[Fighter's Pit] A Rude Rumpus

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[Fighter's Pit] A Rude Rumpus

Postby Lorden Ladis on February 24th, 2015, 9:46 pm

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81st of Winter, 514 AV

Lorden forced out a calm breath, before he shoved his left hand forward, and drove the metal buckler held within it, to clunk quickly through the open air of the Pit's courtyard. The knight only stopped shoving his shield forward, when his left arm was fully extended. Taking a breath, the swordsman allowed calm thoughts to bubble ip, into his mind.

Keep a good distance, Lorden reminded himself, as he continued his motion, and brought his sword arm to bend in against the side of his chest. The knight was now standing, in a relatively basic guard; his shield was extended defensively out in front of him. Meanwhile, the length of his arming sword was tucked, pointing forward, beside the round metal object, the tip held just behind the rim of his buckler.

Observe your enemy, Lorden thought, as he starred into the menacingly empty air, in front of him. Ticks passed, and Lorden searched his mind, for a way to continue his impromptu drill.

If no move is made, make the one they don't expect, Lorden mused happily, a smirk forming on his face, as the words bubbled to the forefront of his mind.

Following his own directive, the raven-haired swordsman, quickly drove his sword up and out of it's couched guard, and rushed the blade to hold above and behind his head. Meanwhile, the knight pulled his buckler in closer to the front of his body, and took a booted step forward, kicking up minuscule amounts of sand with the fast footfall, as he began driving forward. When his front foot reconnected with the ground a tick later, Lorden began arching the steel sword suspended over his head, into a downward drive.

"You wiry bastard, ye knocked me on my arse," as the loud, somewhat crude words, and the sound of a human form thudding against sand, assaulted Lorden's ears; the distracted knight almost found himself not stopping his downward sword swing in time, and the blade danced dangerously close to his unarmored legs.

Petch, the knight swore mentally, as he reversed his cut, with a quickly executed upward pull from his sword arm. With the steel now once more in his attentive control, Lorden let the sword continue up in it's reversed motion, before swinging it over his head, and bringing it to hang down to his right side. With a self-annoyed, but curious raise of his brow, the swordsman willed his azure eyes, to glance over to where the distracting voice in question, had come from.

"Eh, come e'n now Yargul. Ye know I did't mea' it," the knight's eyes took in the curly-haired brunet as he spoke. Bending over, the man Lorden was watching offered a hand to the corpulent human being, who was working himself from the ground in front of him.

"Ye better damn mean it, we were fighting ya shyke," the fat man knocked his friend's offered hand aside, as he shakily raised himself to his own feet. Dusting himself off, Lorden noted, that this 'Yargul' didn't even bother to look at his brown-haired sparring partner, as the man began to respond.

"We's just sparring, though," the brunet commented somewhat obviously. The lanky fighter was obviously trying to stay on the good side, of the dust-covered fat man in front of him. As the words spilled dumbly from the brunet's mouth, Yargul raised an eyebrow.

"Ceryl?" the pot-bellied swordsman prompted.

"Ye'?" the brunet asked dryly.

"You remember that bar fight, the one where I blackened your eye?" Yargul drilled his words into Ceryl; seemingly just trying to get a point across, there was no more malice in the mention of the past fight, than there had been in the rest of his words, that he had spoken throughout the two's whole conversation. Still, while the fat man didn't seem to be bothered by bringing up the aforementioned fight, the brunet he was talking to, averted his eyes before slowly opening his mouth.

"Ye'..." Ceryl admitted with the familiar syllable, his voice trailing off nervously, as he spoke.

"I'd never would have really hurt you Ceryl, but I still laid my fist against yer eye. Same thing with you knocking me down, when you do something, even if it ain't a real fight, don't go holding back everything, no real man will," the fat man spoke in thoughtful bursts. About halfway through his monologue, Yargul looked away from his brunet friend, and bent over to grab a long steel sword, that had presumably fallen with the fat man, before. Bending back up, the corpulent swordsman looked back to his companion.

"You got that, Ceryl?" he questioned.

"Ye' Yargul," Ceryl confirmed, allowing his eyes to drift back up to his friend.

Nice guys, Lorden mused to himself jokingly. The knight shrugged mentally, as he starred on at the two men.

Crude, but it might just be their cup of tea, the swordsman continued thinking on the swordsmen, who had distracted him. Lorden, in his thoughts, had allowed his eyes to stay on the two, and hadn't really thought much of it; but when the fat man named Yargul, caught Lorden's blue eyes with his own gaze, the knight almost jumped.

