Completed Seeking Comfort

A continuation from a previous thread, we find Elann and Noah at the Rearing Stallion.

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This shining population center is considered the jewel of The Sylira Region. Home of the vast majority of Mizahar's population, Syliras is nestled in a quiet, sprawling valley on the shores of the Suvan Sea. [Lore]

Seeking Comfort

Postby Devi on November 1st, 2015, 9:05 pm


Your Grades have arrived!


Noah

I've got your grades all ready - just let me know when your ledger is updated as per my message and I'll add them in here :).

Skills:
  • Observation: 5
  • Socialization: 5
  • Cooking: 2
  • Rhetoric: 1
  • Land Navigation: 2
  • Interrogation: 3
  • Teaching: 2
  • Persuasion: 1
  • Intelligence: 2
  • Herbalism: 1
Lores:
  • Location: The Rearing Stallion
  • Syliras: Full of Life
  • Elann: Speaks with an adorable twang
  • Elann: Highly expressive
  • Socialization: Signs of displeasure
  • Socialization: Delivering an apology
  • Socialization: Confronting sorrow
  • Elann: Kind and helpful and small and cute
  • Elann: Is a weaver
  • Socialization: Observing social niceties
  • Herbalism: Mishenel, also known as Mehendi
  • Cooking: Making coffee
  • Cooking: Cardamom, an aromatic spice
  • Cooking: Simmering
Comments: Thank you for updating your ledger - enjoy your grades!


Elann

Skills:
  • Observation: 5
  • Socialization: 5
  • Cooking: 3
  • Rhetoric: 2
  • Land Navigation: 1
  • Linguistics: 1
  • Interrogation: 2
  • Persuasion: 3
  • Philosophy: 1
  • Intelligence: 1
  • Teaching: 3
Lores:
  • Location: The Rearing Stallion
  • Noah: Fidgets a lot
  • Noah: Not human – a carnivorous Kelvic
  • Noah: Has insecurities about himself
  • Noah: Is a courier
  • Noah: Voracious appetite
  • Persuasion: Being gentle with shy people
  • Philosophy: Love as a means to hope
  • Cooking: Coffee with Cardamom


Comments for both: Phew – what a read! I think this is, hands-down, the most lores I’ve awarded in a single thread. It was a lovely read and it sounds like Noah and Elann are going to be fast friends. I especially enjoyed the occasional guessing of what type of Kelvic Noah was and the experimentation with coffee! Well done both of you.

I noticed when reading through your Character Sheets that you’ve added two different expenses for Summer – I think your living expenses is supposed to include your housing, wherever that may be, so you may be paying more than you need to! Might be worth looking into just in case.


Let me know if you have any questions or feedback. Don't forget to edit your post in the Grade Request Thread to say it's graded and leave a link in there for the Storytellers.

Happy Writing!

Devi
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