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[Antinous Training Grounds] A Lesson Learned...

Postby Joren on March 18th, 2014, 9:59 pm

6th of Spring
Antinous Training Grounds
8th Bell

With a loud smack Joren felt his entire arm shake to its very core, sending shot of pain pulsating up his left arm as he stumbled backwards, his balance slipping as the ground seemed to slide from underneath his feet as he felt his back crash against the ground with a particularly loud clatter, drawing the attention of many and onlooker as Joren felt his already hot face flush an almost deep red with embarrassment as he cursed in every Nari word he could recalled as he struggled to get back up from the dusty ground, his heavy armour doing its best to make as much noise as he could.

"Idiot" Ser Theron exclaimed as he yanked his squire back to his feet, shaking his head as he did so "Do you listen to a word I say? One, if they are putting a lot of weight behind the attack, don't try to block it directly, use their force against them and deflect the blow to knock them off balance. But more importantly, make sure your stance is correct. Pick up your shield and show me your stance now!" He barked as Joren rolled his eyes towards the heavens and let out a small groan.

He had reason to, or so he believed anyway; it was warm for a spring day, the bright sun could be seen hanging high ascent in the clear, sapphire sky with not a single blemish obscuring the rays as they shone on the training grounds, bearing down on the squires and knights that drilled in the yards, honing their skills for the inevitable conflict that would one day face. Joren had been here for over two bells now, clad like his patron in the heavy armour that the Knights seemed to love and Joren in equal hated, he preferred being unrestricted but despite his numerous complaints his patron insisted on making him wear it, under the firm belief that by adjusting Joren to being encumbered with plate armour, he would find anything else to be seamless and fluid.

Joren gripped the rough wooden that encased his training spear before trying to recall what the stance had been but his dehydrated brain struggled to put forward even a single useful suggestion, it seemed like so long ago and he was so very tired from this new found discipline that was expected of him. "I don't know..." He muttered as he place his feet shoulder width apart and raised both his shield and spear, angling the still dangerous wooden tip toward his patron "Something like this?" He asked hopefully but as he saw Theron shake his head and roll his own eyes to the heavens he knew he had done it wrong.
"Wrong! Do you listen to a word I say?" He asked, making it clear that he didn't want a snarky reply from his squire "Right foot backward and pointed outwards" He stated clearly as Joren brought his right foot back and twisted it slightly "And raise you shield higher and keep that bloody spear of yours level with the centre. Knee bent as well! Try not to make it too easy for them!" He ordered as Joren did his best to follow his instructions but he was tired and hot so mistakes were cropping up frequently enough to test his Patron's patience "By the gods, clearly you've gotten used to being beaten by me so perhaps someone else ought to knock some sense into you." He pondered, scratching his chin as looked around the yard "You! Over there, get over here. My squire needs a change of pace, so I want him to spar with someone else." He called out as a figure stepped over out of the corner of his eye, unsure if that was even the man Theron was talking to "Don't go easy on him, he's ready so just start when you are."

This is going to hurt...
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[Antinous Training Grounds] A Lesson Learned...

Postby Luther Stone on March 19th, 2014, 5:07 pm

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6th of Spring
Antinous Training Grounds
8th bell


Luther walked through the training grounds, the sun glaring into his eyes. The knight's helmet was tucked safely under his left arm after he declared to himself it was way too hot to be wearing a helmet off-duty. Luther worried about the moment he was called back from his bell off and back onto patrolling the area outside the wall, back in the damned helmet that would no doubt overheat and distract him from his duties. Oh the joys of being a knight.

The knight rested the palm of his right hand onto the hilt of his short sword since it was beginning to ache after being straight at his side for quite a time. The metal the hilt was made from was relatively warm after being left in the sun for a prolonged period. Luther felt the shield bounce up and down on his back, mildly annoying him but not enough to make him carry it. That would just add to his annoyance. But he couldn't complain since it provided an income and didn't let him starve.

He came across a knight and a squire sparing of to one side of the path which overlooked the entire city of Syliras. It looked beautiful down below the training grounds. A small crowd of four or five squires and knights had gathered to watch the two. It provided entertainment on the job when standing around looking tough but getting little to no action just wouldn't cut it, which was most of the time for Luther. The knight fighting the squire looked somewhat irritated before pointing out Luther and barking out an order at him.