They best not come over here, the startled knight thought to himself, quickly averting his eyes. Lorden did his best to return to his drills inconspicuously, but the knight could almost feel the two men beginning to walk over to him, regardless.

Petch, Lorden thought, as he shakily executed a central thrust into the thin air.
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[Fighter's Pit] A Rude Rumpus

Postby Lorden Ladis on February 25th, 2015, 3:02 am

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Lorden brought his sword pommel to sit off to the side of his head, and tilted the blade ninety-degrees to the right. Nervously, the knight extended his buckler out to his front, unfolding the arm that held it about halfway.

"You call that an over the shoulder guard?" Lorden's fat spectator heckled. Yargul and what Lorden had figured out to be the man's lackey, had taken up a stance, only a few feet away from him. Without fail, the pot bellied man had ridiculed everything the knight had done for his past ten movements; and just as invariably, the lanky Ceryl had mimicked his dominant friend's insults. Both men, were annoying the raven-haired knight to no ends.

Don't give them any ground to stand on, Lorden, the swordsman thought, as he brought his blade down in a horizontal cut. As he slashed with fading resolve, chuckles from the knight's side, all but turned his face red. Lorden gritted his teeth.

The knight brought his sword along the same horizontal slash he had brought it down across before, this time the sword pulled up through the air, instead of being pushing down through it. Quickly, a sweating Lorden returned to his default stance, with his sword hand tucked in close behind his buckler, and with said buckler tucked into his chest.

Just leave... Just walk away, Lorden thought. Taking a deep breath, the blue-eyed swordsman almost moved to sheath his sword. The knight was only ticks away from simply walking from the fighter's pit. That is, until Yargul opened his infuriating mouth once more.

"I could smash that puny tin shield in two, with one slash," as the corpulent man talked, Lorden whirled to face him. The knight allowed his buckler to drift from his front, and hang down to his side, as he turned.

"Do you want to find out?" as the strained words slipped from his mouth, Lorden lifted his right arm out, and indicated Yargul with the tip of his arming sword.

"Do you hear that Ceryl? The cub wants to fight me," the fat man mocked, and while he was clearly talking to his friend, his nervous eyes never left Lorden's shining blade. The black haired knight, however, was too red-faced to notice Yargul's slight trepidation.

"Cub sure does," the contrastingly thin man who was standing beside Yargul, mimicked him annoyingly. Lorden's eyes shot to the brunet almost immediately.

Please, please, please. Just close your damn mouth, the warrior almost found himself saying. Still, he was a knight; even Lorden knew calling the man out, was edging close to unbecoming behavior, and some small part of him, just barely, barely, reeled in his overly-annoyed tongue.
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[Fighter's Pit] A Rude Rumpus

Postby Lorden Ladis on February 25th, 2015, 3:48 am

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Lorden all but jumped back as Yargul charged. With the longsword the man wielded, the knight had figured his opponent would want to keep distance. His assumption had been wrong, Lorden realized too late, as Yargul dove forward, and knocked his outstretched shield aside. The fat man quickly drove a meaty hand into the black haired-swordsman's right eye, as he all but batted away his guard. Yargul was so close, Lorden couldn't even swing his sword, the man was practically pressing himself against him. With a bolt of disoriented rage and pain, the knight twisted his sword to point away from his opponent's side.

With an angry grunt, and a look of hate, Lorden drove his sword's pommel into the ribs of his fat adversary. Yargul's eyes grew wide with shock, he hadn't expected to be hit, Lorden noted through his own dizzying pain. Taking his chance, the knight slipped from arm's reach of his opponent, all but tripping over himself, as he felt the flesh around his eye already beginning to converge around his blue orb.

"You hit me..." the knight blinked. Yargul might have been surprised by the strike of his pommel, but Lorden was even more caught off guard by the ruthless cross, that had just taken place, in what he thought was to be a sword fight.

"Did I?" Yargul heaved, an infuriating smirk, showing through the pain on his face.

Ceryl, did you see me lay a punch across his eye? the man continued, bolstered by Lorden's dizzied shock. From behind him, the knight's ringing ears picked up a toothy voice, beginning to back his friend's mock up.

"Can't say that I did Yargul, might be that the sun is in my eye t'ough," Ceryl wrongly confirmed.

"See, you're just seeing things with that one good eye," Yargul continued.

"You-" as he spoke, Yargul jumped forward, cutting him off. With surprising speed, the fat man sent his sword rushing to Lorden's gut.

