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Katelyn buys a puppy!

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[The Great Bazaar] Dog Gone Cute

Postby Katelyn Marks on April 21st, 2015, 7:07 pm

30th, Spring, 515 AV


Kate really couldn't say the reason she found herself down in the Bazaar today was for some fresh air--because it was in the basement of the castle. Stretching her legs didn't fit either. The squire had plenty of opportunity to do that. No, she simply wanted a change of scenery, and to finally explore the city a little more. She'd decided that the busy belly of Stormhold was a good a place as any to start.

As she was swallowed up by the throng of shoppers though, she began to doubt her decision. It was impossible at first to do anything but follow the flow of the crowd, moving along like cattle and all shouting over one another. Several stalls she passed caught her eye, but before she could disengage from the writhing mass of shoppers, she was swept away with them.

The squire made an entire circuit around the bazaar before she finally found her stride, and as one of the stalls from earlier approached one more, she shoved her way past milling bodies. There was no other way to do it. Head down, arms at the ready--she felt like a boxer. As soon as she was free of the mass, Katelyn felt instant relief. She could breathe again.

The merchant at the stall she'd disengaged to browse regarded her with a smile, arms folded over his chest. He was swathed in sumptuous robes, and everything smelled like spices. Strangely enough, she couldn't place reason for the odor. All she saw on his tables were beautiful pots, cups, and every manner of cooking utensil possible.

She knew that her window shopping was rather pointless because she couldn't cook to save her life, but the wares had caught her eye and she'd been unable to shake the desire for a closer look.

"See anything you like?" The man spoke perfect Common but looked like a foreigner. He had bronze skin and no hair, with several delicate piercings that looked more for a woman than a man of his girth. Several large, jeweled rings crowded his chunky fingers, and a heavy golden pendant with some kind of strange stone rested heavy against his colorfully clothed chest. He was mesmerizing.

"Yes, but I'm afraid I wouldn't be able to put any of this to use. I'm a useless cook, and have nowhere to entertain," she admitted, but instead of becoming frustrated that he wouldn't be making a sale, he simply nodded.

"No worries my dear. I'm here often. Perhaps one day you'll have business with me after all."

Katelyn smiled at his generous assumption. He must have no problems with business if he was open to simple browsers. After she looked at everything she could on his tables and they exchanged a kind goodbye, the squire shuffled down the row past a few more stalls selling sewing supplies. Large, colorful bolts of fabrics, all manner of threads and embroidery supplies, and even a small loom. She was even more useless with fabric than she was with food.

Past those vibrant stands there was suddenly a gap, and Kate found herself looking at a small pen. A old man sat on a stool beside it, and a dog lay at his feet watching the crowd go by. When he spotted her hesitation to move on, he was on her before she could escape.

"You! Got a chime?" Katelyn stood frozen in place, half-turned to move on, but unable to make herself go. The old man stood from his seat and beckoned her over. Reluctantly the squire joined him by the pen, and when she peered inside saw something she wasn't expecting.

A litter of small pups were all in different states of rest and unrest. Some playing and wrestling, others sitting idle or simply sleeping. A few were solid red in color, but the majority of them were black with tan markings. Katelyn felt a smile spread across her face, and she instinctively reached down to offer them her hand. When she looked at the old man again he was smiling triumphantly. He had her hook, line, and sinker.

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[The Great Bazaar] Dog Gone Cute

Postby Katelyn Marks on April 22nd, 2015, 5:42 pm

"Cute, huh?" The old man flashed his tobacco stained teeth, knowing full well he had a weak heart in front of him. Katelyn didn't answer, but she didn't walk away either. He moved around beside her and scooped one the puppies out of the pen. It wiggled in his grasp, whining loudly. He soothed it calmly, stroking its soft back. "My girl here had this batch, and I can't keep them. For one, the mutt that bred her is useless stock. No idea what he is, or what he's good for. But this bitch here is one of the best scent hounds around." He looked at his dog with pride. Kate had no idea what breed she was.

The puppies were almost painfully adorable. The squire couldn't take her eyes off the little one he was holding, and suddenly the old man passed it over. She grimaced, unable to smile, and held it aloft. A little girl with small drooping ears, long hair, and a short, smooshed muzzle. Her eyes were large and sad, and her short legs wobbled in the air.

"Ten gold pieces apiece. That's all I'm asking. A rehoming fee if you will. I want to make sure people are serious about them." Katelyn regarded the old man shrewdly. His bold faced lie was obvious. He didn't give one lick, and it made her care that much more.

"I can't have a dog," she protested, and he plucked the pup right out of her hands.

"Well, there's plenty of people who can. So if you're wasting my time you can keep going," he said simply, without batting an eye. Katelyn looked at the pen as he placed the puppy back inside, frowning deeply and folding her arms. When she didn't walk away, he sat back down and just watched her. "You can step inside if you like," the old man enticed.

You're making a big mistake, she thought to herself, but went in anyways. She blamed her father for making her so keen toward animals. Katelyn had always wanted a dog, and for some reason these little ones were too irresistible. All of them were like potatoes with legs. Small, soft, with their chunky tails wagging. As she sat down they swarmed her, crawling into her lap and vying for attention. The mother dog watched from outside the pen, supervising her babies with the stranger with a serious gaze.

Homesickness and loneliness was making her extremely careless. She knew all too well she was walking away with one of these little ones. The attention and affection they were pouring on her was like a soothing balm, and she just couldn't hide her smile anymore.
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[The Great Bazaar] Dog Gone Cute

Postby Katelyn Marks on April 23rd, 2015, 4:39 pm

Of course she couldn't enjoy the moment without interruption. That would be too fortuitous. No, instead a mother and her daughter disengaged from the crowd, and despite the woman's scolding the child broke loose from her grasp and came sprinting over to the pen. Katelyn was surprised she wasn't foaming at the mouth as she peered over the top of the enclosure, eyes hungrily regarding the puppies swarming the squire.

