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Custom Orders 2

Postby Seirei Dawnwhisper on August 24th, 2015, 5:02 pm

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Timestamp: 5th Day of Summer, 515 AV


Seirei studied the two finished bowls. They were of good quality. Made out of a nice dark wood, and no visible flaws. They would be quite functional, and were pretty in a quiet, understated way. But they were rather plain.

The bowls were supposed to be part of a wedding gift. They shouldn't be plain. Seirei wanted them to be beautiful as well as functional. And for that, they needed to be decorated.

With that thought in mind, Seirei closed her eyes, and tried to imagine what type of design she wanted to carve into each bowl. Should it be the same design? Or a different, but complimentary one with a shared theme? Either way, the bowls were part of the same set. As such, their patterns needed to match.

Slowly, an idea formed in Seirei's mind. Weddings were supposed to be a thing of beauty. And, to Seirei, at least, flowers were beautiful. Flowers were often used as decorations in weddings, so a floral design on a wedding present wouldn't be out of the ordinary. So that would be her overall theme for the set of bowls. And the six smaller bowls she made would be included within that theme as well. So would the spoons if she managed to make them as well.

Seirei retreated into her tent for a few ticks to retrieve her sketch book, and her charcoal sticks. She wanted to get her designs right, and for that, she was going to need an image to refer to as she carved. So once she had what she needed, she flipped the book open to the first blank page, and stared at it until she decided what she wanted to do. On its own accord, her hand began to move over the page.

The first bowl would be carved as though it was a flower, opening up to greet the sun's rays. With an image firmly in mind of what she wanted to draw, Seirei drew a rose. The image was a simple one. Her drawing skills weren't up to managing anything detailed, or even especially good. But it was, she hoped, recognizably a rose.

Using the image as a reference, Seirei took her pick in hand, and began etching her design onto the wooden surface of the bowl. Starting near the bottom, she carved a series of curved lines meant to symbolize petals. A second series was carved roughly halfway up the sides of the bowl. When she was done with that, she traded pick for chisel. Then she began slowly altering the shape of the lip of the bowl. By shaving thin strips of wood off, she created dips in the lip of the bowl. As her work progressed, this created the illusion of petals.

It wasn't easy to translate a drawing into something that had more substance than mere paper, but Seirei tried her best to bring her vision to life. She worked slowly, wanting to the every detail just right. And her efforts paid off. When she was done, the design carved into the bow did indeed make it look as though the bowl itself was a flower. It wasn't as rose like as she had hoped. It resembled a generic flower shape more than she would have liked it to. But there was something that hinted that it was a rose if you looked carefully enough. A newly married couple, deeply in love, and looking for signs of their love reflected all around them might well see a rose when they looked at the bowl.

Seirei retreated into her tent once more, this time to get her walnut oil, and a rag. She used her smoothing cloth to smooth out any rough areas that had formed when she's carved her design. Then she poured a little of the walnut oil onto her rag. Using small, circular motions, she rubbed the oil into the wood gently. As the oil absorbed into the wood, the surface of the bowl took on a nice shine. When she was done, she examined her work.

Satisfied with her efforts, Seirei set the bowl aside, and picked up her sketch book once more. The design she had in mind for her second serving bowl was simpler. She didn't need a reference sheet for it. But she did want to practice drawing a variety of flowers first. She wanted the motions of drawing a flower to feel very familiar, and natural to her before she began carving the design into the bowl. A mistake would prove to be a disaster, so she couldn't afford to make one. It was that simple.

To that end, Seirei drew flowers. Lots of flowers. She drew buds, and blossoms in full bloom. She drew generic flower shapes. And she also tried drawing specific flowers she remembered clearly enough to picture in her mind. Sunflowers, and roses, mostly. But there were also flowers she had seen so often out in the Sea of Grass that she could picture them clearly despite not knowing what they were called. These were drawn as well. She practiced drawing vines, and leaves, too. They would also be a part of the design she had in mind for the second bowl. Over, and over, Seirei practiced drawing flowers until she thought she could draw them with her eyes closed, by feel of the movement alone.

Only when she was certain that she was ready, did Seirei stop practicing in her sketch book. Three more pages had been filled with her efforts. And she noticed a small, but distinct improvement in her work by the end of the third page. Seirei studied her work for a few chimes, then set the sketch book aside in favor of the serving bowl she was about to finish.

