Flashback Ink Branding

Jalen learns the price of his life, and receives the mark he'll carry for the rest of his days.

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This lazy agricultural settlement rests on the swampy shores of the Middle Suvan at the delta of The Kenash River. The River's slow moving bayou waters have bred a different sort of people - rugged, cultured, and somewhat violent. Sprawling plantations of tobacco and cotton grow on the outskirts of the swamp in the rich Cyphrus soils, while the city itself curls around the bayou and spawns decadence and sins of all sorts. Life is slower in Kenash, but the lack of pace is made up for in the excesses of food and flesh in a city where drinking, debauchery, gambling, slavery, and overbearing plantation families dominate the landscape.

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Ink Branding

Postby Jalen on February 11th, 2015, 2:38 am

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73rd of Summer, 508 AV

Stepping out of the wagon, wrists pinned tied tightly behind his back, Jalen blinked in the blinding sunlight. Hours lying on his side in the dim interior of the wagon had left him tired, sore, and as angry as he’d ever ben. And as terrified. Someone gave him a rough shove and he stumbled forward into formation behind another similarly bound man. Jalen’s glare at is offender was met with a grim smile. “I wouldn’t look so defiant if I were you. People don’t want uppity slaves… and if they don’t buy you, you’re of no use to us.” The message was clear in the man’s eyes as he chuckled and tapped the hilt of the knife on his belt. Jalen swallowed, finally taking in his surroundings.

To either side of the road, fields of tall plants spread out for acres. The sun blazed down on workers in poor clothing tending the crops. Watching them, overseers armed with whips—among other more deadly weapons—paced the fields like predators looking for a meal. A pit began to form in Jalen’s stomach; the faces of the slaves were wrought with despair and apathy. A few even dared to break from their work and stare back at him. And on their faces, each bore the mark. A tattoo or branding of an animal of some sort.

Jalen dropped his eyes, panic rising in his chest as hands gripped his shoulders and began to drag him forward into a line of bound slaves. Resisting, Jalen drove his shoulder into the man who gripped him, knocking him to the ground. Another slaver rushed over, attempting to restrain him from behind. The man’s arms wrapped around him, pinning him. Jalen bucked, driving the back of his head into the man’s face. His aggressor released him, growling in pain. Blood trickled from his nose. Jalen spun wildly, looking for escape. The man with the knife had drawn it and was approaching slowly. “I won’t hesitate. Is it worth your life, boy?” Jalen paused, eyes glued to the gleaming edge of the blade, when a wooden cane snapped across his shoulders. The Chaktawe fell to his knees with a cry. Another blow knocked him face-first into the dirt. “Stop!” Jalen gritted his teeth, face pressed to the ground. Red welts formed across his back. “Don’t. Damage. The product.”

Turning, Jalen looked through the tears and dust. The man with the knife crouched and pulled Jalen roughly to his feet. Suddenly the blade was at Jalen’s throat, and the man’s face was inches away from Jalen’s. His breath was rank, and his bloodshot eyes burned into Jalen’s own. “You’re worth nothing to us dead. You’re worth even less if you won’t cooperate. Do you understand me?” Jalen nodded, slowly, wary of the metal on his skin. Tears stung his wide eyes. The man let the weapon linger a moment before dropping it and roughly pushing him into line. None of the other captives looked at him. Five slaves, now including Jalen, stood in a line on the road.

At its end stood a great plantation, walls as pure and white as alabaster stone. The cleanly clipped lawn and gardens were beautifully presented, and Jalen felt wholly out of place as he was marched towards it. From the house approached a man in brilliant finery. His ensemble was emerald green lined with gold, and he was tailed by a train of servants and guards, dressed equally richly. His opulent rings flashed as he halted a good distance away, nose curled in disgust.

“Foul, as usual Bredick,” the man drawled. Bredick, the slaver with the knife, stepped forward, bowing humbly.

