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A Hunt and a Change

Postby Tinnok on February 28th, 2015, 6:14 pm

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67th of Winter, 514 A.V.

It was time.

Tinnok felt like a child with magic, playing with things that she still did not understand, and her teachers, temporary and fleeting had not imparted so much knowledge upon that she felt fully confident moving forward. Reimancy she had stopped using altogether, its strange whispers that coiled through her mind, and the way the essence seemed to drain her so entirely alarming her beyond most things she had encountered in this world.

But Morphing was different. Even though its power scared her, part of the magic felt in tune with her nature and very being. Where summoning up Reimancy was like a struggle, Morphing was like slipping into a second skin, new and different, difficult and draining, but something she could feel resonate within her with every shift.

Even so, she had yet to try a full transformation, and she knew she could achieve this, knew she had attained the power and experience to try it, which is why she had traveled through the jungle, and found a pack of Akila hounds in which to study. She had been with them two days, hunting alongside them. She had not kept any of her kills thus far to bring back to Zinrah, preferring to present them as gifts and share them with her temporary packmates, but today was going to be different.

The pack, primarily nocturnal rested, having found a little sunken hollow in which to rest for the day, Tinnok assuring their alpha male that she would alert them to any potential danger. The pack comprised of 7 hounds, four females and three males. They breathed softly, a snore or a dreaming whimper bringing a smile to the half breed's features as she breathed in deep and crawled on all fours into the center of the pack. She sat on her knees, head hanging, fingers sinking through dead leaves into the damp earth as she focused on points unknown. She was not very good at clearing her mind in meditation, but she found if she concentrated on pulling one thing away at a time that this helped. First her eyes closed and she imagined utter blackness, emptiness in the absence of the jungle. She concentrated on the cool earth and imagined how it must look deep beneath the earth, where eyeless things crawled and burrowed. Next were the noises. She could not eliminate them, but she pushed them back, focusing on the earth until the bird calls, buzzes, and rippling foliage was like a hum in the back of her mind.

Then and only then, holding her mind there, teetering on the verge of focus and its lack, but held together with the importance of the task she was undertaking, did she summon up her Djed, from the core in which she had come to realize the heart of her magic resided. It felt like a warm fountain, a strange power and another sense that opened up within her, waiting to be directed.

Then her golden eyes opened and she focused on a large female Akila in front of her, legs curled up around her. Her body was shaped all wrong in comparison to this canine, and she was going to alter it one step at a time. First, the most obvious change she could think of lay in her legs, whose joints swung the wrong way. Tendrils of res raced down, almost as upon instinct and she had to halt them from traveling into her toes where she normally formed her claws. That would be later. She circled her joints moving to sit on her rump and move the joints, feeling both with her Djed and muscles how they hinged, how the bone itself and the muscle around it felt. Then, taking a breath she flipped the hinge of her bones. She realized as she began this transformation that it was more in the muscles than the bones themselves. Simply rotating the bones to meet the requirements she sought was not so much effort, but she had to guide the muscles into place so that they would aid the leg in moving in this new and alien direction to her. She thickened the chords around her legs, and traced the design she could feel and need with her fingers. As she did this she continued pushing res down to fill her legs. Akila were stocky entities of muscle and fur, and her limbs were much too gangly to compare to theirs. Her pupil's narrowed in concentration and a bit of alarm as she watched the changes that she was willing into being begin to affect her legs, the new muscle mass pulling from the length of her legs, bones shortening, weight transferring.

The bones she pulled in, especially upon her feet, shortening and becoming more club like, claws protruding though she did not try to change her skin just yet. She began to shift off of her backside onto all fours, testing out these knew changes. It was a bizarre feeling to say the least when she sat on her haunches like a canine, legs folding under themselves as they never had before.

A smile crept to her lips but she forced it back. She had much more work to do.
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A Hunt and a Change

Postby Tinnok on May 23rd, 2015, 9:05 pm

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She stood up on all fours, feeling already more canine, but yet being still so far from her goal. From here she began to compare her model of the sleeping female with her body. For instance the hound's hips were angled almost perpendicular with her spine, while hers were still in line with her own. She frowned, perplexed as her res swirled and eddied around her hips, feeling her joints here with this new sense, shifting the bones and feeling as her body pitched slowly forward into a position more in line with that of a canine. As this happened energy ran into her arms and down into her fingers, similar transformations happening here as well. Arms shortened, bones thickening, muscles becoming more chorded and drawing on the mass she had available to her. A dogs paw was like a human hand, one drawn closer together with the first hinge of bone being short, pointing outward and ending in a claw. The second section of finger was also shorter, but still capable of flexibility, while the third section was much longer, the bones closer together. A dog's dew claw was where a human thumb would be, and so slowly her hands turned into fleshy paws in order to mimic this movement.

