Closed Overcrowding (Balian)

Balian and Arch are sent out on a patrol, scouting the edges of Syliras territory for potential dangers hidden in the Winter snow.

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Overcrowding (Balian)

Postby Archailist on December 12th, 2014, 5:53 pm

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8th of Winter, 514.

It was a daunting moment, to say the least. Not only were the Knights being massed, but the Sergeant Knights in an attempt to cope with the new regimes being set in place for the duration of the season. The whole city was feeling the pinch of the cold, and with tensions mounting inside the walls, more pressure was being shoveled onto the knights to maintain order among around 50,000 civilians. Tall order indeed, it was only a small wonder that the Tank hadn't been filled with potential criminals. He said potential because there really wasn't time to check for most of them. Too much manpower, too much time, too much energy. Outside the walls, patrols had lacked, and now they needed to try and switch the regime yet again and restore their control of the surrounding Bronze Woods and Kabrin Road. As much as he knew, there were plenty of squires being sent into work on the patrols and maintenance around the city as the 'reserves' for nearly everything.

Ser Iros had volunteered the squirrel for almost every patrol and piece of volunteering that he could get his colossal crimson hands on, and Archailist was really beginning to feel the effects kicking in. He'd started riding with whatever shoulders he could manage just to avoid the dread of trying to walk on foot around the city, and what little time he found for his little canine companion was not spent riding him - the snow and the effort was just not worth it, when he could hitch a piggyback with any number of other squires or knights on the backs of their horses. Perhaps acting as a stowaway wasn't the most knightly thing to be doing, but by Sylir, he just wanted the season to end and be done with - the sooner the better. Whatever he needed to do to make it a little more bearable, he'd do without a tick of hesitation.

At least this time, the red knight had been forced along with the squirrel into a patrol. Rather hilarious, especially when he saw the certain Sergeant Knight that'd be leading them. None other than Zulkar, the 'Red Rider' himself. Usually, as he understood it, Sergeants were responsible for up to five knights, a 'wing', but he could see plenty more than five of them milling about for their odd little patrol. Already, smaller groups were being sent on their way by the bellowing knight on the back of his warhorse. "You, Percival, you'll be riding down towards the south of the Kabrin Road, before heading towards the gap moving east. Take all your boys with you, and Mona will be joining you with a couple of hers. The rest of you squires, join up over there in the corner."

It seemed like it was going to be a busy day, indeed. Especially when Ser Iros was called out barely the moment that they'd entered the little crowding just to the side of the main gates. "Here, Ser Iros. I'll hope you won't mind getting a few extra squires with you today? Seems I've got a few left over from the other patrols." True enough, that some knights did end up taking a few more squires than others, and the patrols really needed to be spread out evenly to cover the most ground. By just a glance, it looked as though there were a fair few extra squires milling about though. A little handful at least, four or five. One knight alone, with six squires? Arch was about to voice a protest himself, when the larger Akalak cut in.

"Afraid I couldn't possibly take that many by myself, Ser." Perhaps one or two extra, but that was still pushing it a little far. Ser Zulkar seemed to mill over this for a few more moments, considering the options left open. Evidently, even the Sergeant had been struggling over the day, and the squirrel honestly couldn't blame him - it was always these days that just made the squirrel want to go back to bed, and by the looks of the faces of the fellow pages, and squires, and knights, and sergeants... they all felt exactly the same way.

"Tell you what. I'll find another knight to team you up with, together you can take an extra few squires and split them how you please." There wasn't really much room in his speech for an agreement or protest; his mind was made up on the matter and that was that. Still, Ser Iros nodded and the Inarta returned it swiftly before turning his attentions back to the rest of the groups, pointing off various knights in various directions with little room between orders for even a breath. Ser Iros just moved off to the far side, near the other squires, and remained quiet. Arch scanned over the squires and knights as they were ordered out towards different landmarks - some in groups of three or four, others by themselves. Let this day be over with already. Let it be done..
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Overcrowding (Balian)

Postby Balian Martell on January 10th, 2015, 2:32 am

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Shyte. Shyte, Shyte Shyte. He had over slept. On one of the first assignments that Ser Uldrin had assigned him since being consigned to him, he had to be late. In all honesty if wasn’t for his roommate, Wynn, he might still be asleep. Blast that Wynn. It was his fault he had overslept to begin with. He and his friends had convinced Balian to stay up last night playing some games, later than he would have liked. As a result, he was now struggling to put on his greaves already thirty chimes late. Luckily, it was not long after that Balian was half skipping half running down the steps from the squire dormitories to meet Ser Uldrin at the bottom; his sword bouncing along his hip along the way. Finally he made it.

Ser Borr Uldrin was a large man. Not the body builder type that seemed to be popular with the men of the order, but not over weight either. With his barrel chest, thick arms, and full plated beard, he struck an imposing figure. It was no wonder his nickname amongst some in the order was “The Bear”. The great axe hanging from his back only added to the visage. Yet when Balian finally arrived to the bottom of the stairs, Ser Uldrin had a large grin on his face, and the beginning of a chuckle rolling off his throat. Yer awake yet?” he growled cheerfully. Balian merely stood at attention and adjusted his thin cloak, which covered his light armour. Ser Uldric gave him a once over. “Yer goin te get cold with tha’, Don’t you have some’en warmer?” “No Ser” Balian replied. “I’ve been meaning to’get something thicker.” Uldrin only shrugged. "It’lle have to to do then. C’mon, we’r late as it is, no sense t’keep em waiten longer.” And with that the large man turned and strode out of towards the meeting area, making Balian have to almost jog to keep up with him.