“I promise you, Lord Lynint, they have strength of arm to match their odor.” The man seemed unconvinced, but braved the smell to inspect them. With an occasional tsk or nod of approval he walked down the line. He stopped at one man and went so far as to prod him, feeling his arms and chest. At his request, the slave bared his teeth.

“Not bad, Bredick. Not bad.” Bredick bowed again, smiling. He was a man who took pride in his stock. The Lynint continued, finally coming to a halt before Jalen. One sleek black eyebrow raised in interest. “One of the desert rats? Where did you find him?” Bredick stepped forward, resting a hand good naturedly on Jalen’s shoulder.

“Crossing the border into Cyphrus, my lord. He’s a lively one, but young and strong.” His hand squeezed a little too tightly, and Jalen understood. He lowered his eyes, which until then had been glaring obstinantly back at the young Dynasty member. The memory of the knife at his throat was still emblazoned in his mind.

“He doesn’t look like much.” Despite himself, Jalen stiffened. His small size had always been a point of consternation.

“Trust me, he’s stronger than he looks,” Bredick chuckled, glancing back at his compatriots.

“Is he. Well, I suppose he is still young. He’ll grow into his new role eventually.”

“You’ll take him then?”

“Yes. And the Drykas fellow too. I’ll see to it that the usual fee of five-hundred per head is delivered to you.”

“Now, sir,” Bredick said carefully. “You know as well as I that the Chaktawe is a rare find. I’d say he’s worth six-hundred, at least.” Lynint considered it, then shook his head.

“If he is as lively as you say, then I cannot risk that much money on the investment. If not for the rarity I would not consider the offer at all. Take the price you’re offered, Bredick, or nothing at all.” The slaver didn’t protest further, but he scowled at Jalen as he passed him over to the Dynasty’s overseers. Dismay overtook him as Jalen saw the glint of coin being counted out into the slaver’s open hand. The weight of his life in gold-rimmed mizas. The unbought slaves were loaded back into the wagon as Jalen and the Drykas slave were herded down the road towards their new home.

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Ink Branding

Postby Jalen on February 14th, 2015, 9:32 am

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Tucked away, far out of sight of the plantation house, were the slave quarters. The two new slaves were led to one of several collections of squat huts. They looked as though they'd been pieced together with scrap. Some only had a tarp stretched over the tops to keep rain out. None of them were clean. A few children too young to work in the fields played in the dirt outside, mindful of the watchful eyes of the overseers. Only one building looked vaguely inhabitable, a small watch house for the overseers. A ladder propped up against the side allowed access to the roof where they could get a better view of the quarters and nearby fields.

It was to this building they were brought. A small fire was burning in a pit outside. A pock-faced man dug around in the blazing coals. When they approached he rose and addressed their guards. "I heard some new blood was bein' bought today. Brand is ready fer ye." Grinning, he withdrew a stick of iron from the flames. At the end, glowing white and smoking in the air, was the mark of the Lynint plantation. It looked like an animal of some sort, a reptile perhaps. Eyes widening in horror, Jalen recalled the faces of the slaves as they'd been marched into the plantation.

"The man, only," said one of the guards, who nodded at his fellows. They each took one of the Drykas slave's arms and dragged him forward. "They don't want to burn the boy's pretty face, it's the ink for him." The pock-faced man frowned in disappointed.

"Ain't never branded one 'a them before..." His eyes were locked on Jalen's, taking in the alien blackness of them.

"And you never will." He shoved Jalen towards the door of the hut. "You're lucky boy, if you were human you'd get the brand like the rest of them." Jalen barely heard, his attention was fixed on the other slave. The Drykas' struggled against his captors, but the two were more than a match for him. Pinning him on his knees next to the fire they waited while the brand was reheated. "Bring old Kaylo in here!" An overseer nodded, sauntering over to one of the slave huts as Jalen was pushed into the building.