She must of looked like quite the monstrosity, nearly human but with the spine and feet of a dog. A rush of energy and elation coursed through her, being able to harness her powers of magic and make them work together to such affect, but sweat beaded upon her head, and there was a strain beneath the even flow of her morphing, testing the very limits of her capabilities.

She padded forward, legs shaking at the strange new feeling, and placed still hand textured paws upon the fur of her model. The hound shifted somewhat, snuffling sleepily but did not stir. Tinnok sifted her paws through the fur, tight, short, and coarse hairs, then began to mimic the substance upon her paws. Nandhai fur was similar, though not as tightly bound together and a bit longer. She drew up the memory of this previous morph, then adjusted accordingly, pulling at the follicles, concentrating on the color. When she had a patch to her liking on the back of her right paw, she began to guide the fur up along her body, up one arm and down another, while slowly spreading down her back and stomach. At first it felt itchy and strange, never had she covered her whole body with such a thing, but as it moved to cover her completely, leaving space around her face where she still had to morph a proper face and snout, the effect of the fur began to take root. She had suspected the new fur coat would make her hot, but the reality was the dark fur trapped the heat and kept it from touching her skin.

A weariness crept into the half breed then. Already she had done so much more than a normal morph for her, even though she was not yet near done. A loud yawn erupted from her throat, and she found herself curling up next to the other Akila. Instinctively her back right foot came up to scratch a furry still human shaped ear, but too exhausted to be amused she fell into a deep slumber alongside the pack.
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A Hunt and a Change

Postby Tinnok on May 26th, 2015, 2:11 pm

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She woke to curious snuffling close to her ears and face. Yellow orbs shot open to feel the inquisitive thoughts of the Akila snouts touching her, knowing her smell and the feel of her Phylonura marks, but wondering just what she had become. There was not much light left in the day, and the pack was stirring in preparation of the night.

The half breed had slept for bells, but rested wasn't precisely the word she felt. She didn't feel the same weariness as she had when she collapsed, but she was still sleepy...and most alarming of all she didn't feel the normal pull of her magic, the way she had to concentrate on a morph to keep it from jumping back to her original form. She imagined this was good, for if no matter what she transformed into she always had to fight with the power to return to her original image, it was harder to do multiple tasks in a morph...but at the same time...

She shook off the thought and stood up on all fours. It still felt awkward, she had the head and neck of herself, and a longer body and torso than the akilas, but she was realizing she could get used to being on all fours. She lined herself up with the female she had been studying and urged the others to nudge her and tell her where things seemed off. If anyone could give her tips on fully becoming a hound, it was they, able to see and observe the slightest differences.

The main issue was her head. Their own were mostly mouth, with squished noses more like holes in a cleaned skull, and short sharp triangular ears at the back of their head. Feeling more confident now that she had shifted the bones in her arms and legs, her magic darted into her skull. First she pushed the bones outward, extending her mouth nose and jaw, while pulling back the skin around her nose. It was strange to see and feel the shape of her skull grow, and the soft insides of her mouth followed. Her teeth no longer fit in her larger mouth, and she began adjusting their size to meet the large powerful chompers in the Akila hounds, her model opening her mouth politely to allow Tinnok to peer in, practically inside the hounds mouth with the fading light. She opened and closed her mouth thinking it would feel strange, but it was still a functioning mouth. Djed curled around the inside of her tongue, lengthening it as well, and she ran it across her teeth, out of her mouth so it could almost reach her snout.

Though her eyes were set back, she had to work to move them, or more accurately the skull shape so that they were no longer forward facing. This was perhaps the strangest of all, as it gave her an entirely different view of the world. In reality it was not so big a change, but it was very perceptible that she could see in a wider field then ever before, like. She took a couple steps forward, fur much shorter and thinner creeping up at the slightest behest of her will to cover what was left of her tanned scaled skin.

Her steps were shaky, and as she had requested the Akila's came forward with suggestions. Her ears were still human, her body was slightly longer, and she had one too many toes on each foot. Her ears shifted, and with them the skull that finally reached its full size and length with this latest transformation. She focused on them until the muscles allowed her to turn and flick them slightly, the experience of focusing one's hearing just another new addition to the evening.

She decided not to worry about the extra toes, nor how her body was a bit slimmer, and not as heavy as the other Akila's, as she wasn't sure there was much she could do about it, but when the female she had been studying stepped forward pressing their noses together she saw through her eyes what she looked like.

