Due Rewards
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Tiath
Skills
➢ Blacksmithing +4
➢ Observation +4
➢ Investigation +2
➢ Socialization +5
➢ Planning +2
➢ Philosophy +1
➢ Rhetoric +1
➢ Longsword +1
Lores
➢ Blacksmithing: Using Bellows
➢ Blacksmithing: Creating a Horseshoe
➢ Blacksmithing: The Wrong Way to Make a Sword
➢ Ros Vizerian: Highly Respected Smith
➢ Ros Vizerian: Do Not Disturb
➢ Location: The Mithryn Outpost
➢ Ser Brendan: Family Friend
➢ Kurger: Old Teacher
➢ Location: Kurger's Forge
Comments: This was a good solo. I liked it. I felt really sorry for Tiath when he confronted his parents. His father is a real piece of work--instantly hated him. Just as a reminder though there are no hours, minutes, or seconds in Mizahar. There are bells for hours, chimes for minutes, and ticks for seconds. Other than that, good job. Maybe proof read your posts a little more thoroughly in the future, but other than those small things, I have no complaints!
Consequences: Tiath will now have a prominent scar on his jaw where his father cut him. It will heal in two weeks unless tended by gnosis.
➢ Blacksmithing +4
➢ Observation +4
➢ Investigation +2
➢ Socialization +5
➢ Planning +2
➢ Philosophy +1
➢ Rhetoric +1
➢ Longsword +1
Lores
➢ Blacksmithing: Using Bellows
➢ Blacksmithing: Creating a Horseshoe
➢ Blacksmithing: The Wrong Way to Make a Sword
➢ Ros Vizerian: Highly Respected Smith
➢ Ros Vizerian: Do Not Disturb
➢ Location: The Mithryn Outpost
➢ Ser Brendan: Family Friend
➢ Kurger: Old Teacher
➢ Location: Kurger's Forge
Comments: This was a good solo. I liked it. I felt really sorry for Tiath when he confronted his parents. His father is a real piece of work--instantly hated him. Just as a reminder though there are no hours, minutes, or seconds in Mizahar. There are bells for hours, chimes for minutes, and ticks for seconds. Other than that, good job. Maybe proof read your posts a little more thoroughly in the future, but other than those small things, I have no complaints!
Consequences: Tiath will now have a prominent scar on his jaw where his father cut him. It will heal in two weeks unless tended by gnosis.
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