Completed Competency

Wrist newly healed, Adi sets out to prove herself a Kuvan.

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Built into the cliffs overlooking the Suvan Sea, Riverfall resides on the edge of grasslands of Cyphrus where the Bluevein River plunges off the plain and cascades down to the inland sea below. Home of the Akalak, Riverfall is a self-supporting city populated by devoted warriors. [Riverfall Codex]

Competency

Postby Adi Skyglow on April 5th, 2014, 2:41 am

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Should I eat or not before I take this test? I don't want to worry about getting sick, but then what if I'm hungry while I'm taking the test? If my stomach growls...uugh.

While the young Vantha argued with herself, she got dressed in her simple white linen outfi, including the white cloak that matched. She made a mental note to purchase more suitable clothing for life in Riverfall after passing her test today. She had time. Adi pulled her hair back in its customary braid then, tying it with a thin strip of leather. Also on the list went a hair ribbon more colorful than the leather was. After all, she was a woman. Finer things in life were practically made for her to wear.

In the end, Adi was too nervous to eat much of anything, though she did force down a couple swigs of water. Slinging her backpack-empty except for a heap of Mizas and her waterskin, of course-over her shoulder and revelling in how good it felt to use her right hand again, Adi set out for the Kendoka Sasaran. She was going to have to pop back into Alements sometime and buy a drink there. Caelum deserved the patronage.

As she walked outside, she stopped for a moment to give Myaris a brief pat. Soon, she'd need to figure out proper living arrangements for her poor horse. Myaris was her mother's horse who Adi had borrowed for her journey to Riverfall. The young woman scratched her white horse's muzzle and whispered a few words in Vani to Myaris. Being a horse, Myaris wouldn't understand what she said, but hearing something in the language she'd grown up around would hopefully have a soothing effect on the horse. "I'll take you home to Mother soon, Mya. I promise."

Releasing her horse somewhat reluctantly, Adi began the walk towards the Kendoka Sasaran, Riverfall's armed combat training facility and the building where she would take her Kuvan test.

The walk was a brisk one in Adi's perspective-she'd been lost in her thoughts, planning and worrying about what might happen during this test. She truly had no idea what to expect, having been unable to contact a Kuvan before taking her test. Adi did know that she'd get a tattoo on her wrist afterwards that would mark her permanently as a resident of Riverfall. It was an exciting prospect, she had to admit. Tattoos were something her parents frowned upon, though they'd never really forbidden her from getting one. Before she returned Myaris, Adi would get as many tattoos as she could sit through. All of them would have to be meaningful, of course. Her Kuvan tattoo, as a memento of Riverfall should she ever leave. Maybe others to memorialize the people she'd met.

It was a relief when she could swing open the door of the Kendoka Sasaran to enter. A welcoming cheer came from everyone around her and inside the building, despite the early hour. Training never stops, I guess, thought Adi. She grinned as she slipped inside the building, white cloak swirking behind her. Eyes of orange and pink showed her anxiety as she glanced around the training facility, stopping when they landed on a tall, bulky Akalak who she recognized as the Grand Master of the armed combat practice arena.
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Postby Adi Skyglow on April 5th, 2014, 6:33 pm

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The man who stood in front of her was not only almost two feet taller than her, he was scary in the same way cracked ice was when you had to walk across it over a deep pool of water. Unfortunately for Adi, he was the Grand Master at the Kendoka Sasaran, and an expert in the use of several weapons. He recognized her from her last trip to the training facility, where she'd used a dagger before she should have. Thankfully, her wrist was fully healed and pain-free today. There would be no healing gnosis needed today, she thought, a tiny smirk crossing her face.

Adi really should have thought before she smirked.

"Confident in yourself, Vantha?" queried the Grand Master with a bemused expression. Adi's eyes morphed rapidly-black to brown to blue to red-and it seemed like the constant color change would never end. It did as she opened her mouth, picking a bluish violet. "No, I'm sorry. Just thinking about a joke. Anyway, I'm here to take my Kuvan test, and I've got the necessary skill with a dagger to earn that status. My name's Adi Skyglow, by the way," Adi forced out with a brief chuckle. Hopefully she wasn't coming across as snooty about this...

He raised an eyebrow and looked Adi up and down, appraising her internally before making a decision. That was a long and awkward chime of the Vantha's life.

"Alright. Come with me. Mizra Aqdas is the name."

