Solo Opportunity Knocks, pt. I

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A city floating in the center of a lake, Ravok is a place of dark beauty, romance and culture. Behind it all though is the presence of Rhysol, God of Evil and Betrayal. The city is controlled by The Black Sun, a religious organization devoted to Rhysol. [Lore]

Opportunity Knocks, pt. I

Postby Siobhan on September 3rd, 2014, 8:52 pm

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36 Fall, 514 AV
21st Bell
House of Immortal Pleasures

There were certain things one had to take onto account when surveying a potential client. There seemed to be a common misconception that whores didn't discriminate -- if you had the coin, they'd take you. That was true, to an extent, but no whore was fine and dandy with servicing just anyone. That was how bad things happened, as evidenced by one of the newer girls who'd contracted some kind of disease from a greasy little fellow just a few days ago.

Cleanliness had to be considered, of course, for personal safety reasons. Health, too, was tied to that, though physical fitness was less important than the overall absence of illness.

After that came wealth and social status, and a whore's preference on this was expressly tied to her motivations. A rich client -- perhaps a fellow from the Lark family -- was often more likely to leave an extra miza or two for those whose performance was particularly impressive. On the other hand, a non-citizen could be potentially easy prey for anyone looking to gain extra income through more nefarious means.

There were, obviously, a variety of other things that whores took into account, most of which would vary from one individual to the next, though these qualifiers are rarely held in high enough regard to really impact the person's work.

Siobhan, on her part, had few standards other than those already mentioned. There was a particular apathy with which she approached her work, and it allowed little room for discrimination. It also provided Siobhan with some sense of efficiency. There was a job to do, and she would do it. She would play the part she was expected to play, carry out the expected actions, and say the expected words. She would put on the performance, then she would collect the reward. That was all there was to it.

Of course, she was also required to make the paying customer forget that it was all a performance. Which, in this particular instance, was going to take a feat of theatric inspiration on her part.

The man Siobhan was with now was named Jeb. He might have been attractive if he were thirty years younger and about one hundred and fifty pounds lighter, but it wasn't his physical attractiveness (or lack thereof) that was making it difficult for Siobhan to concentrate on doing her job. It was the way he wheezed with each breath (and he was breathing hard), the way his sweat pooled at the crevices in his skin, and especially the way his fat rolls lolled in the way of the one thing that was her only real objective. Those factors called forth non-too-fond memories of the greased pig races they had hosted in Sunberth.

Such undesirable situations were nothing new, however, and it assuaged her to know that the fellow was wealthy. The pants he had been wearing were brocaded with gold thread, after all.

Now, said pants were discarded on the wooded floor beside the bed, along with an ensemble of the other articles of clothing one would expect to see. Out of the corner of her eye, Siobhan could just see that hint of gold thread beneath a pile of solid black, and she idly wondered if Jeb had actually thought he was being fashionable or if he was simply trying to show off his wealth in a truly gaudy way.
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Opportunity Knocks, pt. I

Postby Siobhan on September 3rd, 2014, 10:51 pm

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Siobhan's own chemise also lay abandoned on the floor, leaving the two with skin on skin, as is typical for a brothel.

The only light in the room was provided by the hearth, casting a shadow across everything save for the sheets, which were such a deep black in color that they could have been a shadow in and of themselves. A faint, repetitive thump emanated from the next room over, serving as a subtle reminder that they were not wholly alone.

This was Siobhan's stage, where she put on her winning performance and was rewarded with little more than a few mizas and, sometimes, a few compliments from men who thought they were being polite. Her brow furrowed, hands pushing at Jeb's abdomen to keep herself sitting upright. Lips were parted, jaw dropped slightly. As far as noises went, Siobhan preferred to stick to sighs and sharp breathing -- anything else sounded far too false to her own ears and would threaten to break her concentration.

Her back was arched, her chin was lifted, and her eyes were open only just enough to watch her shadow undulate on the wall on front of her. The shadow danced alone -- Jeb's was somewhere beneath it, but was blocked by the darkness of the sheets.

