Musicaly adaped animals (Nidassasyae)

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This shining population center is considered the jewel of The Sylira Region. Home of the vast majority of Mizahar's population, Syliras is nestled in a quiet, sprawling valley on the shores of the Suvan Sea. [Lore]

Musicaly adaped animals (Nidassasyae)

Postby Seliarus on November 29th, 2010, 2:03 pm

The Dhani slowly let go of the hug as well, nodding in return. "..Sssoon? We got time... When the sssun leaves the sssky, I ssshould be there. Ssso we got time." He answered, looking up in the sky. No need to hurry. he looked back down at her, and smiled. A some sort of snake-ish grin, but more warm. he would look around, and simply shrug afterwards.

"Let'sss jussst ...Find a way to get back in the cssity, ...Without getting caught in a crowd again. Bessidesss, we have to bring your sssled to the Tavern, so it wont get lossst." He nodded, and offered her his hand. He seemed calm now, almost cold like before. Even though his words were filled with care. The day was still so young.


[End.]
"Who knows? Life is like a roll on the dice. You can’t know if something is a good, or a bad roll until it already happened."


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Musicaly adaped animals (Nidassasyae)

Postby Nisaba on November 30th, 2010, 7:34 pm

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Grade Complete: XP Award!


Name: Seliarus

 
XP Award
Teaching- 1 XP
Rhetoric- 2 XP

I know this was more of a story thread, meant to get a job and bond- which was great- but that means I didn’t see a whole lot of skills used, so I just gave a point toward the things I saw mentioned. First, when Seliarus taught Nida to count to fifty, that definitely got a teaching point. When the two were bonding and Sel tried to convince Nida that 1. He wasn’t good enough for her and 2. She was definitely good enough for him, I thought that deserved a couple of rhetoric points. If I missed anything or you thought you deserved more points, please just let me know.
 
Lore Award
Late Fall Temperature in Syliras
Location: The White Swan Inn
Communicating without Words
Getting a Job
Being Taken Care of
Accepting a Bond
First Kiss
Sharing Hatred of Human Nature


Additional Note
Just a little note: Most of the city is inside the castle walls so there would be less walking on streets than in hallways. There would also be more torchlight than sun/moon light because there are few windows inside, and it would be warmer inside the castle than outside. There are also not many tall buildings, unless you count the Inn and Iron Works outside the castle, in which case there are just a couple. Just a little reminder for future reference. Overall, the thread was a very nice story and nicely written- it kept moving at a good pace and it was full of interesting ideas. Thank you for letting me read it and award XP. Nida and Sel seem like a perfect match, even though neither of them is sure of that yet. I hope to see their relationship evolve in the future.


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Grade Complete: XP Award!


Name: Nidassasyae Iskedarst

 
XP Award
Observation- 1 XP
Negotiation- 1 XP
Rhetoric- 2 XP
Socializing- 2XP

I didn’t see a whole lot of skills worked on in this thread, but I understand that there was an even more important event taking place. I just gave a couple points in the things I saw used. Nida looked around the city, searching for both the Inn and the Bazaar and noticed a lot of people and their conversations, which I think deserved a point in observation. She, of course, purchased some items in the Bazaar, so she found what she wanted, asked for a price, and decided if it was worth her money- negotiation. When she bonded with Sel, she tried to convince him that 1. She wasn’t good enough for him and 2. He was definitely good enough for her, so I gave her a couple of points in rhetoric. If I missed anything or you thought you deserved more points, please just let me know.
 
Lore Award
Sharing Body Heat
Putting Others Needs First
Location: The White Swan Inn
Acting as ‘Translator’
Getting an Early Start
Location: Bazaar
Counting to Fifty
Learning to Love
Offering a Bond
First Kiss
Sharing Hatred of Human Nature
 
Ledger
- 50 gold mizas
+ one preserving kit
+ one sled


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Please see the Seliarus’s note above.
I just started a new job where I occassionally work 12hour shifts (somehow?)- so please bear with me. I'll probably only be able to hardcore grade/be online on the weekends and other times I'll only get to about 1 thread per night. If there's anything that needs immediate attention, please PM me and I'll bump it up the list. Thanks in advance for the understanding. ^_^
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