Braelith (CS)

[Braelith]

Braelith Appearance Race: Half-Human, Half-Zith Gender: Male Age: 17 Birthday: 7, Summer, 497 AV Birthplace: Black Rock Appearance: Braelith stands at about 5'10" and weighs about 140 lbs. He has a mess of black hair atop his head with dark blue eyes. He is surprisingly paler than other Ziths and has a wistful look in his eyes. Some might mistake him for a priest, but he is definitely not one. Character Concept Braelith normally has a monotone and grating voice, but once he gets to know someone or is arguing, he comes alive, his becoming more rich and powerful. He may not seem like the social type, but that is only a result of being a nomad. He doesn't have many friends, but does have a family member he calls Nan, who brought him up at Black Rock. He is never scared to confront someone making a mockery of him or someone he knows. Character History Braelith was born on Black Rock to his Zith mother, Envy, and his Human father, Ress. When he turned two, his parents mysteriously disappeared whilst they went out to pay their respects to the dead. So, he was given to Envy's sister, who Braelith calls Nan. As Braelith got older, they had to move to a different section of Black Rock. When Braelith questioned why, his Nan always changed the subject. When he reached the age of ten, he started to get taught by a grave keeper on Black Rock, learning about the dead and Dira and Uldr. He eventually accepted that his parents were long gone, and focused his attention to his learnings. Over his life, he took care of Nan, and she him. Once he reached the age of 17, he decided to explore, to know what else the world had to offer besides death and despair. And so, when he told his Nan this, she reluctantly accepted his choice, and now Braelith is on his journey for adventure. Language Fluent Language: Zithanese Basic Language: Common Poor Language: Char Skills Skill Wilderness Survival 25 SP Gambling 10 SP Endurance 5 SP Tracking 5 SP Dagger Training 5 SP Lores Lore of Death Knowledge Lore of Religion: Dira Possessions 1 Dark cloak, with trousers and leather boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb -Brush -Soap -Razor -Balanced Rations (1 Week’s Worth) -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel 600 Gold Mizas Heirloom: A letter informing him of his parent's disappearance. Housing Location: No housing, Braelith is a nomad. (500 golden Mizas added to ledger for 'trade in'.) Ledger [table2=#000000,#008000]Purchase Total Starting 600 GM Thread List None

[Crosspatch]

Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

• Due to being Novice in Wilderness Survival can you please clearly state somewhere the one environment type your PC is familiar with? (Example types include: Desert, Forest, Hills, Marsh, Mountains, Plains, Sea or Underground).
• Please clearly state the level your PC is at; i.e. Novice skills are 1 to 25, Competent skills are 26 to 50.
• Please label your weapon skill as “Weapon: Weapon name.” For example to use a Dagger it would be labelled as “Weapon: Dagger“.
• Although you have traded in your housing for 500 gm, you are required to clearly state how you got this on your ledger.
• Even if your character has traded in their housing they must still state where they are currently living – be this in rented accommodation, a tent, and so on.
• You appear to be missing your racial bonus. As a mixed blood the means you have +10 RB to put in any one skill of your choice.
• Due to the nature of the language, Zithanese is impossible to learn by any race - including Zith mixed bloods - par the Zith themselves. It should also be noted that char is also little more than clicks and whistles above the water - and thus that only be available for full understanding to the Charoda.
• What do you mean by the lore "Lore of Death Knowledge"?

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


Crosspatch