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Not found on any map, Endrykas is a large migrating tent city wherein the horseclans of Cyphrus gather to trade and exchange information. [Lore]

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Postby Kyo on September 17th, 2015, 1:27 am

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49th of Fall, 515 AV
early morning

It felt like it had been a long, long time since Kyo had seen the sun. Long enough that the late-summer, early-fall sunmarks that usually touched his pale skin had begun to peel and fade. The coyote had been checking the skies each morning, hoping that the rain would clear away and leave him room to hunt. But until now the skies had disappointed him. Rain everyday, sometimes those terrible thunderstorms that he disliked so much, which made him antsy with unthinking fear.

But today! It was only past dawn now, but the coyote had risen from his place in the tent --a tent that had had to be proofed from the rain, as the human-forms called it-- to once again stare up at the sky. The wind had fallen, and the clouds lay still as if sleeping. The sun, however, was not asleep, and that was what the coyote was looking for. Even behind the thick coverage, there were spots of pink-red and a hotter, whiter brilliance. He didn't think it would rain.

The coyote watched the clouds a moment longer, then another and another, stretching his back and legs and neck as he stretched the time. But the sun continued in blinks, and he was satisfied.

Today, they were hunting.

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Postby Kyo on September 17th, 2015, 1:30 am

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The puppy this morning was lazy, and had not wanted to wake. The coyote was already beginning to expect such things from little Pack; whatever the coyote wanted the pup to do, the pup definitely would not be doing. He had gone past thinking it was purposeful. It was just how the pup was. Unintentionally contrary by nature.

At first he had wondered if the animal was just stupid, or delayed somehow. But that wasn't it. When he wanted to, Pack could run just about as fast and be just as quick on his paws as any other around his age. And he was smart enough to steal food scraps from the hands of children while their parents' backs were turned; the coyote had watched him do that with a touch of amusement. No, he wasn't stupid. Just... different. He had a mind not like the coyote's and his other dogs'. Maybe it came from being raised part-way by human-forms. Maybe it came from breeding.

Whatever it was, the coyote was going to use today to explore it further. As he nudged the pup awake with his nose, then gripped him by the ruff and dragged him --howling pitifully-- from the nice warm dry tent, he thought he was beginning to understand it. Pack had a mind of his own, yes. But that didn't mean the coyote couldn't figure him out.

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Postby Kyo on September 17th, 2015, 1:36 am

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It was no lighter by the time they reached the edge of the city, but another glance up at the sky didn't look like rain. There was the quality of the air, too: not damp and heavy, like before, but drier, as if the sky needed a rest. Piled on the horizon were bigger, rounder clouds that would likely bring more storms later on. The coyote just hoped later was tomorrow or the next day, and not this afternoon.

Now that they were out of the city the pup perked up some. Pack was a curious dog, and liked to stick his nose in new things, no matter if he had complained about losing sleep. The coyote dropped him to the mud, and the puppy took to his paws and sniffed around --much shorter than the coyote had expected-- instead mostly using his eyes and ears. His ears, big and round in an almost silly-looking way, were constantly twitching; sometimes the coyote thought he caught whatever it was the pup was orienting on, like the call of a morning bird far off or the constant, irritating sound of water dripping from leaves, but sometimes he heard nothing. He didn't know if that meant he had missed something --his hearing was generally good, though he much preferred scent-- or if Pack was simply being over-eager.

For the first blush of the morning they went wherever the puppy wandered. Last time they had come out, the coyote had suspected that the pup had never been out of the tent-city, that he had never been in the wild, the grass. So today's lesson --that's what this was-- was more like preparation. Let the pup get used to everything that might otherwise distract him. Let him learn what it was like to be out, away from the tent-people he loved.

That right there was something already different from the other dogs. Brother was not afraid of people, but he didn't let them touch him or come near, he would always run away. Sister hated the human-forms so much she refused to come even near to cities, and she was likely to attack if she thought she could get a couple good bites in. Pack, though, he loved people, much in the way that the coyote did, though different too. The coyote's love was a need, deep inside-- being near people made that awful emptiness in his chest feel less, and he always wanted to make people happy.

For Pack it was just about making friends and getting attention. He liked to be petted, his fur brushed through with human fingers, his ears and chin rubbed, his paws massaged; this was something Kyo --the coyote's human-mind-- had never even considered trying with the other dogs. It just wasn't part of their interaction. Though his dogs recognized the coyote's human-form and always had --he smelled the same in either form-- they liked the coyote better with four legs. He was one of them, a canine, part of the pack, even though he was not a dog. He wouldn't pet his brother or sister; he would help groom them, yes, or play with them, or wrestle around, or sleep close and curled-in for warmth and safety. But pet them? No.

With the puppy, though, it was natural. Pack liked it. The coyote didn't think the pup yet understood this coyote's abnormal type: that he was both coyote-form and human-form. He still acted surprised --dropping his belly to the ground as if caught between a play-bow and a show of submission-- whenever the coyote shifted in front of him. Maybe it was the lights, scaring him. Or maybe he had never met one like the coyote before, and so did not know how to think about it.