Petching shyke, Lorden thought, his head even now only half-clear.

Lorden wheeled his back foot to the left, the action turned his body so that Yargul's thrust just barely slunk past his unarmored stomach. Taking a deep breath, the knight's eyes shot between Yargul, the fat man's sword, and his own blade. For a moment Lorden's eyes glanced at his opponent's neck, and then back to his own blade; but only for a tick, after which he shook his head mentally. It'd simply be too awkward to try and cut across Yargul's sword. But who ever said anything about cutting?

Moving his right leg back behind his newly-rotated left, Lorden threw his arm up from his right side, and drove the cross guard, of the sword held therein, down into the thinning middle of his corpulent opponent's outstretched longsword.

You wanna break my shield so bad? Why don't you bite it in half! Lorden thought as the tip of Yargul's sword, was driven into the blowing sand below their feet, from the pressure put upon it by Lorden's arm and sword's guard.

Quickly, and taking note of his success with a smirk, the knight threw the arm closest to his insufferable opponent up and across the man's face, missing slightly, the buckler held on Lorden's left arm, collided against Yargul's two chins, rather than into his pearly whites. With the successful collide, Lorden couldn't help but open his mouth to mock the mocker, as he put a few feet between him and the bloodied face of his opponent.

"Sorry, did my puny shield just hit you?" as he spoke, Lorden took an encouraged breath, all but ignoring the sweat trickling down his swollen face.
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[Fighter's Pit] A Rude Rumpus

Postby Lorden Ladis on February 25th, 2015, 4:36 am

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"You'll regret that runt," Yargul threatened through his bloodied maw, as he reached up to finger his bleeding lower lip.

Runt? I'm just not fat, Lorden thought. As the words welled up to the forefront of his minds, the knight pushed down any shame that might have come with them, he wasn't in the mood to be empathetic. Yargul was just lucky he was keeping his mouth shut, something the fat man clearly wasn't doing.

Lorden's opponent growled to the air, no doubt in response to his silence. The pot-bellied man couched his long sword to his right side, grasping it in both hands, as he began to walk towards the cloth-clad knight, who stood before him.

Noting the man's movements, Lorden took a harried breath, before moving his buckler to sit in front of the bottom edges of his right ribs. With his eyes locked on the steel Yargul held at his side, the knight couched his own sword, mirroring his enemy's weapon's placement. Two could be offensive; and he had his shield to help him, Lorden noted. Still, the knight couldn't help stop a nervous feeling from creeping up his spine, as Yargul's large sword inched closer and closer.

Lorden took a worried and preparatory breath, as his bad-mouthed sparring partner came within sword range. The knight went as far as to smile with his eyes, when Yargul began to thrust his sword straight towards his shielded ribs, unfortunately his smirk soon faded, and morphed into a confused grimace instead.

Just as Yargul looked as if he was going to thrust his sword, the man pulled his blade back, and drove a quick horizontal slash across Lorden's leg. Blood had been drawn, and the knight found himself feeling dizzy and numb. Angrily, the swordsman's own shorter blade reached across his body. The edge of the raven-haired warrior's arming sword, thrust weakly against Yargul's right shoulder muscle; cloth tore at the contact, but Lorden's non-blurry good eye, could see but the faintest of scratches form, as the steel slid across the ample flesh of his enemy's arm.

Faint or not, Yargul gritted his teeth at Lorden's strike, and quickly brought his own long blade up from where it was hanging, beside the knight's left ankle. With both hands still gripping the handle, the bad-mannered swordsman hefted his sword up over his head, with it's blade running lengthwise Yargul's sword collided with Lorden's own outstretched sword, and carried it up with it.

Before Lorden could slide his uplifted sword, from the raised guard of his opponent, he found himself bending forward, as a shot of force slammed into his gut. The knight's pupils glanced up weekly, watching as his sword slipped from Yargul's own; which was now suspended in the air with only one hand. The knight didn't get to watch his blade fall, however, because soon he found another even more solid force colliding with his left check. Yargul snarled as the pommel of his sword, connected with his enemy's face, and sent Lorden spiraling over into the dirt.
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[Fighter's Pit] A Rude Rumpus: Part I

Postby Lorden Ladis on February 25th, 2015, 5:47 am

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Lorden groaned, reeling from the impact, the knight began to force himself up by will alone, only to feel something sharp, suddenly press against his throat.

"Ye ready to yield runt?" Yargul questioned, a dark smile on his face, as he inched the point of his longsword against Lorden's throat.

