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Ball Trains with a weapon with more edge than his body

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[The Training Grounds] Graceful Clattering of Steel

Postby Ball on December 17th, 2014, 9:06 pm

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1st of Winter 514AV

Ball decided today would be a good day to take on some of his more… Less used weapons and train with them. By less used meaning pretty much all of them. Leaning against one of the walls of a makeshift building in the Training Grounds for the Order were Ball’s weapons: A rapier, Thorn, and a pole made of wood and tree sap known as a py-pole. The pole was his newest weapon to his repertoire and currently he had no idea how to use the petching thing. Thorn was his second most used weapon, but he didn’t feel like burdening Imass in a riding Thorn lesson and so the rapier was his best bet to work with.

It had the flexibility of the pole, not nearly as bending though, and the piercing capabilities of Thorn, but best of all it had the ability to slash. Picking up the small blade Ball handled the weapon with care, it hadn’t been used much so it wasn’t exactly sharp, but it was a finely crafted weapon suited just for his size. The last time Ball recalled using it he tired from holding it straight out before him, after that he pretty much gave up on the blasted weapon until now. Holding the weapon up with his left hand now though Ball brought the blade up so the flat was facing him and the point was pointing straight into the sky.

Inhaling deeply the Pycon placed his right hand against the flat of the blade blocking his reflection from sight, palm facing away from his face.

One…

He shifted his right foot out and back slightly, the foot turning so the toes pointed outward giving his body the support he lost. As soon as his footing was right Ball slowly started exhaling slide his right hand off the flat of the blade, twisting the hand slowly at the wrist as his arm arched outward also to the right, as his elbow creased to a ninety degree angle his hand was straight and the palm was facing the right striking edge of the blade if it was in its original starting position.

Yet his blade didn’t remain in a standstill, as the tips of his right hand slide free of danger Ball arched the blade slowly down and forward with a soft and gently arc to the left, his hand twisting to the palm was facing out and the flat of the blade of perpendicular with the ground.

Two… Exhaling Ball stepped forward with his right foot, planting it firmly in front of his body and using the forward momentum he was creating to extend his left arm and flick his wrist so the blade whistled in its curving path forward, the blade quivered and his fingers released… The blade twisted and took a short flight forward before it dropped heavily onto the ground. Standing straight Ball sighed and picked the blade up from where it landed.

“Petching Hai I must learn to grip it better.”


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Created goes to Raus for aiding in the photo manipulation, Myself for color and transparency manipulation as well as box code. Character is accredited below
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Graders Please Note :
As Ball is getting closer and closer to maxing out Pyken as a skill, I would like to request that in places where Ball is not doing enough to constitute Pyken XP if Pyken technique lores could be issued instead.

Examples of proper XP level for Pyken would be: Ball developing or refining his technique by adding new thing against an actual moving target, not a dummy.

The use of basic skills alone are not enough to accomplish XP at Ball's current level of Pyken.

Thank you.

I will be handling all Ball related posts on Mondays @ 1800 my time *
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[The Training Grounds] Graceful Clattering of Steel

Postby Ball on December 18th, 2014, 1:44 pm

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Sighing Ball once more stood back up straight, his back taking on the qualities of a board as best as he could, his legs slightly apart with toes facing forward, a look of determination on his face finishing the whole appearance. Inhaling once more the squire lifted rapier in his left hand so it was once again perpendicular with the ground, point facing the sky and flat facing his face. Once again Ball’s right hand found its place against the cold steel’s flat side, blocking his reflection, palm against the blade. You can do this Ball. Just take it one step at a time, remember, slow and steady.

Staring ahead on no one object the pycon didn’t move for several ticks. Slowly though right hand and foot slide to the right, the foot continued on slightly longer to slide back as the toes turned outward just a little to give him support. Meanwhile his sword and left arm slowly slide the opposite direction as soon as his right hand’s fingers left the danger zone of the blade. The sword dipped forward just before it arched out. Sword hand twisting so palm went from facing his body to going parallel to his body to a hundred and eighty degree twist holding the sword so it too was facing out. One. He mentally told himself as his body paused in place for a moment’s breathe.
Sliding right foot forward Ball used his growing momentum to bring his sword hand around in a graceful arch, using his arm from ‘elbow’ to wrist as not to injury himself in the twist. The sword sang in the air as it came down and stopped in line with his arm, it almost appeared as if it was an extension of Ball’s being. Yet this one wobbled as he held the position. Two. Ball inhaled and reminded himself.

