Ariea

[Ariea]

Ariea
Race: Kelvin
Birthday: 17 Fall 513
Age:8 months
Gender: Female
City: Syliras

Wolf Form:
Reddish brown "top" fading to a brown down the sides leading to a soft tan under belly. A "runt" by wolf standards, very sleek and short.
Human Form: Tousled auburn brown hair that settles just past shoulders. White tan skin on a slender small body. Looks around age 4 with the physical ability of around early age six. Small body often hidden under cloths that are much to big and face often smeared with mud. Large brown eyes, a larger than average nose, and pale pink lips with small teeth poking threw take up the majority of her face.

Personality - Extremely playful but lacks common since. Very social and loves to talk with people. A never ending ball of energy who gets herself into plenty of mischief. Very respectful of authority figurers and tends to be to trusting. Easily manipulated and very gullible.

Ethics - As strong of since as justice as one her age can have. The rest is still up in the air.

Likes - Fun, food, and friends.

Dislikes - Cruelty, fish, and extremely tall people.

Pre-Creation - Not a clue who her father is, mother raised her until she was 6 months and then made her run away when someone attacked her. Hasn't had a very hard time by her own thinking on her own, has learned to be fairly resourceful.

Post Creation:

Training & Skill Points

Starting Package (Initial Skills/Points)
Wilderness Survival: 15
Hunting:15
Brawling: 5
Sneek: 10
Hiding: 5


Earned Skill/Points

Equipment/Possessions:
Brown cloak
Baggy white blouse
Ragged Shorts
Water Skin
Back Pack
Comb
Bar of Soap
1 bag nuts
1 bag berrys
1 bag beef jerky
Eating knife
Flint and steel
Leather anklet from mother


Ledger
100 (start)
500 (no home)

Thread List

[Crosspatch]

Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

• Please link your CS to your profile. This can be done through the user control panel.
• Please check your spelling of various words throughout your CS (i.e. Kelvin should be Kelvic).
• Sneaking and Hiding are not valid skills and would come under the skill of 'stealth'.
• At creation you have 50 skill points (SP) from the starter package to spend on skills. As a Kelvic your RB is +10 in Hunting or Foraging or Unarmed combat. It is also required that you clearly state which skills are Starter Package (SP) skills and which are Racial Bonus (RB).
• Due to being Novice in Wilderness Survival can you please clearly state somewhere the one environment type your PC is familiar with? (Example types include: Desert, Forest, Hills, Marsh, Mountains, Plains, Sea or Underground).
• You appear to be missing your two starting lores. A lore is some form of general knowledge that the character has gained over their lifetime. Such as knowledge on a particular deity or knowing the layout of a particular city.
• Is the leather anklet your character's Heirloom? If so, please clearly state this.
• Even if your character has traded in their housing they must still state where they are currently living – be this in rented accommodation, a tent, and so on.
• You appear to be missing your languages. At creation you must take one fluent language, and if you wish to one basic and one poor language, are you sure you do not want this? However, as a race, Kelvics have a hard time learning more academic and scholarly subjects (languages included) difficult to learn - even more so before bonding. Please take this into consideration.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


Crosspatch