Siobhan had being going through the same motions for years now, convincing people that she was having a better time than she really was. The process was effective, honed, but held almost no meaning to her now, like a woodsman who has split logs so many times that the action becomes second nature. But unlike the woodsman, who might feel proud of his capabilities, she felt only numb.

She wrestled with the fellow's excess of skin. He was sweating far more profusely than was normal, making it difficult for her to get a real handle on his body. At least she was the one on top, because if their roles had been reversed, Siobhan would have had serious worries about him collapsing from the effort and crushing her beneath his girth.

Every now and again, his own grunts would penetrate the air, twice as loud as Siobhan's despite the fact that he was doing less than half the work.
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Opportunity Knocks, pt. I

Postby Siobhan on September 4th, 2014, 11:11 pm

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And so it went.

Neither of them spoke, obviously preoccupied with other things, and now was not the time for words. Bodies did the talking here, and Siobhan had to keep her from saying what she was really thinking. She was bored. She was annoyed. But mostly, she simply didn't care. The public's preoccupation with sex was quite a curious thing -- to her, there was nothing particularly interesting about it. There was nothing special about two people mashing bits. They spoke of the pleasure it brought, and though she had experienced the sensation before (she wouldn't have been able to simulate its symptoms so well if she hadn't), Siobhan couldn't quite grasp why some people were just so enamored by it. Not anymore, at least.

There was once a time where where she had understood, a time where her body wasn't nearly so dead to more carnal urges. But she supposed sex was like alcohol in that regular exposure upped one's tolerance. If she had been an alcoholic rather than a whore, by this point she would have died from overconsumption before she felt the buzz.

Jeb mostly kept his hands to himself, which was a small blessing, though slightly pathetic. Siobhan let her eyes wander down from the wall to his face, his own gaze trained intensely and slightly unnervingly at the place where their bodies converged, leaving her free to study him. He had that sort of sad look about him, the kind that would have invited pity if he hadn't also had the kind of face that invited antipathy. The chin was too weak (to the point where it was seemingly indistinguishable from the fat on his neck), the nose too small, and the eyes too droopy.

Idly, Siobhan wondered what kind of life he lead, what kind of life he would go home to when their time together was done and paid for. Trying to figure people out had come to be a kind of pastime for the woman, one of those things that still brought her joy because she did it entirely of her own volition. There was no outside force beckoning her to try and gleen information. She did it because she wanted to do it. It was a kind of game -- How much could she find out about a person based solely on what little interaction she had with them? How much of it was accurate?

He wasn't hurting for money, she already knew that much based off of the pants and the fact that he was obviously able to buy enough food to get fat on. If he had kids, they were likely old enough to be living on their own. Every now and again, she would catch a glimpse of a Chevas mark behind his left ear as it caught the firelight.

It occurred to her that Jeb was lonely. Of course he was. He was in a brothel, after all. But he seemed to be more lonely than the average brothel-goer. Siobhan would have bet money on the hunch that his children never visited. He was married, yet it wasn't his wife whose bed he was in this late at night -- the old lady had probably been freezing him out for some time now. For what reason, Siobhan wouldn't have been able to guess. However, judging by his hesitance to touch her in any way other than what was necessary and the way he kept his eyes averted from her face, he was feeling rather guilty.

Guilt. That was the one thing a whore couldn't afford to let her clients feel. She wasn't just a body cavity for rent, her job was to make people forget that they were unhappy. Her job was to make them forget that they couldn't get someone naked unless they paid for them. But no wonder he hadn't peaked yet, despite the fact that she'd been going at him for the better part of a bell. His head wasn't in the game.
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Opportunity Knocks, pt. I

Postby Siobhan on September 5th, 2014, 9:12 pm

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Siobhan could feel his enthusiasm waning in the most literal way.

No, no, no, this simply wouldn't do.

If she couldn't give him what he had paid for, it reflected poorly on her. It wouldn't matter that the fault didn't rest in any inability of her own -- dissatisfaction was dissatisfaction, and she could not afford to garner any kind of untoward reputation in a profession that relied so heavily on good word-of-mouth.