Well, it had been hard for even the coyote to understand at first, after he had begun to meet people. He had thought that everyone was of his type, that everyone had both an animal and a human-form inside. Now he saw different. Not everyone-- some, but not all. And not even all human-forms were the same. The blue-men --called Akalak-- were not the same as the sun-ones --the Ethaefal. The Ethaefal were strange, too, because they also had more than one form. But both forms were human-like, though one did have an animal aspect, the horns that grew out from their brow.

Maybe it would just take the pup some time to come to understand, as well.

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Postby Kyo on September 17th, 2015, 1:43 am

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They ranged far enough to make the pup need to lick the undersides of leaves --snuffling his nose, too, in a few mud puddles-- to rehydrate. But in the coyote's eyes they didn't go all that far. He had run much further much faster, and so had his dogs. But for something as small as the pup --maybe a runt, even-- it was far enough.

Still, he didn't let Pack curl up and rest, like he wanted, nor did he pick him up by the scruff when he started to drag slower and slower. Instead the coyote gave him a quick bark to keep going, sometimes setting him straight with a nudge or two if he still resisted. Though the puppy didn't seem to understand human-form language, at least not the language the coyote had --though maybe that which he did not know, the tent-speak-- he did understand canine. A bark to keep going was met with a whine that was quickly cut off when the coyote snapped his teeth together impatiently. Then the pup would find something else new to poke at and for a while forget his tiredness.

They traveled from attraction to attraction. An ant-mound that the pup destroyed before getting his paws pinched by the red, angry, writhing mass of bugs. A small rain-formed creek --barely more than a trickle between two low hills-- that the pup splashed in. A patch of wetter mud that he stopped to sniff and then roll, turning him red-brown until he shook most of it off after it had dried back to dust. And many others.

It was only when the pup showed interest in that caused by other animals
--like a lump of fresh deer-scat-- that the coyote began to direct him. After the pup had sniffed again to catch the scent, the coyote sniffed, too, and then began to follow the trail-- easy to catch with all the water in the ground and on the plants. Pack was not yet old enough to know that it was dangerous to be on his own out in such a wild place, but he did know that he didn't like to be alone. If the coyote went too far away the pup soon grew lonely; this the coyote used to keep him on the trail, though he was often distracted away briefly by something else.

He didn't know how much Pack actually took in, or if he could manage to follow the scent himself. He saw the little nostrils flaring, but if the pup was actually smelling what he was supposed to be smelling --the deer-scent, a slight musk and fur and scat smell-- the coyote didn't know. Still, he tried to show by sniffing through his own nose loudly, something the pup's sharp ears couldn't miss, and holding his own face pointedly down to the ground to follow the trail. Once he saw an impression in the mud that he suspected was a deer-print --though admittedly he had never much tracked in that way before-- and he spent a long time looking at it and sniffing so that Pack's interest would follow.

Still, it wasn't easy. Pack was not a born hunter as his dog-pups had been before. Brother and Sister were experts, and it had not taken them long at all to get good. Even at only a few-seasons they had known to track deer and gang up, biting at the legs and rump to wear down prey that might otherwise be too large to handle. And at a full-year's growth, which was still a bit below full-grown, they had learned to rip out the throat of a large target, or strangle with a bite to the soft underside of the neck until the animal fell and gasped and died. This pup was still much younger than that
--maybe just barely a season now-- but Brother and Sister had come from their dying mother's womb with a knowledge of hunting. This pup was, as the coyote had already noticed, something else.

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Postby Kyo on September 17th, 2015, 1:45 am

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They followed the deer-signs for some time, with Pack only half-paying attention, until finally they found the animal itself. It was alone, somehow isolated from its herd, maybe due to the bad weather before. The coyote automatically ducked his head, his tan-grey back better for hiding than the orange-brown of his ears and muzzle. He dropped all the way to his belly, keeping his feet gathered beneath him, and looked forward, watching, expecting the pup to do the same.

He should have known better.

The pup spotted the deer. For a moment he held completely still and the coyote wanted to hum his approval. But then Pack jumped forward, rattling the grass and leaves on the way. The deer's head turned, ears snapping to listen, and the pup bounced straight at it, snapping his teeth and yipping. The deer danced and then leapt, straight over the shocked pup, who spun in a circle trying to figure out which way it was going. The coyote, knowing full-well the hunt had been blown, jumped up regardless, racing to snag a hind-leg. He got his teeth into the lower thigh and ripped, but mostly came away with a mouth of fur. The deer slowed for a moment, thrown off-balance by this second threat, and the pup jumped --springing surprisingly high-- to nip at its fleecy white tail, a good target.

But by the time the pup landed, panting happily, the deer was already too far away to do anything but watch it go. Pack turned to the coyote and open-mouth grinned with his small, sharp teeth and little pink tongue, and for a moment the coyote did not know whether to smack him or laugh. Eventually he settled on laughing, sticking his own tongue out and breathing heavily. The pup came to nudge him for praise, though the coyote did not know what he thought he needed praise for. Maybe for jumping so high.