Adi took off hastily after the Akalak, who turned around and strode towards the back wall and the weapon racks that covered it. He stopped and waited for her in front of one that had only wooden daggers resting on it. Then, the Grand Master gestured towards the rack, inviting her to pick one up.

She chose a simple dagger and twirled it briefly in her hands. The weapon slipped and dropped to the floor. Adi flushed a bright red before leaning over to pick up the dropped blade, mumbling apologies. She usually wasn't that clumsy. Thankfully, she hadn't done something moronic like stab herself. That would've been bad. Just your nerves, Adi. Relax. It's a practice fight. What could go wrong?

She turned and removed her cloak and backpack, laying them on the floor next to the weapon rack. Then Adi took a deep breath, shook out her hands, and spun around to face Mizra, who stood opposite her in a ready stance, one dagger out. "Alright, Miss Vantha. We're not trying to kill each other here. If we were, you'd be a corpse right now. There'll be three rounds, five chimes each, with a break in between. I won't tell you how you've done until the end." Adi nodded in response. "You ready?"
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Postby Adi Skyglow on April 6th, 2014, 2:02 am

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Honestly, Adi was frightened. Frightened she wasn't going to pass, frightened she'd embarrass herself...whatever could go wrong most likely would go wrong.

Mizra led her to an area of the room where they had enough space to spar. The people in the Kendoka Sasaran were, for the most part, occupied with their personal combat training, though a few looked over at the pair as they took their places. As if sensing her nerves, a younger Akalak caught her eyes and flashed Adi a reassuring smile.

With that, Adi closed her eyes and cleared her throat before shaking her head momentarilly to clear her mind, which was racing. One last deep breath in through her nose and out through her mouth. It was just an exhibition of skills, she thought. Not a fight to the death. She resolved to take this test one round at a time, since there was no point in worrying about the step after the one currently in front of her. All Adi had to do was focus and show Mizra what she could do with a dagger.

Adi opened her eyes and grinned.

Mizra adopted a defensive stance almost immediately after Adi returned to the real world. Adi herself adjusted her grip on the wooden handle of the practice weapon-the Grand Master had one almost identical in his own hands. It would be up to her to set the pace for this round, she realized. A part of her was grateful.

She took a step forward, then another in quick succession to the first. Then she lunged for his torso, slicing her arm through the air to the right and silently marvelling at the wonderful job Caelum had done on her wrist a week ago. No pain! Mizra seemed to be a step ahead of her-no surprise there, he had a lot more skill than she did and plenty of experience against Kuvan wannabes-as he slid to the left of where she'd aimed. Damn. In response, Adi whirled around to face him again, dagger extended. To her surprise, she managed to whap his arm with the flat of her blade. An excited smile spread across her face, and the minor victory encouraged her to stop and turn around to walk back to the other side of the 'arena' they'd started in. She received another, less pleasant surprise in the form of a wooden blade at her neck.

"Don't let your guard down! Now escape."

Escaping would be easier said than done. He had a bulky blue arm around her torso, trapping both of her slender arms to her sides. His other hand held the wooden practice weapon to her neck, where it barely touched her skin.

Without any definitive ideas, Adi slammed her heel against the tall instructor's knee and ducked, falling to the ground. Mizra raised an eyebrow in surprise. Adi's own eyes were wide, and sweat had just begun to bead on her forehead. This was more fun than she'd expected it to be.

More people had turned their attention to the Kuvan test taking place in the Kendoka Sasaran along with the day's usual training. The Vantha glanced around briefly, then shook her heas and turned her attention back to Mizra, who was waiting for her to make her next move-whatever that would be. Inspiration struck her then. She took off towards the Akalak at a dead sprint-not a very fast one, since running had never been Adi's strong point-intending to stop once she'd passed him and attack. His counter was simple. All the instructor did was maintain eye contact with the Vantha, before sticking his foot out right in front of her as she went to run next to him.

Adi tripped and practically flew across the room, landing flat on her face on the hard floor of the practice arena.

To her credit, she sprung back up as soon as she'd moved around to make sure nothing was broken. Her bottom lip had split and was bleeding slightly, and she'd landed right on top of her borrowed wood dagger, but she was otherwise okay. Mizra hadn't expected her to get up after taking a fall like that, and was impressed when she did. "Need to cut this round short?" he asked, testing her. If she accepted the early break, it would be hard for her to impress him enough to earn a pass on her test. On the other hand, if she didn't...
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Postby Adi Skyglow on April 6th, 2014, 6:55 pm

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"No, I'm fine! I can finish this round." Adi replied quickly, eager to get back to the fight and prove herself worthy of this Kuvan tattoo and citizenship in Riverfall. Flecks of blood flew from her mouth as she spoke, landing (hopefully) on the floor and not on anyone.