Lorden slouched his pounding head against the sand, only to feel Yargul's sword follow him. Feeling hopeless, Lorden squinted as the sand blew into his eyes.

Sand, Lorden thought, barely getting the word to ring loud enough in his head, to be heard over his pounding temples. The knight averted his left eye to the left, to stare down at the ground, unfortunately, the movement wasn't lost on Yargul.

"Ye can't even loo' me in the eye, an' admit I beat ya," the fat man laughed, as he began to let his sword up slightly in his mirth, Lorden took his chance.

Quickly, the knight grasped a handful of sand, and slipped from under Yargul's sword, cutting his Adam's apple slightly, as he moved. Yargul was quick to instinctively jam his sword into the sand, Lorden noted the threatening action with dilating eyes.

Bastard. That could have been me, the knight thought, starring as the rude man's sword dug itself into the swaying ground. Spurred by the sight, Lorden rushed to his feet. And with a fearful rage, the knight slung his hand across Yargul's face, opening his fist as he did.

The fat man growled, and instantly removed a palm away from his sword. Yargul tried in vain to rub the sediment from his eyes, as Lorden stumbled over to where a short sword gleamed in the winter light of Syna.

Bending over, the knight wrapped his hand around his fallen blade's handle, and exhaled in relief. Now, standing behind Yargul, and thirsting for revenge, Lorden wheeled to face his opponent, and brought a horizontal slash down the man's leg. Exhaling, the knight almost froze at the sight of a thin gash forming, he'd held back, but blood was still blood.

He's not dead, he deserves it, Lorden thought, shaking away his empathy once more. He could feel his own wounds pulse, practically track the swelling of his right eye through it, the man deserved it.

As Yargul began to shift pressure to his front leg, Lorden bent back up and stepped forward. With a solid exhale, the knight drove his booted foot into the slash running across his opponent's calf; within a tick the man was on his knees. Lorden was quick to step behind his fat opponent, and reach his sword around the man's head. Sighing mentally, the fighter pressed the blade's edge against the fat man's amply padded neck. Meanwhile, he leaned his buckler against Yargul's left shoulder, for added leverage, and for a bit of a welcome reprieve.

"Yargul..." the knight took an unwilling breath.

"Yield," he commanded, as more air flooded into his heaving lungs. As he spoke, Lorden could feel the fat man squirming under his grasp. With fortified confidence, the knight pulled his sword more firmly against the corpulent swordsman's neck.

"I don't think my friend wants me to," Yargul said gruffly.

Friend? the knight thought, shooting his eyes up from the fat man kneeling before him, to glance around. Lorden flung his buckler instinctively out to the side, as he saw Yargul's lackey running at him, the man now had his own longsword drawn.

The knight felt the concussion of a blow against his small shield, as a fat head drove its way into his groin, and caused his eyes to clench closed.

Lorden heaved over, and just barely managed to open his squinting eyes, before he quickly pulled his own sword from around Yargul's head. The knight swung swiftly as he could, at the fat man's approaching partner, managing to hit nothing but air through his pain. The swordsman could hardly fight two competent fighters, and as he swung, a familiar fist slammed into the right side of his skull. Lorden toppled, this time, as he hit the sand underfoot, he was out like a light.

...

Lorden groaned, as he tried to force his clammy eyes open, only one was even reasonably functional. Making due with his left orb, the knight glanced around, confused trepidation framing itself on his face.

There was no one, the knight noted, and besides for quite a few aching places, he wasn't any worse for wear.

Yet, if the knight checked his pants pocket, he'd find that it was a few coins light; just enough coins in fact, to buy two mugs of stout Syliran ale.
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[Fighter's Pit] A Rude Rumpus

Postby Orin Fenix on April 3rd, 2015, 1:29 pm

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Weapon: Arming Sword 5
Weapon: Buckler 5
Tactics 3
Observation 3
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  • Tactics: Make the Unexpected Move
  • Yargul: Fat Fighter
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  • Who Brings a Sword and Shield to a Dirty Fighting Match?
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A wonderful training thread. I loved the use of NPCs and seeing Lorden's struggle to adjust to those who don't fight fair. On a more serious note, please deduct two silver mizas for the ale. In addition unless treated Lorden will have restricted vision until the 84th of Winter and a nice bruise around his eye until the 91st (you'll be fine by spring). Finally the cut on the leg will leave a nice thin scar.

Don't forget to edit or delete your grade request in the grade request thread.

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