[Redd's Scrapbook] My Ramblings

by **Redd** on May 21st, 2014, 3:25 am

Welcome to my Scrapbook here at Mizahar!

Bio
Name: Jo or otherwise known as Zebra.
Date of Birth: 27th March
Status: In a Defacto Relationship
Location: Australia
Likes: Writing, Reading, Music, Horses, Gaming (PS3, Xbox, Nintendo and much more), TV Series, Anime, Manga, Cats, Dogs, Hiking, Magic The Gathering, Mizahar, Movies, My Friends.
Dislikes: Boredom (I must be kept busy at all times), Obnoxious drivers, Doctors, Needles, Department of Child Services, Trolls.

My PCs that You Are Allowed to Know About:
Redd, Black Onyx, Shalita Farlay, Lynx & Sherashadiss
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What to expect from me:
* Articles/Books/Movies/TV Series/Anime I find interesting
* Poetry
* Music
* Rambling
* Scholarly discussions
* Opinionated Topics
* Life Experiences and anything else I may think of along the line
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What I Expect from you:
* Got some Articles/Books/Movies/TV Series/Anime that you want to suggest? Be my guest, I'm open to new things.
* Want to share some music or poetry? Drop it here, I don't mind whatever it is, because I'll be sharing some of my favourites as well!
* Got a bizarre idea in mind that makes you laugh? I want to hear it no matter where you got it from.
* Got a layout that you think I might like, please share! I suck at coding!
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Now, the RULES!
While I'm not big on making rules, I only have one rule here in my scrapbook.
1. Have fun!

by **Redd** on May 21st, 2014, 3:44 am

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I started this scrapbook because more often than not, I receive little hints from graders and sometimes even moderators, that are important and because I have this thing called Fibromyalgia, (Well, that's the preliminary diagnoses, they are still in the process of giving me the full diagnoses), I often forget a bucket load of key details and events.

Another reason why I started this scrapbook, is because I wanted a small place that I can call my own little heaven where I can just be me. A little bit of my own personal Australia in a world full of different races and countries a-like.

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"Even when the rain falls,
You & I will stand tall."

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by **Redd** on May 21st, 2014, 4:45 am

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The song that is inspiring me to get up out of bed at the moment! =D

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"Even when the rain falls,
You & I will stand tall."

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by **Redd** on May 21st, 2014, 5:21 am

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Notes from graders so far
Location at present: Ravok

Abstract - Extracted from the thread 'New Meetings'

Notes

Redd, though I wont enforce it, I'd prefer it if you didn't center your posts... it makes them awkward to read. Just a note for next time.

But otherwise, I love your writing! You're beautifully descriptive

You do the Kelvic mentality well too...

Vayl, the ferries to the shore aren't boats... they're ferries. Small ferries. You'd probably put it off balance by standing in the bow, and the people would probably get grumpy if you didn't sit :| Though... I realize that it isn't specified in the lore... just for future note

Redd, also note that there are no demons in Mizahar... so she wouldn't have been called one when she was a child. Also... wolves aren't out only at full moons. That does have some truth to it, as it provides the best lighting, but they can be out any time, any day.

Vayl (Am I alternating here?), to have been able to catch those three rabbits, you would have needed more than WS... namely hunting and/or trapping... neither of which do you have as a skill. I gave you a point in trapping, but take note of this... he may have been able to try, but actually catching the rabbits? He'd probably miss them, as rabbits can be very fast. More likely, is that he would have missed a hole and they all went out that way... it would also take more than a bit of dirt to fill in a warren entrance as well.

Yes, I am alternating. Back to Redd. This had existed in the lore originally, but it has been changed since... Kelvics do not require energy to shift. They can do it as much as they want, with no negative side effects.

On a more positive note, that was a beautiful thread! It was interesting to see two very lonely people meet, understand, and eventually come together. I hope they'll be happy in Ravok, without TOO much misfortune... but in this city, sometimes that's too much to hope for XD

Nemesis - Extracted from the thread, 'A Position of Strength'

Notes

*Really, really nice thread, guys; I like it when I can actually see the action occurring, and this was very visual. Good job!
*I just want to emphasise the risk of infection... the mouth of a canine is filthy.
*Inoadar... I think I'm falling in love with your character. That's all.
*Redd, sometimes you mix up tenses, switching to present tense on occasion - just something little to watch out for. Also, it is a little annoying to read center-aligned text. I don't know how other graders/readers feel about it but it is my suggestion that, going forward, you left-align your prose.
*Also, I want to make the note that, for the most part, your kelvic personas are one person, Redd. With having had little contact with civilisation, you would be a little more feral, but your wolf form and your human form are not two different people. Kelvics are not "were-animals"; you do not lose control of yourself when you shift, as you suggested in the trees. Also, there is no "pull" to morph into the other form. Changing happens at will and cannot be forced or stopped, unless by drugs/collars/exhaustion etc. The Wildleash poison made it hard for transformation to occur, but when it wears of, that isn't Redd's wolf side pulling her back, that's just the regained ability to morph.

(While I do have notes that have been directed at other players, it's still food for thought, for me to keep in mind these things as well.)

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"Even when the rain falls,
You & I will stand tall."

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by **Redd** on May 23rd, 2014, 2:15 pm

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Yay! First solo/flashback done, getting the feedback on it made me super happy.
So, here are the notes Y'all have been waiting for.

Nemesis - Extracted from the thread, 'As the Snow Falls.'

Notes

*Lovely thread, Redd (that rhymes!)
*Good to see how she met the pack - would love to see some more interaction with them, maybe even see her more feral side, as she stays with them for longer periods of time.
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Nemesis, you'll be happy to know that I'm already planning on such a thread, a hunting thread actually.
AND, I don't want to give too much away, buuuut, I'm hoping to add just a tad bit of a blood thirsty rage. Bow-Chika-Wow-Wow!

I now leave you with my favourite fight scene from Red vs Blue.

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"Even when the rain falls,
You & I will stand tall."

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by **Redd** on June 3rd, 2014, 11:54 am

x Flashback Post Layout
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by **Redd** on June 3rd, 2014, 11:56 am

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Post Layout

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"I can't give you the sunset,
But I can give you the night."

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by **Redd** on June 7th, 2014, 2:35 am

Day of Season, Year AV

The amazing Boxcode that the amazing Alia Beaudouin made for me, without my knowledge. Also, thank you Gale, you sneaky bastard for fixing a tweak.