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Postby Seirei Dawnwhisper on March 1st, 2016, 7:39 pm

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With pick in hand, Seirei carefully etched two wavy lines around the outside of the bowl, dividing the surface into three even sections. She added small leaves at periodic intervals, turning the lines into vines. Each of the leaves attached to one of the vines had jagged edges, while the leaves of the other vine were smooth. Both had tiny veins running through them.

Following her flower theme, Seirei added tiny flowers to her vines. She alternated buds, partially opened blooms, and full blossoming flowers. They were of no specific type, but they were pretty all they same. When she was done with that, Seirei turned her attention to the spaces between the vines.

In the top and bottom spaces, she carefully carved a ring of buds. Tightly closed buds were alternated with ones that were starting to open. Seirei filled the middle section with flowers in full bloom. The work was slow going, and difficult, but when she was finished, Seirei felt a rush of intense pride fill her for having completed her task. She examined her work critically, and was satisfied with what she saw.

Her designs were simple ones. They didn't have the complexity that she might be capable of if she could get good enough at drawing that she could create a detailed drawing to use as a reference. But there was an elegance in the simplicity of the designs. They were pretty, and she hadn't made any mistakes in her carving. And for now, that was good enough.

Seirei poured a bit more walnut oil into her rag, and rubbed it into the second bowl. When the wood began to shine like the first, she set it aside. She had six more bowls to make. There was no time to indulge in pride at her accomplishment.

She examined the wood she had been given for her commission carefully before choosing a log to use. Using her axe, she cut it into three pieces. When she was done with that, she used her mallet and chisels to split each piece in half. The six pieces resulting from her actions would become the six bowls in the set.

Once that was done, Seirei lined up the six pieces so she would be able to reach them more easily. In order to save time, she would be working on all six bowls at once until she reached the stage where that was no longer possible. To that end, she grabbed a knife, and began the process of stripping the bark off of each of the six pieces of wood. Then she used a charcoal stick to carefully mark the boundaries for each bowl. What would be cut away, and what would remain when it was done was clearly marked by thick black ovals drawn on the wood.

The prep work was complete. Seirei picked one of the six pieces, and got to work. Using chisel, and mallet, she slowly hollowed out the inside of the first bowl. After examining her work critically, and finding no flaws, she flipped the bowl over, and shaped the outside. She was so engrossed in her work, that she didn't even notice Teisaia go back into the tent. That changed in a hurry when a loud, familiar cry jolted her out of her intense focus.

Lukar and Lira had awoken from their nap. But the cry didn't come again. Instead, happy babbling could be heard from within the tent. Seirei sighed in relief. Her friend had managed to distract the twins from their mother's absence by getting them involved in play. That meant that Seirei would be able to continue working in peace for a while longer.

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Postby Seirei Dawnwhisper on March 2nd, 2016, 4:14 pm

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One by one, Seirei turned each of the six pieces of wood into a bowl. The outsides were given proper shape, and the insides were carefully hollowed out. Only when she had six roughly made bowls instead of six pieces of wood waiting to be worked did she take the time to stand, and stretch for a few chimes. She hated the delay. But she knew that she needed to rest tense muscles or risk having to stop even longed when they cramped up from too much work.

But after a short break, it was time to get back to work. Seirei traded her chisel and mallet for her smoothing cloth, and began the easier task of smoothing out the rough areas in each bowl. Smoothing the rough areas out of a work was one of the easier tasks of most projects in a way. It required less focus, allowing one to think of other things as one worked at it.

Seirei glanced up at the sun as she worked. It was lower in the sky than it had been the last time she'd looked. But the light it gave was still bright. It had yet to take on the pale cast of late afternoon, or grow dim as it would when dusk came. So Seirei guessed it to be mid afternoon. That meant that she still had several bells worth of good light left.

Seirei paused to examine her work. There were no more rough areas left to be smoothed out in the bowl she was working on, so she set it aside in favor of another. Then she allowed her thoughts to distract her once more. She had several bells of good light left, but only two out of the six bowls had been smoothed out so far. She had four more to go, and each would have to be given a design, and treated with walnut oil before she was completely finished with them. Was that enough time to finish her commission? Would she have enough time to make some spoons to go with it, as well? Seirei couldn't be certain that she would have the time she needed. And although she didn't have to present the wedding present to the trader that had commissioned her for another week, she didn't know if that would be enough time either.

