[Note by Crosspatch] Saarine

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Saarine

Postby Saarine on April 7th, 2014, 12:14 am

Saarine


Appearance

Race: Human
Gender: Male
Age: 23 years
Birthday: 15 Fall 490
Birthplace: Syliras

Appearance: Saarine is a very handsome man with attractive features. His thick, wavy, brown hair is always kept cut at a medium length. He doesn't allow it much care, however, and only occasionally combs his fingers through it to get the knots out. Saarine stands at a tall height of 6'3", and being well-muscled grants him a heavy weight of approximately 200 pounds. His chocolate-brown eyes are large beneath his thick eyebrows. A trimmed beard and mustache also occupy his face, giving him a distinct appearance.

Character Concept

Contradictory to his nice appearance, Saarine is a bit of a loner. He prefers to be by himself or with his animals, and if he's out with a crowd of people he doesn't know, Saarine is never quite comfortable. Because of all the time he spends alone, he's taken up the skill of playing the lute and is decent at it. Although he's not particularly intelligent academically, he knows much of real-life situations and such and he is a quick thinker. Saarine can be, and usually is, distrustful of strangers. But at the same time he is very much of a pessimist, making him quick to doubt himself whenever around people he is not sure of and feels distrust for. The man is reckless and quite accident-prone, he finds himself in trouble more than he would care to admit. He naturally posesses the urge to want to travel and adventure into danger, but never near water. He has always had the fear of water, mainly large bodies of water, and refuses to even be close to one. Saarine is aggressive towards people whenever need be, yet when it comes to animals, especially his own, he never uses any kind of hostility. Besides when he is hunting. No matter what others may say to and of him, Saarine always tries to stay away from conflict and does the best he can to keep himself alive.

Dog- Senka, female, 5 years of age. Found her as a stray in the city. Hyper, alert, defensive, independent. Sometimes leaves for days at a time and mysteriously returns. Doesn't worry Saarine much anymore.

Secret :
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Character History

He was born into a human family that traded with the Drykas, and were close friends with them. His family traded dyed cloth and jewelry with them for several generations. Several days after Saarine turned sixteen, he left his family to go adventuring and to visit the city. He wandered around for a long time and when he arrived at the city, it felt too crowded and all the strange faces bothered him. This led Saarine to live on the outskirts of town a little into the wilderness with his two loyal companions - his dog and his horse.

Language

Fluent Language: Common
Basic Language: Pavi
Poor Language: Grassland Sign

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
RIding 15 RB15 Novice
Weapon: Shortbow 20SP 20 Novice
Play Musical Instrument (Flute) 15SP 15 Novice
Herbalism 15SP 15 Novice


Lores

Lore of Syliran Geography
Location Herbal Plants (Syliras)

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: Before Saarine left his home near the Clans, they gifted him a flute as a good luck charm and to remember them.

Housing

Location: Syliran Outskirts

House: 1 large tent (4 person), large tarp, 100 ft of rope, flint & steel, lantern, 2 torches, bedroll, blanket, fishing tackle & hooks, a compass, a riding horse, a full set of tack, and a large set of saddlebags.
Horse- Mariona, female, 6 years of age. Friendly, stubborn, loyal, intelligent.
Secret :
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Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM
Hatchet -6 SM 99 GM and 40 SM
Hammock -5 GM 94 GM and 40 SM
Shortbow -30 GM 64 GM and 40 SM
Shortbow Arrows (100) -5 GM 59 GM and 40 SM
Simple Instrument Case -4 GM 55 GM and 40 SM


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Last edited by Saarine on April 7th, 2014, 10:26 pm, edited 6 times in total.
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Saarine

Postby Crosspatch on April 7th, 2014, 7:35 pm

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Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

  • Please check your PCs year of birth. Also, if you wish for the date to remain the same, your PC would presently be 23 years old.
  • Please label your weapon skill as “Weapon: Weapon name.” For example to use a shortbow it would be labelled as “Weapon: shortbow“.
  • Your lore "Lore of Syliran Plants (Basic)" is too broad. A lore is some form of general knowledge that the character has gained over their lifetime. May I suggest something like "Location Poisonous Plants (Syliras)" or "Location Herbal Plants (Syliras)"?
  • You are missing a poor language option, are you sure you do not want this?
  • Please choose a cloak or coat. You cannot have both.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


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