[Issues found by Ragdoll] Zarkaia

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Zarkaia

Postby Zarkaia on September 27th, 2014, 10:28 pm

Character Name


Appearance

Race: What's your race? Pyco
Gender: Gender here. Male
Age: How old are you? AV670 (14 years old)
Birthday: Day, Season, Year. Eleventh winter
Birthplace: Where were you born? Hai

Appearance: What do you look like? Zarkaia is a small like usually greyish brown like doll looking figure he has what looks like detailed and withered robes scratched and carved onto his body he had no hair like carving because it is covered by a hood like shaped he is quite cracked from many rough and tumbles

Character Concept

Let's talk about you some more. He has a calm relaxed personality that can completely change in seconds causing him to be wild and unpredictable until something scares him he never goes out far because he wants to keep his head and enjoy a life until he find a group to adventure with

Character History

Tell me all about your past, baby. He was born a short way away from the city of Hai like most pyco he developed pretty fast and was left to fend for himself 1month after his birth he was lost felt as if there were no place to go but when he found Hai it was like a paradise until of course he was stuck in a less than likeable postition being tiny and small but one day when he snuck into a house a human noticed him and ended up liking him he gave him food a nice hole in his wall near where the human slept all was fine until he moved out after being robbed and nearly murdered Zarkaia had left this town after the event heading to his now current home Riverfall but now wishes to seek forth and find new journeys and people to meet

Language

Fluent Language: Most fluent language here. Common
Basic Language: Fill me in, if you want.
Poor Language: Fill me in, if you want.

Skills

Skill EXP Total Proficiency
Skill 1 theft10 Novice
Skill 2 alchemy 10 Novice
Skill 3 negation 30 Competent


Lores

Please choose two specific pieces of knowledge (lores). Valterrain and Robert pyco

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak or Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Wood)
-Brush (Wood)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas

Heirloom: small gemsotne braclet Fill me in, please! ([b]HELPFUL HINT, Please Remove - Max. 50gm worth)

Housing

Location: Where in Mizahar are you living? Riverfall

House: What does your home look like? A small hole in a walls dented dark with a tiny oil lamp dirty at most

([b]HELPFUL HINT, Please Remove - Please choose either a housing package or a tent package.) tent package

Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM


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Zarkaia

Postby Ragdoll on September 29th, 2014, 4:37 pm

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Hi there! I'm Ragdoll, the fluffy AS of Riverfall, and I've noticed some issues with your CS that need to be fixed before you can continue roleplaying.

Due to the numerous issues in your CS, I'm going to start by linking you to several pages in the lore that I feel would be prudent for you to read. The Starting Guide, the Pycon lore page, and the Skill list would all be helpful to you. I highly recommend you take a long, hard look at the lore and re-consider your character concept.

Some issues include (but aren't limited to):
  • 670 AV hasn't happened yet. There's no time travelling in Mizahar.
  • No 'theft' skill exists. Or 'negation'.
  • Living Pycons don't get cracked-they're made of soft clay, not solid clay.

PM Ragdoll when you've corrected the above issues and this intervention will be removed.
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