Mizra shook his head slowly-with a slight smirk-as if he couldn't believe she was actually willing to get back up right after a fall like that. "Let's just call this round here. I don't want you bleeding all over my floor."

So Adi sighed and retreated to her backpack, dabbing her lip with the hem of her shirt sleeve to wipe off the excess blood before pressing the newly soiled sleeve to the corner of her mouth and applying pressure in hopes of stopping the bleeding. She sat against the wall and was perfectly content to watch those practicing in the Kendoka Sasaran hit each other with sticks and metal rods.

Taking a sip of water with one hand was, thankfully, nothing she hadn't had to get used to while her wrist was broken. This time, she used her right hand to pull her waterskin out from her backpack and lift it up to her mouth to drink...honestly more water than she was expecting to need. Huh. Guess I was a little too preoccupied to notice being thirsty.

One chime turned into two, which turned into three very quickly. After Adi guessed she'd been sitting three chimes-plenty of time for a break-she carefully peeled her sleeve away from her lip. It had thankfully stopped bleeding by this point. One more swig of water, then her waterskin went back into her backpack and she stood back up, practice wooden dagger in her hand. Adi was ready for Phase Two to begin.

She signaled to the Grand Master, indicating she was done with her break and was ready to continue taking her Kuvan test.

"This round, I want you to come up with ten different ways to kill me in five chimes. Half a chime for each method. I'll stand still here-"he paused then to indicate the ground at his feet"-and I won't move until your time's up. Alright?"

Adi had no complaints about this portion. It would be easier to focus on the task at hand when she didn't have to worry about blocking his blows. She offered him a nod, a small smile, and three steps back. Mizra closed his eyes and stood stock still opposite her, arms and legs spread out for stability and ease of access.

"Begin."

She started with the obvious-lunging for his heart and tapping her wooden weapon dead center on his chest. To no one's surprise, she landed the 'blow'. Her next move was to draw the blade across his neck, leaving no mark (since it was, after all, a wooden dagger) but imitating the way she would slit a throat.

Then Adi took a few steps back from the instructor, circling him like a vulture would its prey. The next method took a bit of thought to emerge, but its unexpectedness pleased her. She trailed the practice blade all the way down one arm, then the other. Had she used a real weapon and a little bit of force for that move, Mizra's arms would each have a long, wide cut that bled worse than a stab wound.

Oh! Combination wound!

Her next move was to circle around him again, and when she reached his opposite side Adi touched her dagger to his upper thigh with a bit of pressure before dragging it across his leg. The good old stab'n'drag, she thought. Was that even a thing? If not, it definitely was now. Then Adi touched the tip of her weapon to the back of the instructor's head, though she didn't push it. That was a classic brain puncture right there.

Halfway there, Adi. Just five more. You can do this!

Unfortunately, Adi was beginning to lose steam. On the brighter side, though, the first half had barely taken her two chimes. That was faster than the time he'd allotted her when she started.

Then an idea struck her.

The young Vantha dropped her dagger and placed a hand on each side of Mizra's head, gently twisting her hands in a much softer and less violent version of snapping his neck. After all, the instructor had never said she needed to use her weapon for every fake-kill. Then she strode back in front of him with a grin on her face and asked him to open his eyes.

When he did, he wasn't greeted with Adi's eyes meeting his own. Instead, what faced him was the back of Adi's neck, braid pulled out of the way. "If I was in Avanthal or on top of ice or near water, I'd use my Morwen-given gifts to freeze you into a solid block of ice, then I'd shatter you," Adi informed him nonchalantly. She turned to face him then, grin obvious as she opened her mouth to speak. "Eighth: Poison in your food or your drink for a no-mess kill. Ninth: Hanging. Y'know, rope around the neck and being dropped from a high platform?"

Her last method was delivered with a bright smile and ruby-colored eyes. "And last but not least...I'd wait until you fell asleep at night, laying next to your wife or your lover. Then I'd suffocate you. Hard on everyone that way."

As the words escaped her lips, Adi took a small bow and chuckled. She'd never do any of this, honestly. There were some nights when it was best to let one's creative side flow.
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Postby Adi Skyglow on April 16th, 2014, 6:25 pm

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It took Mizra a long moment to show a reaction to her last few killing methods, but when he did it was in the form of a surprised "well done" and a raised eyebrow.

