Cain

[Cain Revare]

Cain Appearance Race: Human Gender: Male Age: 21 Birthday: Winter 497 AV - 32nd day Birthplace: Riverfall Appearance: Cain is 6 feet roughly, and has metal grey eyes. His hair is white. He is thing and built for quick movements mostly, rather than the strong, muscular knights that see in Syrilas. Character Concept A bit selfish, and prefers to do what he wants, rather than letting someone make the decisions. He is pretty relaxed most of the time, it seems, and he naturally fades into the background as he doesn't talk much. However, he does have a mind of his own, and can be quite manipulative. He is distrusting of others, but if you somehow talk to him for a long time, he'll get better and you'll start to see sarcasm rising, along with witty jokes. He prefers to do things quickly and get things over with, but for long plans he tends towards thinking. Cain can be rash and do things in the moment- he's that kind of guy, and though he seems serious, he enjoys fun. Mostly like running away from something, or him just running around, not being shut up in a box. His mind on the world is that a person would do whatever for their own better. He swears he won't hurt a child ( well, he tries ). Character History Cain relatively had a normal life, living in Riverfall. He did a lot of risky things as a child, running around in the woods one time with no weapons. His father taught him how to use a bastard sword, which he picked up easily. He got into magic, specifically Reimancy, and plans to get into it later. Language Fluent Language: Common Basic Language: Tukant Poor Language: Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Unarmed Fighting # 13 # 13 Novice Reimancy (Wind and Fire ) # 26 # 26 Competent Bastard Sword # 15, # 11 26 Competent Lores Helpful Lores: (Pick 2) Lore of Riverfall Layout How to knock people out quickly Possessions 1 Set of Clothing (Colorful) -Simple Shirt -Simple Pants -Simple Undergarments -Simple Cloak or Coat -Simple Boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Bone) -Brush (Bone) -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel 100 Gold Mizas Heirloom: Bastard sword Housing Location: Riverfall House: Kuahala Estates Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM Thread List Link your current & past threads here!

[Ragdoll]

Moderator Intervention

Hello Cain. I'm Ragdoll, current AS of Riverfall, and I've noticed a few issues with your CS that need to be fixed before you can start roleplaying in the city.

• If Cain was born in 497 AV, he would be 16, not 21. Please either change your year of birth or your age to reflect this.
• "He got into magic, specifically Reimancy..." One does not simply 'get into magic' on Mizahar. Reimancy initiation is a traumatic process that usually comes with a more significant story than 'he got into magic'. When, where, and why did he learn this skill? Who taught him?
• Are you sure you don't want a poor language?
• What you have listed as unarmed fighting is called unarmed combat on Mizahar.
• You need to clearly label how many points you are allotting to each skill and where these points are coming from. "# 15, # 11" is NOT a suitable way of tracking points. I'm assuming the 15 points are coming from your racial bonus, so those would need to be marked something like 15 RP. The 11 points need to be marked something like 11 SP. This way there's no confusion later on.
• Please give your posts a once-over before you post them. There are many minor grammatical issues that make your text hard to read.

PM Ragdoll when you've corrected the above issues and this intervention will be removed.