Tinnok had been a little afraid of seeing herself fully transformed, but the vision of the canine made her mouth split apart in a horrific lipless smile, displaying her whole array of mouth. She was one of them, not a perfect replica, but something close. The glaring error she noticed now were her eyes, which were still golden slitted orbs. With one last push of magic she encircled her eyes and washed away the color leaving it the milky white of the death bringers that were Akila hounds.

Yips and growls, surrounded her, and the hounds nudged and licked her, making Tinnok wiggle excitedly under their ministrations. She realized through their touch they were covering her with their scent, something she was not able to replicate, yet or perhaps ever, with morphing. Suddenly realizing her inability to speak noises like theirs began to escape her throat. At first she sounded like a puppy, yipping excitedly, but once she realized the capacity this mouth and throat held she began trying out growls, feeling the sound reverberate through her body.

After a chime of this, the pack dispersed and began making their way through the jungle. Tinnok began trotting after them, sniffing the air. She stopped the one female asking her to keep close. Even though she was nearly all akila, she could not see in the dark like they could, As long as she could smell and see the shadow of her form, however, Tinnok was confident she could keep up.

At first the female went at a trot, and Tinnok began to run, adjusting her form and body so that she was at the corner of her right, one eye trained on her, the other watching the darkening foliage rush by. Every step felt more powerful and certain on all four legs, and she at first took an easy loping stride, realizing the smaller area for her foot meant she could pick and choose places for them to land that were not loud crunchy leaves more easily. She felt like a child, jumping uncertainly onto roots, tripping up and uncoordinated with these new limbs, and eventually she shed stealth in favor of simply keeping up with the rest of the pack.

Slowly she got into a steady rhythm of running, and she felt a shiver of excitement run through her at the thought of the hunt ahead.
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A Hunt and a Change

Postby Tinnok on May 27th, 2015, 2:46 am

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Her ears pricked to their peak when the first blood curdling howl echoed through the thick jungle, farther ahead of her and her guide than she would have liked. One by one answering calls came back, the scattered pack honing in on the comrade that had found their intended prey. Since they were calling like that, Tinnok knew that whatever they had found was on the run, no need for stealth now. Her legs pumped harder, keeping as close to the female Akila as she dared, both of them picking up the pace. She let out a throaty growl, and her companion let out a cry of her own, long and piercing, it warbled and sounded like come great horn signalling an enemies imminent doom.

She knew one thing in that moment, and it was she wanted to learn how to replicate such a noise. She gave bark, growling in the back of her throat, then tried to draw it into a howl, but it didn't work. She could practically feel the amusement from the hound next to her and tried again, managing a pitiful 'aroooo,' and stopped after that as she almost crashed headlong into a tree.

Suddenly she heard the sounds of other hounds closing in, the pack drawing together for the kill. She felt a shiver travel down her spine, enhanced when she heard a desperate roar that did not come from an Akila hound. She knew the sound, but did not quite believe her ears until 5 of them came up over a small rise, the trees clearing somewhat to reveal two other hounds, one the alpha of the pack pressing a large tiger against a tree, growling and snarling.

It was nowhere as large as the Myrian counterparts bred and raised in Taloba, but it was still a large creature, much larger than a single akila hound. If they weren't careful it could take a hound or more down with it. Tinnok padded forward, watching as two of the pack instinctively took up flanking positions, anticipating the tiger making for an escape route. They all crept step by step, the tiger snarling and hissing, daring one of the hounds to get close enough for a swipe from one of its massive clawed paws.

Tinnok felt out of place without a role as the hounds made a fence of their bodies around the tiger, she fell behind their neat formation, tongue lolling out of her strangely shaped skull, a combination of seeping tiredness from her magical toll, and utter excitement coursing through her. The tiger surely knew it was done for, nowhere to go left or right, ahead, and with the large tree at its back...

Tinnok let out a warning bark whent he alpha made the first move darting in at the tiger. There was one place the tiger could go, and her paws sprang into action, claws digging into soft earth as she moved from a standstill to a sprint, sliding through the gap in the hounds. She wasn't quick enough to divert the swipe that caught the alpha across his muzzle, but in that moment when the tiger turned from its hunters and leapt up onto the tree, the new member of this pack put all her power into her back legs from her run and leapt into the air onto the tiger.

Of course paws didn't allow one much purchase or maneuverability, but where she lacked in her normal agility, she made up for in newly found jaw strength. Her maw opened and bit heartily, deeply, into the nape of the tigers neck, only able to make a small leap from its stand still in hopes it might get high upon the tree fast enough to get out of range of the hounds. Her front claws scrabbled on the tiger's hide, breaking through skin and her teeth sunk deep into its flesh, her body being dragged down by gravity, but also taking the tiger with her.