She needed to get him to let go of his emotional chains. She had to get him to forget about his wife. He knew what he was here for. He was here because he was selfish, because he had gone too long waiting in a cold bed for the missus to reignite what had been put out.

For a moment, Siobhan gazed upon him and felt bad for what she was going to have to do. Only good men thought about their wives when they were in bed with another woman. Only good men kept their conscience in a brothel. Jeb knew what he was getting himself into, he knew what he had been wanting when he had stepped foot into the House. And now there was a kind of hollow sadness in the whore's heart, because if the fellow found here what he had been looking for, it would destroy his faith in himself.

But integrity had fled her world ages ago, and Siobhan had more pressing matters to worry about than the morality of the situation. Certain things had to be done. She would use everything within her arsenal to ensure that he went home with a polluted conscience. She leaned forward.

Dark hair fell about her face as she pressed her chest into his, sliding deft hands up along his portly torso. One came to a stop at his collar, the other propped itself on the pillow behind him for support. In this position, Jeb had no choice but to look her in the face. Siobhan kept the look of gratification on her face, her breathing shallow, but her gaze focused.

Djed churned just beneath the surface of her being. She could feel it, a force both wild and tame. A small tug on mental strings, and it was hers to unleash as she would. Perhaps it wouldn't do what she intended, or perhaps it would. Such was the nature of most things -- either something would happen or it wouldn't. Siobhan, for her sake, needed something to happen, but nothing would happen if she didn't try. So she pushed, and pulled, and weaved her sphere of influence out, stretching it beyond her own being to envelop Jeb's.

All other motion stopped as Siobhan's hand grasped his chin (a somewhat difficult task, considering he had more than one) firmly. She brought her lips close to his but did not touch, while trying to ignore the smell of his breath lest her concentration break.

"Tell me what you want."

Her voice was low, soft, caught somewhere between a breath and a moan. His jaw slackened slightly in her hand, falling prey to both the tone and the compulsion. And still she continued. Your deepest lust, that single act for which you have always longed but never asked. That which no other lover has ever done for you, to you, with you. I have the means to achieve it. Tell me what you want.

It was a dangerous game she was playing. The House was equipped to provide both pleasure and pain, and to some the two were one in the same. After all, deep desires also tended to be dark desires. Jeb was silent for a long moment, seeming to have some internal struggle as his brow furrowed. His eyes glazed over for a tick before he wet his lips and spoke. His voice was thin and weak, but the words were spoken with a certain unmistakable conviction that caught even her off guard:

"Strangle me."
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Postby Siobhan on September 6th, 2014, 10:35 pm

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Though it wasn't quite what Siobhan had been expecting out of him (not that she really knew what it was she had been expecting), it wasn't a wholly unusual request. Similar things had been asked of her before, and now she happened to be fortunate that he'd requested to be on the receiving end rather than the giving end.

Still, her body recoiled a few inches as her face broke it's typical stoicism to raise an uncertain brow. Seeing this, Jeb continued in muttered words, his jaw still trapped in her grip. "They say it heightens the... uh, the pleasure and all." The silent conviction he'd had just ticks ago was fading, replaced with a certain sheepishness. "If you're deprived of air for long enough, you get some kind of high or euphoria. It's supposed to make the, ah, er, y'know..." He cleared his throat as he hesitated, breaking eye contact with her until he realized the only other place for him to look was her body.

"The climax," Siobhan provided smoothly. Jeb nodded, "Supposed to make it more intense."

As quickly as her composure had been lost, it was back once more. Any reservations she had would have to be pushed to the wayside, at least until she was done here. It wasn't her place to question other people's kinks, though she was curious as to what exactly made such acts so appealing. The rush they seemed to provide -- did it come from the danger of the position, or was there a more biological basis for it? Those drawn to more violent endeavors usually tended to be daredevils themselves, but Jeb didn't seem to fit that type.

Either way, he had told her what he wanted, and now Siobhan had to fulfill his wish. She leaned back into her sitting position, straddling, while her hands slowly snaked their way around his neck, her fingers just barely long enough to encircle the entirety of it. For a moment she mused on whether or not she'd be able to garner enough pressure to make any impact through his excess of flesh. She might have to put her whole body into the effort, there'd be no relying on arm strength alone.

