Jasper Bonvalet - Character Sheet

[Jasper Bonvalet]

Jasper Bonvalet Appearance Race: Human Gender: Female Age: 18 Birthday: Friday, Winter Birthplace: The Colbat Mountains in Sylria Appearance: Soft tan skin, Thick Curly Brown hair Character Concept Character History Jasper was born in Sylira in the thickest part of the Colbat mountains. Her mother was seamstress and her father was a craftsman of swords and other trade tools. In the early day of her youth, Jasper and her brothers (Michael and Caspin) clung to their father fore they found combat more interesting than mending garments in the basement of their home. Jasper in particular took a deep interest in the art and never shyed away from challenging her brothers to a quick round of sparing. When Jasper was thirteen ( and her brother 8 and 16) her father fell ill with a violent fever and since her family could not afford the aid of a doctor he passed away shortly after contracting the illness. With her father gone Jasper retreated to helping her mother tend to the family shop. Language Fluent Language: English Basic Language: Arabic Poor Language: Spanish Housing Location: Sylria House: Jasper lives in a small tri roomed home in the colbat moutains. The lower level of her home is the location of her mother's store where she works as a garment mender and a cook. Her immediate family (those that live with her) consists of: Her mother, her younger brother Michael, and her older brother Caspin. Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM Thread List NONE YET

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