Alistair

[Alistair]

Alistair Appearance Race: Human Gender: Male Age: 23 Birthday: 3 Spring,429 AV Starting City: Syliras Birthplace: Syliras Alistair is a large imposing young man who most often finds himself ducking through doors. He keeps his dark hair cropped short, though uneven and unkempt. Alistair carries himself with an unconscious arrogance that many people find intimidating and off putting. He has many scars from frequent fighting, the most noticeable being a knife scar running from the base of his left ear to his chin. Character Concept Alistair is an intimidating looking man who has lived his life with simple desires and simple goals. He loves fighting. It is something he is good at and he feels most alive during a brawl. However he is not an unkind man. He does not cause unnecessary pain nor does he use his size to bully people. He is a loyal man to those who he feels deserve it and he wants people to like him. Character History The most telling fact about Alistair is that Alistair is not his real name. He got the name from a story about a great hero he had heard told one night in a tavern. The truth is he doesn’t remember what name his parents gave him. He doesn’t remember his parents at all. No blurred images or fuzzy memories. He doesn’t remember anything past his early life on the streets of Syliras. His lack of history is an itch he instinctively refuses to scratch. He grew up surviving any way he could being a street urchin. He learned to lie, steal, and fight. It helped that he quickly grew taller and stronger than the other children his age. He learned to fight and learned that he enjoyed fighting. He was fast and strong. Any other time he was a nobody, but in the middle of a fight he was powerful and significant. These skills made him popular. He worked as muscle for several small crews learning the basics of criminal conduct. He has no compunction against stealing and some of the other crimes he found himself involved with, but more often he was used for his size and strength. He realized he hated fighting those weaker than him, that causing pain to those who did not deserve it disgusted him. Eventually he found work as a bouncer at a local tavern. The place was bad, and the clientele was dangerous. It offered Alistair dependable pay with plenty of practice fighting. Eventually though he began to desire more from life. He was not exactly sure what that something was, but he knew he wanted his story to be more than a series of bar fights. Language Fluent Language: Common Basic Language: Poor Language: Skills Skill EXP Total Proficiency Brawling 30 SP 30 SP Competent Weapon Skill: Hand weapons 10 SP 10SP Novice Larceny 10 SP 10SP Novice Lores Lores: Lore of Syliras streets Possessions 1 Set of Clothing -Flaxen Shirt -Flaxen Pants -Simple Undergarments -Flaxen Cloak or Coat -Simple Boots 1 Waterskin 1 Backpack which contains: -Comb (Wood) -Brush (Wood) -Soap -Razor -Food is given out daily -1 eating knife -Flint & Steel 100 Gold Mizas Housing Location: Syliras House: Alistair lives in a small room above the tavern he works in. Ledger Purchase Cost Total Starting +100 GM 100 GM Thread List Link your current & past threads here!

[Crosspatch]

Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

• Please link your CS to your profile. This can be done through the user control panel.
• As a note, the current year is 515 AV. If your PC is presently 23 years old that means he was born in the year 492 AV.
• The weapon skill "Hand Weapons" is not a valid skill. Weapon skills specific to what is being used, and are labelled as "Weapon: Weapon name”.
• You are missing your Racial Bonus. As a normal human that would be +15 RB in any one skill of your choice.
• In Syliras no one lives on the streets for very long, nor would any children be street urchins. Such members of society would be quickly rounded up and put to work by the knights, or children would be put into the local city orphanage. The knights would also not tolerate thieves, thugs or those of a criminal nature as they run a very tight ship - if anything your entire character history would be more suited to the city of anarchy Sunberth. Please take this into consideration with your history.
• You appear to be missing a second starting lore. A lore is some form of general knowledge that the character has gained over their lifetime. Such as knowledge on a particular deity or knowing the layout of a particular city.
• Please choose a cloak or coat. You cannot have both.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


Crosspatch