You also have no lore supporting Avanthalian snare appearance, while it is usually fine to know a little bit more than your lores suggest if you have competent skill as a beginner skill but if there are poachers they would still be Vantha since there are no other humans around. Please keep this in mind in your future threads.
Also, there is an integral issue with your thread here. Kelvics can't actually SPEAK to their species. You can understand and use body language better than anyone else and communicate in that sense such as nudging them into position and encouraging them to do things once you have earned your place at the head of the pack with each group but you can't talk to them the way you have in this thread. Please keep this in mind in your further threads regarding this business.
On a more positive note you two are adorable together. I can't wait to see you two build a business. I loved seeing Spirits emotional childish side and Minos very business savvy approach. It was very adorable. I also really liked the exchange between you and Wind being treated as equal to your exchange with Spirit Mino, it really showed how you equally relate to dogs and humans. I look forward to reading more about this business.
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by Minosayaa on March 28th, 2014, 11:27 pm 
I look forward to reading more about this business.
