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Considered one of the most mysterious cities in Mizahar, Alvadas is called The City of Illusions. It is the home of Ionu and the notorious Inverted. This city sits on one of the main crossroads through The Region of Kalea.

[House of Broken Mirrors] Do Not Enter. (Naia)

Postby Fable on December 24th, 2015, 4:59 am

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A I S L Y N . L E A V O L D

a d r o i t . a c c r e t i o n s
    ❁ logic 1
    ❁ observation 5
    ❁ investigation 3
    ❁ endurance 3
    ❁ unarmed combat 1
    ❁ tactics 4
    ❁ philosophy 2
    ❁ writing 1
    ❁ intelligence 1
    ❁ socialization 3
    ❁ rhetoric 1
    ❁ brawling 1
    ❁ storytelling 1
    ❁ teaching 1
    ❁ leadership 1

e s p i e d . e r u d i t i o n
    ❁ brawling: glass shiv
    ❁ brawling: glass will shatter
    ❁ alvadas location: the house of broken mirrors
    ❁ most gods bestow marks
    ❁ naia: laviku marked svefra

r e c o m p e n s e . a n d . r e t r i b u t i o n
    ❃ minor cuts focused on aislyn's left arm resulting in thin scars

d e t e r m i n a t i v e . d i c t a
Oh the places you'll go! I certainly found a couple interesting things in this thread for the near future. Very nicely done! You set the atmosphere well and kept the haunting feeling of the house until the very end. Good work!


N A I A . W H I T E W A T E R

a d r o i t . a c c r e t i o n s
    ❁ rhetoric 2
    ❁ observation 5
    ❁ logic 1
    ❁ investigation 4
    ❁ meditation 1
    ❁ unarmed combat 2
    ❁ endurance 3
    ❁ intelligence 1
    ❁ tactics 2
    ❁ brawling 1
    ❁ acrobatics 1
    ❁ socialization 4
    ❁ land navigation 1
    ❁ leadership 1

e s p i e d . e r u d i t i o n
    ❁ alvadas: the nature of illusions
    ❁ maya: svefra-esque alvad
    ❁ alvadas location: the house of broken mirrors

r e c o m p e n s e . a n d . r e t r i b u t i o n
    ❃ small cuts over her face and arms, thin scars if not treated - no scars on her face if treated
    ❃ whichever shirt was worn during the thread is now filled with holes, can be salvaged by paying for a stitch-fix (5 SM)

d e t e r m i n a t i v e . d i c t a
Very nice! On the second to last of your posts on the first page, I wasn't quite sure what Naia was doing with the shards; other than that, however, it was very well written! I enjoyed the manner in which you tied in Naia's past and current insecurities with her introduction to the city as a shadow of the one she left. It was both effective and informative! Keep up the good work!
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