"Just let me know when to stop," she breathed, her voice kept controlled despite the peculiarity of the situation at hand.

He nodded.

"Ready?"

Another nod.

And then she began. Slowly at first, it didn't serve well to rush these things, but with every motion of her body against his the pressure she put on his throat was increased. With every breath she drew, she constricted his. Their eyes remained locked until Jeb's floated closed in pleasure, his back arching as far as his burdened body would allow. He was sweating again, more heavily now, his lips parted in muted sounds of pleasure as the chimes wore on.

Siobhan noticed none of it. Her entire consciousness was focused on one task. Her shoulder muscles strained, but she pushed on. Even her feigned gasps and groans had now fallen silent, forgotten, as some new intention wormed its way into her brain. The world went red for a fraction of a tick, a stinging wetness forming in her eyes, but she couldn't wipe it away without lifting her hands from Jeb's throat. And she wasn't about to do that, was she?

A single drop of blood fell from her eyes, kissing Jeb's chest where it crash landed. He didn't notice, too enraptured in his own world of bliss. Siobhan watched the red spot with a kind of cool regard before she was distracted. An echo of her own voice started, only a quiet whispering to begin with, then growing louder until it was effectively all she could hear.

Single act... always longed... for.
No other... has... the means to achieve it.
Never asked... never... done for you.


Jeb's hand tapped weakly at her forearm. He was done. She was not. Her hands remained firm.

Deepest... act... ever done.
You... you... you... have the means.


The tapping began more urgent, frantic, panicked until Jeb was practically slamming his fists into her sides.

What you want.

Finally, Jeb gave one frenzied shove, backed with all the fear of imminent demise. Siobhan fell from him, a broken an unintelligible shout rising from her throat. There was a spike of rage in that moment, an acute hatred as if thirteen years of resentment had converged and been unleashed within the span of a tick before her body hit the floor.

She layed there for a moment, on her back, suddenly drained. She had lost it. Her composure, her sanity, the thing she thought she had the tightest rein on. There was a ringing noise in her ears which faded after a moment, only to be replaced by noises of distress from the bed. Gagging, coughing, sputtering, wheezing. As mobility slowly seeped back into her limbs, Siobhan latched on to the edge of the mattress and pulled herself to her knees.

Jeb remained sprawled in the position she had left him in, his eyes bloodshot and wide. He glared at her as she rose, jaw working as if to say something, but he could form no words. A look of intense pain had marred his features. Meaty fingers clawed at his chest and his throat as if he couldn't decide where the most pain was coming from.

Siobhan sat frozen, either from shock or the sense that there was nothing she could do to stop what was going to happen. Jeb simply stopped. There was one final, strained exhale and then the room fell silent once more.

Dead silent. He was dead.

[Continued in part II.]
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Opportunity Knocks, pt. I

Postby Daegron on September 19th, 2014, 3:33 pm

The Future belongs to the Brave!



Siobhan :
Skills
  • Seduction +1
  • Intelligence +1
  • Observation +2
  • Acting +2
  • Hypnotism +2

Lores
  • Feigning pleasure
  • The importance of offering satisfaction
  • Hypnotism : Learning one's deepest lust
  • Overgiving : Domination and loss of control
  • Jeb : A fetish that led to his demise

Loot/Expenses:
  • N/A
Injuries/Other:
  • Overgiving: a mild headache that will last a few bells.



Notes and Comments :
  • This was an impressively unexpected twist.
  • Your descriptions are very accurate and considering the theme, rather tasteful.
  • Your overgiving was portrayed very well !
  • Overall, an exciting read ! well done ! Can't wait to see what you do with the body.



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It will break you and tear you asunder; from your scattered remains it will shape you.
It will engulf you and spit you out.
It will fester in your mind, disfigure your body and blacken your soul.
And so on and so forth, through an endless chain of transformations till the time comes and you are everything...
Then you'll truly be nothing...

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