She felt her heart rush into her throat as she tumbled from the tree, prone and unable to flip or break her fall in anyway. She landed with a heavy thunk upon her back the tiger falling partially upon her, its side upon her back legs. Any panic she may have felt initially was swept away as the rest of the pack descending upon the tiger, the alpha's bleeding maw going straight for the tiger's throat while two others held down her body, for Tinnok looked into its eyes, losing life by the tick, and knew she was a proud female, caught in the wrong place at the wrong time. She watched the life ebb out of the great cat, but it did not stop her from tearing through her fur into the still warm meat and flesh of the cat when she was helped out from under her. She sank her face and nose into the fresh kill she had helped take down, and after swallowing her first steaming bite she threw her head up to the dark sky and howled a triumphant and haunting noise that made the creatures of the jungle flee around the pack's vicinity.
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A Hunt and a Change

Postby Tinnok on May 27th, 2015, 3:38 am

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If Reimancy was intoxicating immediately as soon as you tapped into your power and began using it, calling for you to use more and more res, morphing's draw, at least for Tinnok, was in the end result. Now the Akila pack was relaxed and full after its hunt, cleaning each other, socializing and resting. Though it hadn't taken the Witch long to gain their confidence as her half breed self, now that she had hunted in canine form there were the slightest changes, mostly she felt in how she saw them, not them seeing her. She was relaxed, full, and content, at home in this new body though...new was a bit of an understatement.

She lay her head on her paws, that weariness from before the hunt now bone deep, dull throbbing in her back where she had struck the ground so harshly.

She blinked a couple of times then sat up. She could rest when she had shifted her body back to the way it was supposed to be, there was no telling what kind of tole this had had on her. Tired as she was, even her Djed felt sluggish as she drew it up from the well in her center and began to direct it through her body. She decided to work not in reverse but in a mirror image of how she had began her transformation into an Akila hound, starting with her hind legs. She sat down on her haunches and first started at the hinge of her legs, moving and shifting the bones, and then the muscles, weaving her djed through her legs and lengthening the thick stout bones into the more narrow ones she was more familiar with. Her paws lengthened, turning back into feet, her wide face splitting apart in a grotesque smile as she wriggled her toes to test them. Next she shifted her hips so that her lower half, though covered with fur, was positioned as it would be normally. Her return to herself went slowly, her exhaustion increasing as she went, but it progressed smoothly, arms returning to normal, ears and skull shifting back into place, up until she reached the eyes. Her tongue was a bit too large, her teeth overcrowded, through smaller than they had been, but she focused her djed into her eyes, which she knew were still a milky white.

Everything was dark, and this was a part of the transformation she couldn't tell by looking if it actually worked, that being said when she concentrated on the color of her pupil and Iris a sudden and sharp pain shot through her skull like an iron spike. She clutched her head with furred hands, a half cry half growl escaping her clenched massive teeth. Her eyes were shut in utter pain, but she felt and heard the hounds draw up to her, concern emanating from their touches. The half breed didn't have the presence of mind to assure them she was alright, because she wasn't and pain flooded through her Phylonura connection into the hounds causing them to draw back from her.

Curled up in the fetal position the half breed tried to access her Djed again, felt another sharp pang, and fell into a state of unconsciousness.

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A Hunt and a Change

Postby Tinnok on May 27th, 2015, 3:57 am

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She woke to the feel of droplets hitting her head one by one in a steady stream. A snuffling nose pressed against her face, growls and whines surrounding her.

Her eyes opened blearily and a brief echoing pain from that of the night before bounced around in her skull as she sat up, seeing she was still covered in fur. Rain had soaked her thoroughly, and the pack of Akila hung around her anxiously. Today she had the presence to tell them she was alright, and crawled on hands and knees to a forming puddle to look at herself. Covered in fur, her eyes were still too far apart, nose still like an Akilas, and though not entirely white her eyes were a strange light yellow, with the same color pupil as iris. She wondered if she touched something sensitive, accidentally altered something else or tried to that night that had caused her such pain. She very tentatively reached within to summon up her Djed, preparing for the worst, but no pain came, at least no more than she felt in her throbbing head and back, and she began to undo the work from the previous night. She altered her skull returning her eyes to their normal position, adjusting her pupils back to their normal black, pulling out the cartilage of her nose so that behind the thin layer of fur she saw her face.

