Lessa

[Lessa]

[Nemesis]

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Greetings! I'm Nemesis, the DS of Ravok. I've noticed a few problems with your Character Sheet that you should probably take a look at. Until these issues have been resolved, I'm afraid you cannot post IC in any of Mizahar's cities.

• The city is called Ravok, not Ravek... don't know if this is a typo or if you genuinely don't know, please edit.
• There are no weeks in the Mizaharian calendar.
• Please explain how your PC knows Morphing as a magic.
• Are you sure you don't want a third language?Not a requirement but I should ask anyway!
• Little to do with your CS, but I would suggest flinging me a PM to tell me about Lessa's slave status in Ravok.

Once you have fixed what I have asked you to, send me a PM and I will remove this Intervention.

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