Caell

[Caell]

Caell Appearance Race: Kelvic Gender: Male Age: 2 and a half or so, about 16 human years Birthday: 22nd of spring, 512 AV Birthplace: in the back of a wagon, somewhere along the Kabrin road between Cythrus and Syliras Appearance: in all truth, despite the obvious lack of four paws and a tail, Caell’s canine form and human form are, really, not all to different. Both hold the same mottled hair, curios blue eyes and timid demeanor which sends him skittering at the slightest sound, a fact which, had he not been Kelvic born might have been seemed as something as an oddity, yet given the rest of his kind… Well, even so, suffice it to say Caell is by no means human; boy being just as much dog as he is young man, perhaps even twice as rambunctious given the proper encouragement. So how do you describe him? His freckled cheeks? Stammered words? Scrawny form? Or even the speckled black-grey hair, matted and un kept with a blatant lack of proper grooming. But to describe one by their physical attributes is to speak of paper on which is drawn a masterpiece. No, to really know someone’s heart you have to recognize the twisting corners of their mind, his fears of darkness, blood, large bodies of water, certain varieties of cats… still, of the young kelvic’s loves, of his hopes, of his dreams… Character Concept Caell is a curios, yet hesitant, enthusiastic, yet nervous, boyish, yet timid. His life has been wrenched away, brought to the looming city of Sunberth like an animal to the slaughter, yet a fierce spirit of loyalty still burns within this young Kelvic, eyes alight with that dancing flame and step alive with its hope. But yet… hope can only go so far. Character History where does my story truly begin? Now that is question writers, historians and your average overly narcissistic nobleman having been pondering for generations. Personally I would like to form for myself a fourth category, well… me. You see, in all truth my story would actually begin in ancient times, a land of science and magic where my people, the kelvics, were first forged like swords to an anvil. Unfortunately though, to tell a tail… er- tale, on that magnitude, while it would be a mighty account indeed, it would require far longer than my short life span allots. Besides, I know not of every clash between armies and battles among kings in ages past, it is doubtful that anyone still alive today could grant such a request, but I digress. No, instead let us move forward, through the shifting sands of time, long after the first stone was set upon Syliras and the Kabrin road was wrought across the wilderness. Perhaps my great grandfather? Or his daughter? Or hers? A lineage that is neither royal nor impressive, yet humbling like no amount of crests could grant. Still, it seems this story would draw far too long, so let us once more journey to the beginnings of my caravan within Cythrus, “the sea of grass,” where the wind runs free and every breath could leave you skewered in the gut by a glass beak. Or rather, let us draw even closer? To my mother’s journeys? Her adventures? Her marriage? Perhaps let us tighten the noose, per se? My birth upon the woman’s death? My poverty stricken yet joyous childhood which to this day I am grateful? Or even the night slavers took it all away? The night they locked us in chains and tore it all asunder, separated us, as though someone had taken a knife and cut apart my very world. No, for now I am sure, let every story begin with an ending and I must say, the honest ending came that morn in Sunberth, the early light caressing the city’s rooftops gentler then a lover’s kiss. Yes, it is here my story truly begins… Language Fluent Languages: modern common and canine Skills   Skills Image Skill EXP Total Proficiency Observation # SP 25 # 25 Competent Wilderness Survival # SP 10 # 10 Novice Hunting # RB 10 # 10 Novice Running # SP 15 # 15 Novice Lores -General layout of the sylaris region -a loose understanding of the Tabrin Possessions   General Property nothing   Clothing -a threadbare Shirt -torn Pants -Simple Undergarments -worn Boots   Heirloom (this is not actually a heirloom, just simply something my char happens to have upon his entry to mizhar) Leather Kelvic collar: coarse and uncomfortable, besides a sturdy iron lock, this noose is little more than a glorified belt strap… none the less, it serves its purpose. Relationships   Friends -   Acquaintances -   Enemys - Housing Location: currently, no where House: none Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting 0 GM 0 GM Thread List

[Crosspatch]

Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

• Please check the spelling of various Mizahar place names - i.e. the regions Cyphrus and Sylira (Syliras is the city).
• As a note, Novice skills are 1 to 25, Competent skills are 26 to 50.
• Observation is a very easy skill to gain points in during writing - are you sure you want to put points into it at creation?
• Due to being Novice in Wilderness Survival can you please clearly state somewhere the one environment type your PC is familiar with? (Example types include: Desert, Forest, Hills, Marsh, Mountains, Plains, Sea or Underground).
• What do you mean by a "General layout of the sylaris region" or "a loose understanding of the Tabrin" (did you mean Kabrin?) - please explain what you mean, else they may come across as too broad. A lore is some form of general knowledge that the character has gained over their lifetime. Such as knowledge on a particular deity or knowing the layout of a particular city.
• Even if your character has surrendered their housing and is presently a slave they must still state where they are currently living – even if this is temporary. Upon consulting the local STs of Sunberth, I have been informed that suitable temporary "housing" for a Slave PC is the Slaver's Row, before they are sold on.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


Crosspatch