"You! Over there, get over here. My squire needs a change of pace, so I want him to spar with someone else. Don't go easy on him, he's ready so just start when you are."

Luther stepped into the path of the squire, not really planning on defying a knight's orders. He pulled his helmet over his hair and onto his head, securing it in place. The knight then drew his short sword into his left hand and his shield into his right. Luther studied his opponent. The man didn't look very threatening, but looks could be deceiving. Luther had learnt that the hard way previously. He put the thought out of his mind and concentrated on the task at hand.

Suddenly, Luther raised up his shield and attempted to bring it down on the squire's spear before bringing back his sword and then trying to slam the hilt into the man's nose, which should have dazed him.

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[Antinous Training Grounds] A Lesson Learned...

Postby Joren on March 19th, 2014, 10:30 pm

Joren licked his dry, cracked lips as a bead of sweat ran down the side of his red face. Right now he would have sold everything he owned for a flagon of water, but considering he was dressed head to toe in borrowed armour that statement didn't really say a lot. A strong hand clasped his shoulder as his opponent slipped on his helmet before Joren could get a good look at him "He's using a short sword" Theron muttered to him, Joren was unsure why he was helping him like this, he had so far been content to let him fail but perhaps deep down even Joren acknowledged the fact his patron wanted him to succeed, even if a fistful of tough love was needed "Keep your distance, you have reach but he's going to use that against you and close the gap, keep that spear between you two" He advised before stepping back from him "The rest of you better start training or get back to work, this isn't your entertainment so get lost" He called out, waving them off as the small ground began to leave, if somewhat reluctantly, back to their business.

His opponent made the first move, stepping forward he tried to use his spear's length against Joren, slamming the shield down upon it but fortunately Joren managed to recoil back in the nick of time, the base of the shield only knocking against the tip of his spear with minimal effect but Joren failed to respond in time to his follow-up as the butt of the hilt smacked into his nose, sending a sickly stick warmth erupting from his nose as crimson blood leaked out from hit, unlike his sparring partner he had not bothered to put a helmet on, he found the armour restricting enough without dulling his sense but as the metallic taste of blood seeped into his mouth he was soon regretting it.

"That's it lad, keep pressing him" His patron said to his opponent, encouraging him to push Joren to his limits, not wanting his squire to relax for a moment. His vision blurred slightly from the blow as he took a couple of steps back, trying to place some distance between them as he tried to size up his opponent, his throbbing head struggling to make out the facts. He had a slight advantage with size, and was clearly more experienced with his weapon than Joren was but he still felt confident he could win. He raised his shield up, keep the slab of wood over his chest as he stepped forward, the guard waving as his muscle groaned for a rest but he tried his best to clench his teeth and dismiss the thought of surrendering, eager to prove his patron wrong. His thrust his spear forward, his aim shoddy and it's speed lacklustre as the wooden tip sliced through the air, hoping to strike the man's weapon arm, but with the amount of sway along the long weapon as Joren struggled to keep the weapon steady and balanced, it meant it had as much chance of missing him entirely as it did hitting.
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[Antinous Training Grounds] A Lesson Learned...

Postby Luther Stone on March 20th, 2014, 5:00 pm

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Luther smiled beneath the hot helmet as his hilt bashed into the squire's nose, causing it to bleed rather heavily. He was a bit surprised though when his opponent managed to dodge his previous attempt to ground his spear with his shield. But Luther supposed the man just got lucky, or his combat skills were rusty since it had been a while since he'd actually seen proper action that wasn't an immobile training dummy stuffed with hay.

"That's it lad, keep pressing him." The squire's patron knight said to Luther, which confused him a little bit, but still he carried on.

Suddenly, the squire lunged at Luther with his spear, aiming towards the knight's sword arm. Luckily though, Luther saw it in time, since the lunge was really quite shaky, and brought his shield across to block the attack. After knocking the spear away, Luther steadied himself before planning out his next attack on the shaky squire.

The knight swung his left fist at the man's cheekbone before bringing around his shield in an attempt to bounce it off his face immediately afterwards.

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[Antinous Training Grounds] A Lesson Learned...

Postby Xira Hezmek on April 10th, 2014, 6:54 pm

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Observation +2
Weapon: Shortsword +1
Weapon: Shield +2
Tactics +1
Unarmed combat +1


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