[Note by Crosspatch] Szarossenxoren

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Szarossenxoren

Postby Xoren on May 16th, 2015, 5:17 am

Szarossenxoren


Appearance

Race: Dhani [Eunectes Murinus]
Gender: Male
Age: 123
Birthday: 14th, Winter, 392
Birthplace: Zinrah

Appearance:
 
Human
Slightly above six feet, four inches [6'4"] Xoren and his muscular stature cuts an intimidating figure. Smooth, bronze skin testifying his time in the Syliran sun. His eyes are the color of light chocolate, straight black eyebrows resting above them. His lips are small yet always grinning, his strong jaw making his grin look slightly less friendly than it is. Raven hair short and combed back, he keeps a well-to-do appearance, even though he does love to get his hands dirty.




 
Dhani
Totaling at around twenty-two feet, Xoren is a muscular beast. Keeping the same smooth pattern as his fully serpentine form, the only difference are two huge, bulging limbs.



 
Serpent
Pushing forty-five feet in length, Xoren is a huge, thick monster. His scales are mostly black; dark green creating markings about his otherwise pure ebony coloring. His underside is slightly lighter than his other parts; except his spade-like head, which also has the same light color as his bottom half. He has a sharp row of large, inward-pointing fangs and teeth lining his mouths, used for gripping those unlucky enough to be eaten.


Character Concept

Xoren is a lazy anaconda; he could be found draping his massive frame across chairs in various public places around town, dozing at any time of day or night. Though, he could also be caught out in the wild, in his Dhani or Serpent form, basking in the sun. Quite easily bored, he is one to leave company should they not satisfy his sometimes adventurous mood to go take a nap.

Like most Dhani, Xoren holds Siku above all others. While not a religious fanatic, he does pay small tributes from time to time. Caiyha is also a Goddess he holds in high regards; though he grudges to admit it. Above her, though, is Myri. Only recently has he shown this particular Goddess anything. He believes she will soon become up there with Siku, though will never pass the Goddess of Snakes.

When riled up, he can get quite hot-headed. Controlled almost totally by his emotions, he can have multiple, opposite moods within an hour. Dreadfully fond of women, he can always find time to flirt (or more like compliment them bluntly to get a blush), be it in the middle of battle or sitting in a tavern. When speaking to a woman he likes, good chance he'll be far from cruel or cunning. While happy, he would, instead of sharing joy with friends, rather go and sleep longer and become a well rested individual. Still quite cunning, though not particularly cruel, he is known for his unrelenting rage. Should one loose it, they soon find out he is without mercy; he cares not for anyone but himself, not yet.



Character History

Born in Zinrah, Xeron arrived to the lawless city around the ending of Winter, beginning of Spring. He really came to see the sights, but being able to eat all who cross him and not gaining consequences while doing so is also an added bonus. He was told a lot about Sunberth from his father, who was a traveler himself. His father had been through much of Mizahar: nearly everywhere save for Kalea, who's mountainous regions he could not overcome. With this exploration failure, he went back home to Zinrah, since he felt it was time for him to have children.


Language

Fluent Language: Snake-Tongue
Basic Language: Common
Poor Language: Myrian

Skills

 
Physical
SkillNameExperienceTotal
ImageWrestling10 RB, 5 SP15
ImageUnarmed Combat10 SP10


 
Mental
SkillNameExperienceTotal
ImageTactics10 SP10


 
Combat
SkillNameExperienceTotal
ImageGreatsword25 SP25


 
Trade


 
Social


Lores

Lore of Religion: Siku
Lore of Dhani Sub-Races

Possessions

1 Set of Clothing
-Simple Shirt
-Simple Pants
-Simple Undergarments
-Simple Coat
-Simple Boots
1 Waterskin
1 Backpack which contains:
-Comb (Bone)
-Brush (Bone)
-Soap
-Razor
-Balanced Rations (1 Week's worth)
-1 eating knife
-Flint & Steel
Armor, Leather
Scabbard
Weapon Harness

Heirloom: Steel greatsword given to him by his father.

Housing

Location: Sunberth

House: An apartment in the Sunset Quarter.


Ledger

Purchase Cost Total
Starting +100 GM 100 GM
Armor, Leather -10 GM 90 GM
Scabbard -4 GM 86 GM
Weapon Harness -5 GM 81 GM


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Szarossenxoren

Postby Crosspatch on May 22nd, 2015, 5:23 pm

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Hello there!

I'm Crosspatch, one of the friendly CS Liaisons on Mizahar! I've been looking over your Character Sheet, and I have noticed some minor issues that need to be resolved and fixed. Sadly these need to be done before you can continue roleplaying, so let's take a look at them shall we?

  • As Winter 515 AV has yet to come round your PC would presently be 122 years old.
  • Due to the diverse nature of snakes even, it has been requested that each Dhani player picks out a snake type from real life and pattern the Dhani after the particular snakes' traits. More information on how to do this can be found on the bottom of the Dhani lore page.
  • Travelling the land from Zinrah to Sunberth, without any points in Wilderness Survival is strongly discouraged. Please take this into consideration.

Once these problems have been dealt with, drop me a PM and I'll remove this intervention and approve your CS for you. Also if you have any questions don't hesitate to ask and I'll do my best to answer!


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