A chair was cleared and they pushed Jalen bodily into it. His arms were still tied uncomfortably behind him. At least it kept his back, aching painfully from the slaver's cane, from touching the seat. A stool was brought out next to his chair and a side table placed next to it. A slave knocked at the door and was admitted. His cheeks were gaunt and lined with wrinkles, and his brow was marked with a tattoo rather than the brand. He had others as well, his bony arms were covered with them, and where the skin of his chest was exposed you could see signs of others beneath his shirt. Under his arm was a small chest.

Kaylo, as he introduced himself, set the chest on the side table. "No chatter, just do your job." Kaylo waved off the guard brazenly, but didn't speak further. Within the chest was an assortment of needles and ink. Kaylo reached over and grabbed Jalen's jaw, using his other hand to wipe the skin of his face clean with a damp cloth. "Don't move. It'll be quicker that way." The old man prepared a needle with ink and brought it to the side of Jalen's face. The Chaktawe suddenly bucked away from the tattooist, shouting in Tawna.

The guard stomped over and gave Jalen a good, solid punch to the gut. The air was forced from his lungs and his eyes blurred with tears. Calloused hands gripped him by the shoulders and forced him back into his seat. The guard held him down and leaned in to whisper in his ear, hairs of his bristly beard tickling the sensitive flesh. "I don't know if you can understand me, but if you can, listen close. It makes no difference to me whether you get a nice little tat, or the brand. Boss won't mind either if I tell him you were acting up. Sooner we break you, the better, see?" Jalen just gasped, struggling vainly to recover his breath. "So sit still for Kaylo, or I'll let Macky out there have you instead." A sizzling sound punctuated the air outside the building, followed sharply by an agonized scream. The smell of burning flesh wafted inside. "Which would you rather have?" The man smiled grimly, releasing Jalen and stepping back.

Kaylo shrugged sympathetically but didn't say a word. The young Chaktawe, far from home and at the verge of weeping, sat still in his chair. The following chime was one of discomfort and pain. The prick of a needle, a dab of ink, a swift wipe to clear any blood, repeat. But Jalen sat through it without complaint, his ears still hearing that scream, his nose still choked by the smell of a man losing his humanity. From his jaw to his brow, the Lynint's crocodile was drawn from his skin. Needle by needle, inch by inch. When it was done, Kaylo rose without a word, took his precious chest, and left. Jalen had a few seconds to process before he was pulled out of his seat and marched outside.

The coals were black, the Drykas nowhere to be seen. 'Macky' slouched by with a leering grin, the brand cold in his hands. The sun still beat down, as unforgiving as the overseers. "Welcome to your new home." A dull blade sawed through the ropes around his wrists. They came free with a snap. Jalen rubbed the raw skin below his hands and stretched his cramped shoulders. "Tomorrow you'll report for work with the rest of them. Enjoy your last day of freedom." The guard stepped out from behind him, sheathing his knife at his belt. "Well, I guess freedom is a relative term." Macky laughed off to the side.

"Get off with you now!" The man gave Jalen a slap on his newly bruised back. "And remember--we're watching."

"Always watching!" Macky chimed in with a cackle. If Jalen heard, he didn't show it. His eyes were on the ground and his feet were moving. Carrying him where, exactly? He'd be sleeping in one of the huts, he guessed. Tears spotted the dust as he passed. The children, still running about, gave him a wide berth. Wandering over to a hut he stopped at the door. Sitting just outside was a bucket, half-filled with murky water. Barely visible on the surface was an unfamiliar face. It looked like him, and yet curling up the right side of his face, where the skin was angry and raw, lay the mark of a slave.

When he entered the hut the bucket was rolling away on its side, its contents spilling out like blood in the dirt.

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Ink Branding

Postby Khida on March 30th, 2015, 4:22 pm


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Diplomacy +1
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  • Diplomacy: averting gaze to avoid challenge
  • Kenash Dynasties: the Lynint crocodile
  • Kenash location: Silverbite, the Lynint plantation
  • Slavery: Kenash slaves are marked by brand or tattoo
  • Slavery: the value of a Chaktawe man
  • Unarmed Combat: shoulder charge
  • Unarmed Combat: head bash


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