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Postby Kyo on September 17th, 2015, 1:48 am

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They stalked the deer for a while more, and now at least Pack seemed more into it, as if actually seeing the animal had lit a competitive fire in his belly. Yet he still didn't sniff much, preferring to bound along with his round ears pointed forward at attention, listening to see where to go, keeping the deer just in sight. The coyote mostly followed along to see what the pup was doing, not really paying much mind to the deer as to how the puppy was following it, trying to decipher how he thought and learned.

So it was much too late when he realized that some other predator was nearby. Before them, the deer abruptly changed positions, twisting into a sharp turn. There was the sound of heavy panting, chase-panting, and then a commotion in the grass as the deer was felled and attacked. A loud thrashing started up, with the deer vocalizing its odd squeak-bleat-cry. From what the coyote could see in the tall grass, it struggled back to its feet, and managed to run a little further before being taken again. That time the thrashing was shorter, and ended in silence.

Throughout this the pup went into a frenzy of yapping and snarling, wanting to rush forward and see what was going on. But at the outset the coyote had snatched him up in his jaws, and held him above the ground and would not let go no matter how hard he kicked. The coyote slunk low down again and began to retreat, not knowing what had gotten the deer, only knowing that this place could be a very bad place if something large and hungry came their way. The pup didn't consider, but continued his loud, horrid yelping.

Something made a noise nearby and the coyote froze. The air was still; he couldn't smell whatever it was. Then the grass parted, right beside them and a little behind, and the scent washed over them.

The puppy's crying changed tone to one of delight, his tail wagging hard enough to smack the coyote in the throat. The coyote dropped the pup back to his paws, and the little dog raced to where the deer had fallen. The coyote followed at a slower pace, after nosing his brother-dog, who panted a welcome, deer-scented breath of hello.

Though the coyote had not called them when he had gotten to the grass, wanting to teach the pup alone to minimize distractions --of which Sister seemed to be the greatest; for some reason the puppy absolutely loved annoying her-- the dogs had found his scent and followed behind. When they began tracking the deer the dogs must have quickened the pace and went to the sides, as usual for hunting. When the pup jumped and startled the deer the dogs had run to cut it off, eventually catching it. But the air was still today --too-still, maybe it would rain after all-- and the coyote had not once scented them. This was something he could feel Brother laughing at, and he nipped the dog lightly under the chin to show his embarrassment and to make him stop.

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Postby Kyo on September 17th, 2015, 1:54 am

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When Brother and the coyote finally got to the kill-site, Sister had already ripped open the throat and stomach, and she and the pup were sniffing through the insides. Pack was young yet to eat a lot of the tougher meat, like from the thighs, but the softer internal stuff might be okay for him, especially some of the plant-matter and mineral food that the deer had already once digested. The coyote pointed him to the stomach and let him have his meal, though took care to not let him eat too much too quickly in his excitement. Sister, miraculously, was letting the pup eat beside them as if an equal; likely she was hungry enough --and glad enough to see the coyote after days of rain and separation-- that she let it pass.

Not even the whole pack together could finish the deer in one sitting. Brother and Sister would stay to watch the carcass and gorge themselves again at a later time. The coyote and puppy, however, needed to go back to the tent-city. Half the day had gone by already; it would take less time than that to get back to their people home-place, but it was already darker out than usual because of the clouds. The coyote didn't want to think about having the pup out in the grass at night. He wasn't ready for night activities yet, and wouldn't be until he learned to be quiet and still when faced with the unknown, neither of which he seemed able to do for longer than a moment, yet. It was his instinct to run towards things that moved and made noise, to investigate, even if that meant trouble. The coyote would have to teach him otherwise, and to be a tough-father and not a soft-one like he was now; to discipline when the pup did wrong.

Maybe he should have snarled and bit when Pack jumped at the deer and scared it off, instead of laughing and praising. But the little dog's instincts were all wrong, and the coyote on this topic had a not-animal way of thinking that said why be angry? His human-mind said why punish what was born into the dog?

Pack was different, the coyote knew. He had seen it many times. His people-love and need for attention and reassurance. His not-smell but listen approach. His drive to go towards, to chase and not stay still. The coyote would have to think on these things and figure out what they meant and how to shape them. Could the pup be taught to hunt, or had he been made
--been born-- for something else?

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Postby Tribal on September 18th, 2015, 2:59 am

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G R A D E S

Kyo

Experience

  • Planning: 1
  • Logic: 2
  • Bodybuilding: 1
  • Observation: 4
  • Animal Husbandry: 3
  • Hunting: 2
  • Tracking: 1
  • Running: 1
  • Stealth: 1
  • Endurance: 1

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  • Pack: Lazy and wayward
  • Pack: Knows where to score an easy meal
  • Observation: Gathering storm clouds
  • Pack: Loves to be around people
  • Kyo: Part of the pack
  • Ethaefal: A race with more than one form
  • Tracking: Following a deer trail
  • Observation: Calm before the storm

Notes

Wonderful writing, I really admire your style and the imagery you inject into your stories. Enjoy the rewards.
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