Pulling the sword back to his body, arching his whole body in the motion backwards, he brought the sword and his other arm up in a cross block before his face, free hand balled into a fist as the flat of his blade bounced against his right forearm softly. Three.

Pushing right arm up against the blade Ball forced the ‘block’ back out, unleashing his body’s forward momentum as his left foot slid the whole length of the ground below him before it had no choice but to go airborne and Ball twisted his body, bringing left arm up so blade was straight again pointing at the sky, his right arm bent at the ‘elbow’ and remaining protective of his chest and body. Right leg was bent slightly to support his weight as the left leg extended up and the foot slide into place as a solid kick.Four.

Dropping airborne foot to the ground, the toes were the only thing to touch as his body pivoted back into a standing position, this time the blade was angled at nearly a forty-five, blade pointing out at the imagine opponent. Pulling his foot and sword back to his body Ball returned to the starting position. Right hand palm against the flat of his rapier and the sword pointing to the sky.


Credit :
Created goes to Raus for aiding in the photo manipulation, Myself for color and transparency manipulation as well as box code. Character is accredited below
Avatar CreditsMy lovely Avatar was drawn and created by the most awesome Nivel

Graders Please Note :
As Ball is getting closer and closer to maxing out Pyken as a skill, I would like to request that in places where Ball is not doing enough to constitute Pyken XP if Pyken technique lores could be issued instead.

Examples of proper XP level for Pyken would be: Ball developing or refining his technique by adding new thing against an actual moving target, not a dummy.

The use of basic skills alone are not enough to accomplish XP at Ball's current level of Pyken.

Thank you.

I will be handling all Ball related posts on Mondays @ 1800 my time *
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[The Training Grounds] Graceful Clattering of Steel

Postby Ball on January 15th, 2015, 5:40 pm

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Exhaling softly Ball went to repeat the process again. His right foot extended out to the right again. His right hand followed suit, Ball as conscious of his fingers grazing the blade’s edge, as his left hand slowly tipped the blade forward, as the blade slide into a parallel fashion to the ground before him, Ball’s left hand and wrist twisted outward, twisting the blade in a graceful arching path. When his sword made the full twist and his arm shifted up to bring the blade once more perpendicular to the ground Ball’s right foot slid forward and Ball brought his right arm across his body to guard against a blow to his chest.

Sword and sword arm traced forward in the air, slashing an opponent as his right foot touched ground. This position didn’t last long as Ball used his forward slash and step to pierce the empty space before him, turning his body almost as an afterthought and bringing his right hand up so palm faced out. Ball noticed this position shifted his whole body into a narrower setup thus making a small target even smaller. The sword was getting heavy in his arm, so Ball tucked the left elbow close to his body and allowed his wrist and forearm relax some.

The arm and wrist relaxing shifted the weight of the sword so it twisted and bowed downward and Ball recalled the pole’s ability to do that and then cause immense pain to himself so Ball flicked his wrist and the sword sprung up a bit. Now it was at a near thirty degree angle with the ground and Ball bent his forward knee to assist in a thrust that he sent forward. The weapon now bobbing in the air graceful as Ball shifted his body so his right foot was in the lead.

With this shift in leading foot Ball was able to twist his body around, using this motion to swing his rapier around in a wide circle as if he was warding off a half circle of enemies before sword and arm once more slide into their forward thirty degree angle position before his narrow stance body.


Credit :
Created goes to Raus for aiding in the photo manipulation, Myself for color and transparency manipulation as well as box code. Character is accredited below
Avatar CreditsMy lovely Avatar was drawn and created by the most awesome Nivel

Graders Please Note :
As Ball is getting closer and closer to maxing out Pyken as a skill, I would like to request that in places where Ball is not doing enough to constitute Pyken XP if Pyken technique lores could be issued instead.

Examples of proper XP level for Pyken would be: Ball developing or refining his technique by adding new thing against an actual moving target, not a dummy.

The use of basic skills alone are not enough to accomplish XP at Ball's current level of Pyken.

Thank you.

I will be handling all Ball related posts on Mondays @ 1800 my time *
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[The Training Grounds] Graceful Clattering of Steel

Postby Ball on August 15th, 2015, 12:52 am

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The blade’s position dipped as the pyken artist stepped forward, using this step to drop his arm and thrusted it forward utilizing his full body’s weight and forward motion to stab out with the rapier’s tip. A twist of his wrist and a quick pull back from Ball sent him in a spin counter-clockwise that he attempted to come to a complete stop at a hundred and eighty degrees from his starting position. Unfortunately the intricacy of that movement was too much for Ball and he toppled over, dropping the sword and hitting the ground with a solid thud. Groaning as he sat up Ball rubbed his face and sighed. This weapon was probably going to be his death.