Oops. Did NOT mean to freak him out.

"I never did say you had to use your weapon for them all. Good ingenuity," he added as he turned away to check on a group. "I'll be right back. Take a break."

Though she didn't think she needed it, Adi obliged and took a long drink of water from her waterskin. Somewhat cool and very refreshing water that had been sitting in the waterskin for a few days. Ah well. Water is water, she thought. What would it even take for water to go bad? Can it go bad? What am I even doing. I need to be concentrating on this, not on water.

When Mizra returned (to Adi's relief-she was starting to irritate herself), the young Vantha leapt up at the sight of him, taking the wooden training dagger with her. "What's the last round going to be?" she asked, stepping forward and following the Akalak as he led her back to the area they fought in earlier.

"Last round, I had you demonstrate ways to kill. You won't always need those skills-in fact, it's very rare you ever will. Now you're going to do the opposite." The Grand Master's reply confused Adi. What was the opposite of killing? Healing? This was a Kuvan test, not a day of prayer to Rak'keli. The woman raised an eyebrow and voiced her confusion to her trainer, who chuckled. "No, Adi. You need to protect yourself from me. I don't think you could handle all my strength, but at the end of the round you'll count your wounds. This is what will determine if you pass or fail."

It didn't occur to Adi to ask him what the threshold for failure was. Instead, she closed her eyes and took a deep breath, then paused for a moment before proceeding. Her feet planted on the ground, Adi crouched slightly, hoping to stay as low as possible. Hopefully if she kept close to the floor, she'd be able to roll or lunge away from anything he might try. Lunging and rolling and pouncing weren't her strong suits, but if it could keep her skin unmarred and her bones unbroken, it was worth a try. Anything was.

She raised an arm above her eyes, which had gone mostly brown and did not want to look around. Her right arm remained by her side, clutching the wooden hilt of the dagger like a life source. In some ways, it was.

This one goes out to anyone who can hear me. Please help me pass this test.

There was no response.

She took a final deep breath, then nodded to Mizra. "Alright. I'm ready."

He did nothing for a nerve-wracking moment, then grinned and pounced at her, his own blade extended. The weapon he held was wooden and very simple in design, like her own dagger was. What was the point in paying a great deal of money for a weapon which could break or snap easily, and wasn't meant to last at all? Mizra swung his arm out to the side, intent on catching her with his blade. Adi herself was unprepared for his first strike, and rolled out of the way a moment too late. The Akalak's dagger connected with her thigh, producing a sharp pang of pain in the woman's upper leg that would most likely result in a bruise tomorrow. She winced when the weapon hit her, but made no noise. Instead, she rolled as best as she could away from him and wound up a mere foot away from the wildly moving feet of another practicing. Adi panicked and forgot to move until the foot of the stranger was firmly planted on her hair. Then she sat up and gasped painfully when her hair didn't move with the rest of her body. The stranger moved almost immediately after, but didn't bother to ask if she was okay. Adi huffed at his inconsideration for her feelings.
Mizra, she noticed out of the corner of her eye, was advancing towards her slowly but surely. It gave her an idea. She stood up, back towards the Akalak, and looked around for him, pretending not to know he was behind her. Her eyes, beginning to streak through with pink from anticipation of her plan, flicked around in search of someone whose location she knew. Adi listened carefully for his step behind her, waiting until she either feet or imagined his breath hot on her neck. Then she dropped to the floor and rolled backwards with all her force, knocking him off balance. Surprised, he took a step back.

Adi sprang to her feet and decided it'd be a good idea to stop rolling around.

The Grand Master advanced towards her when she stood up, using his forward motion to help carry his blade towards her chest. Adi knew she wouldn't be able to move out of the way in time, and raised her arm and dagger in an attempt at defending herself. To her surprise, it worked, and she caught his weapon on the handle of her own. She used as much force as she could to push against the bulky Akalak, trying to force an opening. Adi succeeded in that regard and slashed at his torso, grazing his side with the wooden practice weapon. It wasn't sharp enough to cut him, but it would hopefully sting. She wasn't planning on being the only person to come out of this wounded.
Her feet carried her two steps to the right with haste. The young Vantha didn't have time for a victory smirk as he came right back at her, then faked a move towards her right. Adi dove to the left, where he caught her with a swift blow in the leg.

Flinching at the contact, Adi righted herself and thrust her own practice blade at his shoulder. Its wooden point made contact with Mizra’s flesh, producing a muffled thump sound.