It was still morning, yet the corridors were bustling with people, so much so that Balian began to find himself feeling claustrophobic. This was his least favorite part of the city…all the people. It was just so crowded…people ontop of people. The recent attack didn’t help one bit either. Now ontop of meat grinder that was the city, a certain tension had filled the air. Balian caught up to Ser Uldrin, and in an attempt to distract himself from his uneasiness began asking him questions regarding their task.

“Ser Uldrin, what are we t’do today?” Uldrin barely looked down as he navigated his way throught the congested hallways of the city. “For t’last time boy, call me Borr.” He rumbled “And, we’r t’help with patrolling the outside of the city.” Balian was instantly relieved. He had been assigned some minor duties within the citadel itself and he found those jobs excruciating. Nothing but stale air and the shuffling of bodies, not unlike a slaughterhouse he thought not for the first time. A patrol outside the walls was exactly what appealed to Balian. And so by the time they arrived at what was the mashelling yard, there was a light spring in his step.

Being winter, the first thing that Balian noticed was the cold. Snow, a few days old layered the ground and the air had a particularly cold snap to it, but luckily Syna shone brightly in the clear sky, so warmth reached the city. Balian had dressed as he usually does. Wearing his burgundy tunic underneath is chainmail, with his doublet over that; brown pants, leather boots and leather gloves, the only thing keeping Balian from the cold was his simple cloak, which as Ser Uldrin had mentioned earlier, seemed a tad light for the weather. Balian would have to just accept being cold. Ser Uldrin looked completely unaffected in his plate armor and fur lined cloak.

The second thing that Balian noticed was the activity. Knights milled about the courtyard, and even more squires around them. It seemed that the patrols had already began and the bustle of activity was the organization of groups, with one lone Knight trying to direct it all. A Sargent, by the looks of it, thought Balian. The thought had no sooner crossed his mind when the man in question, with hair made of fire waved them over.

“Ah! Ser Uldrin! You finally made it I see. This your Squire?” He asked, knotting towards Balian. The young squire immediately felt a large force hit him on his back, taking him by surprise and forcing him to take a step forward. Once the force of what passed as a pat from the back from Ser Uldrin receded he could hear laughter coming from the knight. “Aye! The lad is my charge. Had a bit’o trouble waking up yer see, but now were here.” Balians cheeks flushed as his fault was declared. “No matter” the knight in charge continued. “You’ll go with Ser Iros and his squire on patrol today. Hes over there.” the red headed Knight pointed “Group up and get ready to receive orders.” There was no questioning him. The second he finished his phase he had already turned and was barking new orders to another group, leaving the two to do what they were told. “Lets go Lad, waste time now is there?”
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Postby Archailist on January 10th, 2015, 7:18 pm

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Being stapled with an assortment of unknown other squires was annoying enough for Iros. He wasn't one of those knights that valued his time spent around the younger knights-in-training and really liked to teach them. On top of that, he had to work with another knight that hadn't even arrived yet. All the others were already moving elsewhere, being given their orders and sent off to their patrols. Meanwhile, he was left behind with a small army of squires at his heels and nothing better to do with his time than stand about, looking like an idiot in the street. Needless to say that when his fellow knight arrived, Iros was only pleased to see him because it meant that he could get moving. As for introductions, he nodded with a grunt to Uldrin and his squire before turning and pushing the horse between his legs into a trot.

"Why am I already regretting this decision." Archailist had to hold back a bit of a laugh. For all the man boasted and preached about the strength of himself and of the knights, he was such a whine. "You can't expect everyone to be prepared all the time for every occasion. Petch, you can't expect everything to go your way either. You simply have to find the strength to deal with such situations and make the best of them." That earned a hard glare from the man who's shoulder he occupied. Arch had seen it all before and stared straight back, refusing to be cowed. "I'm sure you won't have much of a problem, will you?" Probing got him little more than a low grumble of indistinguishable curses, but the squirrel took it for a victory and settled back into the gap between one of the larger plates lining the knights shoulder, and his neck. It was a comfortable little crevice that didn't move around too much.

"Iros, Uldrin." Ser Zulkar looked back over to them and pointed with a steel-encased finger. "Your group is the largest. You'll be going out through the forest and up towards Lykolav Mines. When you reach the mountains, ride the fringe around until you line with the Sukina Geysers. Then head back." Iros was just shy of losing his jaw in a defiant fight against gravity as he swung himself back around. Arch didn't know what any of those places were, though. A questioning glance caught in the peripheral vision of the Akalak soon told him what he needed to know. "That's tracing the bridge between the forests and the mountains. It'll be difficult terrain, whether on horseback or by foot. Not ideal, especially with a procession like this." That didn't sound good at all.

"Not to mention that it'll take most of the day to cross", he was quick to add. So much for the squirrels plans for when he finally got back. Heck, so much for training. It'd just be another day sitting on shoulders and possibly chatting with other squires. At least he had more to talk with than usual. Along with their latest addition, there were still four others that he'd never seen or heard of before now mounting up onto their own horses to take up a small pack just behind the Akalak. Either they'd never been told about riding in formation, or they just weren't interested in paying attention to Iros. That changed very quickly.

"Hey! Single-file, behind me. Uldrin, you and your squire'd like to take a spot up at the front here?" His gruff voice lingered as he tossed the words over one heavily-armored shoulder, apparently still holding a bit of a grudge.
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Postby Orin Fenix on April 4th, 2015, 10:49 pm

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Was short but I tried to give you what I could. It was a fascinating read anyway and I would've loved to have seen what you were going to do with it.

 
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