“I am using it as if it is an addition of my body, when it’s more of an extension , something I have to put into account…”Taking the rapier into his hand he held it up, staring at the flat blade and sat up straighter. “I am trying to use it as if it is an addition of my body… But it’s not… What if… What if it was?” Looking at the blade the pyken artist could see the resulting form he was planning to utilize with it. His arm stretched, bulging a bit to take on a bubble form that would house the cross guard before he pushed the bubble of clay over his hand, encasing the weapon’s hilt and cross guard, as he watched his clay guiding up the blade’s flat center, leaving the edges and tip uncovered so that the sun glistened off the metal. The arm was longer than he was accustomed to now so the Pycon had to move it to level out his body.

Shifting the clay coated weapon towards his backside, Ball could feel he needed to shifted it down lower to keep his balance properly, as it came to a what would be his waist like in back (about the location of a human’s tailbone) Ball had displaced enough of his body’s clay to reform his hand and arm in its usual location. The rapier was more a tail, and this made Ball grin a bit as he shifted more clay into the tail formation and extended it a bit longer, curling the whole limb upwards so the metal edges could be seen from above. Shifting his body’s placement Ball could feel his body agreeing with the change and he leveled out and stabilized – with weapon drawn overhead his arms went to his sides at the elbows, his left hand went up to guard his face, his right went forward as if to ward off attacks. His feet went to a right forward, left rear. His weight stabilized and was actually mostly held forward on his front leg.

Without anything covering his feet Ball could feel the grit and roughness of the ground beneath him. Rubbing his feet a bit to gain a bit of traction so he wouldn’t fall the pyken artist inhaled gently and exhaled as he pushed off with his left foot. As his left foot left the ground he brought the whole limb up into a knee jab with both his hands reaching forward and driving an imaginary opponent’s face right into the uprising knee. The ‘impact’ was imitated by a slap of both hands against his knee as he dropped his left foot to the ground in front, pivoting around on its heel, shifting his full body’s weight to the back foot as the tail swung around, slashing out several ‘opponents’ to his left. His right foot followed the tail in a low range swiping kick; knock the few dodging opponents to the ground.

When his foot touched ground Ball slumped, he was tired and his body heaved up and down with exhaustion. Gods have mercy on us squires. He straightened up again into a standing position, shifting feet around so he was stable and balanced. Arms came up to block from side and front, tail poised overhead so he could strike and parry as need be. Again. He told himself with finality and swung his tail outwards once more. Ball’s body followed suite as he spun, swung, and slide his way around in a small circle. Every time he fell Ball would grunt in frustration and stand back up, resting his body before once more assuming the position and going at it again.


Credit :
Created goes to Raus for aiding in the photo manipulation, Myself for color and transparency manipulation as well as box code. Character is accredited below
Avatar CreditsMy lovely Avatar was drawn and created by the most awesome Nivel

Graders Please Note :
As Ball is getting closer and closer to maxing out Pyken as a skill, I would like to request that in places where Ball is not doing enough to constitute Pyken XP if Pyken technique lores could be issued instead.

Examples of proper XP level for Pyken would be: Ball developing or refining his technique by adding new thing against an actual moving target, not a dummy.

The use of basic skills alone are not enough to accomplish XP at Ball's current level of Pyken.

Thank you.

I will be handling all Ball related posts on Mondays @ 1800 my time *
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[The Training Grounds] Graceful Clattering of Steel

Postby Sayana on October 6th, 2015, 11:27 pm

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Don't forget to edit/delete your grade request. If there's anything I may have missed, please PM me and I'll be happy to look into it.


 
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Skills
  • Weapon: Rapier: 4
  • Meditation: 4
  • Endurance: 2
  • Acrobatics: 1
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  • Rapier: Basic stance, narrow stance
  • Rapier: Proper grip
  • Rapier: Cross-block
  • Rapier: Basic thrust, basic slash
  • Rapier: Literal extension of one's body
  • Rapier 'tail'
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  • 4 Shield Points - Training

Comments: Nice little thread. Due to the 'zen-like' nature of his training I felt it appropriate to award meditation as he was breathing in and out in a calm and focused manner. However, I didn't award any pyken since he's a master and he would need to actually be fighting an opponent. It was very detailed overall, but sometimes a little hard to follow. Still, great job.

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