Valentina TornGrass

[Valentina TornGrass]

Valentina TornGrass




Appearance

A taller Female, 5'8 with long black flowing hair and several braids through out with one large braid going from her left temple around her forehead and falls down with the rest of her hair with wraps around them.
Little jewels rest on her braids, She lets her hair fall to her sides.
She has a small face and a serious face about her. She has bright golden yellow eyes as well as her small face.

Apparel and body
She wears a sage cloak with a hood and has furs that fall around her cloak and neck that leaves on shoulder exposed with a small leather and metal shoulder guard. The cloak comes down to about the middle of her thigh. She wears a brown leather tank top under that shows her stomach as she has a very muscular small build, the tank top has a sage lining, there are several straps that cover each arm. one on her right with a special glass work dyed a dark red gifted to her by her wife.
she wears strapped leather boots up to here knees and large harem black and sage pants tucked into her boots.
around her wrist are small leather gauntlets and a couple of metal plates latched onto them.
Her breasts are of average size, Her waist is small and hips wide.
She has one Wind Mark that goes from her neck down in between her breasts, it swirls around her left breast and falls down to her side and ends at her hip. She has two other Wind Marks on her eyes and on her forehead, three curvy vine like wind marks come down onto her on her left eye and down from the middle of her forehead to her temple.




Race: Drykas
Gender: Female
Age: 16
Birthday: Season Of Winter, Day 6, 499
Birthplace: Cyprus, Endrykas





Character Concept

Valentina all though her name is sweet she a morbid person who enjoys killing showing little love for anyone except the closest people to her, She can be at bit edgy at times and a little reckless. She can have violent mood swings as well and thirst for battle when shes not in some type of conflict shes hunting.
People rarely get under her skin when shes level headed.
She is a very seductive girl and can get people to do her bidding fairly easily.


About valentina



Her Weapons:


Her bow is her life and soul she has it with her everywhere she goes and she makes sure her arrows are of plenty.


She owns one Small dagger like sword she calls "silver" its very light and it goes with her everywhere too. She is very versatile with her weapons and finds unique ways to use them.

She has a wife named katze (actual Pc) And lives in a small pavilion on a few miles away from Endrykas she enjoys to be solitary in most cases except when shes with her wife. Her eyes are said to be her "Seducer" as people fall in love with them with in a matter of seconds.

she has a strider named "scout" its a white horse with a black braided mane and black socks with a black tail.
Some regard her horse as steady because she is a dangerous archer on horse back.
She is said to belong to the diamond clan but does not swear to anyone really.

Character History

At the age of 13 she had lost her mother and her father had left to scout on day and never returned. Likely to be dead she started to hunt for her self practicing her shot with her bow she had already killed someone by age 14, a couple of men looking to harm and rape young Inarta had taken her the red haired girl to a cave close to her mothers povilion where she lived. She heard screams from inside the cave and she went to investigate only to find the men with a knife to the girls throat she shot two and killed the other with a dagger, from then on the Inarta would follow Valentina. She would teach her the ways of the Drykas and teach her how to hunt, ride and use a bow. The inarta would soon become her wife and the only person Valentina felt compasion for.





language

Fluent Language: Pavi And Grassland signs
Basic Language: Common
Poor Language: Nari



Skills

-30/100 Riding

-15/100 Archery

-10/100 Acrobatics

-10/100 Charm

Lores

Lore of Sea of Grass Geography
Lore of Drykas Culture
Lore of History of Endrykas
Lore of the Importance of the Clans
Lore of the Importance of the Strider

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing (Colorful)
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Cloak or Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Bone)
-Brush (Bone)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (2 Week’s Worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
100 Gold Mizas
1 Bow
1 Sword

Heirloom:

A small povilion( Her mothers Home who has passed away) with many beautiful rugs And lots of blankets a small barn for her Strider and her wife's horse. And a small farm next to the povilion that her wife works in.

A bow And about thirty arrows
Her fathers favorite sword "Silver"

Location: A povilion a few miles away from endrykas.

House: A large tent made with animal skins and leather filled over with leaves on top and alot of rugs layed down around the floor with small fur blankets and a pit fire in the middle, Decorations are hung along the tent walls.