Sweat had, at this point, begun to run down her face and drip into her eyes and mouth. The salty taste lingered after a flick of her tongue cleared the droplets off her upper lip. The young woman stepped quickly back and to the side, hoping and trying to steer clear of being cornered. Even though there was perhaps a chime or two left in the fight at most, having her back to a wall was not a situation Adi wanted to put herself in, lest it lead to Mizra cornering her and whaling on her. There wouldn’t be much opportunity to duck and roll in a tight space, and there would be even less of a chance to prove herself worthy of being a Kuvan, a citizen of Riverfall who would protect the city in times of need, if she was simple enough to allow her opponent to trap her like a scared animal.

Adi was not an animal.

With that thought, she slashed-once, twice, again-at Mizra, who was constantly in her field of vision so he himself wasn’t surprised by the Vantha. He parried her blows, which infuriated Adi once, twice, and a third time. She made as if to slash at him again, but changed course at the last second to jab him straight in the center of his chest. Had they been using real weapons, her instructor would almost certainly be dead.

Panting, she dropped her weapon and said so.
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Postby Adi Skyglow on April 19th, 2014, 11:39 pm

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After the words escaped her lips, she grinned and swiped an arm across her forehead, wiping as much sweat off her face as she could before it had the chance to drip into her eyes. Even though sweat and tears were both salty fluids produced by the body, it had always amused her that one stung like hell when it got in her eyes. Didn't make it hurt any less, but it was still mildly amusing.

She leaned over and picked up her waterskin, then took a deep, refreshing drink of water from it. Water was something she not only felt she'd earned, but needed from sweating like...well, sweating like an out-of-shape Vantha. Physical combat wasn't something she had to do every day and it wasn't the most fun. Adi resolved then to get into shape soon-what was the point of knowing how to use a dagger if you couldn't actually use it without sweat soaking the handle?

She continued to drink until her waterskin was emptied. Mizra chose that moment to return to where she was, with a perfectly flat expression on his face that gave away nothing. This was it. This was the moment when she would learn if the past half bell or so she'd spent at the Kendoka Sasaran had been for good and if she'd earned the status of a Kuvan, an official resident of the city of Riverfall. Though Kuvan status came with its own rights and responsibilities, it was also fairly prestigious in the city and came with a cool-looking tattoo on her wrist that her parents would most likely not have a problem with, since it was a rule of the city. Riverfall was quickly becoming her home, and she wanted to give back somehow. Not monetarily-she didn't have much to give-but through effort and hard work. Lately, she'd had a lot of free time.

Mizra cleared his throat, catching Adi's attention. The young Vantha looked up at him with wide-open eyes, brown streaked through with pink. His face was stony, his eyes unreadable. It scared her.

"I'm sorry, Adi. I hate to be the one to tell you that you've passed."

From the first few words, she just knew. Knew what he was going to say. Knew it was a no, she wouldn't pass her test. And then...Mizra said she passed, shocking and confusing her. She raised an eyebrow. "What did you say?" she asked, believing she'd heard him wrong.

In response, he grinned broadly and laughed deeply, bending over with an arm around his waist. "Got you!" he exclaimed between laughs.

Adi squeezed her eyes shut and opened them. "So I passed?" she clarified, fright showing slightly. Mizra couldn't reply, instead choosing to nod and extend her a hand with a signed slip of paper inside. She took the slip, hand shaking, and looked at it. It bore the seal of the Labor Aid office on it, as well as Mizra's signature. He smiled at her and patted her on the shoulder.

A wave of relief flooded over Adi.

She turned to walk out the door, still shaking slightly from the sheer force of nervous energy. As she turned away from Mizra, the Grand Master called to her.

"Make sure you pick up your dagger on the way out!"
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Postby Alyra on June 15th, 2014, 5:20 am

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Adi :
Skills
Acrobatics 1
Observation 4
Weapon: Dagger 3
Tactics 2

Lores
  • Training Never Stops in Riverfall
  • Thinking Before You Smile
  • Letting Your Creative Side Show
  • Grand Master Mizra Aqdas: an Intimidating Man

Penalties & Awards
  • Split lip- heals in 7 days
  • Bruise on upper leg- heals in 4 days
  • Dagger
  • Kuvan status papers
  • Kuvan status


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Great job! I loved reading Adi's quirky thoughts, she has an entertaining perspective on life. Congrats on Kuvan-ship!


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