"Mama! I want one!" her voice was loud--louder than necessary, and before the redhead could even prepare the old man was hoisting her into the pen to get a closer look. The mother looked like she was about to be sick. Katelyn looked at her and when their eyes met, hers were screaming a silent apology. She rubbed her temples and said nothing though, simply letting her child have at it.

"Mom!" the girl wailed, plucking one of the wiggling pups up off the ground and holding it aloft like a toy. The small animal flailed and whined, trying to escape. Katelyn could tell she was squeezing the little thing too tightly. Her skin crawled and she fought the urge to take the puppy away. "Mom, look at it! Can I have it?" Her mother looked as if she was in pain. After a few ticks of her daughter repeating the question, she finally spoke. Her voice dripped with fatigue.

"You already have a dog and a kitten. You don't need any more pets," the woman tried to explain calmly. It sounded more like she was pleading with the child more than actually telling her. Kate saw tears welling in the little girl's big brown eyes, and held her breath as she clutched the puppy in her hands tightly to her chest, surely suffocating it. It mewled softly, squirming weakly in discomfort. My Gods she's going to choke the life out of it, she thought in fright, and decided she couldn't watch any more.

"I'll take one," Kate said suddenly, standing quickly but carefully so she didn't jostle the litter. They slid from her lap gently, rolling across the blanket protecting them from the cold stone floor on clumsy legs. The old man looked surprised when she spoke after the distraction by the mother and daughter, like he'd forgotten she was there, but smiled when her words registered.

"Good, good! That'll be-," he began, but she cut him off, impatient and annoyed by the whole situation.

"Ten gold mizas," Katelyn finished, fishing out the money and handing it to him. He counted them like it was actually necessary, and she grimaced. Hurry up. When he nodded and pocketed his profits, he motioned to the litter.

"Take your pick."
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[The Great Bazaar] Dog Gone Cute

Postby Katelyn Marks on April 23rd, 2015, 5:00 pm

"That one," she said, not even trying to sound or look nice. The little girl was being selfish, and if she kept on squeezing the puppy in her hands would kill it. Some kind of deep maternal instinct had taken over, or maybe she was just pissed. Either way, the girl's mother wasn't going to put her foot down, so Katelyn would act instead. Both of them looked at her in surprise, and the girl's tears stopped suddenly. She looked at the wiggling lump of fur in her fists and back at the squire. Slowly, her features twisted into a glare.

"No!" she screamed, startling the three adults. Her mother looked like she wanted to disappear. The old man didn't seem to care what was going on. Katelyn held out her hand, face blank. Her lips were a flat line, eyes stern, and posture imposing. Yes, she was intimidating a child. Not very kind of her, but if the parent wasn't going to do it then she sure as shit would. If there was anything that bothered her it was disrespectful children--perhaps she loathed the careless parents even more. Either way, they were both high on the list.

"You're suffocating him," she explained in a low, serious voice. "If you don't hand him over you'll choke him to death, and then I'll be very upset. I just paid for him. He belongs to me." The child seemed to have to think on her words were a long moment. Confusion swam across her face, and finally understanding dawned in her eyes. She looked at the dog in her hands and loosened her grasp with great deliberation. It seemed to take some effort to be gentle. Katelyn didn't smile at her. She simply held out her own hands for the pup and waited.

Another glare twisted the little girl's face, and they stared at each other for a long time. Her mother never said a word, but watched with bated breath. Finally, the child's face fell and she passed the dog over. Katelyn snatched it up quickly and cradled it gently against her breasts. It was a he, she realized, and when he whined at her she finally smiled.

"Thank you," she said simply, and stepped over the pen's gate. The squire ignored the old man when he tried to speak, asking her what she planned on naming him. Katelyn wanted to put as much distance as she could between all of them. The last thing she heard of the mother and daughter was the girl complaining loudly as her mother drug her away from the rest of the dogs, eager to forget about the whole ordeal and be home. Kate smiled to herself and gently patted the little ball of fluff nestled in her arms.

He looked up at her with big brown eyes, curious of the face swimming above and also relieved to be able to breathe again. He had a short, brownish-red muzzle and little curly ears that framed his round face. Two little dots marked the fur above his eyes, giving him the appearance of eyebrows. All four paws had brown socks, and he had a tiny speck of white on his chin.

"Hello Winston," she crooned quietly, and his tail began to wag.

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[The Great Bazaar] Dog Gone Cute

Postby Sayana on May 12th, 2015, 5:45 pm

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Katelyn

Skills:
Skill EXP
Land Navigation +1
Observation +4
Socialization +1
Rhetoric +2
Intelligence +1
Intimidation +1
Persuasion +1
Animal Husbandry +1
Teaching +1


Lores:
  • Location: The Great Bazaar
  • Intelligence: Recognizing a merchant's monetary intentions
  • Protecting a puppy from a spoiled child
  • Winston: New puppy

Shield Points:
Shield Points Earned Reason
+0 None awarded

Total: +0 Shield Points

Comments :
This was a sweet little thread. I awarded what I could and it was lovely to see Katelyn getting a puppy. And the picture you chose for Winston is absolutely adorable.

Don’t forget to update your ledger to include the purchase of the puppy (10gm).

I didn't actually see Katelyn actively trying to negotiate something (or haggle) with the merchant so I didn't award negotiation points.


Don't forget to edit/delete your grade request in the grade request thread. However, make sure to keep the link so that the DS can review graded threads with ease.

If you have any questions or concerns about your grade please feel free to send me a message (like really, I’m all ears if you feel like I missed something).

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