House: 1 large tent (4 person)
1 large tarp
100 ft of rope
1 lantern
2 torches
2 bedroll
3 blanket
1 set of fishing tackle & hooks
1 bonded Strider
2 Yvas
1 large set of Yvas bags
4 Rugs

Note on Yvas:
The Drykas use what is called a Yvas on their horses rather than bridles and saddles. A yvas is what equates to a girth with an attached breast collar combination hung with hooks and topped with a small flat hand grip that lays along a horse's shoulders. The Yvas is often placed over a colorful pad that acts to protect the horse from the rider. The grip fits over a strider's withers which holds the yvas in place. It almost looks like the type of thing vaulters used on their draft horses, though it is more functional than a vaulter's pad. The horses can free themselves from them if they got separated from their riders, and do not have tack to entrap or tangle them when they are running loose. The yvas has ring tethers on it for handling a set of wither bags and a waterskin, and is often decorated in knot-work beading that identified the horse and rider as part of a specific pavilion.

Drykas ride without any headgear or bridles on their horses at all. They do not use any halters either.



Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM


Thread List
Beautiful Silence, Season of spring, Day 33, 515 AV
http://www.mizahar.com/forums/topic58812.html

[Crosspatch]

Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

• Yellow is not a natural eye colour for the Drykas. In terms of human subcultures, unusual eye colours are restricted to the Vantha (with their changing eyes) or the Inarta with their golden.
• It is required that you clearly state which skills are Starter Package (SP) skills and which are Racial Bonus (RB).
• The skill "Archery" is not a valid skill. Weapon skills specific to what is being used, and are labelled as "Weapon: Weapon name”.
• Charm is not a valid skill. What do you mean by this? The ability to persuade? Seduce? Flirt?
• Please specify the riding animal your character is familiar with, i.e. "Riding: Horse".
• You may only have two starting lores at creation, not 5. Please remove 3 of your starting lores.
• Your character description and history speaks of your PC using a sword/dagger, is versatile with weapons and capable of killing despite not having any skill points in any weapon skills outside of using a bow to back this up. Please take this into consideration with your history.
• Your character would sooner be taken in by one of the other Drykas pavilions, or her mother's Pavilion with a serving Ankal as the family head supervising the events of the group instead of being left at a young age than left to wander the landscape on her own. Also wandering and travelling the land without any points in Wilderness Survival is strongly discouraged. Please take this into consideration.
• Same sex relationships and marriage in Drykas culture is considered a taboo unless they sire and produce children. You may wish to take this into consideration with your CS.
• Please choose a cloak or coat. You cannot have both.
• You have only 1 week's worth of rations at creation. Please correct this.
• It is Pavilion, not Povillion. Please correct this.
• Did you mean a Pavilion tent (Value 50gm on Price list) as your heirloom? I ask this because beyond that a Pavilion is a Drykas Family that lives within tents, constantly moving about the Sea of Grass with the city of Endrykas. They also would not hold any farms, barns or the like due to this nomadic lifestyle. Instead they would live off the land through hunting or herding animals.
• If you wish to have the 4 rugs, the additional Yvas, the sword, bow, arrows, the worn leather gauntlets and shoulder guard, the additional blankets and bedroll from outside the starting housing and package then you are required to purchase them and remove the value of them from your ledger. Any items brought must be listed in the character’s possessions and in the ledger along with their price. Several different items cannot be lumped together. A good example of a ledger is as so;

  Item	Price	Money
  Starting Package	+ 100 gm	100gm
  Candle	-1 gm	99 gm
  Shirt	-1 gm	98gm

  
  

  Code: Select all

  [table]Item|Price|Money
Starting Package|+ 100 gm|100gm
Candle|-1 gm|99 gm
Shirt|-1 gm|98gm[/table]

• Please make sure to list the entire contents of the tent starter package housing option.

While making corrections to your CS may I advise that you take into consideration the Starting Guide, the Things you need to know and the articles included in the Starting Package. May I also advise you also once more look over the Drykas lore on subject to their Everyday life, Taboos, and other important information that is unique to the race.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


Crosspatch