Sayana
Skills Earned
Lores Learned
Lore – How to Filet a Fish
Lore – Spices with fish
Lore – Garlic with Ham
Notes – Ahh, nothing more entertaining that reading the temptress. Great posts. I might make one little suggestion regarding quoting another characters Dialogue. You may have already started doing this, but I’d recommend explaining the other author’s dialogue. It allows for more character introspection in regard to what the other author wrote. Or so I’ve found. A sort of… Analysis portion. Oft times it also nets you a few more observation points.
Orin
Skills Earned
Lores Learned
Lore – Eypherians keep slaves.
Social Lore – Tease back… Its safe… I swear!
Notes- Orin my friend, between the first thread of yours I graded and this one I noticed vast improvements. Well done. I truly enjoyed reading this. You write awkward Very well.
Skills Earned
| Cooking | +4xp |
| Observation | +5xp |
| Organization | +1xp |
| Socialization | +3xp |
| flirting | +1xp |
| Planning | +1xp |
Lores Learned
Lore – How to Filet a Fish
Lore – Spices with fish
Lore – Garlic with Ham
Notes – Ahh, nothing more entertaining that reading the temptress. Great posts. I might make one little suggestion regarding quoting another characters Dialogue. You may have already started doing this, but I’d recommend explaining the other author’s dialogue. It allows for more character introspection in regard to what the other author wrote. Or so I’ve found. A sort of… Analysis portion. Oft times it also nets you a few more observation points.
Orin
Skills Earned
| Land Navigation | +1xp |
| Socialization | +5xp |
| Observation | +2xp |
| Cooking | +3xp |
| Teaching | +3xp |
| Planning | +2xp |
Lores Learned
Lore – Eypherians keep slaves.
Social Lore – Tease back… Its safe… I swear!
Notes- Orin my friend, between the first thread of yours I graded and this one I noticed vast improvements. Well done. I truly enjoyed reading this. You write awkward Very well.