Work this detailed required her full attention. Even the slightest distraction could cause her hand to slip while carving. If she was working on something for her own use, that wasn't as much of a problem. As long as whatever she was working on was still functional, it would be fine if it was for her own personal use. And if she was making something to sell, minor flaws caused by distraction could usually be worked out, or worked around. But this commission was different. A wedding present had to be as perfect as she could manage to make it.

The problem was the twins. They were more than enough of a distraction that Seirei couldn't devote her full attention to anything else while she was watching them. Teisaia was kind enough to take care of Lukar and Lira today, but Seirei knew that she couldn't ask her friend to watch the twins every day. It wouldn't be right. Her friend had her own work to do, her own life to live. There was no guarantee that Seirei would get another day to work where she could devote her full attention to what she was making before the commission was due. So she had to do as much as she could in what was left of the day, and hope for the best.

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Postby Seirei Dawnwhisper on March 2nd, 2016, 7:37 pm

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Although Seirei had been deep in thought, her hands had remained busy. As a result, by the time she had made her decision, the remaining four bowls were smoothed out, and ready for the next step. Teisaia poked her head out of Seirei's tent, and Seirei recognized the look in her friend's eyes. Lukar and Lira were getting hungry again. They weren't going to be content to play anymore until they were fed.

Fortunately, Seirei was at a good stopping place. So she entered her tent, and picked up her children. Both of the twins were hungry, but Lukar was especially so. Her right breast ached fiercely under his vigorous demands for food. Seirei couldn't help but look forward to the time when the twins would be old enough to eat solid food. When they were finished, they needed to be burped. Teisaia jumped in to help with the task, offering to take Lira while Seirei burped Lukar.

When the twins were full, and content to play once more, Seirei went back outside to get some more work done. She picked one of the six bowls she had created for the commissioned set, and stared at it thoughtfully. What would be the best thing to do for a pattern? Should she use the patterns she had already used for the serving bowls? If so, she could give three of the smaller bowls one design, and the other three would get the second design. Or would it be better to create a third design for the smaller bowls? Two more, using each one on three of the bowls?

No matter what she decided, Seirei knew that she had to decide quickly. Otherwise, she wouldn't have time to complete her work. So after giving it some thought, she decided to do a third design. This one would be a combination of the two she had used for the serving bowls, so that all of the bowls would match in a way. The smaller bowls would have a simple row of buds along the center of each bowl. On each side would be a single rose in full bloom.

With her design firmly in mind, Seirei picked up the nearest bowl, along with her pick. She started with the rose. Using slow, steady movements, she etched the flower into the surface of the bowl with her pick. When she finished, she left a space of about an inch between the finished flower, and the bud she started to carve. Each bud was an inch apart from each other. And when she reached the point directly on the opposite side from where she had carved the rose blossom, she carved a second rose, just like the first.

She repeated the design on each of the six bowls. Her hands ached with the strain of her efforts. She had been working all day, and detain work such as this required a great deal of control. If she didn't hold her hands perfectly steady as she worked, she would make a mistake. As a result, they would start to cramp up from the strain, and every so often, she would need to pause, and massage them to ease the cramps.

This slowed her progress, and by the time she had finished with the last bowl, it was late afternoon. The pale light gradually dimmed as she hurriedly treated each bowl with walnut oil. Then she was done. She had failed to make the spoons she had been hoping to make, but she still had some time before she had to give the wedding gift to the trader who had commissioned her. With luck, she would have another day where Teisaia could watch the twins long enough for her to make a set of spoons to go along with the bowls. As the sun sank, bathing the sky in rich reds and oranges, Seirei said goodbye to her friend, and began cleaning up her mess.

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Postby Jasmine Stormblood on March 16th, 2016, 5:23 am

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A beautiful read Seirei. I didn't know how much time carving out bowls took. One little note that I have also been made aware of. People from Mizahar do not call the Sun "sun" they call it Syna. Other than that a beautiful read do let me know if i missed anything in your grades.

 
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