When she began to try to make the fur recede and return her skin to its normal scaled appearance however, she found that the Djed simply did not follow as she directed, or perhaps the fur did not respond to her Djed, whatever the technicality the fur would not return into her flesh, and she guided it to several spots in her body to try it from a different position, but it did not alter. At first she panicked, which helped her not at all, though she tried to fill her whole body simultaneously with Djed and remove it all at once. That worked only in tiring her immensely when she was already weary, and she panted on her hands and knees over the puddle.

She needed to meditate, to focus and calm herself, but she could not. She moved to the lee of the tree in which they had cornered the tiger that night, her carcass to one side collecting rain water, and touched the alpha, telling him to leave her.

Then she fell into another deep and exhausted slumber.
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A Hunt and a Change

Postby Tinnok on May 27th, 2015, 1:46 pm

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When she woke this time it was light, but only barely. She no longer felt a pain in her head, but one strong grasping one in her stomach. Her limbs felt weak as she tried to shift herself into a slightly more upright sitting position, and her neck complained sharply when it was moved, having been in one position for some time. She let out a small groan and opened bleary eyes to see a still damp jungle, and lying resting not far away from her feet was the same pack of Akila's.

She leaned forward, trying to pull herself closer to them when her hand sank into something furred and soft. She glanced down to see an Agouti carcass, its neck snapped in half, probably fresh from the previous evening left untouched for her. Thinking of filling her stomach with raw meat when not in Akila form made her hungry stomach roil, but instead she used a sharp rock nearby to clumsily cut the beasts throat and drink its blood. Her Myrian lineage was good for that at least, being able to subsist on blood when there were no alternatives. She drank until the ache in her stomach was a dull pain, face covered in blood when she was finished, then set the Agouti aside and crawled to one of the left over puddles from yesterday to slurp up hydration.

Thanfully the Akila pack still slept, and Tinnok returned to the lee of her tree, running her fingers along the fur that she had to find a way to get rid of.

She closed her eyes, folded her legs together and began to concentrate on her breathing, in through the nose, out through the mouth. She sank her fingers into the earth once more concentrating on the cool wetness, the darkness. The noises around her dimmed and she imagined she was back in Zinrah sitting amongst salamanders and Tsuya, calm, serene, not still stuck in between morphs, exhausted mentally and physically. When she reached for her Djed she was not afraid, she was confident, she would do this. She slid it down into the back of her right hand, where she had tested it out before pooling the Djed underneath that small circle of skin, willing the hair back into her scales. She did not look, did not open her eyes, but she felt a breeze brush against exposed skin. She did not smile, only continued what she was doing, moving the Djed up and down her body methodically, removing the fur as she did so until she was back to normal.

She felt drained again when she opened her eyes and examined her Phylonura mark and other tanned arm, but she had slept enough. Instead she sat and continued to meditate. It was hard to focus, she was still not adept, and her concentration broke many times, but she felt centered by the time evening came again and the Akila hounds woke.

The pack took her back to her belongings, and did not leave her there. Instead they continued to hunt together until they neared Zinrah where Tinnok said her farewells with more than a few pieces to bring back to Zinrah, having made more valuable friends along her journey.

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A Hunt and a Change

Postby Dravite on June 28th, 2015, 10:19 am

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XP Award:

  • Meditation: 2
  • Morphing: 5
  • Logic: 1
  • Running: 2
  • Hunting: 2
  • Intelligence: 1


Lore:

  • Morphing: A second skin
  • Morphing: Studying a morph over time to perfect it
  • Akila hounds are nocturnal
  • Meditation: Closing your eyes to help focus
  • Morphing: A slow morph, perfecting the basics
  • Morphing: Bones, skin, claws, fur
  • Tinnok: Your first complete body morph
  • Morphing: Trading two legs for four
  • Tinnok: One with the pack
  • Hunting: Taking down a tiger
  • Morphing: Overgiving is dangerous and can be painful
  • Medicine: Staying hydrated will help you overcome tiredness


Penalties:
Overgiving:
Physical – Tinnok will have a headache that comes and goes for the next two weeks.
Mental – Tinnok will expect pain after full body morphs until her skill and confidence increases.
Spiritual – Tinnok will find it harder to connect with some animals for the next two weeks.

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Notes: Tinnok… The detail was absolutely stunning! Wow. I had to read this thread twice because I was so engrossed the first time through that I forgot to do my job! What a strange and wonderful experience. I really want morphing now, the jealousy is real. Stunning thread, one of my favourites of all the threads I have graded to date! Well done. Let me know if you think I have missed anything here and be sure to edit your grading request!

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